Talk:The Simple Ritual/@comment-8470110-20150102054517

This story was definitely new to me, as I've never really read or listened to them. However, I didn't feel much of anything while reading it. Even other stories I feel sorrow or fear or even anger over how it went. This one I felt nothing.

As for the story itself, it felt...lacking. It could have had something going for it but it didn't execute itself well enough. It went just as you would expect it to. It was unfortunately cliché as the others said and that claim is justified.

All in all, it was an odd story. I don't know exactly how to feel about it. For improvements, I'd make the stakes higher, rewards greater, more suspense and for the ritual to take a little bit longer. Do that, and I can see it being much better. Good luck, my friend!

Rating: 3/10

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