Talk:Paper Mario The Thousand Year Door./@comment-29502200-20160928031032

Review time

Plain and simple, the story was pathetic, unoriginal, and boring. Please revise your stories before submitting them. Make them realistic, relatable, and actually scary. This was a 12-year-olds edgy art project.

If you have any questions on how to write a story, please contact me and I can help.