Talk:48 69 0d 0a/@comment-29588684-20160420234335/@comment-28242661-20160421175758

Thank you so much! I was really scared that it would be bad. One thing to note, though, is that I wrote this pasta based around an actual missing person. Jim Gray was, indeed, a computer proggramer who went missing. Ill leave you to look into it some mor eif you like.

As for the 4th wall breaks; I figured that they would be a major mood killer. I was hoping to really give a narration feel to the pasta with this, but It didn't work out the way I wanted it to. Thank you for the review though! I won't be making any changes to this pasta, because I wan't it to be a milestone in my writing 'career' on this wiki. ~<3