Talk:The Diary of Max Netherban/@comment-26140624-20161112045923

First critique,okaaaaay, here we go. First,Im a tad biased,huge half life fan here. Second,Its a good telling of Half Life from a average guard(I believe)'s point of veiw. It seems like it would make a decent mod or so. Second,it seems partially like a fanfiction-thats fine though. Id give this either a 7 or 8/10