Talk:Lucid Mystery/@comment-24240632-20130724034651

First let me say that this idea is very psychological and feels well put together with super glue. With that said let's begin.

Description: 8.5/10 - It was great, but not outstanding and with only a handful of grammar and spelling errors I don't really see any reason to rate it less.

Plot: 9/10 - It was very good and was executed quite well. However the base idea has been done before unfortanutely.

Entertainment: 10/10 - A feeling of eerieness lasted throughout this pasta making it even more gripping as you walked down the empty corridors waiting for something awful to happen.

Overall: 9.25/10 - Outstanding. This pasta was well made with few flaws that unfortanutely do drag down the pasta little bit, but not much. The whole plot was great and the entertainment value was amazing in my eyes, but the lack of detail holds it back a bit.

"A pasta that well both intigue you and creep you out"

- Marcus