Talk:The Home Run Killer/@comment-24540056-20141108042140

Sifenchar's Critique

Samuel, Samuel, Samuel. I've watched you grow from the very beginning. I knew there was just something about you that had that touch to it. You were like me when I started out. A bit less brash, but nonetheless similar. As for the pasta itself, it's great. The whole thing was well paced, and it never seemed to be a burden to read through. The only thing I can say about this on the negative side was the plot holes, and the cheesy baseball dialogue. Why did he ever videotape his murders, and make them accessable to the police? How did he know that Anthony would be the one viewing the tapes? And for the love of Mutahar, WHY IS TULO IMMORTAL? I like the pasta, I really do. Fix the plotholes, and *maybe* tweak Tulo's character a bit more, and you've got a vote for Creepypasta of the Month in the bag.