Thread:Jackpappy/@comment-11079349-20131212190129

I see you're new. And I thought I'd welcome you to the site by rating your creepypasta. to be honestl, it wasn't good, but I hope to see more from you. I can see you have talent, and you know some of the do's and dont's of the site. If you write a new one, tell me and I'll give my best criticisms for it. 