Talk:She Dies at the End/@comment-24747574-20140711221107

Alrighty^^ Well, i kind of hoped for a happy ending, but i guess i'm kind of the only one making those XD

Kind of feels to have some sort of clairvoyant powers, whenever two people feel in love in a CP. Then, i can suddenly predict that it will not end well and the more they love each other, the more horrible their demise.

Anyways. Its well written and i enjoyed it. The thing with the mangled face was a tiny bit chliché and felt tagged on, but i'm nit-picking here.

Summa Summarum - good writing, easy to read and made me feel attached to the character to some degree. However it is also a little predictable due to love being a death/torture/doom sentence in a CP.