Talk:Pokemon OBSIDIAN Black/@comment-10483109-20130903173007

Huh... This is overall a weird, unique Creepypasta. I just don't get it. I didn't read the fanfic, because it seems very lenghty and I don't really read fanfics unless they're reasonably short, so that may be why I'm still so confused.

Overall I enjoyed this Creepypasta. I don't like many video game Creepypastas, especially Pokemon ones since it's so overdone, but this one was unique enough to avoid just being complete junk. I liked the characters of Terrias and Alex, they were pretty interesting...

It got very cliche in places, going overboard on gore in spots and referencing the already cliche Lavender Town in spots. Gore gets kind of boring and doesn't leave much to imagine. The implication of death without confirmation, and the looming fear of a horrible happening that has occured yet is much scarrier than a bunch of dead corpses that aren't you. I don't know why people think gore is scary, because it isn't. At all. Disgusting at times, boring at others, but not scary.

Lavender Town is too much of a cliche and I really wished the theme hadn't be mentioned at all. Also, mentioning another Creepypasta, Sonic.EXE (Which I find to be a junk 'pasta) seems a bit weird... But I guess that's just a nitpick?

Charen getting sliced just kind of made the suspense disappear. The shadows were pretty creepy, there was a good atmosphere building up, but what was so scary about them is what they might do, since all of the people they killed were off screen. But the death of Charen seemed unneeded and it seemed weird that they killed Charen, but not OBSIDIAN.