Thread:AlbedoYuriev/@comment-28140113-20160820224301/@comment-28073721-20160821023809

I just reread my story and I have to admit. I like it and it's much a better to read for me. Thanks for your help. However, even though it's my story you still had a hand in making it much more readable because of the edits. I feel a bit guilty that it seems I'm taking all the crediit. I wouldn't mind if you wanted to take some of the credit even though it's not a very popular story and doubt it will ever be. Thanks again.