Talk:Everything Dies/@comment-24240632-20130914181912

I feel like this pasta won't die for a while.

Description: 7.0/10 - It was decent, but I feel like it could've been a lot better. You had so many chances to describe things, but it seems like you just passed them up entirely. When you were describing things, however it was well done. Things also felt a little clustered at times. You do have a few grammatical errors, but nothing worth noting.

Plot: 7.8/10 - Not bad, and very creative, but the mindf*ck that it was a pokemon pasta was way too easy to figure out. On the other hand this was extremely original just like most other stories by you. Not bad!

Entertainment: 7.5/10 - It was an enjoyable read, but like I said sometimes it feels a little clustered and I wish that more things were detailed, and described.

Overall: 7.5/10 - Good

"It's not a bad read, but it was way too easy to figure out."