Talk:Addiction/@comment-24240632-20130822210509

I HAVE CHANGED MY REVIEWING FORMATT A LITTLE BIT.

The addiction didn't stick.

Description: 5.9/10 - Well the way you detailed everything was fairly forgettable, but I would still pass it. The problem is some sentences are too long and don't make too much sense and you have quite a few other grammatical errors.

Plot: 6.0/10 - Easy to follow, but feels rushed and just plain hald baked with some little sprinkles hidden deep withing the layers. In latens term, it was fairly mediocre and forgettable, but you've got a few small good ideas if people can look past the flaws.

Entertainment: 6.0/10 - At first it was fun to read, but the ending mixed in with all the grammatical errors and the short length of the overall story really did dumb it down a bit.

Overall: 6.0/10 - Okay.

"It's alright, but there's only a few small things new or special with this pasta, but you'll have to look past the flaws to see them."

- Marcus