Talk:My Summer Job - A Five Nights at Freddy's Creepypasta/@comment-6794436-20141213173112/@comment-6890617-20150211005757

Alright, I appreciate the constructive criticism. This was my first story so I'd like that to be in mind because I have little experience. I kinda wish you didn't say some of the stuff you did, but I can't change that. I had two people proofread it and they said it was fine. If the formatting didn't get messed up and get turned into a wall of text you may have enjoyed it more. Thank you though.