Talk:Ned Flanders Creepypasta/@comment-24238747-20141107174335

I'm sorry, but this pasta was bad.

It was very cliched and quick. I didn't get to know and feel the character because you rushed into it so fast.

The main plot was and common, with a horrid end. The creator didn't die, he's still alive. And why did your friend knock you out and take you to an asylum... thats very much pushing it in my opinion. It's as if you needed to make a pasta but you ran out of time to actually put a bunch of work into it. Many typos and puncuation errors as well. I'm sorry, I'm giving this a 2/10.