Thread:MistxLobsters/@comment-29502200-20160907044541/@comment-29889039-20160907150915

Hello! Thanks for the review. I agree with what most you're saying. To be honest, about halfway through the story, I kind of realised how less believable the story was getting. The end of the story, with the "it was a dream" thing is actually not true. It was meant to be a time loop. However i really didn't give enough information in the beginning and the end so, perhaps that wasn't clear enough. After re-reading the story a day after, I see how many cliche's it had, and i definitely wanna re-write the story a little bit. And to the going into an abandoned factory in that weather, has an explanation, which i didn't explain why I put it into the story. Freezing was not my first creepypasta. Linda was, and I reccomend you read that one too, I think its way better. Anyways that one explains at the end that I use real-life expierinces in my stories. So yes, my friends and I went into an abandoned factory during the winter. We are pretty dumb lol. aAnd the whole, plane crash segment of the story, was actually a dream I had a few nights ago. However, it didn't have the torture porn segment in it.