Talk:The Last Blockbuster/@comment-25625305-20150512235652

This is actually not too bad. Aside from being a little rushed and had quite a bit of gore, a creepypasta about Blockbuster is a great idea. It was fairly okay in the creep factor, but it did feel like it went by rather hastily. It also kind of reminded me of some of the 'Abandoned By Disney' stories just in its air of unexplainable horror (the morbid films are much like the ones in the creepypasta about Disney's a River Country). There where a few remaining grammar errors, but I fixed them up as well as the paragraph spacing. All in all, I think it's just fine.