Talk:"Voice Of The Reaper" Creepypasta./@comment-25021327-20150504004956

I felt like this was a well executed piece. The pacing and tone are consistent throughout and kept me interested. As someone who is not very familiar with the Elder Scrolls series, I still felt quite able to follow along. Athough the names of people and places didn't resonate with me as they would with a regular player, I didn't feel like I was lost at any point.

The plot of the weapon/object that slowly creeps into the holder's mind, or sours their soul is one that has been explored quite a bit in the past, but it still worked here and although this wasn't ground breakingly orinigal, neither was it too derivative. The plot felt a bit formulaic, but engaging enough that I wanted to keep reading.

From my minimal experience with the Elder Scrolls series, I would say that this story captured the tone of the games pretty well. This doesn;t fit the classic style of Creepypasta, but it has some off putting elements, and it's nice to read something that swings more to the fantasy side of things from time to time. I'm glad I read this, and I think folks will enjoy it :)