Talk:Chum/@comment-11366536-20150220171808

When the story started, I didn't know it was a Spongebob Creepypasta, but it turned out to be one, which surprised me.

Anyway, the story starts off more or less alright. A fish named Dave who is being held captive in the chum bucket who doesn't realize it at first, but slowly comes to realization, escapes due to plankton's idiocracy, and etc. etc.

Positive Criticism : The Story was original, inspiring, and well-written. The grammar is good, and so is the pacing. The Ending of the story had a really surprising twist, along with the twist of the story being a Spongebob-Pasta.

Negative Criticism : The Scariness isn't really there in the story. The chum is made of dead fish... So what? Also, the Giant Paragraphs make this story hard to read.

Overall, it's a Good Creepypasta.

Verdict : 7/10 (Average)