Talk:Patchwork/@comment-25021327-20141001000157

I liked this little story. It was pretty well written, and despite its short length, was able to provide good descriptions. I feel like something like this could be expanded upon and made into a longer and more involved pasta, but it's not necessary. Everything that the reader needs to know is provided in the short narrative that makes the story feel concise to me.

Style, spelling, grammar, format, everything is in good shape. This was a pleasant little read :)