Talk:PH1-1/@comment-5358960-20130411011131

This certainly is a unique CreepyPasta. Very nice visualization, very creepy. Although I don't quite see the signifigance of the character "Roar", or any reason for the car wreck, the Pasta is very nicely written. The sentences flow together nicely, paragraph to paragraph. This Pasta is far from amateur. You've created a very intense environment with very clear psychological trauma. Overall very well done.