Talk:Eric/@comment-5675310-20140228014254/@comment-7192727-20140228022115

I understand your review on it. I did put a lot of... I guess unnescessary details on the beggining of the story. I did that just to make it more realistic. I did a LOT of re-edits on this pasta, some of the re-edits were ok, some were ones that I had to re-edit my re-edit's. Also no, I am not going to be mad about your review or anything like that. I completely understand it. Though after this it's going to be a while until I end up making another pasta. I bet after you read this and saying that it has bad writing in it I have a feeling that you were surprised that it was nominated to for Pasta of the Month. It's funny... I kind of didn't believe it also. I guess I do well on Mindfucks... even though I don't really try. Thanks for the review though.