Talk:All in Your Head/@comment-11079349-20131123055207

so, the end made no sense, but that's been said before. the imaginary friend part was a new and very good idea, but you pulled it off wrong. i could have seen this being one of the very, VERY few creepypastas with a good ending. i might just steal your idea, if that's alright with you. I'm not going to rate this based on the nonsense that made up the end, but for the rest, it definitely deserves a good 8/10. only a couple problems, which I'm going to note here.

1. the doppleganger part was pretty bad, but if it was a ghost, then it might have been better.

2. the ending was literally just a way for you to end the story. i can spot bad writing made to finish something off from a mile away.

3. the reaction of the character is completely insane. The person I'm talking to looks sad or scared, so I'm going to grab a knife and kill myself. that makes no sense.

4. I was hoping for a bit more of a back story here, so you should try to re-write this.

once again, 8/10 for everything besides that ending. also, why did the protagonist develope into such a crazy moron anyway?