Talk:Game for Three/@comment-7706473-20140718112350/@comment-24747574-20140718123146

Thanks for the review^^

I don't know, whether the readers are so used to certain patterns or whether I simply haven't transfered the thought well enough (probably the 2nd^^), but up until now no one figured out who the protagonist was.

Just stay with me on this one for a while -

What if the craving was of more purity than vile?

What if he does not creep but taking care of her?

Who lives for us from our day of birth?

White wings and always there when needed,

Elusive, loving, unimpeded,

By every creature undefeated,

We think of them to be protection

From an unlucky course of action

They name suggests they came from heaven,

Yet I don't think it's what had happened.

In any case - they guard us well,

From each and every spawn of hell.