Talk:The Black Flu/@comment-11366536-20160729074904

Wow, this is honestly one of the most highest-quality reads I've ever come across to date.

The writing here is absolutely phenomenal, and to be honest, it's very nearly professional-grade as of its current state. The plot itself, although there are some holes (Which I'll go over shortly) is very lengthy, but enjoyable and detailed. I especially liked how you were able to utilize the length of the story in order to build and create a dramatic and very wide setting, as not many writers usually tend to usually do this.

As for problems, the only thing that really bugged me a little were a few of the small plot-holes. Most of them weren't very noticeable at first, so I decided to skim those over and only list three of some of the more noticeable ones here:

- The story never seems to explain the background of the Virus itself. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but it's a shame because it could've been used for some further exposition.

- Like Urkelbot666 mentioned in his review, the White Coffin scene is pretty odd and confusing in terms of clarity.

- The scene near the end where Harold "widens" the Toilet Hole is also a bit odd clarity-wise; you'd probably need a lot of widening to open the hole without breaking it in order for a person to fit.

Overall, this is honestly one of the best reads I've had in a long time, especially coming from this Wiki. I wish I could've given a longer and more in-depth review, but time is unfortunately not a very good friend of mine at the moment.

Final Verdict - 10/10 (Perfect)

I hope you keep on writing masterpieces like these in the future!