Talk:Kenny's return/@comment-6830263-20130527054044

Decent. The many grammar mistakes took away from the experience, such as journal is written like this. You were just keeping a diary with no other goals behind it, but still you mention clichés and creepypastas. I liked though how Kenny's spirit (which is not the same as sprite) wrote in the same diary, Daniel was writing in. It really added a form of suspense. I wish it was longer as well, more weird stuff happening and such.

Final verdict: 5.5/10