Talk:Answers/@comment-6830263-20130520064951

How is this a mindf*ck? I didn't like that even in the beginning of the story, you already told us you couldn't help. The ending then isn't as surprising anymore. Grammar and spelling, aside from a few flaws, were good. Another thing I didn't like, was the fact that after reading the story, I still don't know what was going on with the man. You just told us his legs were charred, but why?

Final verdict: 5.5/10