Talk:Mario 64: There Is No Escape/@comment-26051804-20150528194408

I guess that the person knowing that the game is a creepypasta at the start is original... yet, it kind of ruins the whole point of the story.

What is the thing about black? Mario must be getting a lot of heat where he is. (ha, get it... black attracts heat...) But really, the colour black is overused in your story.

I've seen multiple times where you didn't use or misplaced commas or periods.

The: 'There is no end,' or: 'there is no escape,' line is overused as banana. (I would swear, but I do not feel like it)

Super Mario 64 is the most popular game for Mario creepypastas. I would know, I made one before. (on my old account Growman)

Overall, I guess this story would be a 1.5/10 for me.