Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-26480939-20161004224802

Well, this was an interesting read, I must say. It takes some elements from the Gen V games and elaborates on it more, always nice.

So, was this Monochu the 'He' that was being alluded to throughout the pasta? Or is it someone/something else?

And this reminds me a bit of what happened in TPP's playthrough of Black 1, when a theory was devised that Fennel was the real evil in Unova.

Basically, this takes something initially meant as rather benign and subverts it entirely. The whole 'Subverted Innocence' trope, basically.

All in all, this takes a rather unimportant/overlooked element of Gen V and makes it unsettling. Considering how dark that Gen is overall, that's quite the accomplishment, I must say.

My only real nitpick is the occasional capitalization error and using 'vile' in place of 'vial'. Aside from that, this gets a solid 9.5/10 Very well done, only slight minor changes needed.