Talk:Crowd Control/@comment-7706473-20140819054532/@comment-25298353-20140819170427

Hey, thanks! I'm so glad that you liked it! :D

I know that the underlying tone deals with a very controversial topic, but I did that sort of deliberately. For one thing, it's really hard to make a good story about a vicious riot/protest without a deep-rooted controversy behind it. For another, differing viewpoints can create a lot of tension between both the people arguing and bystanders, and I tried to convey that through the story.