Talk:Theme Hospital/@comment-25021327-20150101144240/@comment-5761534-20150102211823

Hi, I'm the brother of the person who wrote this creepypasta.

I have heard that many of the persons who come visit this site reguraly have said that the creepypasta's written by my brother weren't, well, Up-to-Date if you catch my drift, and I wanted to help him with making this creepypasta a bit better than what my brother originally had created.

So, I have edited the creepypasta to make it a little bit better for reading pleasure, and, that's pretty much the reason why I reply to you comment for my brother.

Please, take the Need Work tag away- for I think the work is pretty much done, and I hope that your work here will be profitable and enjoyable in the future.