Talk:The Station/@comment-25021327-20151106000618

I thought that this one was all right, it felt competantly written and I felt interested in what was going on. The concept of finding an off-the-grid radio station broadcasting strange coded messages is great fare for a creepypasta. The format felt a little strange at times, with it starting off as a kind of a narrative, then going to a journal style, and ending with an e-mail appearing to be fro a third party.

Like I said, I liked the concept, and I honestly woud have liked to see it played out a little bit longer. I was starting to get into the story when it took a sudden turn and then ended. I liked the first few entries, and would have liked to see the following ones move a little slower. The Coded messages contatined within the broadcasts felt a little silly to me, with a kid of "we're gonna get you!" feel. This is something else that I might have enjoyed more if the pacing of the second half was slowed down.

But although I would have liked a little more from it, I did enjoy reading the story. It's a quick read, and I felt pretty interested throughout :)