Talk:A lone hand in the dark/@comment-25021327-20151220010829

19-December-2015- I'm going to add a Needs Work tag here. The story isn't too bad, a little short and sparse, but it's kinda neat. The main issue here is the grammar. I realize that the author is not a native english speaker, so maybe some other users will help out in that respect. If not,

As this is a Needs work page it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review. If it's still in need of some work at that point, I may go and proofread it myself :3