Talk:Family Passing Two: The Knocking/@comment-25021327-20141031010108

This is a neat story. It claims to be based on real life events, like many stories, however it actually feels like it really is/could be. Nothing extremely supernatural occurs and it leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions, which I like.

All the particulars appear to be in good order, (format, spelling, etc) and this pasta is short and concise. I personally find it to be more interesting and thought provoking than creepy, but it still does have a somewhat unnerving feel. I enjoyed this :)