Talk:A Terrible "Fate"/@comment-198.37.250.143-20161007012526

Nicely done! If I were SOG then I'd rate it from 1 being Just a Shitpasta to 10 being a great Creepypasta, (Depending on Cliches effecting story and typos, which there aren't many, maybe none at all!) I would give one a 9.5/10 1-Up Mushrooms. The only problem is with the ending which confused me heavily. I mean what happened it just skipped from present day to years later!