Talk:Animal Crossing: Reaching Aika/@comment-6418997-20140216050100

I personally never seen animal crossing but it didn't bother me that much tbh. You made the characters well described enough so I was able to go long with it. The story was interesting but needs to be more creepy and express more thoughts with the characters, like why would the guy want to go to the valley? Besides for curiosity. The story itself got a little boring after about half way. The pasta isnt bad by any means but I would like to see it more polished up, being interesting isn't enough to make a full story 6\10 its above average