Talk:What Went Wrong?/@comment-24181739-20150205020302

MiXed feelings here.

The Good: The length is just about right, but why did it skip 35 days? Grammar is good.

The Bad: The tie to a well known Pasta, kinda bothered me. Skipping 35 days. Just holes that nedd to be fixex.

Overall, 8.2 / 11.3. 72.6%.