Talk:After the Fall/@comment-6794436-20141224163216

This is a decent concept for a pasta, but there are many flaws to it. First, and I must get this out of the way, this story in some parts is a bit like on of my stories, Excromation, with the whole obliterating cities and militaries becoming corrupt, but it's not that big of a deal.

The pasta doesn't have too many spelling or grammar issues, and the plot is pretty good. The one major flaw that ruins this pasta is its length. A pasta like this one needs to be very long, as this pasta doesn't really go into detail with the events that occurred.

Verdict: 5/10- The grammar is pretty good, as with the plot, but the story is far too rushed and short to be anything above a 5/10.

-Incorrect3