Talk:Sonic Xtreme - A Strange Disc/@comment-74642-20160924191701

My only gripe with this creepypasta is the female hedgehog, Tiara, was never mentioned (or at least, I personally didn't see mention of her).

But I think it is good... at the same time, plenty of room for improvement (I'm sure others with more experience than I can give tips on what to improve and where).