Talk:Achievement Unlocked: Steam/@comment-205.236.31.236-20140909153635

(currently can't log in due to an error, but I couldn't wait to post this). I know this is an older creepypasta, but looking at it, I still feel the need to say something about it. I don't really know why you abandoned this story, despite its pretty awful beginning. The concept was good, and it felt like the key points were all there... but it feels more like an early draft of a story than the story itself, like a checklist. I would give it a 3/10 simply due to it feeling like reading someone's story they never completed.