Talk:Behind a Closed Door/@comment-24240632-20130717063552

First let me say that this is more of a... Hypothesis and I'll have to review this differently. With that said let's begin.

Idea: 9/10 - I found this interesting to say the very least, but I feel it's been done a few times before just differently. I think you could make a pretty good creepypasta with this.

Execution: 6/10 - I feel as though the execution of this otherwise great idea is lacking. You tell us we could possibly be insane or a monster, but it feels like more could have been added to realy surprise us.

Grammar: 6.25/10 - It's fine I suppose, but it has quite a few flaws. Understandable though.

Overall: 7.25/10 - Good. Not a bad idea my friend, it just felt like it could have been done... Better.

"An interesting read to say the least, but it's not perfect. I still think that anyone interested in the mind and how it works should definetely check this one out."

- Marcus