Talk:Ed Edd n Eddy Pedophilia Theory/@comment-25021327-20160820223134

A pretty interesting look at some of the possible implications (intended or not) in a childrens' show. I could tell that the author seemed to have a pretty good grasp on the source material, referenccing specific episodes and other instances throughout the series. However, I couldn;t fully appreciate them having never been a fan of Ed, Edd, & Eddy. A little more general background on the show and characters might help readers who aren;t as familiar with the show.

The spelling and grammar here could use some work, there are misspellings throughout, and also some misused homophones (Like the wrong spellings of there, their and they're) which are a little too numerous and became a bit distracting for me while reading. Some proofreading by the author, or edits by another user could go a long way here :)

The length and pacing worked pretty well for me here. The intro felt like it helped the story to me, as usually these kinds of stories just start out like "I saw this episode of (insert cartoon here) once and this happened." I feel like a little more polish could go a long way for this one.