Talk:The Creeper/@comment-1262119-20130227080901

Very good build-up to the ending, (I also really like that last line.) but besides the detailed descriptions nothing really seems to separate this story from what you would call the "standard Creepypasta."

Don't get me wrong, that doesn't take away from the effectiveness of the story. I'm just looking for something besides the story that would make this pasta unique.

Keep truckin' on them!

7.8 or 8/10