Talk:The Girl in the Photograph/@comment-29502200-20160908023509

Review time

Title: That's a pretty interesting title

Intro: Not interesting, but not boring. Didn't catch my attention, but didn't make me not want to read it.

Story: It's short, sweet, and to the point

Ending: EHHHHHHHH. The issue with short stories like this is they need an absolutely flawless ending, or else it all comes sinking. This ending was boring.

Overall: 5/10 - It's basic