Talk:I'll Never Be the Same/@comment-5675310-20140125222629

I'll... Probably still be the same after reading this.

Description: 4.0/10 - I found this aspect to be very poorly done. Everything felt extremely rushed and detail was sparse, unlike all the grammatical errors. Word choice was poor and often repetitive, ellipses were used much too often, and considering that the story is supposed to revolve around the protagonist's emotions, you didn't thouroughly explain it enough.

Plot: 5.0/10 - While the idea of having an extremely sad pasta about pokemon has worked quite well in the past (i.e. IWLY), this just couldn't deliver much raw emotion. It's possible to make a short story that makes you feel for the charcters quite a bit without going into much detail, but here it just felt like a lackluster attempt at bringing a charcter with seemingly little to no backstory to life.

Entertainment: 5.0/10 - It's short, but hits quite a few sour notes along the way that makes it less enjoyable.

Pros and Cons:

+ Interesting to try and make a super sad pasta about Pokemon

- Feels rushed

- Very vague

- Hard to feel for the main character

Overall: 4.8/10 - Bad.

"It's short, but not that sweet."

- Marcus