Talk:Everything Dies/@comment-24239143-20130830075431

This may not be your best, but it was better than the average creepypasta, once again. Reading paragraph 3 was needing a bit of a tweak, but it isnt too bad. The story had good background to it too. But, the final line of the pasta was not very convincing for me. Overall, its an 8/10 from me, which is graded brilliant, but misses a few features.