Talk:Don't Remember/@comment-7706473-20130717124710

On the one hand, I really love Illusion of Gaia, so this gets a lot of love from me just for featuring a game that was plenty disturbing on it's own - as the author full well knows.

But on the other, this doesn't really deviate much from how disturbing the game actually was, or add anything particularly new. I'd recommend it be in theories if there were a theory here, but there simply isn't. The meat of the middle isn't too bad (one might say tastily porcine!) but the beginning is a bit too self-aware, and the end seems more like a cautionary message then a creepy-pasta.

Still. I shivered a bit at the memory of the Gold Ship - if only because I remember freezing up during that scene and the raft, and not being able to play again for some time. Work on your word usage, use three ... to dot your ellipses (ellipsae?) and categorize and you might be on to something.