Talk:Safer in the Dark/@comment-9847798-20130815013728

Damn, this was truly the "Last House of the Left" of creepypastas on this site. Deeply disturbing, but is it warranted? Lets find out

Writing Ability - This was a well written pasta. It sounded visceral and just messed up. I thought that it never really got cartoonish, and it didn't leave the overall mood. That really helped this pasta because I never got a chance to relax when reading this.

Plot - I think that the plot was disturbing, but not really excessive in any way. It wasn't visceral just to be visceral. I also liked the incorporation of "My Sharona". It reminded me of a scene in "Resevoir Dogs".

Originality - This was an original story with not too many, if any, cliches.

Creepyness - Not necessarily creepy, which does lower this a couple notches. But it wasn't not creepy.

Overall - This was a well done creepypasta that edges on ''RAD! ''but just misses it because it didn't really blow me away. Nonetheless, this is a strong Goood! This was a pasta that I would recommend. Nice job!