Talk:Do You Remember Me?/@comment-25567080-20150130054943

This was good! :D   I really liked it

I only found just 1 misspelled word and I fixed that :P. Anyways, the build up really made me think of what the "thing" was and when you said that, I actually had to search up what an Ombra is XD, and that made the story 2x spookier in my opinion. This story is 'the breath of fresh air' i was wanting and I am happy I read it

Overall - 8.5/10     :D

-ScarySam