Talk:Why/@comment-6761334-20130226152057

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that you are not the only one that had the problem of being logged in and not able to edit. I had the same thing happen.

As for your creepypasta itself, I would suggest checking the sentence and paragraph length. I sometimes got lost because of run-on sentences. Also, the text is kinda daunting to read because   you have what might be several paragraphs posted as one.

I typed mine in a wordprocessor and then pasted it into the wiki. That helped get rid of most of the grammar errors and spelling mistakes I had. And belive me, mine is far from perfect. I could use a proofreader too.