Talk:Taps/@comment-29502200-20160923015726

OH BOY IT'S REVIEW TIME LADY'S AND GENTLEMEN

Title: I don't like it. 'Taps' is too simplistic. In my opinion, i'd change it to "Tap... Tap... Tap...'

Intro: YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION, YOU DID FANTASTIC WITH THE FIRST PARAGRAPH. The entire time I was reading this, I was getting a Victorian Era vibe from it.

The story itself: Nothing was boring or out of place. I for one prefer a story that stays true to the idea of realism, and keeps all things supernatural out. BUT, you did good and kept me interested the entire way through.

The ending: I like how you ended it. The only issue is it feels a bit rushed. The ending needed some sort of pause, in the paragraph that starts with "My face must have lost all color..." because too much was going on too quickly.

What I didn't like: It's a small mistake that can be easily fixed. You have a nasty habit of starting most of your sentences with "I." "I did this" "I did that" "I was in the kitched." This can be easily fixed with practice and patience.

Overall Review: 8/10 - It's what 'I Need To Stop The Knocking' should have been