Talk:Pokemon Golden Sunrise/@comment-6418997-20150308204152

Hmm.. Well there are a ton of grammatical errors, I can fix some of those. I don't like it being centered around Pokemon in the beginning, I like the idea of a killer though. The play through of the game seems pretty cliched with the title screen sounding a lot like sonic.exe. I think the story would be a lot deeper if the character lost his parents and he was the one that wanted a friend. And the man represented a secret desire for him to have a friend. Or have the story center around him being stalked which will add more build up. 6/10