Talk:Hunted/@comment-24521219-20140225064736

Grammar: 10/10

Story: 8.5/10

Creepiness: 7/10

Conclusion: 7/10

This was a great pasta! First I thought it was animals and hunters and then realized it was pokemon and trainers, that, creeped me out. The story is very good about the "drugs" being berries and potions and then they fight agains the wild pokemon to capture them. Even though it's pretty short it was super good! Also the grammar was very good. Keep on doing pastas like this one!