Talk:BEN: A Friendly Spirit/@comment-68.49.101.166-20150828014820

This is the worst creepypasta I've ever read. Alex is a bully stereotype, and like ben, goes from random bully to homicidal maniac. The old guy was every old mysterious guy, and the "You are my puppet" line was cringey as crap. Why was the parents running away thrown in? it had no bearing on the story. Ben goes crazy without any development. This isn't even touching on the other problems. Terrible pasta, worse than sonic.exe