Talk:Fool's Gold/@comment-4332975-20140531201257

I don't regret reading this, but I feel like it could have been something more. Leaving aside stylistic elements, the buildup is good enough, having the story transition from business as usual to something unexpected, and then to horror. However, from there, it doesn't really do much with the momentum its built up. The administering of the drugs was poorly explained, as was the effect that they had. All in all, the ending comes off as a bit of a "Well, that happened" anticlimax, too abrupt and unforshadowed to be truly satisfying.