Talk:SSB: Playtime's over/@comment-8485155-20141120033455

Ugh. This story is a complete mess. Even if it wasn't completely filled with spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors, it still wouldn't be that great because of all the clichés you managed to fit in it.

This story needs a LOT of work, and you have a week and two days to improve it. Otherwise, it gets deleted.