Talk:A Familiar Faceless: Page 1/8/@comment-6830263-20130529133622

It's short, but powerful. I liked it. Grammar and spelling were good, not a lot of clichés, but I don't understand just one thing: Is this person the Slenderman? It wasn't made clear. He could just as well be seeing what Slenderman sees. Other than that, there's also the wall of words you should fix. Try dividing your story up into paragraphs. In the end, it's pretty good.

Final verdict: 7/10