Talk:16:9/@comment-25021327-20150115144357

I thought this was pretty enoyable, and with the author requesting deletion, I'm glad I got a chance to read it before it was gone!

Since this is likely to be deleted, I;ll keep this short. The spelling, grammar, and clarity were all in good shape, nothing that really distracted me from the story. The pacing feels pretty consistent throughout, although it get crazy at the end, but that is obviously by design. At the time of my writing this, the video containing the audio of the 911 call is no longer valid, so I can't comment on it. But I feel that maybe it would have helped tie the ending up a little more nicely, as right now, it seems quite abrupt.

But The setup was good, and kept me reading, I like the story of a few friends setting out to make a big time movie, I felt compelled to keep reading this to the end. Although the end did feel sudden and a little cliche, That doesn;t affect my thoughts on the rest of the piece, which I felt was pretty strong. Glad I read this :)