Talk:NFSW: Skidded/@comment-25021327-20150508010718/@comment-25021327-20150514212415

This has been worked on a bit, and I'll add a "Fixed" tag despite my reluctance to. I still think that this story is rushed and could be improved, but the fact that it has been imprved a bit counts for something.

I won't mark it for deletion now, but I'd still encourage you to work on this one a little more.