Talk:Agamemnon Counterpart/@comment-25021327-20141003211126

This was kind of interesting. I am kind of a sucker for strange, old video cassette/low-fi enigmas. Video, analog video, has a sort of inherently dirty, scratchy quality that lends itself well to unsettling visuals.

As for the story, I enjoyed reading the descriptions of the video, but they left me simply wanting to go and find the clip instead of finishing the literature. A ocmplaint I would make about the writing is the abundance of the word "indescribable." It's a tough word to sell in writing, as the job of a lot of storywriting is actually describing things. Saying something is beyond description almost feels like a cop out, after viewing the footage, these blue objects appear to be a representation of some kind of creature. They seem to have an eye and possibly a mouth.

The backstory given to the video felt a little lacking to me. It isn't really explained how any of the information about the rape connection was obtained.

The spelling, grammar, and format are all pretty much okay, so that's good. And the concept has some potential, IMO.