Talk:Pokémon Cursed Diamond/@comment-24747574-20140825155251

Long one...lots of stuff...

Anyways, im packing up a checklist that will go along with my reading, so i dont forget anything.

1. I remembered that im a hack hunter - how exactly does one forget it?

2. don't judge me - people will judge the shit out of you for that statement alone.

3. "2" instead of "two".

4. So...you are battling an Arceus and brought it into the red...but you only reach for the pokeballs when you have no other choice?

5. But I was too far into the game to back down now - it should be 15 minutes tops

6. Kyurem being bloody and zombiefied is a rather strange feat, considering he is made of ice and stone...

7. ''But I later taught Arceus Surf. Wait, what? Oh... nevermind.'' - your story nukes itself a little right there.

8. Red would have bitchslapped her across three regions if it actually came to such a situation or die with dignity.

9. BECAUSE IT COULD LEVEL INTO THE 200s THAT'S WHY. - chill please. It also breaks your game.

10. “I'll make sure you don't get wet, master!” - Red trying to avoid a girl getting wet in his presence...

11. You brought sonic.exe to a pokemon battle.

Clichés: character colored black, character is "dark", red - no - crimson eyes, loosing control over the movement, bloody characters, zombiefied characters.

Conclusion: feels like a troll and uses many clichés out of place. Blood or zombiefication can be fitting, but they need some context and i found it missing. Here many things were very all over the place. It could be that such a mod exists, its not impossible, but the question is - does this mod make for a good story?

Anyways. It fits in with many other Pokemon CPs, but it might be simply not my cup of tea.

As always - this is just my opinion.