Talk:Amber/@comment-11366536-20141208173439

Eh, this is about an Average Story.

The Story is as I say a lot on this Wiki, better than most stories out there.

The Main Problem with this story is the Cliche's. If you removed them, and tried something a little better, then it'd probably benefit the story a little more.

Needless to say, the story has great grammar, a nice buildup, and a good pacing.

Final Verdict : 7/10