Talk:Toad: A Mario Theory/@comment-25021327-20151129021241

28-November-2015 Adding a needs Work tag here.

I'm pretty sure Toad does say "Our Princess."

In any case, this theory is okay I guess. Kind of short and a little sparse on detail in my opinion, could probably be expanded upon to make it more interesting. Also, this could use some formatting so it isn't just a block of text. There are a couple spelling and grammar issues here as well.

As this is a Needs Work story, it will face deletion in 9 days if it is not deemed adequately improved after another review. Please take that time to make a few improvements to your theory. A few tweaks should be good enough to get this one up to par