Talk:Behind a Closed Door/@comment-4332975-20130708092612

I am torn between berating this pasta for being too short, and reccomending it to the theory category. I think that there's definitely a solid concept here. Ultimately, though, I find myself wishing that you'd done more with it. Perhaps giving more examples and arguments about the evil that lies withing the hearts of men. Or, maybe, you could have written things in a way to make people further question the way that they see themselves. As is, it just seems a bit vague and general...almost like it's trying too hard to be profound, without actually saying much.