Talk:The blind eyed killer/@comment-30102911-20161105112014

This story is basically just Jeff the Killer with an emphasis on Max losing his eyes. It has a share of details that don't contribute much to the story and even then is too short to have much of a chance to distinguish itself as being anything more than cementing itself in generic territory. Could potentially go further than just this but really needs more details to be anything really worthwhile. At the very least the grammar is decent even if this was fixed at some point, I will give the story that much.