Talk:Ed Edd n Eddy: The Game/@comment-17737991-20150122025014

Really, this pasta isn't that bad. Okay... the clichés are painful. Like, so many clichés, the overdone monotony of it can bore you to tears <.<

But the pasta has a surprising amount of effort. The writing is done well, and the details of the game are great and explain many of the possible options which I haven't seen much of before. Also, whoever wrote this clearly knows their source material, this really feels like Ed Edd n Eddy, the way the characters act, the episode references in the file names...

A complaint though is that I had to read it twice to get that the rocket car crashed and killed the other characters. At first I thought there was some random rocket, then some random car crash, then random death. Maybe I didn't pay attention, but I didn't catch that it was a rocket /car/ the first time. So anyway, as I already said, the clichés are just painful. But there's so much effort in this... even the pictures are decent! I'll let this stay, I'll just fix up a small dialogue error and that's all.