Talk:The Parental Regret/@comment-6794436-20150102164903/@comment-6794436-20150102191635

I was mentioning how I saw multiple run on sentences, but rereading the pasta, I was mistaken in thinking that a few of the periods were commas, thus making me think that the majority of this pasta was a run on sentence. I had just woken up with a headache so that was my fault. Also yes, there were a few other grammar errors such as the word restroom being seperated into two words.

Once again, that was my bad, I truly thought that a lot of the periods were commas, and I saw a bit of grammar errors that turned out to be okay. All in all, I stand by my statement that this pasta is still a mess as the only thing it has going for it is its plot potential and fixed grammar.

However, I will change my review to a solid 3.5/10