Talk:DON'T SHATTER!/@comment-6794436-20150130233028

Too short and too uncreepy....

Good: This isn't a wall of text and there are categories. It is a shame that I have to mention those as the only good things, but those are the only good things I can think of.

Bad: This story is a bit confusing and it is just written blandly. There is no real vocabulary words and this is just boring to read. This story also isn't creepy at all and it is way to short. If you are going to write  a creepypasta, it should be at least somewhat lengthy or if it is short it should be short for a purpose, and not because that is your best writing aptitude. There are also a decent amount of grammar errors that need fixing. On a final note, the numerous attempts at being creepy are just laughable and I ended up laughing instead of being scared.

Verdict: 3/10- Horrible attempt at a creepypasta as it is too short, boring, non creepy, and somewhat funny. You definitely should read the New Writer Guidelines before you post another pasta.

-Incorrect3