Talk:Sonic Creepy Disc/@comment-17737991-20150325212255

Eh... this isn't the worst but some parts really come close to killing it. Such as,

"there was just a puddle of blood where Amy once stood, and she was gone. I tried to stop myself from vomiting"

Wow, he's old enough to drive yet he's so freaked out by some red pixels he nearly pukes -.-' And why would you put the game back in storage if you don't intend to ever open it again? Also, the story says Sonic got replaced with creepy Sonic, but for the rest of the story it refers to him simply as Sonic. So, is it still creepy Sonic or did the game switch back to normal Sonic? The story is really just standard pasta cliché fare.

I personally think it needs work, but since this has gotten the okay from four admins, I think I'm outnumbered here .-. So... I'm removing this from pending review >.<