Talk:Experiment/@comment-7706473-20131107090130

Is this the new pasta you'd mentioned earlier..? I can see how it might be personal indeed. The introduction was absolutely spine-curdling, for a variety of reasons. I had a hunch it might go in the direction I'd guessed - but that did very little to change the fear, and instead made it more present by far. A deep sense of uneasiness and discomfort at the methods of the scientist, the clinical nature of the story and the story that could have easily ended differently all combined to make this normally unsqueamish reader feel queasy - again, for many reasons.

In other words - I liked this a lot. Liked the story, liked the fear, and loved the ending. A peach blossom; for captivity broken, and a rivalry enduring ages.