Talk:The Gallery of Henri Beauchamp/@comment-9281274-20160620034719

It seems that you have a strong knack for both imagery and mystery.

I really liked the descriptions in this pasta. They were all well written and kept me wanting to read more. Like others have said, the conversational tone of the writing style is what makes this a good style.

I also like the sublte bit of cowardice in the narrator. He clearly knows the dangers of doing such a ritual but is very curious so he's essentially baiting others to go to the gallery for him, making sure he doesn't have to pay the ultimate price.

And of course, the mystery of the painting was great. Once again we're not given the answer to something and as last time with the sonic episode 66 pasta it felt satisfying. The painting may have something to do with the apocalypse, it may have something to do with the final moments of the universe and everything, it may have nothing to do with the previously drawn paintings. The only way you'd have a chance of knowing is if you go there yourself.

I also like that this pasta gives us an incentive of sorts for doing the ritual. I could especially see an art aficionado at least being tempted to try this out if only to see art that very few others can, or have the guts to try anyway.

Overall, I really liked this one and I consider it great.