Talk:The Demo Disc/@comment-29502200-20161016025606/@comment-15575604-20161018112240

Thank you for the comment, I tried to stay away from too many cliches, but I clearly failed as seen by the tipped over bucket on the floor by the ending, What could I do to make my next stories better? I know one of the things I could do: Not do the satanist ending unless I know what the fuck to do with that idea.