Talk:Otherfighters/@comment-25029585-20140621144521

I liked this pasta. The game descibed seems very plausable to actually be real. It wasn't some hacked cartridge, it was just a game with an odd ending. That's what I didn't like, though, the ending. You talked about ending 2, and I was ready for the shocking ending. And then you were like, "Oops, I forgot the ending.", and it left me wanting more. But that's good that I wanted more story, shows that it was good writing.

Overall, 8/10, a good story that leaves you wanting more.

Steelwingred (talk) 14:45, June 21, 2014 (UTC)