Talk:Let The Cat In/@comment-25021327-20141222155122

I liked the setup to this, and I like stories about cats, becasue cats are fantastic. But, alas, poor Pudge's fate was sealed from the get-go of this one.

For the most part this pasta felt pretty formulaic, which isn't always a bad thing. Though this story has the distinction of having a cat in it, I feel it may get lost in the slew of other house-in-the-woods pastas.

There were some silly parts to this, and some details that seem to have been  glossed over. When it got to the point where the neighbor came to the door with the cat's face over his, it, for me, felt kind of silly. I was imagining a sort of LeatherFace thing, except that a cat's face wouldn't really, well... fit quite right over man's face.

The ending where the couple up-and-leaves back to New York felt kind of abrupt. Also, who was the dick real-estate agent who forgot to mention that the last owners of the house got murdered? Haha, must have really needed the sale!

I feel like I can tell that you're putting some good effort into your writing, and it seems to be paying off. Though the last part of the tale seemed a little abrupt to me, the pacing to that point felt pretty consistent. This may be just me being a "crazy-cat-person" but I would have liked to know just a bit more about the cat, not a whole lot, but a little more to sympathize more when he is eventually done in.

So yeah, this was nothing groundbreaking, and it had some silly, cliché moments, but on the whole, not bad :)