Talk:Beyond the End/@comment-4126692-20130303071224

This was pretty dang creepy. In fact, I'd say it's scarier than Squidward's Suicide by a long shot. The specific dialogue actually makes it seem like an episode like this actually did exist. I haven't really heard much about Dinosaur Train before reading this, so I wasn't really sure if I'd be able to follow it well.

Regardless, I believe the story was told well. No blood and gore was even used either. That was also another thing that Squidward's Suicide relied on too heavily in my opinion.

I can't really think of too much wrong with this one. Great job. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)