Talk:The Dark/@comment-6794436-20150619220309

What the fuck...?

Good: Well, some semblence of effort was obviously put in here, and there is at least an attempt at a cohesive plot. The pasta also isn't a wall of text.

Bad: Well, for one thing, the grammar is just awful, and in many cases the terrible grammar makes the story incredibly confusing. There are many words used here that you obviously don't know the meaning of, given their context in the story, such as in the first sentence where you misused the word profound. The pasta feels incredibly rushed, and is quite cliched, what with the time being midnight and the entire plot being about what dwells within the darkness. The attempts at making the pasta "eye opening" or even having a twist ending just fall flat on all fronts and really are just laughable. It truly is  hilarious with the pasta being as garbage as it is, and having the final lines attempt at closing off the pasta on an ambiguous or creepy note.

Verdict: 2/10- This really was trash for multiple reasons. I'm tagging this with Needs work, where it will have 9 days to be drastically improved or it will face deletion. In the meantime, I'd recommend that you read the New Writer Guidelines, as they will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3