Talk:Stanley/@comment-25021327-20150322150959

I think this is an interesting concept. The writing feels kind of sparse to me, but it also seems like that was the intention here, to keep things a little vague and disjointed. I guess I personally would have liked to the this explored a bit more deeply, or maybe with some more detail, but like I said, I do like the concept.

Spelling and grammar seem to be in pretty good shape, things seems to be pretty clear as well. The format is a bit screwy (at least the way it looks on my PC) and messed with the flow once or twice. In all, I'm glad I read this, it was a bit thought provoking, and has some interesting implications.