Talk:Max Payne: Valkyr/@comment-6511809-20130215225509/@comment-6470295-20130215230321

Good! It's always nice to have motivation. Be sure to notify me if you post another pasta at some point and i don't notice it.

One thing i hope you do is DrOpPiNg ThE tExT lIkE tHiS. It's more annoying to read than creepy. Aside from that, though, this is a pretty good creepypasta, especially for someone who i assume is a somewhat new writer.