Talk:Unsavable Silver/@comment-26480939-20161101033957

I'm sorry, but this is a [REDACTED] minefield of cliché usage.

Here's some that I noticed:

Probably the biggest ever Poképasta cliche, Lavender Town.

Unsettling messages.

Sudden location shifts.

Attacks that don't even exist.

Existing attacks not working as they should (Ho-Oh using Curse would trigger the 'Raise Attack and Defense by one stage while lowering Speed by one stage' effect, not the Ghost-type exclusive effect of 'laying a curse that saps opponent's health over time until withdrawn or the target faints'.)

Glitchy sprites and cries.

Sounds from game somehow sounding like sounds made by close relatives/family members.

Oh-so-convenient battery death after a traumatic experience.

I'm sorry, but this gets a 6/10 because of the overabundance of Poképasta clichés. Work on fixing those and this story would improve greatly.