Talk:Grin in the Dark/@comment-7706473-20130803110731/@comment-7706473-20130915095209

Hey, when it comes to lengthy and lengthily-delayed responses, your'e talking to a champ! Aha!... Anyway, I'd just been thinking about this, so - mind if I respond to this response in my fashionably late manner? :P

I'm a huge a fan of Umineko, even moreso then Higurashi. Largely because of the (generally) older cast, and also because I'm a bit of Mysteryphile. Higurashi though, has it's own charms - and you adapted them well, though certainly keeping your own touch. I'm interested to know that Miyuki did perish! At first, I was certain that she - or perhaps something in her - had abducted the ever-unlucky husbando, but paragraph one works just as well, ahaha!

I think you choose wisely, honestly - Looking at this story on retrospect, the best of it comes from being obscured, and letting the reader come to their own conclusion. There is - always - a place for gore, but only when used to tell a story. Otherwise, it tends just to clutter things up, and leave people thinking of survival, instead of survival horror. Anyway, looks like I took plenty long in response - next time, I'll try to cut it down to only a few weeks. xD