Thread:The Unknown Afterlife/@comment-26268104-20151103144423

I am writing to say something about your review system.

There is a problem with it: It is very uneven. What do I mean by that? It takes a pasta that is 60 percent of above to get past an F, but then less than 20 percent from there to get to a D. The system you have makes it hard to tell good pastas from bad, as it seems to choose looking like a school grading system over being effective.

Another thing I'd like to hate on...I mean critisize is what you said on sadpastas. You said that a character who does terrible things won't be felt sorry for. It depends on what the character is doing it for. In the story I am working on, the main character is kidnapping people to discover a cure for lung cancer, one of the least survivible cancers in the USA. Another example is if one character drives another to suicide. That can be justified if that means the character being drived to suicide is trying to kill the other character's father. When you sat that characters you trying to feel sympathy for shouldn't do bad things at all, you are suggesting making the character perfect, which will make them unrealistic and therefore destroy the chance to make the reader feel sympathy. 