Talk:Birthday at Freddy's/@comment-11366536-20141217193949

Just like another creepypasta, this is essentially just a summary of FNAF.

The thing I liked though, is how you wrote the story from a First-Person Point-Of-View. The First-Person gives the recolations that the Kid has from his viewpoint, which enhances the story.

There is some grammatrical errors, but they don't completely stop the story from being readable. The story also isn't really anything to give a gold metal to, but it's okay more or less.

Verdict : 6.5/10