Thread:Urkelbot666/@comment-26535579-20150628003240/@comment-25021327-20150629011849

I tok a look, and I can tell right away that there are some issues. When you're writing, try to keep in mind how other people are going to be reading it. Firstly, I strongly suggest breaking the story into paragraphs by hitting the enter key to break the text up every few sentences.

I also recommend tha you do your writing in a program offline instead of writing in the wiki editor where you could lose your data if somethingwent wrong. That way you can also take your time writing, and add the story when you feel it is finished instead of having a work in progress.

If English is not your native language, I'd say that you ought to state that in the beginning of your story, and ask for help with the spelling and grammar that you can;t figure out on your own. Some users might be willing to help out in that case :)

There is a page on the Wiki that has been put together by regular users in order to help new, or struggling writers here. There are a lot of good tips in there from common spelling and grammar mistakes, to story sugestions.

Without a thorough reading, I can already tell that the page will be marked Needs Work, and face deletion after a week or so. I hope some of these suggestions are helpful to you.