Talk:Zelda 3 Prototype/@comment-25021327-20140707131016

I enjoyed this story :) The descriptions were pretty nice, and displayed a good knowledge of older video games, both inside and out. I found myself pretty well able to envision the imagery, and imagine the sound that was being described. The pacing was good, and consistent thrughout, spelling, grammar, and formatting were all quite nice, and the photos were a nice touch.

If I had to nitpick, I would probably just take issue with the ending. It does work to finish the story, and leave an air of mystery, I just personally tend to prefer more realistic, and less supernatural aspects in this type of story. The tale was so grounded in reality until that point, that it would have been difficult to pproduce an effective ending that wasn't a bit of a shocker. Like I said, I don't feel that the ending is inneffective, or disappointing, I just have my preferences :)

All in all, I think this was a very well executed story that I am glad I read!