Talk:The Path: A Serious Problem/@comment-6794436-20141228162634/@comment-46.35.128.182-20141228165226

Thanks for the tips! I've been trying to keep the cliches to a minimum (hyper realistic blood, excessive amounts of gore, etc.), although it seems that the all caps thing kinda ruined it. I do think that the "don't turn around" premise can be creepy if done right, but I obviously didn't pull it off correctly. Also, as a non-native speaker, thank you for talking so well about my grammar and spelling! It means a lot! I have one more question, though: do you think I have potential as a writer? Should I write more pastas and try to improve, or just drop it alltogether?