Talk:Lost Soul/@comment-11079349-20131226172856/@comment-6418997-20131226180709

this is not my pasta, by i find saying this unavoidable, i know that some pastas are really good on a persons second try, but this was cyas second time, he asked me to edit it, so before it was much less explained. You must understand that there has already been a lot of improvements. Also I know your just trying to help cya out by being harsh but there is a fine line between helping and making someone cry. now the reason for all the mystery is because cya made it that way and i couldnt answer those questions mainly cause again not my pasta. im not saying you suck or anything like that but im just saying being harsh isnt the only way to get someones butt up and start working