Talk:Darker Findings/@comment-5675310-20140302223320

"No matter what's thrown at me, I can handle it. Wait a second, is that a trai-" I just had to do that for some reason.

Description: 9.0/10 - It was all well written, with some recurring lines that told us the same thing; ones that didn't necessarily need to be there. There were also some small typos here and there, but there really isn't too much for me to criticize here. Good job.

Plot: 7.0/10 - It's very similar to Dark Emotions, which I'm geussing this is the sequel to. Dark Emotions portrayed how a person felt very well by having some great writing choices used in it, along with how well done the pacing was. Yet, this one feels like it goes by too fast, and sometimes it feels like you weren't one hundred percent sure what you were writing about. Still, not bad.

Entertainment: 6.5/10 - It's shorter than Dark Emotions, but at a price; the atmosphere just doesn't quite compare.

Pros and Cons:

+ Very well written

- Too short

- Missing predecessor's great atmosphere 

Overall: 7.4/10 - Good.

"It's a sequel that deserves credit for being able to stand up to it's older brother, but it's missing some of the key things that made the original so good."

- Marcus