Talk:PH1-1/@comment-7706473-20130411221913

I like this, I like it a lot.

The ending didn't surprise me as much as I'd thought it would (I had a bet halfway through with myself about how things might turn out), but that somehow made it all the more horrifying in it's inevitability. Any complaints I have are minor and would be things I, personally, would've done differently - like changing the shattered disc to shattered pieces of burnt-out rubber and car wreckage, mmn.

For you, a clematis. I'll let you discover the meaning; but this was a lovely read. I pretty much couldn't stop once I'd started, your avoidance of cliches was fantastic - keep on writing, please. I hope to see more from you..!