Thread:Sshakenbakee/@comment-11079349-20131123145921/@comment-8470110-20131123165128

Reading that made me a bit happier on the inside; this also happened with the pasta The Forgotten Message (I'll leave a link at the end for you to check out). I like when members take criticism and do something with it. It means they're willing to do what it takes to write a good story. I'll have to read both of them today, but from what I've skimmed over both pastas have changed for the better. I'm proud of both users for doing that.

Here's the link to The Forgotten Message: http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/The_Forgotten_Message