Talk:My Black String/@comment-5675310-20131208234444

My Black String, the only story that well make you love annoying two year olds!

Description: 7.5/10 - Although your poetic wording is good, I feel that maybe using some more poetic language would add to the story. Some personifications would be great due to the context of the story. There are some small grammatical errors here and there, but you seem to be getting better at polishing that up. Still, not bad!

Plot: 8.0/10 - An interesting idea that has been done a few times, but you did it in an interesting fashion that I enjoyed.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - Quite an entertaining little read!

Pros and Cons:

+ Good word choice

+ Interesting idea

+ Entertaining and thought provoking

- Could use some more poetic language

- Still some grammar issues here and there

Overall: 8.0/10 - Great.

"An interesting little read!"

- Marcus