Talk:Our Childhood/@comment-9847798-20130803043438

Oh man! I really did enjoy this creepypasta.

The pasta had great pacing and the ending was very well done.

The only thing that you could fix, aside from some grammar issues, is that it would have been more fun if the reveal was more suprising. I already knew this was Ben when you mentioned the Majoras Mask cart.

Otherwise this was a great creepypasta, be proud!