Talk:Melee of Shadows/@comment-25021327-20151025035101

You know what, I didn't think this one was too bad. Now, There were some things here that felt kind of tired, like the game mysteriously coming in the mail, the game speaking with the player, the game sontinueing after the system was unplugged, and some other stuff that is kind of typical of haunted game pastas. However, I enjoyed reading this. I was short and quick, and moved quickly. Though it didn;t give a ton of detail, there is a lot implied.

So I'm not sure if its technically a "great" pasta by normal means, but I liked reading it, and I liked the touch about the characters briefly turning into their former human selves as well. That seemed fairly unique to me. I also liked the grim ending, I thought it worked well with the story, I'm glad I read this one :)