Talk:The Fine Line/@comment-24201213-20141214092254

Eh, 6/10 for me. It started off well; I really liked the pacing, but it went a bit off the rails during the second half. I couldn't believe that a "life simulator" would allow for such GTA-esque gameplay. I'd think he'd be caught or likely killed by the police before he could ever board a plane. I never really had a problem deciding when the game "became real". In my opinion, he'd either always been playing the game or stopped at some point, and the rest was his delusion. Anyway, I also found a few grammatical errors, but they were so few that they were almost not worth mentioning. I don't think it was CPotM material, but it was a decent read.