Talk:The Virtual Experience/@comment-25021327-20150711212744

Kinda short, but not bad. I've seen the concept of VR/immersive gaming tackled before in pastas, but never really in a way that made much of an impact on me. Though I'd consider this one to be in that same vein, I will say that it is done well enough.

I guess I would have liked this more if there were some more character depth, and more detail given about the actual event, which would have required this piece to be quite a bit longer. So if you were going for a short and vague feel, then that comes across here. I would have personally liked a little bit more though.

But the concept is interesting, and there is definitely something to be explored there. The spelling and grammar are in okay shape with only a few errors that weren't too distracting. For a quick read, it pretty much does its job :)