Talk:The China Shop/@comment-25021327-20150301144344

This reads like a fiarly standard pasta. It doesn;t do anything magnificent or groundbreaking, but it isn't bad. The grammar and spelling could use a little work, as I noted a few issues with misspelled workds and capitalization. The Dialogue would also read better if it was formatted a bit. But it wasn't in rough enough shape to distract me too much.

The pace was quick. but it didn't feel too rushed to me. It pretty much worked for the length and level of detail in the descriptions. In all, I'd say that this was not very memorable, but certainly not awful... and I mean that as a compliment XD