Talk:The Invaders/@comment-9847798-20130814035725

Hey Ziko, I'm gonna try and rate in my new way. Here we go!

Writing Ability - I think that this was pretty well written. I didn't see anything that was completely wrong or misused, but there were some capitalization and minor grammatical errors. On the other hand, it is well described. I would like to see a little more description of how the world was reacting.

Plot - This pasta was interesting and easy to follow. However, I wished that it would be a bit longer. You definitely have a lot of room to move around when it came to describing the chaos seen around the world.

Originality - This was a not the most original pasta. Not to say that this is a bad thing because it was not cliche, but it was very similar to other first person perspectives to major events in games. I'm not going to lie, I actually don't understand the surpise because I don't know what you are referencing.

Creepyness - This was not a really creepy story, but it was not uncreepy.

Overall - I think that this was a pretty good read that could be expanded on. I give this an Adequate! Good job.