Talk:World Of Nightmares/@comment-8092056-20130411215120

1.75/10 is my rating. I think the premise of the main character going to his friend's house after a strange conversation on an online chat is interesting. The grammar isn't good. The plot shifts to much from the friend's house to the carnival, and some of the sentences don't make sense, such as the character not calling the police after finding his friend in a body bag. I assume that this is your first attempt at writing a creepypasta.

Keep on writing.

--Ty