Talk:What Have I Created?/@comment-5025667-20131113030642

Not bad, not bad at all. Unlike most other readers I actually did not guess correctly on which direction this was going to play out, but part of that must be because I am very tired at the time of reading. I passed out a few minutes ago, in fact.

While personally I disagree on the CPotM-worthy status, the story was nonetheless original and having a good sense of mystery. This is also one of the more accurate repersentations of Death and Lucifer I've seen in a while, even with how short and brief the pasta is. This, however, comes to a lingering problem I had with this: It's a little bit too short for what it is. It does feel a bit rushed in plot devolpment and describtions thoughout, but aside from that the story was interesting enough to say it was good, as expected of you.

7.5