Talk:A visit to a house/@comment-6794436-20141229233707

Another day another bad pasta.

I'll keep this quick. The grammar is horrible, the premise is flawed, the story doesn't flow at all, the pasta isn't even close to creepy, there are a lot of cliches, and the title isn't capitalized.

Verdict: 3/10- At least it isn't The deadly odd parents. For help with writing, read this page: New Writer Guidelines

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