Talk:Lament of an alcoholic./@comment-7706473-20140713080820/@comment-25021327-20140718035500

Sorry that this was close to home for you (It was waaaayyyy close to home for me,) but I Thank you for the critique :) I usually try to keep the tone, and language fairly innocuous in my stories. I can see how the crudeness of some of the terminology could be off putting. While I was writing this, I was trying to connect as much as I could with the realism of the thoughts I have when I'm drinking.

Thusly, It may not be pretty; physically, or in a literary form. And it may come across to some as sensational, intentionally-"edgy,"  or overly-exagerrated. Like I said, this was just a more coherent version of what goes on in my pickled brain during times of deep emotional unrest.

I could expand on this, and convert it into a short story pretty easily(unfortunately), and might just do that one day. Until them, this will serve as a glimpse into the brain of an unfortunate. Whether people enjoy it or not, I sincerely hope few people relate to it.

Again, thanks for the review! Kid/critical words are almost always hepsful :)