Talk:Withered Roses/@comment-25021327-20150112024354

I pretty much enjoyed this one. It wasn't anything super groundbreaking, but I felt that is was pretty solid. I've never played the Rumble Roses series, but I felt pretty much able to follow along  by just imagining DoA in a wrestling ring (plus I've watched my fair share of wrestling)

The pacing here felt pretty consistent, the descriptions were good, the spelling, grammar, and clarity all felt in good shape. This length worked for me, I didn't feel like this was rushed, or like it was plodding along.

The plot was farily standard, but the way it was presented felt organic enough not to come across as tired feeling to me. The ending was a little heavy handed, but pretty much worked. Although I was pretty certain about where things were going, I didn't mind getting there, and like I said it mostly felt organic.

I think this one works pretty well. Like I said, it's not mind-blowing, but It is solid. I feel like even though some stories are told many times over, they can still be effective cometimes, and that's what I felt reading this. Pretty nice work :)