Talk:The Wicked House/@comment-4332975-20130222160818

Applause for you. I'm guessing from the writing that you're either a younger member or English is not your first language, but the storytelling is pretty spot-on. The only time it got weak was when it started feeling a little rushed at the end. I admit that, at first, I was racking my brain trying to guess where you were going, and not reading the categories the ending almost came as a surprise. As I said, though, the ending felt a little rushed, and it suddenly clicked for me with just a few lines left to the reveal. I think that it could have benefited from just a little slower build. That said, it was still pretty good. 7/10