Talk:You Are in a Room 2/@comment-7706473-20140810100731

I'm usually not frightened of the sensation of being restrained. Being hard-headed, I am a justifier and an eye-roller. And yet...

This was interesting. Is it the same figure, stuck in a series of ever-increasingly disturbing rooms, or a different room with a different purpose? The sentences were short and concise - though I'm usually at war with this style in favor of needless verbosity, it worked extremely well here - every crisp ending reinforces how trapped and powerful the narrator - no, 'you' - are. If there was anything I'd change, it'd be a temptation to add a sound link for the crash effect, possibly using the help of the fine folks at freesound.org. Something that sounds like a hellish clatter of tools falling - out of sight.

Also, the ending interested me. It seemed to imply the story was a challenge - and we could try to escape, if we liked. Normally I'd take it, but the way that it was phrased - specifically the line '... to ponder whether or not you are alone, or if you have company...' had a distinctly sinister feeling about them that I liked. May I say that I found it rad? Well, I'm gonna!