Thread:Stormlilly/@comment-25021327-20140726220043

So, after hearing many reviews and critiques of my story Meroid: Mother, I decided that I should re-read/revisit the ending. I read it through again from the begining, and was able to understand many of the complaints i was getting regarding the ending. I decided to temporarily stash my stubborn-ness away, and look at the story from a fresh perspective.

So I wrote a new ending, which seems to be more in line with the tone of the rest of the story. I know you are a busy Lilly, but I was just wondering if you would be willin to, at some point, give the new ending a read through. I respect your opinions as a writer :) 