Talk:Delusion/@comment-76.189.252.101-20131022014356

That was amazing. A very fitting, yet even more impressive sequel. I'd look forward to a third installment to end the series. As far as criticisms, just proof-read. Couple grammar errors that didn't impede the flow or immersion, but were noticed. 10/10. I eagerly await your next story to see how FK is gotten rid of... If it's possible.

-A friendly critic