Talk:The Sewer's Secrets/@comment-7706473-20140611113031/@comment-25021327-20140613224741

I  agree with Stormlilly, I feel like there is something here to be explored, but this pasta feels confused, and merely scratches the surface of what I believe you were going for. I say keep writing, and don't feel you need to abandon this tale. Maybe give it time, and re-draft it a few times if it still interests you, add and organize some elements and see what you come up with :)