Talk:The 60 Day Game/@comment-108.235.20.199-20150710143425

4/10. The build-up of the story was to quick, seeing how Alex died, and how he was missing school and his immediate funeral. Not to mention, Francis should've been the one to survive, seeing how he had 80% progress on his game. Why couldn't it be 100%? The game could've had been finished with 20% more progress, showing how quick Francis made it to 80. Maybe you should change the Epilogue to Francis being to first one to complete The 60 Day Game & not die. But, that's just my opinion.