Talk:Night Thoughts/@comment-14341590-20140214150411

After reading this, I have to say, it reminds me of "Donnie Darko." The Imaginary friend. If you haven't heard of that character or Movie, I highly recommend you watch it. Be warned though, it is a true wild, Mindfuck. Your writing is nice, and I loved the way the story was about an Imaginary friend. Obviously, the bit about it being real is kind of cliche. Apart from that, I loved it. Please keep writing, I'm loving it so far.

Sadly, I felt it was a little bit short. It might just be me, though. Thanks for sending me this.

Overall: 7.5/10 (And yes, it would be a 8 - If you kept more detail on the Imaginary friend.)

And I'd also like to see more emotion in the story, maybe I'm asking for too much :P