User blog comment:Steelwingred/A Really Depressing Story About a Tennis Ball/@comment-5675310-20140803054614/@comment-25029585-20140803060009

So I guess what to improve on this is length, writing/grammar, and dialogue. Okay, I'll make a rewrite, when I feel like it. :P

Steel, Got Nothin'?  06:00, August 3, 2014 (UTC)