Talk:The Skeletons Grin/@comment-5675310-20140227041653

The Skeletons Grin shines down upon this poem. Idunnowhatthatmeans,Ijustlikedthesoundofit.

Description: 6.0/10 - I really don't know what to say about this aspect of the poem. On one side, your word choice is usually fairly good, but gets rather reptetive pretty quick. Some sentences flow well, and roll off the tongue with ease, while others are cut short too quickly. Some lines you have a good rhyme, but then there are others with no rhyme at all and just completely puts the poem out of balanced. So, I have mixed feelings about what I think of this part of the poem, but I'd say there's more better than good, with the exception of grammatical errors. Plot: 7.0/10 - Interesting as always, but it could have been explained so much better. Some of the lines here are completely unnecessary and repeat other lines, which could easily be replaced by lines that create a story through the poem. Still, your ideas are good, and you have the basics down pat.

Entertainment: 6.5/10 - It's shorter than your others, but it gets repetetive.

Pros and Cons:

+ Interesting concept

+ Some good word choice

- Mixed sentance structure

- Missing story elements

Overall: 6.8/10 - Okay.

"Scary again presents interesting ideas, without the polish to make them truly shine."

- Marcus