Talk:Beatlebronx28/@comment-8470110-20150102061449

I liked the angle you took on the "haunted gaming" type of Creepypasta. The idea of forum chat being used instead of dialogue has been done before but I liked the way you implemented it. It was a breath of fresh air though it had a few flaws.

It seemed to have rushed a little. Because of that, some suspense was taken away and the relationships between the forum users didn't seem as strong as they should've. If you can go back and add some things here and there I'm sure you can make this story even better!

Overall, a pretty good story. I liked it a lot so keep up with the good work!

Rating: 7/10

-Sshakenbakee