Talk:The Building/@comment-6830263-20130531053748

Hmmm... Nice implimentation of these SOG wiki users, but other than that the story is decent at best. There appears to be an issue with the tense, but I think you'd have already fixed that. Other than that, it felt a little dragged out. The doors are just there for references and don't actually build up to something. The ending was also very abrupt. You escape and that's it.

Final verdict: 6/10

P.s.: Ignore this complete review, because it's the "Best. Pasta. Ever." ~FlakyPorcupine

Final verdict: 463847964637412634/10