Talk:The Message/@comment-6727300-20131216204029

"We was gone" indeed. Please, for the love of all that is good, CAPITALIZE YOUR WORDS. And please read over the story before you submit it. Minor errors are natural, we are all human, but this is unexcusable. Also, the story was very random, no tension or build-up. Just a dull story, put more heart into your writing, and let those emotions sink into the reader. 3/10