Talk:Loss Of Memory/@comment-7234175-20141214163031

I have to agree with Samuel and Urik on the spelling, grammer, and tense of the pasta. Those really don't urke me or kill a story for me. The only thing I found that rubbed me the wrong way was once "puss" and "Infection" came into play two and two where put together for what you where going for. Never the less, still pretty good. Just gotta proofe read before you post and you should be golden. Keep it up Rev.

~ Adam Bloodgood