Talk:The Game You Fall In Love With (Amo Te)/@comment-7706473-20130903142750/@comment-7706473-20130903161758

Thanks for saying my comment was well-thought out and responding! I swear, I don't mean to sound as critical as I do. I don't really like that part of my personality, but when I feel moved by a story enough to comment on it, it means I really enjoy it - I just end up saying what I was thinking at the time, aah, without any of the refinement I'd like to imagine I have. :P Anyway.

You made the right call leaving the man to our imaginations. I'm just quite old and skeptical; the poetic quality of the story really worked, and as someone who wishes they could move to english-language poetry from prose and not feel completely clumsy at it, I'm a little envious!

Lastly, one other thought - I really got that this was based off a 'real-life' incident, or person you knew. The realness of it was why it struck so well, I think. Again, I'll be watching for more from you in the future, and you're quite welcome!