Talk:The Journal of Jeremy Fitzgard/@comment-25021327-20160729224543

I thought this one was okay. It's pretty simple and too the point, and there isn't a lot of meat to it, but it still keeps a pretty consistent tone of unease throughout. I can see how some readers might feel like the ending is too vague or not complete, but I think it works for the most part. I sometimes prefer having less information to having too much info that comes across cheesey.

So this one doesn;t do much to break new ground, and it isn't the most memorable pasta, but I think it's still pretty solid. A longer and more descriptive set of entries might give it a little more intrigue, but as it is, it's a quick read, and not ba :)