Talk:Impostor 64/@comment-11366536-20150728022236/@comment-24501965-20150729022056

lol stop flaming me, prep, you don't know how complex and dark my sick and awsome mind is, this will reach 1000000 likes and will be muta's favorite creepyposta lolololololololololololololllolololol noob!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!

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(ow that hurt typing)

Joking aside, I was hoping for more positive responses (then again who wouldn't), but I mostly posted this on here because I had been somewhat inspired by all the recent works of others I had been exposed to, and I wanted to try my hand at writing something of this caliber, I had originally posted this on Deviant Art where I usually post anything I write and I got next to no attention for it as it was mostly drowned out amongst a sea of masterpeices, fan-fiction and porn, so I decided to post something here where it would fit in and more than likely get noticed. It seems that I made the right choice as since this wasn't a flattering review, it was still one comment more than what I got on DA, so that I can thank you for.

As for some of the complaints you made, I don't know if this relates too much to I HATE YOU (though looking back I can see where you'd get that from, but it wasn't intended), but the MARIO connections were intended as I kind off wanted to interpret the concept into a tale of regicide as I felt could be done with the idea of Peach being replaced in the space between Mario 3 and Mario world (jumping off mostly the change of hair color), so, yes, there was inspiration, as for being bland and boring, I don't know what to say about that, I guess I just didn't write too interestingly; and I guess I didn't tie up certain loose ends of the story, so... oops. I've always had some trouble with run-on sentances and indecisions between commas, periods, and semicolons; so I understand the grammar issue.

In conclusion, I'm sorry it wasn't up to par with your standards, but I thank you for taking the time to read the story and taking the additional time to comment on it :)