Talk:Seek Him, and He Will Seek You/@comment-24747574-20140825081445

Ok, i had some comedic relief at the end, because "Alter" equals "Dude" or "Buddy" in german^^

Anyways. It is well written, confusing in a good way and had no apparent clichés. The blood is mentioned a bit too often, but it serves some purpose.

i feel it could be fleshed out more. It reminded me of "the no-end house" and thats good, but you need more details. Maybe more rooms and creepy stuff.

Pretty decent, but could use polish and expansion.