Talk:Ultima: Howls from the Moongate/@comment-11366536-20160711200144

Admittably, this creepypasta made a pretty good read.

The plot itself is a pretty workable idea: One friend is watching another friend play and seeing the eerie oddities while the other friend who is playing the game cannot. It seems like a fairly plausible plot, although I still wish there were a bit of explanation for the phenomenon ocurring in the story as it would've probably cleared things up a bit. The story itself doesn't have a whole lot of noticeable cliche's (There were some, but they weren't enough to interfere with the story and turn it into a mess.) and the scares are decently-executed as well, with some good build-up before they actually occur.

All in all, it's a pretty good read, but I'd still like to see a bit more emphasis on both the scares and their reasoning.

Verdict - 8.5/10 (Great)

Keep up the good effort!