Talk:He is Watching You/@comment-24240632-20130807223509

First let me say that some parts of this pasta were pretty well described. With that said let's begin.

Description: 7.75/10 - It was for the most part nothing special, but every now and then you come across a line that felt smooth and detailed what was happening quite well. You only had a few grammatical errors.

Plot: 6/10 - It was done before and I could point out a few small cliches, but all in all not bad.

Entertainment: 5/10 - I hate to say it, but I was really bored reading this simply because it's another herobrine pasta that does the exact same thing that every other herobrine pasta does.

Overall: 6.5/10 - Okay. It's by no means a bad pasta, but there's lots of room for improvements.

"It's not bad, but it's been done to many times."

- Marcus