Talk:Battlefield 3 Nightmare/@comment-8470110-20140208005718

This story suffers from a few things: generic storyline, clichés and bad pacing. The detail was fine but the rest of it was poorly done. Even the storyline was cliché, as it follows the same beaten down path that all FPS Creepypastas have. There were clichés everywhere, from the demon coming out of the TV to the throwing out the game after the events. TH pacing was awkward and it made the story feel like it was jumping from place to place for no reason. This tries to do something original but it sadly fails in almost every aspect.

Rating: 2/10

-Sshakenbakee