Talk:Deserted/@comment-24582398-20140226001934/@comment-24582398-20140226172131

8/10

The only real issue I had with it was the massive, massive conincidence that two online friends with similar interests lived that close together, went to the same school and rode the same bus without realizing. You'd think one of them would recognize the other's voice or see one of them on the DS or wearing some merch and start the conversation. It's required to make the story work, which is why I take two points for it, as it's not only unlikely, but an important element. If you drop in early on that they bonded over being extremely shy and afraid of trying to make friends in real life, that should help patch it up. Otherwise, I saw no issues, and though it was extremely good.