Talk:Unknown Format/@comment-67.7.98.5-20140710004343

Some of the writing seems forced and slightly off. It doesn't really seem like it's someone writing to their friend, but rather someone pretending to be writing to a friend. References being slightly clarified by the writer, that sort of thing. That aside, I liked the program-name bit, and the descriptive paragraphs about using the program are a good mix of observations and personal account which make them seem believable. I don't care for endings that stretch believability that much (Tampering with traffic? Ritualistic murder? ...Tampering with traffic?), but it isn't that bad of an ending either. Overall, it's enjoyable enough to read, it didn't so much as spook me, and it had some elements that weren't really to my taste. I'd give it a 4.5/10 as it is currently.