Talk:Cheaters Never Prosper/@comment-25021327-20141112003237

This reads like a fairly standard "haunted game" pasta. Although I have seen the plot of a hidden message to cheaters used in stories before, I still enjoy it. It seemed a bit odd that cheating on the game would make smoke come out of the cartridge though, haha. Especially since it was then revealed that neither the game, nor system were physically damaged afterward.

I feel like this story might get overlooked, as it treads some familiar ground. It isn't written or executed badly, The format, spelling, grammar, and clarity were all in good shape. It just doesn't feel entirely unique.

One thing that bugged me was the fact that the original NES SMB3 did not support data saving, so that kind of made the feel of this a lot less realistic for me.

So it isn't too bad, it just didn't feel like it added anything special, or fun to the gaming pasta formula.