Talk:No Matter the Cost/@comment-7706473-20131026141839

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

Wolfbane, for the start of a quest that seems only as if it will end in ruin.

I must dissent, however, from other comments thus far. I felt this was a *fantastic* opener, because there was a good deal of emotional build up from the 'prologue' and in No Matter the Cost proper. From the word choice (in particular, the smallest grave of Pallet Town sent shivers down my spine) to the layout, everything is adept at sucking you into the story of Tyrin and Lonliness and the ending - well, it wouldn't be a first chapter without an ending like that, would it?

Tyrin is very brave - in his place, I wouldn't have done similarly, even if that sounds horrible. I have no idea what else is going to come, but the revenents made it pretty explicitly clear just how horrible a fate Tyrin was going to suffer. I wonder what this means for the world at large, especially the line delivered about experiencing it firsthand..?

Cannot wait for more. Sadness and horror are better then blood wine, and this looks set to let both flow freely.