Talk:Horizon/@comment-5025667-20130814060349/@comment-5757488-20130814202134

Thanks for the review. This was one of my earlier stories, from before I joined this wiki. In fact, it was the first one that had any positive response from people.

But yeah, the short legnth is a big problem, especially as the violence takes up such a big section of the story.

Anyway, thanks for your review, it's great to see it's been read!