Talk:No Matter the Cost/@comment-139.190.206.226-20131101194645

Alright,the story was good,not great,just good.The prologue is better in my opinion.But it seems like it has potential,the story was all set for the next chapter which will hopefully be better.The story was simple and predictable,although the emotions in this story are unrivalled.The detailing was great,however,the thing that threw me off was the spelling errors.So yeah,I bet my right eye the next chapter is going to be great.This story as good too.Great job.

My rating : 7.6/10.