Talk:The Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog: Episode 66/@comment-28195971-20160527130631

Okay, here's the review.

I was asked by Mr.Xenomorph to read one of his pastas, so I picked this one.

Writing quality: This story was very good at being mysterious, and making me ask questions. The way you made it look as if the character was pleading to the internet gave it more flavor as well, as if this story was real. The ending is an open one, leaving room for a sequel if you ever wanted to do one, and at the same time leaving me wanting a sequel. There were a few grammar mistakes, but I fixed them, so it's all good.

Clichés: I've never read a Sonic creepypasta before, so I don't know how it stacks up against other Sonic pastas, or how cliché it is, except for one thing. The characters dying of exhaustion? Can that actually happen, or was what you said hyperbole? As least it's not about Lavender Town (yes, I know Lavender Town is from Pokémon. It's just VERY cliché).

Plot twist(s): There weren't any. That can be good or bad, but I don't think this story needs one, so it's good in this case.

Final Rating: 9.5/10! Other than the grammar and the dying of exhaustion thing, this story was delivered perfectly, and since I don't really care about the grammar, if, instead of saying the actors would die of exhaustion, you said they would only faint of exhaustion, I would give this story a 10/10.