User blog comment:Creeper50/Graphic Novel Outline-Critique Wanted/@comment-6794436-20170219212426

I'm not exactly sure how to critique an outline lol, so I don't really have many critiques. You obviously put a shit ton of time and effort into this, and it's always of great importance to flesh out your characters and make them feel real, which I believe you've at least started to accomplish. Very interesting outline, it's good that you put so much work into the outline so that you can easily transfer it into a draft, I wish I had the patience and ability to make an outline for my work lol. Overall, not much else to say, looks pretty good!

-Incorrect3