Talk:Special Delivery/@comment-6794436-20150320190911

Sorry for taking so long on this one, it kinda slipped my mind...

Good: Well, this is written fairly well, with little to no grammar errors and very few typos. The plot is also quite good, and is one of the very few pastas that can pull off a horror game decently. On a final note, the pasta has no cliches that really draw away from the story, and the pasta has decent length to it.

Bad: This pasta's mindfuck really wasn't that good or jaw dropping. I had my suspicions early on in the story, so once the mindfuck happened it really wasn't that intriguing or surprising. The pasta also isn't very creepy, even despite the built in creepiness that should come with a RE pasta, and because of this, the bulk of the pasta is quite boring. I felt as though the pasta was dragging along and it wasn't really that engaging or exciting. Also, for a pasta like this, the descriptions were a bit lackluster and they could have been explained in more detail with possibly a larger array of stronger vocabulary words.

Verdict: 5.5/10- This was decent, nothing special, and it also really felt as though it dragged along. However, the largest offense was probably the lackluster ending which really wasn't that good. Even still, I can tell you're a good writer so I can't wait to read more stories from you in the future. Also, I'd recommend that you read the New Writer Guidelines, as they will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3