Talk:Collect for Christ/@comment-26130843-20150906055238

Now this is what I call a "hidden gem" of the wiki. This pasta literally caused my jaw to drop with its excellent qualities. The grammar is excellent and there is an abudance of descriptions about the protagonist and his problem (fetish with crosses/unknown visitor) of which together create a good plot. The ending was probably one of the most shocking and greatest ones that I've read on this site- to think that the fetish would uncover a demon did not occur me until I read it. Now that is what I call a mindfuck. However as the others have stated the only bad thing about this story is the lack of creepiness. 1up, I feel that you will go far with your excellent works such as this one.

Verdict: 7/10