Talk:Hanging Gardens/@comment-5346853-20130407221947

Wow. Just wow. Even when I starte reading this, I thought to myself, ''Wow. I have a feeling that this'll be good... ''And my mind didn't fail me. This was REALLY good. First off, let's start with cliches like always. :D

According to my vision, I have NOT spotted any cliches. So.... Great job! Now for blood. Blood use here was minimal. Doesn't mean it's not good. Some creepypastas have A LOT of blood and I just laugh and think to myself, ''trollpasta or waste of my time. Hahahahaha!'' But this... NO. THIS WAS WORTH A READ. The way you wrote this was excellent. I LOVED it!

In general, it was very, very amazing. I liked how you based it off a song even! The only concern I'd address is that I never knew what this "heaven" was... Was it a tropical paradise? I don't know... It was creepy and scared me decently. You may think that's bad but most creepypastas fail to scare me at ALL.

Overall, I'd give you a 9/10 because of the well-written story and how it was based off a song! I just dinged you a mark since I never really got a detailed explanation of what the "heaven" was. Excuse me if I was wrong and you DID explain it.