Talk:Living in the Game/@comment-6794436-20141230010944

Crap. Utter crap.

I refuse to give this a proper review on account of the horrible plot, cliches, and grammar issues. I hate asking this, but how old are you? Because this obviously isn't written by somebody older than the age of 11.

Verdict: 2/10- Atrocious plot, grammar, and premise. You should definitely read the New Writer Guidelines (Regulars Edit as You Please)