Talk:Come Home/@comment-8470110-20131029034834

7.5/10

Another emotional and well written story by the one and only Marcus. The detail was very well done, I was able to imagine the world you were creating. There were a few clichés here and there, but noting so bad it took me out of the experience. Nicely done!

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)

PS: Finally got around to reading it haha