Talk:A Mystery/@comment-11079349-20131221170652

This was pretty good, and while it was obvious who was speaking, you werent trying to hide it. It almost makes me feel sorry for bowser, but honestly, he was made to take enjoyment out of his actions ... unless this is actually his mind speaking and his body acts based on the program. The only problem is that bowser can't die. Did you think he just got up after the lava bath? No, he lives through thousands of deaths per day.

So, my rating of this would be 6.4/10 and this is mainly because I could think of so many different ways this could have gone better, but even more ways it could have made me want to murder something, to put it bluntly. You did well, but you could have done better.