Talk:Old Homes Never Die/@comment-25021327-20140704143652

I dug this okay, an interesting little take on mortality. I like how the suicide aspect was dealt with, it seems like a lot of people write depression as sadness, and suicide as a way to end the pain, or achieve death. That is not always the case. A large portion of clinical depression is a sense of ambivalence to everything; everything is not life-crushingly bad, but nothing is very good either. This just kind of "are." I also feel like death was not overly-romanticized in this piece, which I like.

That said, it is nothing groundbreaking, and even though I knew where the words were leading me, I still followed along, which is a good thing. All things considered, In my opinion, this was a pretty good story, formatting, spelling/grammar, and style were all up to par for me :)