Talk:Click Tic Toc/@comment-6794436-20150228015147

Well.. This was unique

Good: The grammar in this is impeccable, with no visible errors in that department. The pasta itself gives off a creepy feel, and is also certainly written quite well, as are nearly all of your other creepypastas/poems.

Bad: The only really bad thing about this is how confusing this is. The poem really doesn't make that much sense upon one's first reading, and because of this, isn't all that creepy. Sure it gives off a creepy feel, but the pasta itself isn't really quite creepy.

Verdict: From a writing standpoint, this is flawless, but the poem is a bit confusing and because of that, isn't all that creepy.

-Incorrect3