Talk:I Hate Video Games/@comment-4332975-20130426144858

This isn't horrible, but parts of it are quite...vulgar. As a courtesy to the wider userbase, I'm editing out the one truely NSFW moment, as it is unnecessary to the story as a whole. Now, while I personally didn't like this story, I don't regret reading it. It's not a terrible story. Actually, despite some glaring plot holes (the "hacked" CD game, and that such an obvious and clearly marked hiding place would have garnered attention and been investigated long before the narrator found it, for instance) it does a good job of displaying the way in which ordinary humans can be far greater monsters than any supernatural being. It simply doesn't appeal to me. However, I do present you with the dubious honour of being the first person to use vomiting in a story in such a way that it actually seemed situationally appropriate.