Talk:C10H15N/@comment-17737991-20160829004300

Well, if Todd Bishop is a significant name... it's lost on me ^^'

A few isssues, if he gets back usually an hour or so after dinner time, wouldn't it be too dark or too late to play frisbee with his kids? Also, his wife is worried about his weight loss, but it seems the story only takes place over 3 or 4 days... which is a very short amount of time to lose significant weight, even with drugs. If he's been having issues since before the story starts, I think this fact should be alluded to. If he has been abusing meth for a while though, it makes me wonder how he got a promotion, being a moody unstable basket case. Lastly, at the end when no one's there and he figures they went out to eat... went out to eat and brought their dog too? If this story occurs in North America, that's pretty unusual to go out to dinner with your dog. Unless a senseless conclusion is the point, since he's kind of... out of his fucking mind.

Annnyway, onto the positives! I don't really know meth use symptoms, so a lot of the story was lost on me. I had to go look them up after reading this. It seems you described it accurately though, and this would probably be chilling to those aware of the symptoms. I was mostly just confused about wtf was wrong with him, but I think to most people the ending would be a pretty satisfying and disturbing "A-ha" moment, which, is good!