Talk:The Rosemary Clock/@comment-25400723-20160307143446

Please remember to add categories to your story, not doing so will result in a short ban. I've added them this time but next time is up to you.

So, I read through this, and I have to say that I like the central idea. The one problem with this though, is the fact that are spelling and grammar mistakes scattered everywhere throughout this selection. Not only that, but sometimes there seems to be extra words placed in between others (ex.    I researched the clock and found it to be called to be a rosemary clock)

As you can see above the secondth "to be" does not need to be there.

I like the idea, but It just feels like not enough planning, proof-reading and editing went into this story to make it good.

Final Verdict?

N/A-  I'll give this a proper score if you make some adjustments.

~King