Talk:Samris/@comment-108.197.207.202-20130214014532

I really enoyed this one! A very cool, dark spin on the original game.

Just couple of notes. First, it's great that you recognize and avoid common creepypasta cliches, but when you go out of your way to MENTION the cliches and how they aren't present here, you break the immersive quality of the story. When you're writing a creepypasta, pretend you've never heard of a creepypasta.

Second, I personally wasn't impressed with the bite marks on the cartridge. This was plenty creepy enough when it was just a mysterious, disturbing alternate version of the game, minus any supernatural origins. Again, that's just a personal quirk of mine.

Final verdict: EXCELLENT PASTA; WOULD EAT AGAIN. And I can't wait to see more from this author!