Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-24240632-20130812041401

First let me say that this was probably the best pasta I've read today! With that said let's begin.

Description: 8.75/10 - Everything was detailed great and you only had a handful of grammatical errors in there, but I feel like the video logs could've had a little more meat added to them because even though they were creepy they feel vague at times.

Plot: 10/10 - Very original and basically flawlessly executed... In other words I loved it!

Entertainment: 8.25/10 - I feel like there were too many vlog entries in there that really weren't necessary, but all in all it was a good experience.

Overall: 8.75/10 - Great. This was a huge emprovement from your other pasta. Great job!

"Interesting and gripping"

- Marcus