Talk:SCP Foundation - Minecraft/@comment-6794436-20150111144534

Well, somebody thought that this was a good idea...

Good: This isn't the worst grammar I've ever seen and the pasta isn't a wall of text, so congrats new User.

Bad: Okay, before I start tearing this to bits I must point out that Minecraft pastas never work, and you probably should've chosen a different game to base your plot around completely, or just start the story from scratch. The pasta itself isn't very creepy, and it is actually a bit confusing.

Verdict: 2/10- This pasta's only upside is that it isn't a wall of text. You should read the New Writer Guidelines as they should aid you in all of your future writing endeavors!