Talk:Jessica/@comment-8470110-20131012190708

8.5/10

That was a very well written pasta. The amount of detail was great and the characters were 3-dimensional and relatable. I loved the idea of an old save file coming back and haunting the player. There isn't much to say except excellent job. The 'Needs Work' category doesn't belong on this pasta, so I'd love to see an Admin take that off.

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)