Talk:Pokemon LeafGreen: Semira Nox/@comment-6698442-20130326225510

The only bad thing I read from this creepypasta was the cliché intro. The intro about loving a game as a child and wanting to play it again seems too overused. But that shouldn't be too much of a worry, since people tend to love the experience of reliving childhood memories. I, myself, make this mistake.

Apart from that, the story is really neat. No blood and gore added, which is a bonus, plus it's original and clean. The roleplaying part is something I've never seen before and it seemed to blend with the rest of the story. I even loved the part about the outfits changing colour and how your creepypasta made your character turn into your roleplaying character.

Also, you explained things that, without the explanation, would leave us confused. I also have to admit; Semira Nox must look cute based on your representation of her.

9/10. Keep at it.