Talk:Needs Work/@comment-25873297-20150729111832

One of my favorites now...

Great core story, nice character development and backstory

Executed brilliantly, I'd assume they aren't from this... wonderful wiki, but comments are what you'd expect on a cliche'd story on any other site. (Heh, except for your last note, I need to find out where he posted that comment...)

Overall: 8/8, would r8 again...