Talk:Limbo/@comment-26111838-20150518195621

1/10 skulls, 2.5/10 writing, overall 2/10. I came with high hopes because Limbo is an amazing game, but boy was I disappointed. Punctuation and capitals are virtually nonexistent.The grammar is gruesome to look at, and it just doesn't have a good plot and / or twist. Please check this with a good grammar checker and spelling checker, and make the story coherent by using more linking words, as these are vital. Also, why does this have the category "Journal"? This obvioulsy is not a journal or diary. And "Mindf*ck"? This story definitely blew my mind.

Please check your writing and fix it, and then I might like this pasta more.