Talk:Facebook Friends/@comment-6830263-20130526074458

This is good. The character is very relatable since I too didn't have facebook until everyone started talking about it. My biggest fear about it though is that I would become addicted to the site and my grades would drop and i would ignore my real life friends. The ending was a bit cliché, the whole you're next thing, but for some reason I liked it. It's not just "You're next", it actually fits in the whole facebook thing. Some grammar issues and lack of enough punctuation.

Final verdict: 7/10