Talk:The Paralysis Hibernation/@comment-5757488-20131014205021

So, I managed to read this, and I'm really glad I did. It was well written, with a tone that felt genuine, and the description was good.

I liked the idea, it was a great portrayal of a child being up late into the night for a first time. At times, as I think is mentioned in a previous review, it got a bit incoherent, but that's understandable, and it didn't detract from the pasta.

Overall, it was an unsettling pasta, with some very nice development. I certainly hope you keep writing these.