Talk:Remember/@comment-27935645-20160309002912

Yeah, When I was writing it, the story seemed decent, but when I read it, it does seem REALLY fast pace. Another thing you mentioned was that it was disorganized and I could have probably organized it better in some places... Or a lot of places. I'm working on a version 2, and if this gets deleted before I'm done then I will post it on another page, if it doesn't then I will just delete all of the text and paste the new one in. ~Thanks for the feedback, Criss.