Talk:I Beat Jeff/@comment-5757488-20131021190144

I'm not sure how to feel about this pasta. On one hand, it does have decent tone, and a good narrative voice, but on the other, it's another Jeff the killer spin off.

To say the character of Jeff the Killer is overused would be an understatement, and I think replacing him with any other serial killer in this pasta would have worked just as well.

similarly, the story felt a little disjointed, and at points similar to a particular episode of doctor who. The ending was abrupt, and the short length didn't do it any favours.

In summary, a genuine and believable narrative voice let down by a tired and ill-plotted story. Not the best pasta I've read by any means, but a valiant attempt. I hope you keep up with it, and improve!