Talk:Lazada Polodi's FNAF 4/@comment-25021327-20150616132354

Hmmm, well this story is a bit of an odd duck. From what I can tell it is grounded in reality, which is interesting, and I found myself wanting to find out about this unofficial FNaF game. However, I found that aspect a bit more gripping than the actualy story.

Mostly, this is just a descripton of what happens when one plays this unliscenced game, and for me it was a little hard to follow. I couldn't exactly tell what was being described aat times, there was very little about the gameplay here and more about the menus and text that is included with the app. Maybe there just isn't enough gameplay to talk about, the 'game' seems pretty sparse.

Some of the formatting here was a little odd, there were paragraph breaks in strange places. I thought that maybe they were trying to emulate the spacing of the in game text, but I was unsure. I found it difficult sometimes to tell when in-game text started and stopped in relation to the narration. Maybe some italics to make it more clear if the narrator is speaking, or if we are reading in game text.

So, I felt that this was kind of a neat concept, but I guess I would have liked to see this explored a bit more deeply either in the reality of the app, or in some kind of fictional story.