Thread:TheHeistman/@comment-32602006-20140225050059/@comment-32602006-20140226032934

Oh and by the way, don't give us that shit about how this is your first pasta. No one cares. New users join this wiki every day with first pastas that are better than TheEnd.exe. Which is fine. No one is going to ban you for not being the absolute best pasta writer the first time around unless they suspect you of trolling. We are all hear to learn. But the thing is you seem unwilling to.

Matter fact, here, here are my first two creepypastas:

http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Silent_Hill_4:_The_Doom

http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/The_Haunted_Arcade

Do they have cliches? Yes, certainly. Are they the best pastas on this wiki, hell frickin no. But please notice that I did not use the "first creepypasta" excuse for either of them and beyond that they are still better than TheEnd.exe.