Talk:The Ivory Line/@comment-4332975-20160219160123

By way of a more general review, I would actually recommend some revision to this story. In terms of events, it feels a bit sparse, and really isn't given time to build up atmosphere. On top of that, the ending is really an anticlimax. The only time that "it's only a dream" really works as an ending in Creepypasta is when there are enough hints that, though the narrator could conceivably miss them, the reader is made to be aware, or at least suspect, that it was not a dream, or when the narrator is clearly unreliable, and we are left to doubt their version of events. In this case, everything actually being a dream that the narrator had while suffering from highway hypnosis just makes too much sense.