Talk:Somniare Mors/@comment-25021327-20150831134057

I liked this one, it had some nice descriptions and flowed pretty well. It's not necessarily hard to follow, but it is a little tricky to make sense of. That's not thing al the time, and i think it mostly works here.

Like I said, the physical desriptions were pretty nice. I felt able to imagine most of was was being written about fairly easily as far as visuals and sensations. Some of the wording choices felt a little out of place here and there, but everything still worked pretty well.

I like the dream-like sense of this one, as I usually enjoy dreamy, or surreal settings in stories. At times I felt like the story telling was a little too linear for the overall sense of surrealism, and in a story like this with only one character, some things can start feeling a little repetitive. The fact that this one isn;t any longer than it is works in its favor.

As this piece is vague, and leaves the reader with a lot of unanswered questions, it might turn some folks off, but personally, I thought it pretty much worked. A lot of things are left up to the reader to interpret, and although I'm sure you had a clear cut idea in mind, I think the story will mean different things to different people.

But, yeah. I liked reading this one, and its nice to see a collaborative effort seen through to the end :)