Talk:Concrete/@comment-32602006-20140102223851

Writing quality: 06/10 (08/10 when ajusted for the fact that English isn't your native language)

Entertainment value:07/10 it held my attention

Actual Creepyness: 06/10 not somethingI'm likely to have nightmares over, but still decent

Realsm/Beleivability: 07/10 the whole amusement park project thing is kind of easy to research and disprove but other than that it's somewhat believable

Emotional Impact: 06/10