Talk:Lavender Test/@comment-82.28.101.60-20130312005633

Warrior Phantom here, I really like this, it skips the stupid details about how gorey some people's deaths are, breaking away from the typical. The hints as to what is actually going on are greatly subtle just still just enough to clue you in as to what sick game is being played and you can find yourself feeling quite truly sorry for the subjects, especially the one who's perspective you start in.

I'd give this a 9 personally, it just felt a little short, although with this story there's not much you can do to lengthen it without ruining the whole thing, so kudos on making the choice to keep THIS short, although, told a little differently could have been more easily elaborated on.

Maybe a sequel to this pasta would be a good thing too ;D