Talk:Server at Night/@comment-11366536-20150430023034

Honestly, I think this Creepypasta was pretty okay.

The story was well-written with only a few visible Grammatrical Errors that I could find, but they don't completely ruin the story. The Story has a pretty background, along with an eerie tone to accomodate the story, making it effectively creepy.

Problems : First and foremost was the Ending. The ending felt rushed and just flat-out killed all of the Scariness Factor.

Also, there is quite a bit of cliche's here, such as the 'Creepy Background Players that say creepy shit out of nowhere' cliche'.

Overall, I think it's okay, but could still use some improvements.

4.7/10 (Okay)