Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog 3 Hacked Cartridge (Genesis)/@comment-3244769-20160903022935

It was pretty good. There were some grammatical errors, like words missing and the tense constantly switching between past and present. I never understood what you meant by "In the walls, under the floors", and you repeating it got a bit irksome after a while. I do like the plot twist near the end, and the story itself isn't too far a stretch.

Overall, 8/10.