Talk:A Simful Act/@comment-25526583-20141011183708

I thought it was quite interesting, though not to spooky, it did give you that sad feel. I wouldn't say there were any mistakes other than when you called your dad an asshole (lol btw) because doing so kind of redirected the sad feeling towards confusion about the dad, then the sadness affect came back but it wasn't as strong, so good creepy pasta despite the fact that it wasn't really spooky.