Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-5849201-20140616151526

I'll be the first to say that, despite a few grammar and spelling flaws, this was perfectly executed. The pace of the pasta stays steady throughout, and the creepiness gradually builds up as it goes along, coming to a climax at the end with this Other Brain and the 'Mother' title screen. The screenshots add a sense of realism to it, and if you know anything about NES games then the glitching is very possible, thus making the reader question the legitimacy of the story. With a bit of simple hacking, this could be easily replicated.

The only thing that dissapointed me was the title, as I was hoping someone had made a Metroid Mother (EarthBound) crossover pasta xD But alas, that is of no real concern to you.

All in all, an excellent read. 9.5/10 from me, admission into my favourite pages! Keep up the good work, friend :)