Talk:Lurk/@comment-9281274-20150526214553

Holy shit, the imscared monster? I gotta say this was quite the improvement over purple. For one thing the format of this pasta (a program that's deteriorating in language over time) was a neat quirk and is quite good.

If I were to give some advice it would be to focus on writing a good story as much as you are constructing the twist. For example: I knew what this was about but other people probably haven't heard of the imscared game.