Talk:Light in a Dark Time/@comment-25021327-20160727023641

I thought that this one started out with some potential, kind of playing on a typical pasta setup. I was kind of hoping that it would go in a slightly different direction than it ended up going. I was wondering if this one would kind of elaborate more on the protagonist and go more into his thoughts or motivations on a deeper level. But for what it is, I think it still works relatively well. I was hoping that this one would turn out to be a little more unique, but it's not bad. I think it pretty much does what it sets out to do :)