Talk:A Bug's Death/@comment-9847798-20130714040056

Firstly, thank you for fixing the white background. I am now able to look at the pasta and let you know what I think.

The use of "A Bug's Life" was a great idea.

I do find it odd that, in the end, the character is told to tell everyone the story, but I think that it works alright.

Overall, I think that this was well written, good job