Talk:Diary Of A Body Removal Expert/@comment-25021327-20150327131549

I liked reading this one. The subject is pretty interesting, and  I think the story is executed pretty well. This pasta could easily have gotten a lot more grisly and detatched sounding, but I think that the narrator displayed about enough humanity to keep it from going there.

The descriptions were good, and I felt like I could imagine everything being described. The pacing was nice, fairly brisk, but not too rushed; the story was a nice, short length, and I felt compelled to keep reading. There appeared to be one or two typos, but nothing distracting. Spelling and grammar were in good shape too. Sometimes an overly-conversational narrative can put me off a little, but it didn't bug me too much here.

Saying a story is based off of true events (however loosely) can be dangerous sometimes, and occasionally turns a reader off. This one felt plausible enough to me that I don;t really question the authenticity much at all.

So, yeah. I liked reading this, and I'm glad I did :)