Talk:Keep Em Laughing.wmv/@comment-25021327-20141016002041

Well, I feel that this works pretty well as a old fashioned (as old as they can be I suppose) web-borne creepypasta. I think the setup was nicely done. We start the story knowing that something awful is going to happen by the end, but we're not sure what, and I liked the integration of an underground internet comedy show.

It begs many questions that are perhaps better left unanswered. Why did Dan kill Jason? Was this all some huge operation to scare one internet viewer? Did anyone else ever see the show?

All these an others are the types of things that can be asked of most creepypastas, but don't add to them. I guess we want to have some degree of unknown. No one knows why Jeff the Killer kill, or has no apparent trouble living without eyelids. Nobody knows what Sonic's problem is in Sonic.exe. These things just kind of happen.

As far as internet based Creepypastas go, this one wasn't too bad