Talk:A New Day/@comment-6418997-20140327040446

I do like this story. I think it will be better written in third person, mainly because this focuses on emotions. Second person doesn't quite suit the death of a loved one. It is well written, then again most of your pastas are. The word choice was also quite good. What the character goes through " me" is quite a deep outlook, I couldn't really get in the shoes of the second person because some of those aren't choices I would make. 8\10 good job the details were flawless