Talk:Fragments/@comment-6418997-20131026003519

I thought this one was very interesting. When you first started the story I was woundering what was going on. I bid like how his or her memories were blocking him/her from finding the right path. Until he or she moved past all those memories which I think is very realistic. If we were to focus on the present we as people would just do what whatever we wanted to do. If we focused on the past we would never be able to move on in life. To find real happiness we must look to the future. So if that was what you were trying say well done.7/10 only because it is confusing at times and I think it needs to be longer.:D

ps. Thanks so much for recommending my story! that means a lot that makes me feel that I finally did something right. :D