Talk:The Super Mario Brothers Super Show: Lost Episode/@comment-17737991-20141206020747

Geeze... the story was tolerable, despite some clichés, until we get to the ending. The events described seem way too brief for 16 minutes and what reason do they have to kill Toad anyway?

I'm adding this to "Needs work" which means it'll be deleted in a week and two days if improvements aren't made. I suggest building up the last episode some more, giving them an actual reason to hate Toad, and adding more to the episode so it seems like it could actually be 16 minutes. And maybe make some of the clichés less generic, but my main issue is the execution of the final episode.