Talk:Daisy/@comment-25021327-20150920020124

This one was a pretty standard little story. It was a quick read, and I enjoyed it. Ghosts, and haunted houses aren't really the kind of things I'm usually into, but it was good for a short story. The plot isn't really groundbreaking or original, but the story is solid, and does what it intends to do.

The present-tense style seems to have been done correctly throughout this, which is something that gives writers trouble from time to time. It's nice for a change from the standard past tense storytelling that most tales use. The format was nice (hooray, paragraph indents >ω<)

So I don;t havea whole lot to say about this, I think it was pretty well done for what it is. Glad I took a few minutes to read it :)