Talk:I Am Never/@comment-6794436-20160113205809

Short and sweet, that's how I'd best describe this. No real gimmick (once translated), no huge twist, just a straight up, creepy story. It's actually refreshing to see one like this, and it's definitely a great poem. A lot of the creepiness comes from the ambiguity. Is this about the afterlife? A deity of some sort? It's really up to the reader to decide. Since this is a poem, I can't comment too much on the grammar, but from what I saw, it was in pretty good shape.

Verdict: 9/10- The usage of wingdings is original, and the story itself was fun to read. The ambiguity of this story is also a plus, and like I said, it was a joy to read.

-Incorrect3