Thread:Incorrect3/@comment-26268104-20150727133520/@comment-71.237.155.3-20150727235736

hello I made a pasta called camera man investigation. Um im just looking for someone to review it at the time. like tell me your thoughts and what I could improve. just don't hate on it. its kind of cruel and dark so um not really happy with what I wrote because im- Christian. but in opion I think its a good story I wrote but could use editing. I just don't have time right now....