Talk:The Fine Line/@comment-25553837-20141024112627

The story isn't unique with the fact that a game got the character so addicted it actually affected him but this worked for you and this usually fails with other pastas and like Crimson said, many good and bad pastas can fail horribly with the last sentence but this is something that you have really thought through, paragraphs are spaced out properly, no grammar or spelling mistakes. The story isn't one of the most original things but the spelling,grammar,paragraphs and just because of the fact I enjoyed every single sentence, I give it full marks.