Talk:Carol/@comment-5245439-20140212205850

I really liked this pasta.

First off, naming the characters after people in the Wiki was a nice touch. I'm sure everyone who was mentioned will love seeing their name in here (or not, seeing as they all end up torn to pieces by Carol...)

As for Carol... I thought at first that she may have been some guardian angel. But of course, I was proven wrong, and even though everyone thought Marcus Wren was a pedophile at first, it turned out he was one of the good guys. The 10 years of work he put into stopping Carol, though, what a waste. At least Jessica and Brandon finally got to hold hands. The story had a nice pace and progression, not too fast or or slow, and everything made sense.

What's most depressing about this story, to me at least, is that Carol is going to continue leading children to the cave. You'd think all the parents would just leave the town, or not let their children be with Carol after hearing about all the dissapearances, but maybe things would end up even worse. Whatever happens, I just hope that she'll be stopped one day (in the story's universe of course).

The child's drawing was also a nice touch. Rather cute if I do say so myself.

The writing quality was superb, but I shouldn't expect anything less of Master Giygas.

This is definitely SOG-readable material! Hopefully Mutahar gets to it sooner or later.

Rating: 9/10. Very good work!