Talk:Bead Dice Sky/@comment-26480939-20160903173007

Wow. This is something a bit different than the norm in Poképastas. When I first read the title, I was like, "Such a strange title. What does this have to do with Pokémon?" It took me a while to see the Pokémon connection, but it was pretty well-done.

Now, my rating:

Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation: Not too bad, only a few small typos that I noticed, like misspelling Tom's name as 'Tome' one time, and using 'grizzly' instead of 'grisly'. Very well done. 9.5/10

Scare Factor: Not too much with the scary, moreso with the subtle eeriness. 7/10

Shock Factor: Average. 5/10

Meat: This is kind of hard to rate, as this is a completely remade Pokémon game with elements of games that I don't know much about, such as Metal Gear. N/A/10

Overall: 9.75/10 ''Very good. Only small improvements needed.''