Talk:Will And Death/@comment-26359518-20150508181323/@comment-67.238.39.243-20150508231455

Ah, okay. Still not sure on the creepiness of it, to be honest. It mostly feels like just dialogue that is meant to creep out the reader. If you were to actually add a bit of story instead of dialogue, you might be able to do something with it. Until such time, I will withhold a review.

WRITE ON!