Talk:Ghost Town/@comment-6830263-20130402144726

It was good. I really liked the story. My biggest problem with this pasta was the many spelling and grammar flaws, but also the overuse of words like "f*ck" and "sh*t". This could easily be fixed though. Keep up the great work.

Final verdict: 6.5/10 (The flaws were really distracting from time to time. Next time I would suggest a spelling checker)