Thread:Whats up guys!123456/@comment-6794436-20140428225913

Hey, so I was going around the needs work category and I saw your pasta, "Flappy Bird". As a veteran writer on this site, I must say that it honestly isn't that bad. Maybe just fix the ending a little bit and you should be good. It is still just a mediocre pasta but it is at least decent unlike some of the other pastas in that category. You should continue to write pastas and take feedback from other writers. 