Talk:Paper Mario: The Door To Doom/@comment-24922211-20131114123810

7.9/10

This creepypasta, oddly, did not creepy me out, but it should have. I saw great grammar, spelling, and punctuation.What made it creepy was the suttle changes made that led to the end. You could have made it creepier though. It had some cliches and the ending reminded me of Slap Happy. Great job on the creepypasta, my friend.