Talk:A Monster/@comment-7706473-20131013084233

I like this one - though I won't lie, I'm very jealous you managed to get an A in class for some of your writing. ;) I only got such high marks for essays and the lack, pah. Moving on to the pasta proper... The concept here was interesting and engaging. It's not that long, not too short - and you're dropped instantly into the action - what is the protaganist going to do to free themselves?

The strange world is well illustrated by your choice of words and 'Monster' is an excellent character, however brief their role is. Arguably, this is an excellent story about transcending harsh memories and becoming stronger for it... Well, right until the news comes on, haha. The creepy atmosphere still manages to be more 'serene' then just disturbing however, and it was a nice twist because it made everything feel more alien and unreal. Only making the twist at the end better when it came!