Talk:Everyone Talks/@comment-4332975-20130228212005/@comment-5594403-20130301141017

that '1' was in caps my friendm as were the ' 's. game over.

In all seriousness:

On a website about words, there is no "too wordy". There are no "tl;dr"s.

As far as what I think about your style? It's great, and I rather enjoy reading your pastas.

While I can't say if it needs improvement for not, I can just say, "I enjoy it."