Talk:Like A Sickness/@comment-16443912-20130826033916

I see a category called "creepypasta," but I see no creepypasta. It's not an outstandingly bad story, instead it's just dull and unimaginative. Yes, I see the mindfuck, but what about the text is meant to be scary? Is it just buildup to the end? If so, the text could have been far more interesting. Yes, putting in a setting could be hard, but what about making meaningful art is supposed to be easy? It feels like a story simply waiting to get you to the end. It makes everything said feel useless, frankly. Everything you read will just be redetermined at the climax. If you had put in things like emotions, setting, and mood, I'd say this was worth reading. And while there aren't cliches, stories with them are far more interesting than this. Overall, I found the story boring.