Talk:Noah/@comment-6418997-20131218011410

I didn't like the intro to the story, it made us unlike the main character right away. I liked how later on he got my sympathy because of the dog, I didn't like that you made this gaming based. I think if you didn't, it would have made me feel bad for him even more. The dog coming back, seemed kinda unoriginal. I liked how he was feeling when the dog died. 7\10 good. ^^