Talk:Through the Eyes of Oblivion/@comment-25625305-20141116024619

This was actually pretty good! It was fairly creepy, didn't have too many clichés, and stuck to a more realistic path, not the whole "AND THEN HE WAS A DEMON AND HE REACHED OUTTA MY 'PUTER AND..." thing that happens way too often in gaming creepypastas. This is something that could be actually possible in Oblivion. The only real downer to this creepypasta would be the iffy punctuation and grammar, but I went and fixed most of those errors for you. Good work!