Talk:A Recurring Dream/@comment-25400723-20141117220251

This is definitely an interesting story with an interesting concept. I like stories that have loops or an event that recurrs in them (I've written two stories focusing on some sort of time loop or recurring event). It was nicely written and had very few spelling errors, but the pacing seemed a little fast for me. I feel as if the story started to speed up a lot once it gets to around the middle part of the story, which is usually a big turn-off for me, but it doesn't really matter to me too much for this story. Everything else about this story was pretty good, but it didn't do too much in terms of groundbreaking originality. My rate? 7.5/10  You could add some more length to the story so that the pacing isn't as fast at certain parts. (Still kinda under-the-weather at the moment so sorry if this review isn't the best :P)