Talk:Yu-Gi-OH/@comment-29502200-20160930152241

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Title: Oh boy it's a you-gay-hoe story, this should be interesting.

Story: Turns out it wasn't interesting. It was cliche and uninteresting. The issue with the story is the fact that it works off the supernatural, but not in a good way. I didn't feel creeped out, I didn't feel scared, and I didn't feel suspense.

Ending: It doesn't work. You are relying too much on the idea of supernatural effects.

Overall: 2/10 - Baby's First Shitpasta