Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-4839548-20150122225752

This is absolutely one of the best pastas I've ever read.

The grammar was impeccable, the behaviour and reactions from the characters seemed genuine, and the plot twist was by far the thing that sealed the deal.

That in mind, I looked back at the pictures of Helena and pondered a second question: If Helena is a figment of Martin's schizophrenic delusion, how are we able to see the pictures he took of her? Is it that we're all schizophrenic as well, or is it something more insidious? Could Helena have been an unperson? I could just be making a mountain of a molehill, but these are questions that seriously came to my mind. I'm not sure if this was your intent, Sshakenbakee, but it really made me think. I love stories that make you think; it makes it last for so much longer because you keep coming back to think about it.

Overall, this is one of the best I've seen. I'm considering doing a reading on it some time.

10/10