Talk:A Look at Horror/@comment-9847798-20130814040848

Alright cool lets begin with my analysis.

Writing Ability - This was a really well written creepypasta/theory. I didn't really see any mistakes of any sort. However, you should fix the indents. It just might be easier to seperate those pages by spaces.

Plot - While this is not a creepypasta persay, and is more like a theory, it is still really interesting. I liked the inclusion of the H.P. Lovecraft quote at the end. It was a really good quote to use from a well respected horror author. But because it doesn't really have a plot, it might hurt the overall experience in the end for someone expecting a creepypasta. (that's just a nitpick)

Originality - This is truly a really creative and original creepypasta. It has no cliches because its just a theory.

Creepyness - It wasn't neccessarily creepy but I wasn't expecting it to be when I found out it was more like a theory. And theories don't really need to be creepy to be good.

Overall - I thought that this was a well written theory that made me scratching my head, in a good way. I feel that this pasta deserves a Goood! rating. Well done!