Talk:Boo Boo the Bear./@comment-30102911-20161104032422

This story overall wasn't too bad. I have to say though that the "DO IT FOOL!" part sort of broke some of the potential creep factor this story had. This story overall could benefit from a bit more elaboration to make the characters more interesting and maybe give the bear a bit more of a distinguishing appearance. It does follow a list of things that have been done before in previous creepypastas, but overall it's a servicable campfire tale as it should be.