Talk:Disney's River Country/@comment-7706473-20130615200041

I have to say, the short length works really well here - there's a fine line between explaining too little and explaining too much, and this walks it well. I *want* to know what sort of preservatives could be present in water to keep a human corpse barely capable of action... Or what seems to be action... Since the beginning of 2001, but at the same time not knowing is far more frightening.

And as someone who has done quite a bit of urban exploring and stupid fence-hopping, I relate a little to the narrator, though I try to avoid bringing recent acquaintances... ; ) Very good, very scary! Have some Yarrow - for making a truly good pasta! I'll definitely read more should you write it!