Talk:A Quite Peculiar Dream/@comment-25021327-20150515034751

Ah, nicely done :) I could tell where this was going from fairly early on, but that didn't make me enjoy it any less. The desriptions here were well done, and engaging. I'm not sure if I would have thought differently if I didn't know the reference while reading this, but as it was, I thought they worked.

I like the concept of someone waing up into the world of that music video, as it is a truly bizarre landcape of strange imagery, symbolism, and red herrings. It was neat to hear things from the perspective of an unknowing person thrust into that world. And while I think it would have been neat if all the imagery had been thought up more originally, I think it still works as it is with the added bonus of the twist ending.

This was a pretty quick read, and I found it pretty engaging with the descriptions (as I mentioned). I didn;t feel like it dragged at any points, or jumped around at all. I thought there was some good vocabulary here as well. This was a nice short little read that I hope people take some time to check out :)