Talk:Now Is The Time/@comment-26480939-20161101022025

...Uh, what?

No, seriously.

what is this i dont even

Sounds like a mix of "OMG, gaem makes me go evulz!one11!!one" and those weird FRLG ROM hacks (I think they were the Steven ones?) that Mutahar has investigated.

This... needs a lot of work, to be blunt. I spotted several grammar and spelling mistakes, as well as some misusage of punctuation. A good example of that is this sentence:

"I lay there in the bed for an hour, shocked scared."

What the ever-loving hell is that supposed to even mean? DansGame Was it supposed to be "I lay there in the bed for an hour, shocked and scared"? If that is the case, learn more about English grammar and sentence structure.

That and there's a bunch of cliché usage in this, as well. So this gets the following score:

DAE Rating: 4/10 Needs improvement.