Talk:Girl of my Dreams/@comment-25249478-20150202223758

A violent, sad, creepy love story. And I love it.

Now, there aren't really any problems with this story. Great buildup, pacing, grammar, detail, creepiness, the whole shebang. I'd consider this the perfect story, if it weren't for the story's overall premise; guy likes girl, girl rejects guy, guy gets sad, and then the story could go in multiple different directions from there, more commonly with a violent twist somewhere in the story. It's very common with love stories, but you still nailed it. Regardless, I still very much enjoyed this story. Great job!

9.5/10. Since this story is perfect in every aspect other than the somewhat cliche premise, I didn't take away a whole entire point, or more. This was quite the good read!

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 22:37, February 2, 2015 (UTC)