Talk:It Won't Get Better/@comment-6794436-20141220211718

This was an excellent story, but not really a good creepypasta.

The writing, transition, and plot are nearly impeccable, as with the pacing and story itself. This story is also very, very sad, and is really interesting. To shorten things there is almost nothing wrong with this pasta at all. Almost.

You see, there is one fatal flaw to this. Albeit the writing, pacing, and development are good, this pasta isn't creepy at all. It's just a man on the brink of suicide going back on his life, and the only really "creepy" part would be the thought of suicide.

Verdict: 6/10- This is a nearly impeccable story, but not really a great creepypasta.

-Incorrect3