Talk:For, Sandra/@comment-5757488-20130914172330

Well, this is certainly well written, and definetly enjoyable.

The story wasn't that creepy overall. It was definetly unsettling, for sure, but it's main attraction was the raw and rough emotion. The grief is very well captured, and comes across as genuine.

The writing is good, there were some very good pieces of description, and overall it really worked in it's style.

7.2/10

Would it work as a game? I don't know, but I'd sure like to find out. When it's finished be sure to tell me!