Talk:Purple/@comment-6794436-20150412220618

This may be the best pasta about this game that I have ever read... Then again, you didn't have much competition, to be fair...

Good: This was written excellently with great usage of vocabulary and little to no grammatical errors. I could really picture everything that was going on with your vivid descriptions, a trait a lot of pastas today seldom have. This pasta was also very suspensful, and it left me on the edge of my seat the entire time wondering what would happen next. The pacing in this was excellent, as there was great buildup leading up to the conclusion. In short, this was just really impeccably written, and certainly the best minecraft pasta I have ever read.

Bad: The only bad thing I have to say for this pasta is that it was predictable. After reading about the torches and the red bricks, I was thinking that this wasn't a mindfuck, and that this was supposed to be obviously Minecraft, which is not a good thing. By the time that the "hunter" was said to be wearing a light blue shirt and purple pants, I was certain of the outcome of the pasta. Oh yes, and it also wasn't necessarily creepy, just more suspensful than anything, and that's just the outcome of the mindfuck being predictable. If it wasn't as predictable as it was, this would've been very creepy.

Verdict: 7.5/10- This truly was excellently written, but I feel as though this was just too predictable. However, it certainly was suspensful, and a joy to read.

-Incorrect3