Talk:System Failure/@comment-11366536-20150716204204

Oh god, not another one of THESE Creepy-Pastas... -_-

Summary - For no explained reason whatsoever, we find out that somebody started a Project to create an AI-Bot that has more intelligence than the average robot. The Robot begins getting smarter and smarter, up to the point where it becomes self-aware and decides for obvious reasons to kill everybody in a shower of... Blood...

Problems - For starters, there are multiple unexplained or unnecessary details & incidents in the plot. Why the hell is MSG3 even mentioned in here? What compulsed the Main Characters into creating an AI? It makes no sense. But oh no, if that wasn't bad enough, the ending utterly destroyed any chance of this Creepy-Pasta being good. It's utterly stupid, cliche'd, and the twist at the ending felt forced-in, and I didn't get what it meant at all as a result of that factor.

Honestly, this Pasta needs some work put into it.

Verdict - 3/10 (Bad)