Talk:The Attic/@comment-25021327-20151204001929

I enjoyed this one. It's pretty short and is a quick read, but didn't feel rushed or lacking detail to me. Althoug the story here is a fairly straightforward tale that has been done in a few different ways before, I still liked how this one turned out.

I felt like the narrator was fairly relatable, and I liked the little detail about he or she having a sore throat and being almost unable to speak. It wasn't shoved down the reader's throat, but I think just reading that detail will stick with readers on some level.

The descriptions here were pretty good. Things could have been a little more detailed, but it wasn't necessary, and may have slowed the pace. So I think it worked fine. There was one or maybe two typos I noted as I read, but nothing distracting.

So I liked this quick little tale. It doesn't do too much in terms of groundbreaking plot or originality, but I think it does what it sets out to do pretty well. I'm glad I took a look at this one :)