Thread:Urkelbot666/@comment-26268104-20150717203610

I'm told that the "abusive parent" idea is a big cliche in creepypastas. Is there a way I can use the cliche and still make something scary? Why am I asking this? I have an idea of making a story called The New Jersey Vlogger. It's about a zombie apocalpse in New Jersey. After the apocalpse, one the survivors, a boy named Darius, turns his camera into the police station. The camera reveals that during the apocalpse, Darius used the camera to make vlogs describing his life, and that his mom, Lora, was pregnant. In the last video, It turns out that when the baby was born, he came down with a severe fever, and since Lora didn't think the baby would survive and didn't want to watch him die, she killed him. She then made sure Darius would never mention her killing the baby to his camera and even had Darius make a video saying the baby died of starvation. How do I write that without making Lora look like one of Jeff the killer's parents?

P.S: Can you help me think up a better title too? 