Talk:Donkey Kong II: Jumpman's Revenge/@comment-9281274-20150629191559

This is a pretty fun read. There are only 2 problems I have with it. One, the protagonist sounds a lot more educated that a normal seventh grader and that's distracting. Two, a few bits of exposition were pretty clumsily forced in the pasta. It was a bit too forced.

8/10. A nice read with an interesting concept.