Talk:Digression of Will/@comment-4740494-20131112051405

This isn't a gaming creepypasta and this is my first attempt at one, kinda. This was originally a history project  that I made some edits to before posting this. I know there's a lot of cliche's and the grammar and literacy itself is poor but any and all feedback is appreciated, I doubt there is but if I did do anything right then it would be helpful. It's really the only reason I'm posting this. Thanks :)