Talk:The City/@comment-9281274-20151026202908

I found the ending a bit...odd, like it was just typed out or spoke out. "oh btw I live in the city!" I mean it's a little forced.

I like the concept overall, I also like some of the guidelines like "Androids will not work" that's a nice touch.

Who knows I MIGHT EVEN TRY IT! ......no offence but I likely won't.

Have a 7/10!