Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-68.170.243.167-20141207053210

Great story, I honestly do not see why the length is bad, I think it builds up perfectly and the darkness of the end hits so hard to home. Seriously, it makes me feel so sad, yet creeped. I can't shake the ending out of my mind and now I can barely feel like sleeping.

Honestly think the imagery especially the last one, is what really helps this story hit maximum damage.

Congrats OP!