Talk:Sonic.exe/@comment-5849201-20140608141326/@comment-22467417-20140608160408

I managed to cut down on the blood and cliches, make it more modern and more believable than a bloody doll that stalks you, or appears behind, trying to go for nightmare fuel than supernatural bs.

The ending was tricky, how would I end it?, was hoping to put it up and come back later for suggestions from comment section, their are things I agree with though, it still has little cliches and such, but no pasta is perfect, I believe mine is still a massive improvement than something now lost or removed from the creepypasta wiki.

I will be editing this more hopefully before the deadline to make it at least passable, I actually tried with this, the only reason why I didn't put it on the proper wiki is because they are no longer taking SONIC creepypastas, was just hoping to get this seen and acknowledged by anyone.