Talk:Run/@comment-25021327-20140826030958

This was an amusing use of hyperbole :) The narrative flows relatively well, and the payoff comes just before the reader becomes frustrated with the chase.  After reading through it in its entirety, some of the phrasing, and descriptions (which were pretty interestin) seem a bit misleading, however, we can simply chalk this up as the active imagination of the narrator.

I found this to be an enjoyable, short read. On a forum loaded with stories trying to frighten or unnerve, I enjoy reading things that don't take themselves overly seriously