Talk:Their Eyes/@comment-6727300-20131216211933

I love that you are self-aware of the cliches in creepypastas, but you need to also start avoiding them. "Realistic" and "no pupils" are the biggest cliches in creepypasta history, and they take away from the immersion in the story. However, it was a good effort and you definitely show promise, just work on your spelling and avoid over-saturating the reader with cliches. 4/10