Talk:Eric/@comment-17737991-20140206230811

Okay, dat ending, holy... fuck... ffffffuuuuck.

That ending is awesome.

Anyway, there are some minor grammar errors (aside from Eric's dialogue I mean) but nothing too bad. I think the main character was kind of overeactive with Eric digging holes everywhere, it only took half an hour to clean but he's pissed about it for the rest of the story. All that aside, the ending.

Holy crap is Eric sympathetic, he was only trying to play with his cousin. And the lines where he says it's hot, that's so disturbing now ._. This, just, fuck. Powerful ending. I wish my comment was longer but... basically it's just a great ending.