Talk:Villanelle for the Sick/@comment-6418997-20131111021849

I do like the ending quote "Im driven by voices in my head" when you did that in the beginning it got you hooked. I also liked the line " I know not when this blood lust will be fed". It makes the person question themselves, I wish you added more saddness to the character. Made more clues that he is being torn apart inside. But I think that Im again over thinking it. I don't know why it has that title though. You make it clear he is a murderer and you give into the complexity of the character. 8/10 :D above average