Talk:Her Final Wish/@comment-25021327-20141126235240/@comment-25021327-20141208193943

As this has been finished, I'll tack a little addendum onto my review.

The last act of the story certainly takes a twist. I'm wondering if you had this ending in mind when you started, or if it came to you later. To me it felt very abrupt, and kind of confusing. Not that I don't get what has happened, but that I'm unsure of how the 2 parts of the story relate to one another.

I tend to have an aversion to "mindfuck" or "twist" endings, but I don't automatically discount them either. This one felt sort of like a twist for the sake of a twist. I was interested in the game, and the human element related to it, although the ending now explains some of the strange aspects of the game (I feel like maybe some of these thigs were altered perception, or hallucination)

So, I'm not a big fan of the ending, but that didn't affect my feelings regarding the rest of the story/writing. Still an alright read :)