Talk:Broken Memory/@comment-5025667-20130429192838

Certainly confusing in both good and bad ways, but it was very thrilling and kept me on my toes for its conclusion, the house becoming more and more abnormal upon further exploration as the story goes on proved to be very effective as the build-up was nice and entertaining. But I think that this story starts to lose its momentum in its pay-off, sadly. While I do like the idea of Mark vanishing, it just seems like it just vanishes from the story altogether. When we have two main characters whom we both devolp in the story, but it does kind of kill it that after a certain point said character is never even mentioned again without any rational reason or thought as to why. I do like that the whispering was revealed as well.

6/10