Talk:Lost Reality/@comment-25567080-20150107212756

Not bad, Jake. Not bad.

I like the spooky concept of the pasta and the read was worth. To be honest though, I am more into the grotesque creepypastas, but hey:

This does NOT mean I dont like this pasta. The shadow concept spooked me a bit and as other Users said, I couldn't see any cliches. Good Job :)

OVERALL: 7.9/10

~Scarysamuel32