Talk:Windows 99/@comment-24239143-20130911165644

Not half bad!

The plot: Very thought out, it was intreguing. I liked the opening sentence, "This is not a story. This is simply an explanation", which hooked me up. 9/10

The execution: Brilliant. Your character is very arrogant at the end, and I loved it. 9/10.

Grammar: Great, and elegant. 9/10.

The story: Interesting. A story about a haunted windows explorer, that seriously fucked up and went very different. 9/10.

Overall: 9/10

"I just kept reading and reading.... delightful!"

-> Morgan.