Talk:The Simdemonicals 2/@comment-20437898-20130917220555

I feel this has to many cliches, and needs more build-up, maybe his parents are on vacation and he starts a journal after something weird happens the day before or that evening he starts writing about it and decides to make a journal. Something like:

Sep/17/2004 6:30 pm. I just walked home from a good friend of mine's house. Something so weird happened today in his copy of Sims 2 that I have decided to keep journal everyday about what happens. He had gotten his laptop out to show me a Sim he made to look like Chuck Norris, which he was quite proud of. He loaded everything up, and everything looked normal, until we realized that his sim was missing. Upon further investigation, we found out what had happened. First it was his arms, then his legs, then his chest, then his right foot, and eventually, we found a mangled piece of meat which was eventually identified as the sims head... And so on.