Talk:How NOT to write a Creepypasta/@comment-6491381-20150630054740/@comment-26449123-20150705130043

Yeah, you killed one'a my homies! I, like Dashie (DashieGames on YouTube) have an affinity for playing certain characters. Now, I ain't like my bro Nicky, who does that "thing" with Yoshi-

FlamingPup: AHEM. Quindelious, I thought you weren't gonna mention that!

Sorry broseph. Anyways, we's still tight. Maybe try reworkin' it, takin' out all the "Death, death everywhere" and just having a character get possessed or some'n. You's got potential!