Talk:A "Personality Test"/@comment-73.4.138.11-20160627155830

I'm gonna be frank here, and brutally honest. This wasn't so good. There was no mindfuck, no real build, the idea was okay, yet the character that the scenario was presented to didn't fit. He was too... "Edgy" for my taste. I feel like he was too rebelious, yet I'm sure that's just taste and just a problem on my end. There were ways to beat the creepy pasta, for example, just unplugging the computer, yet the character didn't exactly think of it. It's not the problem he didn't do it, it's the problem he didn't even think about it.

Further more, the story wasn't "deep" as others tend to imply. Asking a moral question and having some already edgy character come to realize he was edgy wasn't a satifying build up. Also, "Are you o good person?" The world is not black and white. Simply asking that question to imply some sort of moral dilemma just isn't real. Overall, creative idea, a couple misc. errors in the plot, poor character development.

4/10