Talk:Addiction/@comment-9847798-20130822042402

Alright, lets check this out!

Writing Ability - This was a pretty well written pasta that may have been a bit rushed. Overall it was alright.

Plot - The plot was easy to follow, but I hoped that it would be a bit more descriptive, therefore being more creepy.

Originality - This is a pasta that I see is a part of a new trend whereas addiction and other real life psychological ailments are utilized. And I like these.

Creepyness - Not terribly creepy since it seemed a bit rushed.

Overall - This was an alright creepypasta that I'd say was ''Skimmable! but it was short so I give it a Pfft...Its Alright!'' Expand on the pasta's good ideas and I'll take another look.