Talk:Sin/@comment-25021327-20160214181713

I thought that this one was okay. It's short and it's a quick read. I was able to see where this was going, but that's not really a bad thing.

I feel like there isn't too much to say about this one. There are some unanswered questions, but I imagine the story is supposed to have a vague tone to it. The narrator's behaviour is odd, but I guess we can just write it off as him being a looney.

The writing is competant, I didn't really see any spelling or grammar errors. There were a few word choices that I found a little odd but nothing too distracting. This is a quick one that I think people will mostly enjoy.