Talk:Decap Attack/@comment-24181739-20141226203217

Well, here's a surprise. This Pasta is actually quite good, especially for a first run. I have little wrong to say.

Positives.

Good storytelling

Decent pacing

Negatives

Grammar sill needs work, like the entire ending paragraph needs a bit of work.

Quite a bit too short.

3.26 / 4.00, 81.5%, or a C.