Talk:The Hopeless Grotto/@comment-25021327-20140928235920

I didn't think this story was too bad. It has all its spelling, grammar, format, clarity, and style in order. The descriptions and pacing are pretty good. All that said, this story is... well, just, pretty good. I don't see anything setting this one apart from a lot of others that have similar events occurring. The events in the pasta, however do seem feasible enough to give it a sense of realism.

This one probably works better for a fan of Skyrim. Admittedly, I haven't played much. I'm familiar enough with the game to follow along easily with the descriptions in this tale, but I mostly watched others play.

Like I said, a little cliche, but not bad :)