Talk:Legend of Zelda: The Waker/@comment-8470110-20130828212943

7/10 For a debut pasta, it was pretty decent. There was quite a bit of detail and I was able to see the dark and bleak world in my head. Even with those positives, there were a few things that took me out of the experience a bit. There were obvious clichés, such as the 'getting the haunted game for free' and the 'blood and gore', but that didn't ruin the story. I wasn't a fan of the narrating style. The way the story was worded seemed to resemble more of something you would say to someone rather than writing it down. Overall, this was an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. -Sshakenbakee