User blog comment:Ralzor123/Ducktales Glitch/@comment-25151372-20140803170651

My review:

Build up: The build up was okay, maybe if it started out normal and then got more and more creepier. 6/10

Lenth: The creepypasta was way too short, and had potential to be longer. 2/10

Spelling and grammar: I wasn't able to find any spelling or grammar issues. 10/10

Cliches: I found a few cliches but not much. 6/10

Ending: I didn't find the ending satisfing at all. 5/10

Overall score: 5/10 Mediocre.