Talk:A Pizza Delivery/@comment-25021327-20150727001200/@comment-26823268-20150727094723

Thank you for your review and telling me what I need to improve on!

As I stated, this is my first shot as a Pasta, And I don't feel as if I could improve on this story, As this was my final product.

You can delete this pasta as you wish, But I will use your review to produce better and creepier pastas!

Thank you