Talk:Ultima: Howls from the Moongate/@comment-25021327-20160727234602

I found this one pretty enjoyable, if a little short. I like the concept of the protagonist playing a game on a stream in which the viewer(s) can see strange things that the player cannot. It's a neat idea that I don;t think I;ve seen before.

The pasta here was pretty short and to the point, which is okay. I'd rather a pasta be too short than drag on and be boring or predictable. That said, I think I would have liked a little more meat here. Maybe some more character development or something, I'm not honestly sure. Maybe some more game description, though I'm not sure how that would work seeing as the reader is experiencing the game from the eyes of the player, who is seeing the game playing as it should.

Anyway, I liekd this one. I feel like this idea may be able to be explored a bit further, but for this one, I think it works. I'm glad I gave it a read.