Talk:The Tall Man in the White Mask/@comment-6727300-20131218004424

This was decent effort; I came in thinking it was going to be a cliched Slenderman creepypasta, but no, it was a real, human serial killer! I don't think this creepypasta was done justice being written out instead of being a video, but I really liked the idea. There were many spelling errors and awkward sentence structures that took me out of the experience, but it seemed put together, especially the transition from the diary to the camera. Great idea, but not the best implementation, 6/10