Talk:The Viral Game/@comment-11946442-20130718104826/@comment-7706473-20130718105542

Excellent, glad to hear it! I left a load of feedback, but most of the important stuff is skimmable/in the middle. I think your writing skills are generally pretty good, it's the hard line of finding a blend between chills and build-up. And I'm tired now, so off I go; but you certainly have potential. Good night, and good luck!