Talk:What's Life Without a Bit of Madness?/@comment-7706473-20130930113113

Not particularly frightening or effective; might have been more so if we were given a reason to care for the main character, the people he 'killed' or Pip killed, or there had been a feeling of threat. Instead, we're literally just told that Pip killed a bunch of people, because the narrator talked to him. This isn't very scary, just sudden. The narrator's suicide is also very sudden; I'd recommend if you want to revisit the story you focus either on the horror of pokemon existing without the player, or something happens that kills off the friends/family/loved ones of the player, not try to mush them both together.

Also...

"I often wonder now why we have feelings. They don't help our surival skills, they don't make us less likely to die, they might as well not exist." Ahahaha oh wow.