Talk:War/@comment-8470110-20130905025729

8/10 A very good Creepypasta. Mindfuck pastas are my favourite, so I deeply appreciate the story. The pacing was great as well as plot and character development. My only and biggest complaint is that I wish this was longer. Maybe it could dive in into how the war started and stuff, and how the protagonist lost his father during this war. Other than that, an excellent entry. Anxious to read your future pastas. -Sshakenbakee