Talk:Girl of my Dreams/@comment-11366536-20150203171317

Summary : A Guy who is really into this girl asks her out many times only to be declined in the end. The Poor Guy is finally asked out by the girl, which made him really happy, but not for long as he discovers he was tricked by the girl. The man runs home crying out of mostly anger and the feeling of betrayal, resulting in his bloodlust to kill her, which he promptly does in the end.

Like SimplyOddest stated below, the Love Story being told here is pretty cliche', but other than that, this story is Excellent! Perfect Grammar, pacing, an original and shocking story, and a very depressing mood also add to the overall atmosphere to the story.

Good job, keep on writing.

Verdict : 9.5/10 (Excellent)