Talk:Watching.txt/@comment-24240632-20130717235050

First let me say that this was an interesting idea. With that said let's begin.

Description: 5.5/10 - It was okay, but sometimes sentences didn't make sense and there were a handful of spelling mistakes. Nothing special here.

Plot: 6.5/10 - I've seen it before, but something about this feels special to me for some reason.I think that the whole "We are watching" Idea is good, but feels vague and empty. I do think that the warning at the beginning was a nice touch by the way.

Entertainment: 6.75/10 - I had some fun reading this, but all in all it was another cliched videogame creepypasta.

Overall: 6.25/10 - Okay. This had an interesting idea and I understand if you wanted us to wonder what "We are watching" Means, but it just feels a little to dry and vague. Not bad though.

"An interesting pasta that wasn't quite executed just right... Sort of like mine."

- Marcus