Talk:Gibby/@comment-11366536-20150614005123

Good - The story had me personally interested throughout the beginning and middle section. The Grammar isn't bad at all, and the format is okay.

Bad - There are some unexplained peices of information in the Creepypasta, which seriously left me hanging. Mild cliche's and the rushed feeling of the story bother me as well.

All in all, this pasta's about as Average as it gets.

Verdict - 5/10 (Average)