Thread:Kyosuthefirst/@comment-15963904-20131205200201/@comment-11079349-20131211023247

one last thing; my reviews, while seemingly hostile, still provide insight to what authors do wrong in what they write. I just want to point out that each time I comment, I almost always got a comment back thanking me for my criticism and list. I also kept making certain that I left them with a rating, where I gave my honest opinion on the quality of the piece. I realize that one place I also go wrong is writing out the jokes. While they sound funny when I think them and I honestly get a good laugh, I realize that these may seem offensive in text, so I'll avoid that or label them as jokes.

label them or avoid them, which do you think would work better. please answer this question first.

My list, as I understand it, helps a lot with people working on writing better. The malice, as I understand it, is also just a misunderstanding, so I'll avoid mocking things and just stick with pointing out problems as well as things I thought were used well. I will, however, still probably come off as harsh. It's a personal flaw of mine.