Talk:Everything Will Be Okay When You Get There/@comment-24582398-20150210052757

Now that it's paragraphed, I thought it was pretty good, although a bit fast. Some would say that he was too cold after his new wife died, maybe a bit too calm about the freaky shit, but honestly, if my wife died like that, I'd be suicidal. Extremely suicidal. If there was some freakish stuff going down, I'd let it. Plus, shock affects some people differently. A lot go cold and emotionless. However, I have no damn clue what the hell happened at the end.