Talk:You Are Not Perfect/@comment-25112831-20141224023847

oooooo, this. This gave me chills! I never really seriously played these sorta games, a little bit as a young girl but i barely knew what I was doing but this was so detailed and well explained that I had no problem understanding any of the references to the game. I didn't really knoe anythign about this games yet it was still awesome, enjoyable and really creepy! The bit on the phone and the screen asking if he was afraid of the dark had my heart beating fast XD I am sat in the dark rn though so that didn't help :P You're such a good writer though, please keep up writing stories like this! Maybe you could apply this to writing completely original fiction, like not related to games or anything cs you could really appeal to a bigger aydience and write some really good, popular stuff. I love this story and I love this message and please keep writing :P xxx