Talk:A World Died Crimson.../@comment-26480939-20160805023540

Wow. Psychotic shiny Sandslash. That's a new one for me. A slow descent into insanity and bloodlust from an innocent, apprehensive about killing, to full-blown mass-murdering Pokémon. I never really thought of a shiny Pokémon being cursed to look like that before. Makes me look at my few shinies in a new light, it does. I think this is pretty good, but the excessive gore is a tad offputting. But since this is your first 'pasta, I'll let that slide. Maybe you could do a series of stories like this? Pokémon that start out normal, but thanks to some events, they go psycho and get punished for it? I enjoyed this and look forward to more. :) 9.5/10 (some points docked for excessive blood and gore)