Talk:5 Nights at Freddy's - Machine is Reality/@comment-24540056-20140928220100

Sifenchar's Critique.

You tried. I am very glad to see this as most of the pastas we have been getting recently are very shit. But this one isn't a masterpiece either. For one, the whole "Story in the villians narration" thing isn't done too well. We all know who he is, it's a bit out of character, and he's just a cliche death-loving psychopath. Also, make sure to read up on your lore. Pirate's cove was closed down due to the bite of 87, where Foxy bit through the frontal lobe of a kid there. He did not snap a childrens neck because she climbed up there.

4/10