Talk:Balloon Fright - NES Creepy Pasta -/@comment-24239143-20131102174838

I remember the NES, such a legendary console.

Ok, well I do see a bit of potential in the story, but there is an improvement needed:

That improvement is to change up the cliche when the character runs up his console to be spooky, you could say, that the console was broke, so I took it to the local gamestore to get it repaired, but that is your story.

I say it is a 6.5/10, because of it's potential.