Talk:The Path: A Serious Problem/@comment-6794436-20141228162634

I had hope. I truly had hope. I read the first few paragraphs and I thought this would be good...

Okay, I'll start with the good as always. Well, this pasta has pretty good grammar, or at least I wasn't able to find more than one grammar mistake. The story flows together I guess, it isn't choppy.

Alright, now for the bad, and boy is there a lot. The story is incredibly clichéd, I mean, the whole premise pretty much is one! Also, "DON'T LOOK BEHIND YOU" isn't scary, just overdone. The plot is meh, and the pasta itself isn't really very creepy.

Verdict: 5/10- this pasta is pretty bad, and the only thing saving it from a lower grade is your spelling and grammar.