Talk:The Forgotten/@comment-24239143-20130912163854

Hmmm... I should review this...

The plot: Hm. I can't say you didn't add cliches, as you did... 5/10

The execution: The part where you don't remember your friends... I do think I saw that in another cp. 6/10

Grammar: Okay, but some part's didn't need the speech marks. 7/10

The story: Interesting. Old friends, new problems... good. 7/10

Overall: 6.5/10

"Interesting..."

-> Morgan.