Talk:Everything Dies/@comment-8470110-20130915224209

7/10

I love Pokémon. I love mindf*cks. This hear is a good mixture, if I do say so myself. It wasn't until near the end where I started to clue into what the plot twist was, and even with that, it was still suprising. With excellent detail and great pacing, it was a great read. There are a few minor things that can be fixed, but other than that, a good job for someone who is 'bad' at mindf*cks.

-Sshakenbakee