Talk:Halo Beta/@comment-24699921-20140318012313

I can't believe I'm the first to comment. I really enjoyed your creepypasta and the most obvious cliche (Ebay) doesn't kill/ throw off the entire mood of the story. Also, you make it all the better by not over using blood, or using any blood for that matter. Although I'm not a licensed creepypasta reviewer, you have my 2 thumbs up! Keep up the good work.