Talk:Sims 3 The Bane Of My Existence/@comment-6794436-20150722222656

Holy shit, this is trash...

Good: Nothing. There is not one redeemable quality about this hunk of garbage.

Bad: Oh boy, where do I begin here? For one thing, the grammar is atrocious, as there are numerous run on sentences and mispellings. The plot is incredibly cliched, in fact, it's cliched beyond belief. The pasta also is incredibly long, and it really drags on. When you have the amount of run on sentences that this one has in a story, it gets very confusing and boring to read. Well, maybe not confusing, but tedious to read nonetheless. This really just isn't creepy at all, and the lack of creepiness is amplified by the atrocious grammar and numerous cliches.

Verdict: 1/10- At least this isn't a wall of text... Alright, I'm marking this with Needs work, where it will have 9 days to be adequetly improved before it will be faced with deletion. In the meantime, I suggest that you read the New Writer Guidelines, as they will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3