Talk:Good Eats/@comment-30102911-20161116144856

Story wasn't too bad. The idea was decent and the execution was actually believable even down to the protaganist's reaction (there was one other story I can't remember that did a similar thing to the throw-up sequences but wasn't as effectively done). I will admit that with the title of this story I'm only slightly disappointed that this wasn't a creepypasta based on the Alton Brown show (:P). Only real complaint I should point out is the reaction of the police, I'm pretty sure that if they did hear about something this grotesque they wouldn't simply treat it as a joke. It is their job to take claims like these very seriously so I don't think they would have brushed it off this easily. Either way this was a decent story overall.