Talk:R.E.M/@comment-26480939-20160824012334

._. Yeuch, now we have TWO pastas connected to a LAF fanfic series. *rolls eyes*

Okay, I'm gonna be brutal and frank here:

The only Pokémon connection here is that Terrias guy. Without him, the rest of this feels more like a continuation of your fanfic series. That's not a good thing. I kind of have the same issues with your other PINO 'pasta, "Pokemon OBSIDIAN Black". The sole connection to Pokémon? One character, and being set in a Terminators: Army of Legend pastiche of Unova with multiple other gameverses.

One character and a pastiche of a canonical Pokémon region do not a Poképasta make. I'd recommend removing the Pokémon-related tags, as this is a Pokémon In Name Only story.

Also, please, cut down on the profanity. It's hard to take a story seriously when you put F-bombs in seemingly every other sentence.

I'm sorry, but I have to rate this a 3/10 Needs major improvements.