Talk:The Friend Beyond the Wall -- An IRL Creepypasta/@comment-6794436-20150208191923

Well... this is unique I guess...

Good: This pasta has a genuinely unique premise that I honestly have never saw before, nor do I think I ever will see again. The grammar in this piece is alright, with not too many typos, and this isn't a wall of text, so that's a plus. You also have categories, something that a lot of new users tend to forget to use...

Bad: Remember what I said abou this being unique? Well, that comes with the bad part of this story being more funny than anything. I'm sorry, but talking to a sentient wall isn't creepy at all, and it actually gave me a few chuckles! Also, adding that part in the beginning where you insist that this pasta is real (which is a big no-no unless the things you're writing about are actually plausible) just made it even funnier.

Verdict: 5/10- It's unique, but because of said uniqueness, this pasta becomes actually more funny than scary. Don't become too discouraged though, as I've read far worse pastas than this, and this honestly isn't that bad from a writing standpoint. If you want to improve as a writer, you should read the New Writer Guidelines, as they will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3