Talk:Harnessing Ruin/@comment-6418997-20131223003736

I thought this was a very well thought of pastas, you obiviously put a lot of effort into this. it seems to be pretty orignal, how he is looking more for then just people, to scare them for what seems no reason, but hes after the world he doesnt want to kill them. unless they go aganist him. he just wants everyone to serve him and everyone who disagrees dies. its kinda falls short and i would like to see more details. also i liked the text at the bottom it was a nice touch. 8/10 good.