Talk:Needs Work/@comment-6794436-20150326215642

This was... beautiful... oh so beautiful, and I take it that this pasta was directed to me, given the usage of my harsh reviewing strategy and the usage of my insult towards the Sophia Show Part 3!

I fucking applaud you...

Bad: Well, I guess this could've been a bit more creepy, and Tony should've had a much harder time getting to Mer. Oh yeah, and Tony shouldn't have been able to beat a man much older than him so easily, no matter how tall and big that twelve year old was. Other than that though, I've got nothing!

Good: This really hit home for me, being a harsh reviewer myself, and being such I couldn't help but literally curse at Tony, and cheer for Mer. Now, you may think this is a bad thing, but it really isn't, I was so engaged in this pasta that I spoke out to my goddamn computer while reading! I don't really do that much! Also, the entire time I was hoping that a shittypasta writer would try to pull off something like this, just so that I could beat the crap out of someone who is so idiotic that they can't tell their own pasta was bad. I was fuming when I was seeing how Tony persisted on posting more and more bad pastas, even though he was told not to numerous times.

(Geeze, I normally never go past one paragraph in the good category :P) This pasta was written quite well, and I seldom saw any grammatical errors in this piece. If I haven't said it enough, I just love how much this pasta relates to people like me, and the wiki in general, as I'd imagine that if Insane Ketta was as insane as his username suggests, he'd pull off something like this. Also, I could imagine that if let's say, Idk, Sifenchar or me got murdered while talking in the Skype chat, that this would somewhat be how things went down, except you'd only hear what's going on from our ends. This is definitely one of my new favorite pastas, and this certainly was a joy to read!

Verdict: 8.5/10- This could've been creepier, and there were a few problems with the plausability of certain events, but all in all, this is definitely better than something a One Handed Sheep could write! You know what, Urkel? I think I will change my ways and heed this warning, from now on, I will be a nice reviewer, treating all stories incredibly well and lending compliments to shittypasta writers in an effort to make them more determined to continue writing and improve!

Jk - Incorrect3