Talk:I Need My Medication/@comment-7706473-20130917093805

Let's start with the good - you have good taste, though your terminology is a bit off. Aconitine is the name for the extract of the wolfsbane (the Aconitum plant), Arsenicum is generally just referred to as Arsenic - though that, of course, might give it away - as would calling Ignatia by it's proper name; as one of the favorites of Mme. Christie, Strychnine.

Anyone with a cursorary knowledge of what these - especially the more famous - do will know where the story is going, but it's a unique theme and I can't say I dislike it. Quite the opposite actually. The only real fear is quiet and lonely resignation, after all...

But as effective as I feel the spacing was at conveying the mental state of the narrator, it also does make it a real pain to read, and applying willow bark and morning glories for headaches induced by creepypasta seems a tad excessive. I think this has some good potential if you clean it up, perhaps trim some of the unnecessary 'lingering' sentances, and double-check the spelling and word choice.

If you're still unsure what to do about the spacing, if you don't mind an outside touch I think I could probably clean this up to wiki standards for you; but I'll wait to hear back from you before I do anything. Reminded me a little of a story about someone who stares at the ceiling too much...