Talk:Morbid - A Flash Game Creepypasta/@comment-25021327-20151001234027

I thought this was a pretty good little read. Short enough for a quick reading, but not so short it feels rushed or incomplete to me. The plot isn't anything too terribly original, but it doesn't seem too stale either, and I liked the feel of it.

The descriptions of the gameplay were pretty well done, and that's something I peronally enjoy. The images added a nice touch here too, and I got the impression that this may be an actual game, or based closely on one. I liked some of the settings used, and the feel of the late 90's early 00's computer/internet use.

For me the epilogue felt a litte unnecessary, and I would have liked to have had the details of the strange occurance in the bedroom left a little more untouched. It felt a little to me, like the story was jsut reminding me that I was supposed to be scared, which dulled it a bit. But again, that's ust a personal thing, and I think I know why it was included and what you were going for.

In any case, i'm glad I took some time to give this a read :)