Talk:War/@comment-24240632-20130914204937

A surprising war.

Description: 9.0/10 - Considering the point of view and the way you're telling the story there isn't really too much you could do more here. Good job!

Plot: 8.5/10 - Not bad! The mindf*ck wasn't very predictable, but as it stands it's just another generic mindf*ck pasta that wasn't really all that creative.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - It was a nice little story that's worth taking the time to read.

Overall: 8.6/10 - Great.

"There's not really much I can say about it... It's a mindf*ck, and it's a good mindf*ck."

- Marcus