Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-24.13.105.98-20131118043346

~ I love scary stories ( sorry my user isn't letting me comment)

The beginning story seems rushed, it does want you to know whats gonna happen though. Like why hes getting the dreams. Although I didn't like how he reacted to them, I personally would be scared but I wouldn't tell anybody, I would just keep my fear to myself for people won't worry about me. I don't like the way the girl was asking about the dreams either but its okay because that is what most people would ask. The story was very orginal, and I don't think I have seen it done before. so good job on that. I think you sholud take out the authors note, people like figuring out who the antagoist and protagonist are not just out right saying it. overall 8/10 better then avarage. :)