Talk:Uneasy Lies the Head/@comment-6418997-20131111065512

I think this is a very good idea, I would wish to know what he did wrong. Even though the story is third person it is leaning more towards the main character, whats even worse is the character never learns the name of the people killing him. You start to feel that you did nothing to these people why are they doing this to me. It kinda of reminds me of the pit and the pendulm.

now about never hearing what he did, I think it's good that you did that. If he feels he did nothing wrong, or hes ashamed of what he did it makes sense. Although the story is in third person instead of first, i think if you had first you would state the emotions of the characters more.

Also why would the doctors help him if hes just going to die anyway? overall 8.5/10 above average :D