Talk:Amber/@comment-17737991-20141207011134

The purple font breaks rule #5, which says not to use outrageous fonts unless it's relevant to the narrative. In this case it... doesn't seem to have any relevance, it's just randomly purple for the sake of it.

This means, unfortunately, that the font color has to be changed or this will be deleted. I'll change it for you... .-.

As for the actual story, it's not bad. Clichéd, yes, but it's not terrible or anything.