Talk:Eric/@comment-68.109.132.125-20150617032448/@comment-68.109.132.125-20150617035743

More stuff, sorry I couldn't keep it to one comment :P

Another reason the ending is bad is because it takes all the things that made the story at least a LITTLE bit eerie and throws it out the window. The story was eerie because the character did not know who Eric was, and Eric kept coming to his town all the time and even sent him a real letter. Then, the ending ruins all that by saying Eric was his cousin the whole time. It is possible to have a sad and creepy story, but this doesn't work.