Talk:Cacturne's Poem/@comment-6418997-20131110234402

I know this is really annoying but you need to add categories otherwise you can get deleted. Now for the poem it was kinda of on the short side. You never explain why the person entered what I think is hell. Is it because of there sins or were they forced to go? but I might be just over thinking it. The grammar needs to be fixed too. For example, when you say i instead of I. I think you should describe the setting more. It isn't scary enough. But it is a great idea just needs work. 6/10 :D.