Talk:Mother 3, Porky's Revenge/@comment-6758709-20151105081644

"I was a fan of..." Bad start already...

"... I am NEVER going to play that game again." Bad finish too... Not looking good on the verdict front.

Too many cliches... This is obviously your first so here's some advice: Never publish your first work. Pick out ideas from stories you like (not word for word obviously) and see how stories have a satisfying ending, reasonable explanation and excellent proof. That is the key into making a good Creepypasta/story. Believability. This had none. It lost me at the first sentence.