Talk:I'm Alone/@comment-3417255-20130909174812

Not bad, but it didn't really creep me. Doesn't really seem to have much build up to anything, but at the same time it didn't just dump things while expecting the reader to already know what was going on.

Still, you did kinda forgot to remove the image & video placeholders and unused section headings, as well as not adding any categories to the story. I went ahead and tagged it with one, so at least no one else would bark about it (hopefuly), but you're on your own in terms of deleting the placeholders and empty sections.