Talk:Pokemon Aftermath/@comment-12186793-20131123180616/@comment-11079349-20131124161511

Thank you for the criticism. This was the first time I tried writing one like this, but I didnt think it turned out too well either. I posted it here to see what others think because it isnt bad. I was going for the feel of "I hate you" but I didn't do it too well, mainly because i had no way to make up screen shots.

As for "you definitely have writing talent, but this story doesn't showcase it" if it didnt showcase it, you wouldn't see that I have talent. Not saying you arent right about this not showing my full capabilities, just that saying "you have talent, but this doesnt showcase it" doesn't exactly make sense if you think about what each individual part means.

and finally, thanks for the rating. I actually like seeing a rating. it helps me to realize where I'm at and work on it. kinda disappointed that I'm only average, but I'll just get better.

after thought, you should get a profile picture.