Talk:Bottled Message/@comment-5358960-20130705044847/@comment-11545147-20130705151744

Ah thank you for that, I have re-read my pasta many times so perhaps I oversaw something while fixing my story. I'll comb through it again and I must admit just glancing over the first paragraphs I noticed some issues. I do apologize and will fix that up. Also what do you have hard time understanding? Maybe it will help me fix it before I add it to the list