Talk:The Failed Mew Experiment/@comment-76.16.139.129-20130623175620

This was acually a pretty good read. I give it a 8/10 because grammar was good, the voice was pretty well writtem, it seemed like there was geniune concern and thinking about it, I really liked that this wasn't overly farfetched. This could absolutely be true, when held to pokemon standards. PS, Ditto is the "failed clone" c; Which would make sense why his weight color and appearence are the same as Mew's. Another thing I liked was the adding of actual entries that Mr. Fuji wrote, making him the narratyor without giving it away in the story. This was a great read, and the only thing I didn't like was the ending sentence. It felt sort of rushed, in my opinion. Thanks, and have a good day !