Talk:Living in the Game/@comment-25922747-20141228172659

I'm not trying to sound rude, but I found a TON of grammar errors... Not to mention using quotations at the wrong moment, missing where they are supposed to be, and sorry, but it is "supposed" not suppose to be. Other than that, it seemed alright. Not exactly original, because it sounds almost like some Polybius story or another story I've heard using a virtual reality type of system. But all in all it was tolerable to read.