Talk:Abandoned.exe/@comment-99.186.117.1-20151206173930

I understand that this was one of your first stories, but this wasn't good at all.

1. The use of ".exe" has been played out and usually screams that the pasta will either try too hard or be bad.

2. The commentary within the story not only breaks immersion but is also unnecessary.

3. Lastly, the unoriginal "note" at the end is confusing to say the least. Who is typing and why?