Talk:Wii are Twisted/@comment-30102911-20161023011147

I don't know what to say about this story that hasn't been critiqued by almost everyone else. There are a handful of things that might have been interesting but the story falls into a few too many cliches trying to be creepy. Also I don't know if the attempt to connect Melee to Brawl was supposed to do anything, but it felt rather random just like most of the blood, gore, and imagery. At least the protaganist doesn't fall victim to a death or anything like that so that's worth a little bit of approval.