Talk:Restless Eyes/@comment-26268104-20150712182727

This is your first creepypastas, isn't it?

Good: The concept has plently of potentional and isn't too bad for a first story.

Bad: However, there are 2 problems that make this not exucuted well. First, the narrator is occasinally not reacting properly, as I wouldn't be afraid of a pair of eyes at first. Second, there are a few cliches, mainly the demonic screaming. Finnaly, there are a few typos.

Summary: 3.5/10. A good idea with bad exucution.