Talk:Duke Nukem 3D:Hell Hound/@comment-30102911-20161124031006

At least the grammar is decent but the story itself is really just something under "cookie cutter" territory. I will admit I was a bit distracted at first about the character being named Mutahar considering... well this is a someordinarygamers website and the site is based around Mutahar and his fanbase (It's a fairly rare masculine name of Arabic origin). Other than that the story follows a lot of tried and true ideas and doesn't really do much to stand on its own. I think if say this story was about his father programming the main character's computer so that he could teach his son some demented lesson this story could pass into decency.