Talk:CASTL FALL/@comment-25021327-20151221022032

I thought this was an enjoyable read. It's pretty short and reads quickly. It's easy to follow and mostly stays within the realm of reality, without going off into some improbable direction. Spelling, grammar, style and clarity were all in good shape too.

The writing was descriptive enough that I didn't have any trouble imagining what was going on as I read. I think a lot of readers are familiar with this and similar RPG makers which will make it more relatable. The screenshots were a nice touch, I pretty much always like that kind of thing. Though some of the corruption in the images looked man made, they were still unsettling. It also helps that the narrator didn't say that he somehow got screenshots of the game. They are simply images presented with the text, we don't need to know where they came from. (because SPOILER ALERT: creepypastas aren't real)

So yeah, I liked this one. It's pretty solid, and does what it sets out to do. I don't think it does anything incrediby groundbreaking, but what it does, it does pretty well. It gives enough information to the reader but is sparse enough to keep us thinkng about what happened. I'm glad I read it :)