Talk:Metroid: The secret of Planet Zebes/@comment-25625305-20150116045522

I tried reading this story, but the amount of obvious and grating errors were making my eyes sting...So I went and revised it. It's now a little more tolerable, but not by much. The story, or at least what I could understand of it, is confusing and ultimately a predictable tale that has been told countless times before.