Talk:Mythical Adventure/@comment-8470110-20131128044026

5/10

This was a fair pasta. The plot was original, detail was pretty well done and pacing was good. While there were clichés, there weren't enough to take too much away from the experience. There are parts where the writing and details are a bit inconsistent so that should be fixed as soon as possible. For your next pastas, I recommend having consistent details, some more build up and as little clichés as possible. All in all, a decent Creepypasta in my opinion. Good job, my friend.

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)