Talk:Have a nice day/@comment-25021327-20150119024432

18-January-2015- Added Needs Work. This story is a mess. There are numerous spelling and grammar errors, issues with tense, the only capital letters in the piece are "CD" and the "d" in McDonalds.

The story is tired and very cliché. Guy gets nostalgic game from store, game does weird stuff, bloodn'guts, game hurts player, store disappears, player warns the world.

As this is now in the Needs Work category, it will face deletion after about 9 days pending another review. If this story is not deemed improved enough, the page will be removed.

If English is not a native language, I suggest maybe contacting an English speaker to help with the spelling and grammar issues. This is an English speaking site.