Talk:N's Room/@comment-6830263-20130518184540

I don't know what to think of this. Few grammar and spelling errors, wall of words, really short. Overall I like the concept though, but I think that if it was longer, it would have been better. Clichés were kept to a minimum, although I thought the blood at the end felt kind of forced.

Final verdict: 6/10 (It would have been better if it was longer)