Talk:It Was Him/@comment-25021327-20141208195232

Whether or not it was due to the clues in the writing, the mindfuck (and mindbang ;)) category or a combination of both, I could kind of see the twist at the end coming. Sort of to the point where I didn't feel the mystery, or that drive to keep reading to see what was going to happen. Knowing where the story is going, it kind of just reads as the tale we all know. (Trying to be vague for folks who read comments before stories.)

That said, I appreciate what you did, and I thought the writing was pretty well done. Format was good, and spelling and grammar were in pretty good shape. Nice style and even pacing, and a quick enough read to definitely be worth the time regardless of anticipating the ending.

So, aside from my personal experience reading it, I say good job :)