Talk:Soldier Down/@comment-6470295-20130309005014

....This..was not very good at all.

It's very typical. Character dies, breaks fourth wall..all that Sonic.exe-esque type sillyness. This story is also VERY repetitive, like another pasta i don't consider good, Sonic.exe. It keeps repeating the words YOO CHEWSE THEEs, MAN, except written in a less stupid and sarcastical fashion.

Another thing is that you seem to not be the best at spacing. You cut off a lot of words in paragraphing.

Sorry, but y'aint getting more than a 3/10 from me.