Talk:The Printer/@comment-5025667-20130714172705

And here is where your short length works to your disadvantage. I get that it is supposed to be a campfire tale, but it doesn't really work Normally, this was acceptable in your other pastas, but here it takes away all of the build-up and story that could have made it more interesting and could have made the blood and gore thrown in more excusable. Not saying that it was all bad, I do really love the idea of this, but the pasta just doesn't cut it for me, sorry David. :/

5/10