POKEMON RUST VERSION

Note: i don't mind criticism i'm fairly open to criticism and also, if you do not have something nice to say don't even say it! thanks.

the story
Hi! my name is Yuki i am a big fan of pokemon and I wanted to write about the worst day of my life!

so 1 year ago I was browsing Amazon for a copy of pokemon Silver(and I know what you are thinking "That's not Scary.") well i found it and it had 1 copy left. it was fairly expensive.(I know so not Cliche.) I bought it and 1 week later it arrived. it was in perfect condition aside from a scratch in the label. I put it in my GBA and started it. that's when the journey began The game freak logo appeared and other stuff happened. Then there was the title screen. The title said "pokemon rust version." instead of the usual title. "Oh a fan game That's nice." I thought as i started playing. the game started at Pewter city. "wait what?" I said as i was confused.

then the horror began. My pokemon team consisted of a meganium and five Pikachu. "What?" i thought as i closed the menu. I started walking when silver appeared and said the following: "The War is beginning Hide!"

silver said as he rushed. "what war?" I thought. "the War on johto Dummy." silver said as he ran back to the forest. From than on I played As Silver For a bit and then... "What's a kid like you doing here again??" A biker said as he passed by. the biker stopped and began yelling some stuff in what looked like Esperanto. the yelling stopped I went back to playing as Gold and A New character with silver's sprite appeared.

he said "my name is Michael You have to run." Michael ran very quickly and left.

then a battle began The text said: "Biker Miyu wants to fight." it was a usual trainer battle. "Biker Miyu Sent out Blastoise." the bastoise was just average No shiny Indicator No status effects just an average Pokemon.

I sent out Meganium And Used Razor leaf on blastoise. it was super effective. "foe's Blastoise fainted." the text box read. no post battle Dialogue from the biker was ever seen. It Just went to the amount of pokedollars. i won 1200 pokedollars. then the game ended And i was freaked out. I then pulled out the cartridge And threw it in the trash.

I Was relieved.

by Azza.