Talk:Cousin Hyde/@comment-6418997-20131103011530

I feel like it was rushed, the characters arent as well devolped either. I think that you should make this first person so that there is more emotion. Also is this the only prositute in the world, I am sure their are more people like that. This isn't as good as arthius unforuntaly but you did want me to know what was going to happen. 6/10 :D.