Talk:All in Your Head/@comment-14341590-20140507192001

'' After reading this, I felt interested in the title. This sounded like originality and difference to other creepy-pastas. Heck, I expected it to impress me, and sadly… I’m left disappointed. You had potential with your plot, you could’ve pulled this off. Again, as much as I hate to say it; you didn’t pull this one off efficiently. You managed to write a creepy-pasta, so kudos to you. What I really hated about this creepy-pasta is the story. “Imaginary friends” – you didn’t execute this very well. You didn’t present what we wanted. You managed to write something with the imaginary friend being a clone-sort-of-thing… but, remember- you can’t always impress the audience. ''

'' You could’ve added so many elements that would make this pasta stand-out from others. Example: ''

'' Insanity – how the imaginary friend could’ve made you feel. Making you become unstable and less confident about your appearance. ''

'' Instability – becoming weaker with everything you experience shortening your mind of creativity. Losing the Will to live. ''

'' Adventure – this could’ve been a mad adventure, becoming MAD – crazy and un-alert. You could’ve broken the character down into pieces. ''

'' - I won’t say anymore, I’ve said enough. Therefore, you will be getting your FINAL RATING from me… ''

'' 4.5/10 (You could’ve done so much better, sadly you disappointed me and several others…) ''