Talk:Digression of Will/@comment-4740494-20131112051405/@comment-6761334-20131112140454

okay, i fixed the basic formatting to be more of a wiki format. If you wish to improve it further I would suggest breaking it into smaller paragraphs. Also, watch out for run-on sentences.

i could fix these things for you, however it would be good practice if you took a stab at it. and, if i started poking about in your story beyond basic formatting i might change the meaning. I would rather let you have control of your own words.

If you have questions about my suggestions to revise it leave a note on my wall.