Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-4745900-20140318212746

So one of the first things I noticed was the price for the game, a laughable $6.66 sure, a price that low should be worth it, but as you said at the very begining, it's very cliched. And before I go in a little deeper, yes this review may be "bias". I played Toy Story 2 on my N64 growing up, and I loved it, so the story means a lot to me, esspecially since it's about that game in particular. Next there is the "Corrupted Save Files" believe it or not, it is VERY COMMON to get a used Memory Card with Corrupted Save Files on it. So many people say that it's a cliche in Creepypastas. The thing is that it's not a cliche, sometimes the author will mean to put that fact in there just to make it seem a lot more normal, or put it in there to state that there was something wrong with the game. The way that he puts it in the story seems like a way of saying "it seems like a normal used buy off of Amazon." There was no build-up to the creepypasta, which means that the ending and execution has to be near perfect, which sorry author, it's not a good ending. While it is extremely better of an ending than the "I'm Never playing video games again!", it isn't much better. Since it has a good idea, and it seems like it can be pulled of better it gets my rating of a 3/10. I really have faith that the author can make a better story than this so, Good Luck!

~ Kai Blade  