Talk:The Real Game/@comment-25021327-20150520233057

20-May-2015- Adding a Needs work tag here. This story is formatted all right, but there are some strange wordings, and some grammar errors. The main reason I'm marking this for work is that the story just feels kind of silly to me. There are some clichés here too, the sketchy looking game, blood and guts, static and screeching in the gameplay, and the game erasing itself so there is no real proof.

I guess it just feels kind of over the top and not really creepy to me. As this page is now tagged "Needs Work," it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review.