Thread:Italiangrizzly/@comment-22439-20130325181614/@comment-4332975-20130327022813

Italiangrizzly wrote:
 * ( You didn't have to be so damn mean about it now. My bad for F**KING trying

The problem is that you're not "F**KING trying", as you put it. If you would spend a little time and effort on what you write, and actually listen when people tell you things you should do to improve it, rather than taking criticism as either a personal attack, or homework to be gotten out of the way quickly. Instead, while there are three different people taking the time to tell you that you need to improve the quality of your writing, you are getting hostile and yelling back like it's everyone else's fault for not liking it, rather than considering that, just maybe, there's a reason for them saying it and maybe making a serious effort to improve, so they won't have anything to complain about. Yes, I know that comes across as harsh - everyone is being harsh right now, but that's because some of us have already been legitimitely trying to help you, here, and you're either blowing it off or treating us like shit for it.