Talk:Pokemon Tarnished Leaf/@comment-6698442-20130326231630

This creepypasta seems unique for once. Getting a Pokemon game and then getting rid of it, only to want it back seems used a bit. Maybe because I've seen it before?

Other than that, the story was good. You use Red, meet Leaf, go out on an adventure as usual, and then a random battle with Leaf at Victory Road. I like it, it's really original.

The battle with Leaf at Pallet town was also unique, in a way, but was seemingly borrowed from Lost Silver. Gold had to battle a ghostly Red, and here you fight a ghostly Leaf. The end of the battle was really good and really unique.

The end was also unique and I liked it. You place the urn in the registration room as a memory of a great trainer in whom you had many epic battles with. Yeah, like I'm ignoring Blue...jackass Blue...

The thing that gets me, is how did she die? What was the cause of the accident? How was she taken back to Pallet Town? Emphasize, emphasize, emphasize! It just seems odd that she suddenly dies and is teleported to Pallet Town. If it didn't show a cutscene, then I apologize. You didn't really say that it had a cutscene either, so...

But look, good story, 8.5/10, spelling can be fixed, but the story is great. I liked it.

-Corey