Talk:P.O.V/@comment-7706473-20140830122547

Hello, I'd like to speak to you as an '''administrator. '''This is an interesting story, and it seems like you've got some good ideas, but the formatting is oddly out of kilter, and the double-spacing doesn't seem to have transferred well to the wikia editor. Would you consider respacing it, and then going over it for spelling and grammar? Other than that, it's an interesting story about Xen that would be more accessable if it was just cleaned up a bit. Thanks!