Talk:Columbine High School/@comment-25021327-20150407224623

All in all, I didn't think this was too bad, though I do have a soft spot for Doom pastas. There are some clichés here and there, and although I've seen the tool of broken media being repaired and mysteriously having new content on it, it isn't too terribly overused.

I would have liked a bit more description here, and even though I could pretty much imagine everything I was reading, there were a few times when I felt soe further detail would have helped. I wasn't sure if all the in-game dialogue parts were appearing in text (as they likely would in an old fashioned Doom mod) or if they were audio clips. Some more description of the characters and surroundings, maybe sounds or music as well would help too.

I thought the Eric Harris Skype call bit was a little silly, but it could have been a lot sillier if it were handled differently. It is way better than if Harris just popped up and said "YOUR NEXT." And some of my feelings about that reflect my preference for less supernatural stories, even though theoretically this could have happened in real life.

Anyway, I know this review sounded like I was complaining, and although I think this pasta could be better I still pretty much enjoyed it. More than I thought I might.