Talk:Devil's Incarnate/@comment-25021327-20160825001222/@comment-29502200-20160825070449

Thanks for the review, but overall what would rate the poem?

Also I purposely used the phrase' devil's incarnate' instead of 'devil's incarnation,' becasue it seemed to stick out more and have higher emphasis. Even with the title, I used "Devil's Incarnate" instead of "THE Devil's Incarnate," because I feel the "the" makes it lose interest.

"I'm about to read a poem called Devil's Incarnate" "I'm about to read a peom called THE Devil's Incarnate." I feel as if the first version is better.