Talk:Metroid: The secret of Planet Zebes/@comment-205.236.31.231-20150105162710

I agree pretty much with what Rev said, however, there isn't actually as much clichés as he seems to imagine. Unlike most terrible creepypastas, there's at least no overuse and pointless gore. My main problem is the same as he has. Theres no build up, and the so-called secret just felt... disappointing. There really wasn't much there, so what little build-up existed fell flat.

Like Rev said, the grammar was pretty bad, and I noticed a few spelling mistakes here and there. Next time before submitting a creepypasta, I suggest looking it over. You will at the very least catch a few of the mistakes. -Haxray(haxtozous, unable to log-in currently)