Talk:Online/@comment-11366536-20150120172012

Who in the fuck's mind wrote this?

The story is really simple, not to mention that NOTHING is explained in it. All the story is in entirely is just a bunch of people talking on... A chat program or something. Aside from the confusion with the Explanation, Grammar Errors make this frustrating to read. This story is not even the slightest bit scary at all.

Verdict : 2.5/10 (Bad)