Thread:Sir Areis Lionheart/@comment-6758709-20130302122335

Hey,

I noticed you are very professional in your critique of creepypasta stories so would you mind checking my first creepypasta out? http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Through_the_Grass

Constructive criticism is appreciated. Any faults, grammatical errors, what have you. Please point them out to me and I will fix them.

Thanks heaps

AgentVamp 