Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-25021327-20140701033553

Nice writing :) The pacing is fairly consistent throughout, the spelling/grammar/formatting is all up to par (Which is nice ;) and I can tell a lot of love went into this. The plot is nothing groundbreaking, but it is quite nicely told in my opinion. It's one of the mindfucks that you think you can see coming, but you're not quite sure. The photos help a lot with keeping the reader guessing!

It is rather lengthy, and occasionally feels like it drags a bit, but does drop hints about what is going on frequently enough to keep you in reading on, it did me anyway. The length adds to the feel of the story as well, as it is supposed to take place over a long period of time. Although I read this in 2 sittings, it was not due to my becoming bored, and I didn't want to skip or skim through any parts.

Again, good job! I enjoyed this read wuite a bit :)