Talk:Iron/@comment-24082398-20160714022846/@comment-4003580-20160715082908

Story was meant to be quick with little character development to allow the reader to project themselves onto the narrator, akin to a silent protagonist in an RPG. Also worth noting is I historically write shorter stories that move quickly.

Creepiness was intentionally disregarded, as nothing I write is intended to be creepy, but rather a symbolic message.

Sometimes paragraphs are better left short than to dwindle.