Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-11079349-20131204014630

This was an amazing creepypasta. I didnt believe i could actually be disturbed on this level. the only problem i have is the one thing that would have been different if i were the protagonist. When i turned around and got stabbed, anger would be the first thing to course through my body. I would have torn out what she stabbed me with, and i likely would have killed her in severe anger. and after that, i would have died. BAM! double death, happy ending for the rest of the world. now for my list of criticisms, most of which are good.

1. a pokemon creepypasta isnt normally good, so good job on that.

2. I know Munna puts people to sleep, but I personally don't think that it's with good intentions unless the munna is the person's pokemon. otherwise, they're probably out to eat dreams and nothing more.

3. So hilbert loved her, but she also manipulated him? god, that was well played.

4. The pikachu was warning Hilbert to stay away from her ... personally, I wouldn't have fallen for her charms afterwards that easily. I would have made some excuse that i needed to go on a journey or something like that, lived on the road for a couple months, and then gone to the lab. then again, i likely still would have been found out. after all, she needed to get the pink dust from somwhere.

5. I wouldnt trust their smiles, unlike nate. then again, I'm also shy around strangers, and if i had any disturbing dreams at all, i would leave and never come back.

6. wait, wait, wait, a loud bang? pokemon has guns?

i can't honestly think up more witty criticisms. and yes, i was trying to be funny as well as encouraging. keep up the good work, because this is great, although I would be the dream world's hero instead of yet another victim. ... i wonder now if the original lives of the people exposed to the pink dust became trapped in the dream world, and in the form of distorted pokemon, no less. 8.3/10, mainly because I've still seen better. keep up the good work, though.