Talk:Mortis/@comment-24877498-20170524062707

Howdy there, folks! This is the original author of the story, just dropping in to say that I adore the amount of attention this story has recieved. However, it is also nearly 3 years old now, and there are many plotholes and things I was not proud of in the original story. I took it upon myself to rewrite it. I retained a lot of what I originally had while removing the trite cliches I now regret putting into the story. It remains the same, but with some added detail.

For those seeking the original, Mutahar's reading is indicative of that, and I admire this considering it shows how much I've grown as a writer. It would be rad to see him do an additional reading of the revised version, though I understand that is wishful thinking.

Either way, thank you all for reading.