Talk:Tumbled/@comment-7706473-20140614134529

The fifth paragraph is at once hilarious and pretty much the sort of weird thought comes unbidden when you're in a life-threatening situation. The last sentance is terrifying because, despite the name of the past having hinted at it... Yeah. The story feels rapid, like a fall, and reminds you of that same sense of powerlessess and being out of control - which, come to think of it, isn't really used all that much in creepypasta. It should be used more often, I think, as it's very scary.