Talk:Paper Mario: The Door To Doom/@comment-8470110-20131124181507

7.5/10

This pasta was pretty good. The detail was great, the pacing was well done and the plot was interesting. Once again, the addition of the pictures were a nice touch, adding to the realism of the story. When it comes to spelling and grammar, I saw one or two mistakes but it's nothing I'll lose sleep over. I did count a couple clichés, but they were used well and added to the experience, rather than making the reader cringe. For your next pastas, I recommend reading through it one more time before posting it so you can polish up little mistakes and toning down clichés whenever possible. This may not be the best pasta, but it's far from being the worst. Good job, my friend.

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)