Talk:Slender Man Before He was Famous/@comment-9847798-20130715035049

Hello, I think that this pasta really has some comma issues. I'm a grammar snob, so I noticed that first.

However, I thought that the pasta itself was pretty good. My only problem is that you took a lot of tangents by saying that something is a cliche, or similar examples.

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