Talk:Never Stop Running/@comment-188.2.110.10-20141213033327

Meh, not really good IMO. The style in which the letter was written was not how a son writes to his parents, the whole dog plot was pointles, the "heroic sacrifice" made no sense, the list goes on. At no point did it leave me scared. All in all, one of the weaker pastas. 3/10.