Talk:Metroid: The secret of Planet Zebes/@comment-24685180-20150105004254

This was terrible, there was no build up od the protagonist even receiving the game, Quote " I wated 3-5 days before the game arrived. I was so excited to start a new file. The game started off with normal cutscenes....." Unquote. You don't even mention the game arriving  or the protagonist putting the game in the system.

The grammar was pretty bad as well mostly just forgetting to capitalize. It's not very hard...even if you don't know the shift button...throw it into Word or some other program that capitalizes automatically.

The story was the run of the mill Haunted Gaming Creepypasta. Didn't do anything new...and somethings you didn't pull of....especially the Clichés  like crying after a game displays a strange image...thats as cliché as it gets....I gues this was okay nothing special and nothing too good.

-Rev