Talk:Pokemon LeafGreen: Semira Nox/@comment-1766732-20130327051813

Not bad, although it does have cliche issues (although based on what you said I'm assuming you already know this, so I'll ignore it). There is one factual correction I would like to offer up. The starter pokemon can be female, but it's unlikely. The starter has an 87.5% chance of being male, and a 12.5% chance of being female. Other than that, it's a decent creepypasta. Later, once you have more experience with creepypastas, I would highly suggest rewriting this one and see what you can do with it.

Not factoring in the fact that it's your first one, 6.25/10.

I can see that you put effort into this creepypasta.

[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Category:Pok%C3%A9mon_with_a_gender_ratio_of_seven_males_to_one_female ]