Talk:Breakfast (Micro Fiction)/@comment-29502200-20161010183005/@comment-29502200-20161010185329

There is nothing creepy about the story. There is nothing here to interest me about the character. It portrays suicide as the only answer, which is terrible. The point of a Micro Fiction is to explain everything in the matter of a few sentences, and letting the reader fill in the blanks; which, this story does poorly.