Talk:Anima/@comment-25021327-20140723193709

I think this was a very well executed story :) The pacing is steady and consistent, the narrator is relateable, format, style spelling and grammar are in good shape (in my opinion) and the story is thought provoking.

The descriptions of the events occurring were good, and easy to visualize/imagine. I also like that the story is totally open to interpretation. There is no clearly given answer. That, contrary to being unsatisfying, enhances the mood of the piece.

I enjoy pondering just how these events could have occurred. Did someone's essence get randomly caught in an electrical storm, and converted to digital form? Are there more .anima files floating around?

Good job, I quite liked this!