Talk:Sonic Adventure DeadX/@comment-25021327-20140926010943

Well, it's not too bad. The spelling/grammar/format all seem to be in pretty good order. The pacing is pretty consistent throughout, from what I can tell. The story doesn't really do anything wrong.

I think if this one suffers, it is from being similar to other pastas. It follows some the same formula as a lot of other haunted video game stories. It risks getting lost in the mass of pastas, expecially being StH themed.

For me I didn't find this story to be unenjoyable, nor unreadable at all. It's adequatelt written, and the descriptions were fairly well done. It's not my cup of tea, and treads some ground that may just be too familiar for some people. Personally I kind of liked the missing hands detail. Sorry the critique wasn't more helpful :/