Talk:Bring Your Mother To Work Day/@comment-50.177.63.39-20150212213246

This was decent...

Good: This was a very well paced and written pasta, and your writing chops show here. This was also an interesting read, and the premise was quite good. This story was also fairly creepy. Sure it wasn't jaw droppingly creepy or anything, but it was a bit creepy, I'll give it that. Also, there aren't too many grammar errors that I can see at least, say for the occasional typo, but they're few and far between.

Bad: The story at the beginning seemed to be shaping up to be something great, but you kind of lost me at the middle part. It just seemed a bit cliched at parts and honestly was a bit boring for me. Speaking of cliches, there are a couple prominent cliches, and they are somewhat annoying. Also, the story is a bit confusing at times, and it overall makes the experience less creepy. To be honest, the ending wasn't that incredible too...

Verdict: 6/10- This was a very well written pasta, but at some parts it was boring and it all around wasn't very engaging.

-Incorrect3