Talk:Darkness Forever/@comment-8470110-20131123003541

6/10

I'll admit, you had me going for the entire pasta. The concept was original, detail was well done and pacing was pretty good. The reveal was very well done, it all made sense and blew my mind a little bit. Unfortunately, I can't say much when it comes to criticism, but I can praise what you did correctly. Good job, my friend!

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)