Talk:Isn't This Fun?/@comment-5025667-20131011060007

In a lot of ways, this reminds me a lot of Wii are Twisted.In reterospect, it isn't bad per say and shows some signs of promise excluding the typical cliches like the blood, the screen blacking out, etc. I wouldn't go out to say that it is "good", just almost painfully average, enough to warrant a "Needs Editing" tag even. I do like your attitude and wllingness to actually work and improve on the other hand. Most writers fall back on the "first pasta" excuse when they take critisim. If it's any consolation, the reactions of the player are not overly dramatic and your grammar is good as well.