Talk:A Spider Web/@comment-8470110-20131223182941

There are a few complainants I have with this poem. For starters, the execution could be done better. There were some parts where the plot was a bit confusing and messy, but it was pretty good for the most part. The grammar needs fixing but that's a minor nit-pick. I also do believe that the ideas could've expanded upon; while we do get the full story, I wish it was more drawn out so it had more of an impact. Other than that, I think it was a good read. Nicely done, Scary!

Rating: 7/10 (Good)

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)