Talk:Windows/@comment-6491381-20130216032124

Power Reviews:

This is my review for your scary-spaghetti.

Length: Horribly short. Would've enjoyed this more and would've been more amazed if you added more into this. That gets you a 4/10.

Detail: Not too bad. Black man, white eyes. Black string with eyes. I would've like to known more about the single player server and the multiplayer server. What was the admin's username? What exactly did you say to make you op? What else did the black man look like? Overall, 7/10.

Effectiveness: Made me feel a slight unease at times. I could imagine playing my favorite game and then a black figure stalks me, gives me chiils that I'm not alone, and  someone is possibly out to hurt me. A beast that stalks you is a bit cliche though, but overall, this gets you a decent 8/10.

Cliches: Stalking figure? A bit cliche, not nothing much else thats too cliche... 7/10.

Story Conclusion: The main character wakes up... Seems like any other thing from a dream. But wait.... A voodoo doll made to look like the stalking figure? That could be like as if you were either controlling the beast the entire story and it interacted with your dreams, well... What you assumed to be a dream where he could've been real and made you fall asleep, what you controlled, or that the beast made you fall asleep and gave you just a doll... probably the 1st one as it creates a confusing thought that kept me wondering about the story for a while... Kept me hooked to a very short story... Well done there, your best one: 9/10.

Final Verdict: Too short, decent detail, decent effectiveness, one medium cliche with very few other small cliches, and a story conclusion that kept me hooked on... All together adds up to a fair 7/10. Keep going with these stories, fix up what I addressed, and I'll be back to see what you have ready next!