Talk:The Lavender Tower/@comment-26569434-20180531134824

Needs work.

The story is too short for whatever kind of story you were going for here in my own personal opinion.

Hey a tower getting built today YAY! Also got Pokémon red but yeah whatevers thats not important. If it ain't important why is it even mentioned then?

"Rome was not built in a day, but that tower was. I did not even hear the machines." Must be a really small tower then, probably just a few bricks stacked on top of eachother.

"Some people that went into the tower died today." call the police we got a killer in the area "That's... kinda disturbing." Oh gee, YOU THINK!? "I hope my doesn't come to the same fate." oh he'll be fiiiine. Just as long as he- "He entered the tower just yesterday." GODDAMIT!

"Wait,WHAT THE HEC-................" Snake answer your diary! Snake respond! Snake? SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!!! joke aside I thought this was a diary not a tape, I don't know about you but if I heard something and whatever it was was right behind me ready to kill I'd be dropping everything and running not writing my final words to save my breath for screaming when that whatever it is goes Jason on me.

"This is all that he wrote. Sadly, he fell the same way as everyone else, only in the tower, and a carving of a strange looking Ghost on his back. We took his body so we can analyse it, and if we think something is fishy, we will destroy the tower imminently. Officer Clark, signing off." it's been than a year now ever since the sonic.exe- I mean lavender tower murders began to happen, and the police department STILL doesn't know who's doing it or why it's happening.

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