Talk:Kirby.exe/@comment-24540056-20140826154641

You did your best to avoid cliches, the writing is nice, story is solid, and the formatting is easy on the eyes. I like this creepypasta. Maybe it's because I've been ripping apart shitpasta's for quite some time, but this is a beacon of light. The horror isn't all that good, but this pasta redeems itself with an interesting concept, and my god, it's been a while since I've seen good grammar in a creepypasta.

6/10