Talk:Inevitable/@comment-8470110-20130917011605/@comment-20437898-20130918011131

Since the PM button on this site hides better than slender in a mannequin store, I will just reply here. I have taken your advice, and edited the story so there was no real link to the end mindfuck. When you get the time, re-read it and if this makes it better re-rate it. I aim to get around 7 from everyone I ask.