Talk:The Toxin/@comment-25625305-20150903005837

Okay! Wall-of-Text is fixed here, but the grammar still needs an MAJOR overhaul. First pasta or not, this is just awful... If the grammar was better, this pasta would be ''alright... ''But it lacks alot of the explaining it needs to be an actually good creepypasta. What was with the green goo? What's a ps34-x? What is this toxin called "the xbox-1"? WE NEED ANSWERS PLS.