Talk:The Plan Was Perfect/@comment-6794436-20150409220937

Meh...

Good: Well, this had little to no grammatical errors and it wasn't a wall of text. It also wasn't a confusing read and it wasn't written terribly as a whole. Also, the plot is quite interesting.

Bad: This pasta was incredibly short, and there was little to no buildup or suspense. The pasta itself was quite boring, and the "climax" felt incredibly rushed. Also, this pasta was not creepy at all, and really just felt a bit rushed.

Verdict: 4/10- There isn't much to say here, as this pasta is incredibly short. There was practically no buildup, the pasta was way too short, it wasn't creepy, and it really just felt rushed. Although I know you've written previous works that were decent, I'd still recommed you read this page, judging from how this piece was and how you haven't wrote in a long time, or at least not here.

-Incorrect3