Talk:Temptation/@comment-25021327-20160613032537

I liked this one quite a bit. It was short and to the point without feeling rushed or breezed through. The reader is given all the information they need, as it is needed,  and it kept me intrigued without feeling confused at any point. The information is conveyed fairly subtley as well, which is nice in creepypastas.

I thought that the characters were pretty relatable, as much as can be so in a short work of horror fiction like this. The bits about the way the protagonist felt about her students, and the phone/emergency phone detail gave some nice characterization without many words.

There were a few spots which I think had typos or were worded strangely, but nothing distracting. This one was a quick read, I'm glad I read it and I hope others will as well :)