Talk:Path of bricks/@comment-24540056-20140830182223

Sifenchar's Critique


 * Sigh* Minecraft pasta's do not work. And it's actually quite strange. A "kids" sandbox game that is utterly open ended and massive, that even has a viral mytho about it (herobrine). But it just doesn't work. It's ok at best. And that's really all I have to say about this pasta. It's just... Meh. Nothing new or original, but nothing that's really... Bad. The grammar, punctuation, all that technical stuff is done well, it doesn't distract from the bland telling of the story with buildup that isn't really built up too well. It's so mediocre that I'm starting to feel depressed. This is the most ok pasta I've ever read.

5/10. The ultimate mediocre pasta.