Talk:D-6.gro/@comment-25021327-20160120192032

20-January-2016- I'm adding a Needs Work category here. This story is in really rough shape. The spelling and grammar are abominably bad, the piece is riddled with misspellings of simple words, inconsistent capitalization, and some poor punctuation. This leads me to wonder if the author is not a native English speaker, or is very young.

The story itself just feels pretty average to me. Nothing truly spooky happens here, it's mostly just a description of an odd game mod with loud noises and foreign text. Then at the end, out of nowhere, the game has a picture of the narrator's dead body? It just feels like that was added on as an afterthought for shock value.

Anyway, as this is a Needs Work page, it will face deletion in about 9 days unless it is vastly improved after another review. Please take some time to fix this up, get some help with the spelling and grammar if you need to.

And may god have mercy on your soul.