Talk:Sorry Isn't Good Enough/@comment-5757488-20140121163314

Interesting. I  think see where you were trying to go with this, but it falls short at certain points. First of all, I didn't see the point of making it a sonic based creepypasta? The premise could  have held up as just an ordinary creepypasta, without the whole idea of the game having something to do with it.

Otherwise, the writing was acceptable, if a little colloquial, but I guess that is really a matter of preference.

The legnth didn't do it any favours, as it could have used perhaps a little more build up to create a stronger effect.

Anyway, a strange, if not unnerving idea, but let down by the loose plot.