Talk:The Wonderful Death/@comment-24540056-20141110215546

Sifenchar's Critique

I know I'm going to piss a lot of people off when I say this, but this pasta wasn't very good to me. The writing and pacing was perfect. The ending was amazing, and the story it told was unique. But it is not scary. It's really not. I know it's supposed to make you think about whether your life is just a test or not, but for me it doesn't. And even if it does, I wouldn't be really frightened by it. It's more like the creepypasta "An Egg." Where it does its take on reincarnation and life after death. It has a different approach to it from you, but both it and your pasta both come off as more creative and theoretical thinking rather than horror. I'll set aside the grammar and punctuation flops, because they didn't really distract me *too* much from the story. A great piece of literature, but a not so great creepypasta.

6.5/10