Thread:Luigilover02/@comment-25021327-20140625180204

Hey there, I'm not an admin or anything, but I was just wondering about some of the edits you have been making. You seem to have added parts to sentences like putting "Do You" in front of the opening of Vermillion City Construction Project which read, "Remember that old man..." Although that is a gramatically correct move, it could be considered changing the writing style. Maybe it wasn't forgotten, but the author wanted a less formal, more conversational feel.

I also saw that you de-capitalized some proper nouns that should have remained capitalized, like Cinnabar Island. "Island" is part of the name of the place, and should remain capitalized.

I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, I think it's good to proofread stories on the wiki, maybe just add a description of what you changed. 