Talk:Spider-Man: The Reckoning/@comment-6794436-20141114234544

Okay, this is not very good. For one thing, there is no build up and it is way too short. Secondly, there are a plethora of cliches here, which draw back from the story a lot. This pasta also could use a quick spelling/grammar check.

I'd rate it a 5/10, as it needs to be longer with more build up, and also could use a spelling/grammar check

-Incorrect3