Talk:Felix the Cat Sega Genesis Bootleg/@comment-29502200-20160823222104

Here's my review on the story. You said you are not well in English, so I'm not going to talk about spelling or grammar, only the story itself.

Title: Meh. It's a video game creepypasta, there's not much I can say on whether the title is good or not.

Intro: Generic and boring. Your introduction did not catch my attention at all. If the story was any longer, I probably wouldn't have read it. I'd recommend changing the intro to be more attention grabbing.

Body: You told a story, you told what happened; it was short, but it was to the point.

Ending: I read the ending and it didn't interest me in the slightest. It felt like the story just cut off.

Overall Score: 3/10 - It's short, it gets to the point, but there's no buildup and no interesting climax. It's a creepypasta that doesn't feel creepy.