Talk:Lucid Mystery/@comment-12470311-20130720061046

I really enjoyed reading this short story man. It was interesting and original and left me a little unerved at the end. To me, this story's biggest triumph is that there is no use of the tired tropes of hyper-realistic blood or of a Bootleg Bob or a "Lost Episode." Everything flows really well and is well written. Though right now I can't think of any criticsisms to help you become a better writer or just personal gripes. Sorry.

All in all, a very good read.