Talk:Mummy Stitched You Up/@comment-25169099-20141004002447

I saw some spelling errors and whats going on whats slightely confusing. But besides that it was good. Also was the whole thing not a nightmare but she stiched him up. I also wonder what would have happend next. The woman seemed to act without motives. Was she just crazy? I also like how no HYPERREALISTIC BLOOD was used. You would'nt belive how many people do that. You also went into good detail about what he was sensing (His feeling, what he saw,etc.)