Talk:SIN/@comment-7706473-20131114072949

Lucifer, you old so-and-so! It's good to see you again, though I serve none but myself. But if you come seeking equals and whatnot, well, we'll tear that Kingdom of Heaven asunder and salt its fields... But first, lets talk what *I* want out of this deal. My service doesn't come cheap, after all...

Jokes aside -

As others have noted the twist is pretty simple, but on the other hand, I've always had a weakness for folk horror. I liked seeing the 'protaganist' get their come-uppance by everyone's favorite paradisical loser-fer, and knowing that they'll probably suffer for their lack in judgement. Before they even started this story, they had a knife in their hands(!), good job making Lucifer's job that much easier. I imagine that the wife-killer might not even have been the one that did the crime - making the whole thing unfortunate for the narrator... And ghoulishly delightful for us. ;)