Talk:Sound Cloud/@comment-11366536-20150304172442

Yep, this is pretty bad.

First of all, I should mention the Title. When I read "Sound Cloud" as the name of the creepypasta, I honestly thought it was kind of redundant. To no surprise, it was.

The Grammar was the first thing I noticed while I was reading this. The Grammar is wrong in so many places ("I witnissed one of the scariest things I have heard in my life this is how the story begins")

The second thing I noticed off the bat was the awful (Not to mention confusing) plot. If you uploaded the song, WHY IS IT COMING OUT WITH LOUD SCREAMS INSTEAD?! There was also a huge lack of explaination in the story, helped by the awful grammar.

The ending of the story was where I laughed out loud for 10 minutes. It's redundantly cliche'd, confusing, and overall just amusing to read.

In my opinion, I think this story needs a serious fixing. The only good quality of this story is that there's categories. That's about all I can think of.

Verdict : 2/10 (Horrifying).