Talk:Letters from Mom/@comment-8470110-20130906235536

6.5/10

There wasn't a creepy atmosphere in this story, as it was more of a sorrowful one. I'm totally okay with that kind of structure and atmosphere when it comes to these pastas. Reading it, I found the pacing to be well, charachters to be fleshed out and an interesting plot. However, there were a few things that can be changed. For example, I wasn't too sure what was going on with the mother in this story. I was left with unanswered questions and a little bit of confusion. There were grammatical errors and a couple of misspells, so try to fix that with your next pasta. Also, add categories as soon as possible. It's a big no-no on this site to not have any. In any case, a decent read and I'm looking forward to reading your future pastas.

-Sshakenbakee