Talk:EScape/@comment-25021327-20140716142025

I'm unfamiliar with the television series this story references, so although I was aware that I was experiencing a mindfuck moment at the end, I can't fully appreciate it. Sometimes I think that not knowing the subject of the mindfuck can be an advantage for readers though, in that we don't put together the clues to early and feel like we've spoiled the twist for ourselves.

As I discovered that this story centered around the pre-existing universe of a TV show, I felt a lottle disappointed that it wasn't a totally original story idea. But that doesn't change the fact that I did enjoy this, and was interested to keep reading and see where things were going. And I kind of like the idea of the narrator being an Artificial Intellegence musing to itself, or an unknown listener.

I think the style, spelling, grammar, and format were all good, and I feel like this can be enjoyed for its theoretical possibilities by those who know the source material, and as a brief sci-fi tale those who don't :)