Talk:Superbia/@comment-9847798-20140703141349

Well I'd say that this was a pretty good first attempt. I do think that it was a bit long, but I think that pretty much everything in the pasta was necessary build up for what would happen. I don't see this as particularly creepy, but I would say that you did a great job transporting me to this experience. Well done Kasseopea!

I give this an ''Adequate! to a Goood!'' You should be very proud!