Talk:Harmless.../@comment-5521239-20161009030407

Pretty cool pasta, but I couldn't take you seriously at the beginning.

" And I'm a girl gamer.

It's not exactly easy. If you've been around the internet, you know what I mean. Everyone's a creep, and every closeted basement-dwelling pile of wasted genetic material wants to date you. And I mean everyone."

Take this out and just say "I run into a lot of creepy people who want to date me while gaming" or something similar. Then I'll give it 10/10.