Talk:Death Dance Revolution/@comment-15963904-20151021205356

1) The grammar. Oh my god, it's tormenting.

2) The wall of text. Ouch, this hurts even more.

3) This is really short for a creepypasta. Just. Too short.

4) I'm laughing at the fact that it's poorly executed.

5) I shouldn't be laughing.

6) I give this 0.5/5.