Talk:Deserted/@comment-15963904-20140104161300/@comment-25176506-20140104161710

That last sentence was supposed to say that the main chracter is basically screwed. Right after she left Nathan's house, there was screaming and thrashing- right after he had gotten a call. It was supposed to be that he was dead and she was next.

Also, this "denial against his (her) mistakes" thing. I don't really get what I did there. Explain? Did I do something stupid, or did my subconscious just make this pasta awesome?