Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-71.93.131.157-20150319035504

Damn i really thought this creepypasta was gonna be amazing. But sadly, by the fourth paragraph I already knew how it would end. And while the creepypasta progressed and I kept reading, it only made my prediction more accurate. By the end I was sitting here watching the screen, hoping there would be more. Really great story but unbelievably predictable about what would happen at the end. 9/10