Talk:Coypu Disease/@comment-11366536-20150924234153

What the bloody hell is this?

Let me start off by saying that the plot literally breaks all barriers of realism from start to finish. A fucking talking breed of gopher? Did you honestly think over about how asinine that would be in a "Scary" Story?

Oh, but if that wasn't enough, there's very little explanation of the events and the ones that do exist are contradictory.

"Apparently it wasn't life-threatening but was virtually incurable. Out of nowhere, the doctor takes out a vaccine that would cure it." Are you serious now?

This story is so bad, even the cliche's feel incredibly stupid to read. "The copyu was sitting outside the window watching her" What the hell? That doesn't even make any sense at all.

Verdict - 1/10 (Watching Barney at 2 AM is scarier)

For the love of god, I highly suggest you read this before you publish a story, as it will help and guide you in all future writing attempts.