Talk:The Russian Lady of Luck/@comment-24240632-20131117220100

The Russian Lady of decent pastas.

Description: 8.0/10 - There weren't as many grammatical errors here than your last pasta, but it seems like you still kind of have a problem with that. The pacing was well done and once again the use of simple, but effective words making metaphors was a nice touch. I think you've got the creepy atmosphere down, now you just need to work on polishing up your stories.

Plot: 9.0/10 - Once again, this was very interesting. Although it wasn't as thought provoking as your last one, I personally think that this one was much better because you didn't leave the reader in too much mystery. You basically know what's going on at all times. Good job!

Entertainment: 8.0/10 - Once again you had me on the edge of my seat.

Overall: 8.2/10 - Great.

"The creepy atmosphere and great use of metaphors well easily keep you reading!"

- Marcus