Talk:Mother's Revenge/@comment-7117158-20130313150508/@comment-5936189-20130324051048

It is quite hard to make Creepypastas without having cliches in it plus making  mindfucks is a challange because you need a strange ending like Xorax or the Man in Red. You may have noticed this Creepypasta is a bit different then before. I've tried to make it better and try to not use as much cliches as before by making it make sense. I've done the same thing with my Pokemon Creepypasta as well.Good luck with your Mindfuck creepypasta.