Talk:The New Villager/@comment-6794436-20150104214306

This is disgraceful and one of the worst pastas I've ever read. I cannot give this a proper review as there is literally nothing good about it. The story is incredibly cliched, a wall of text, not creepy, riddled with grammar errors, and it seems like this was written by a 10 year old in 5 minutes.

Verdict: -1/10- You definitely should take a look at the New Writer Guidelines, as they will help you a lot with your writing aptitude.

-Incorrect3