Talk:Dark Force Invasion/@comment-25021327-20140920231520

I just went through this piece and did a major cleanup on the spelling/grammar/clarity/etc. It now seems fairly readable. That said, this story is bad. And although it probably didn't set out to be, I find it to be bad to the point of being glorious!

It's weird, and kind of cliche in parts, a lot of it isn't very clear, and there are parts that just plain make no sense to me. You're playing as a Stormtrooper, but you're fighting both Imperial troops and Jedi's. Are you in a rebel in a Stormtrooper disguise, or are you a legit Imperial soldier? (Named Snowball, no less)

Is the Dark Force Invasion plan that there are Jedi's that are Cannibals? Is that more efficient that having regular Jedi?

You have a boss fight with a Cannibal Jedi, (Is he Sith? Who knows?) then you set a Star Destroyer to explode! What is going on? Who knows? Who cares? It's great!

I try not to berate any pastas on here, and I honestly try to help and give constructive criticism, or compliments. But this story... man. It's bad, and I love it.