Talk:Pokemon Yellowleaf/@comment-26074592-20150211202958

I  agree it was flawed one of my personality flaws is saying things without thinking in real life I'm introverted I lack social skills. This story was my first attempt at writing a good story so its quite true that there are ways it could've been improved. I had some thoughts as to additional things I could add but I didn't believe those ideas were good and that they would only make the story worse.I also tryed to make things as mysterious as I good hoping it would add to the creepyness factor of it. It being boring shows I'm simply not a good storyteller yet. I was impatient when it came to getting it all wrote down and it was in a style simlaer to how I wrote it on the internet type writer.I always assumed grammar was trivial because of the way people sometimes behave in chatrooms I didnt comprehend how important it is in this situation thus leading to those flawed words.