Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-26480939-20161004223248

I do like this, as it's well-executed. The pictures really add a lot to the experience. Although, I'm somewhat confused about why several already-animated screens have the 'click for animated' lines underneath. But then, that might be some browser thing that I don't understand. And some of the text wrapping is odd. Again, that might be some formatting issue, though.

What I DON'T like is how that surprise pregnancy at the end was handled. Abortion is a very sensitive and polarizing topic to bring into a creepypasta. If the protagonist and her boyfriend couldn't take care of the child/children properly, then they should have just put the child/children up for adoption, not abort it.

The part about the aborted child's/children's spirit/s haunting the cartridge seems like a good 'comeuppance' of sorts for that, though.

Rating: 9.5/10 Very well done, deserves the praise it's gotten.

My only suggestion is that you should try to not bring touchy issues like abortion up again in future works. Just as a precaution.