Talk:Metroid Prime: Fusion Suit/@comment-25795278-20151118185827

I know this is your first pasta but I'm just trying to help. It's and "ok" pasta. It has some cliches, but not som much that it's impossible to read (not like 1 or 2 cliches will ruling a story) Also I fixed some spacing errors and this: "I decided I wanted more Metroid game." Now I hope this helps you be a better writer and make great creepypastas Note: I don't know if you are new to the Metroid universe, but "incarnation beam" is actually "plasma beam" in all the Metroid games.