Talk:Run Escape/@comment-24139390-20150118043107

I had a feeling it would be a Runescape pasta, especially when I saw it had the skills Swordsmanship, Agility, and Blacksmithing. And how it was the beta, so you started on an island (Turtorial Island, which was removed a few years ago - I don't know if it's still gone since I haven't played in forever). It was a bit short, and it didn't exactly build up the story or the player evenly, it fell a bit flat of what you probbaly intended. And then the pictures at the end kind of threw me off, since it didn't seem neccessary or have any other purpose than trying to be shocking.

However though, for your second language, I'm really impressed how the writing is done. I never would have guessed English was your second. And the fact that the avatar looked like the player kind of made me second guess my thought of it being Runescape, and the whole beta thing was good.