Talk:Why Me? (Five Night's At Freddy's Creepypasta)/@comment-25021327-20150218044851/@comment-25021327-20150218142925

Cool, I think it reads a little better now :)  I appreciate that you went back a took a look at this story, a lot of writers here get a less-than-stellar review and either get angry, or discouraged without trying to work on their pasta. I'm glad you seemed to take a more genuine interest in writing, and improving