Talk:Paper Mario 64: Cease to Be/@comment-5025667-20131020014827

I can see why this was read, personally. It's not that bad and it has a few cliches that might not be too noticible to the player if it is mistaken and labelled as a "beta" of course. I might even let the faceless models slide as well. But the one thing that bothers me is the lack of any explanation or clarification. Why ARE they faceless? Why is the player being punished for genocide if he only just got the game? When there is no rhyme or reason it kills the effect rather than build on it. But otherwise, nice job. 7/10