Talk:Earthbound: Crypt of the Ancients/@comment-216.162.18.29-20140522162650

I would give this a 8/10, however I noticed one thing that makes me have to give it a 6/10. You see, in the beginning of the pasta, you named your character Kirk, yet later in the pasta, you have him refered to as Ness. To me, that absolutely kills the vibe that you had originally going for you in this pasta. In terms of the concept and story, this creepypasta is very good and unique. I just can't get over the fact that you were that careless and inconsistant when it came to something like the characters name.