Talk:The Divine Tragedy/@comment-25021327-20151020230630

I thought that this was a pretty enjoyable read. The concept is intriguing, and the execution is pretty well done. This has a nice vague kind of feel that I enjoy, and it leaves the reader wondering about what's going on and what might happen next.

The descriptions here were pretty nice, and I felt pretty well able to imagine everything that was being written about. The pacing worked well with the length of this piece as well. I never felt like it was dragging or jumping around too much. I felt like I might have noticed some tpyos or errors, but I can;t think of them now, so they obviously weren;t too distracting!

I was a little confused about the tone here at times. For the most part I felt like the literal narrative worked, and gave clues to what was going on without being too overt. But the literal approach also left me with a few questions that I feel almost hurt the story for me. I get the stuff about the stillbirth and being beckoned, but it just seemed odd to me that this person had apparently lived their entire life as a spirit up to this point. Also that when death finally came for him, that it would be such a violent action felt strange to me. But these are just personal nitpicks I suppose, and this piece is well executed, and I think mostly does what it sets out to do :)