Talk:I'm Alone/@comment-24239143-20130909162610

Lets get the review underway!

The plot: It was okay... but with cliches... 4/10

The execution: Again, with the cliches and poor grammar wasn't too good. 4.5/10

Grammar: Bad... 3/10

The story: This was your good point, but still. Cliches. 5/10.

Overall: 4.5/10, bad.

"Improve on your grammar, it takes away the tension..."

-> Morgan.