Talk:Unknown Text/@comment-26480939-20160805014832

Eeh, I didn't really like this one. Spelling and grammar mistakes (one of my biggest pet peeves) really dinged this one for me. Here's some that I noticed:

Favorite misspelled in the very first sentence, Pokémon is not capitalized nor does it have the acute accent lowercase 'e', 'What's" in the "What's your name?" lacks an apostrophe between the 't' and 's', 'went' is capitalized when it shouldn't be, Professor is not capitalized despite being a proper title, Pokémon is not capitalized a second time, but the acute accent lowercase 'e' is present, no period after Squirtle despite it being the final word in a sentence, 'came' is misspelled as 'game', Pokémon is not capitalized a third time, Scratch is not capitalized despite being an attack, 'sprite' is misspelled as 'sprire', no comma after 'darkened', even when it's an evident pause, Pokémon is not capitalized a fourth time.

tl;dr: Fix the grammar and spelling problems! This is almost unreadable as-is.

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to give this a 5/10.