Talk:One/@comment-7706473-20131026135955

I'll second the complaint that it was too 'fast' - you could've spent more time building up and developing Morgan (P ) and the interaction between him and the stranger - but other than that it was a pretty good take on the old classic. An inexplicible hex, delivered inexplicibly by someone whose morals are far different then are our own.

A lot of questions I had remained unanswered at the end, but that wasn't a bad thing. Did our narrator die, and was death the end?... Depending on the way you read the story, are we next because our own curiousity made us the next One?..

I can't even remember what the name of the show was - if it even existed, aha - but it produced short horror stories into 1-10 minute skits. I feel One would benefit very well from this treatment, and go excellently with some popcorn and tea late at night. I only had tea, but I'll vouch for it, wahaha! A single sweet-william blossom.