Talk:Kisses & Kerosene/@comment-6794436-20150212194653/@comment-6794436-20150213173702

I think that if they mentioned how her father did such a heinous thing, that this could have been better. But the author of this really didn't give too many hints, as the story is really just a description of some torture she wants to see happen to someone who most likely hurt her. I feel that if the author made this piece longer and maybe embelished on more details about what happened in her tragic past, that this could have been a truly excellent poem.