Talk:3 Colors/@comment-5025667-20140118151202

I can tell that there is a moral here, but in all honesty the abstract and surreal plot kind of makes finding this moral all the more difficult. While I wouldn't say it is outright bad, it is quite hard to follow along and by the end it feels like it tries to fit more than one reason why the events happen instead of sticking to one which only made it more confusing for me. As Marcus said, it makes me feel as if I am forced to make a story out of this while I figure it out, which is not a good thing. The level of detail on the other hand is very decent. While you have a tendency of using some words ad nasum (Intimidate and other variants come to mind...) it was good enough to make reading each individual sentence feel nice, with some minor slips.