Talk:The metal demons and the "ARMS"/@comment-24239143-20130909144306

First review on this creepypasta: Here goes!

The plot: Hey, not bad! I liked what you said about "Him" accepting his own fate, but please tell who that person. 7/10

The execution: I can't really say, but this was a good execution. 7/10

Grammar: None really reported. 8/10

The story: How intersting! A group called ARMS trying to destroy a bunch of demons! 8/10

Overall: 7.5/10, good.

"I may be impressed after all!"

-> Morgan.