Talk:The Last Remains/@comment-24181739-20140705011256

Huh, this is very interesting now that I look at it again.

This Pasta has a few problems.

1. Why does this scientist even make this virus? It's annoying how you only explain how he's wanted. Why not explain why he's wanted? Did he kill someone?!

2. Okay, this is too damn short. Too many pastas like this are too short, and do what this one did.

3. This one fails to measure up in quality because not enough is explained! Nothing much is explained at all!

4. And by the way, 2,000,000,000,000 people can't even live on this planet. Are you including animals and other organisms?

But it has a little room for praise.

1. This Pasta is fairly original. If it was excecuted better, maybe it'd be C-grade.

Total score

3.97 / 8.44 - 47.04%, or an F.

Lots of potential, terrible excecution.