Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-24540056-20140212203329/@comment-5245439-20140213001955

I wrote a rather long-winded review on the pasta's comments. I have a couple negative things about it, but mostly positive.

As for the sequel, I hope you expand on the video game company's role in all this, but however you choose to do it, make sure you do it well. If you make them an over-the-top big bad guy, keep it that way. On the other hand, if you make them a subtle, in-the-shadows network, don't make them do big bad guy things.

Also don't do a deus ex machina for the protagonist. As Ivan Drago said: "If he dies, he dies."

I enjoyed part 1 and am looking forward to the next installment!

P.S. You might want to take a look at The Rules of the Road #14. Not sure if you can multiple parts, but a mod/admin would know better about that than I.