Thread:SynfulBlood/@comment-4966278-20140903171600/@comment-8485155-20140903171838

Firstly, it's 48 hours. Secondly, it's got several grammar and spelling errors just through the first few sentences. I didn't even bother to count to rest through the entire story, which itself is also filled with cliches despite being so short. You have 2 days to improve on it, or it gets deleted. Simple.