Talk:Frozen in Time/@comment-6418997-20131101142145

This is the first creepypasta I have read, that explored sleep paralysis as the monster. It is very original, and I really like the idea. I do think you need to explain sleep paralysis more because not everybody knows what sleep paralysis. The ending wasn't very surprising because I already knew he was having sleep paralysis. I do like how you made a story on something that is very real, and can really happen to you. You described sleep paralysis very well and what most people think about when they hear sleep paralysis. Again it wasn't very surprising because I already knew what was going otherwise good job. 7/10 :D