Talk:The Spiral Curse (Spiral Knights creepypasta)/@comment-50.184.131.145-20170103021429

First things first.

Why would the main character play on his dead brothers account? And how do the guild members know he is not joking that his brother is dead? Did the guild members know the dead brother personally? Why does the main character add a friend on his brothers steam named "Kill_Me" right after he experiences some weird creepypasta glitches?

You should expand on the main character, tell us more of his feelings on his perspective instead of blandly telling us what's happening. I give this a 3/10