Talk:The Amazing Mega Man/@comment-11366536-20150302173550

I stopped reading at "Airman was hanging from a tree by his intestines." AIRMAN. IS. A. FUCKING. ROBOT.

That's what destroyed any hope I had for this being a good Creepypasta. While it starts off really well, it slowly spirals into a Cliche'd Mess. There is nothing scary about this creepypasta, especially after "Airman was hanging from a tree by his intestines."

I'll admit, the Grammar was okay, and so was the pacing. Like I said before, the story starts of pretty well, giving a good discription of the Main Character's Feelings and other such details.

I would have to say it's just simply flawed, and as so, needs a little work.

Verdict : 4/10 (Flawed)