Talk:The Lost Artifact/@comment-24240632-20130906011558

This lost artifact is a rarity.

Description: 9.5/10 - Everything was described rather well... When it was detailed and described that is, and most things were, but I can't help feeling like this has so much potential. You could decribe the castle better and describe Cyrus' house better etc. Other then that it was really quite great!

Plot: 9.2/10 Although I've never read "STH.exe" I still found this rather interesting and it can be put into the creepy category at points. The only problem I have with the plot is that overall it feels a little messy. I know that's not saying much, so I'll tell you why. First off I feel like it's too early in time. I think that the 1500's feels a little bit more appropriate. That's just me though. Another problem is the way that everything feels a bit rushed and not really thought out as much as I'd hoped it to be.

Entertainment: 9.0/10 - If you ask me it was a very enjoyable read!

Overall: 9.2/10 - Outstanding.

"Interesting and written very well."

- Marcus