Talk:Courage the Cowardly Dog: Lost Episode/@comment-5675310-20140521021021

Yo, promised I would when I could, so here it goes!

Description: 5.2/10 - Well, when it comes to grammar, everything was put together well; with just a few run-on sentences and a couple spots with missing punctuation as exceptions. Other than that, it was bland, very much so. Nothing was described and everything felt like you wrote it as an assignment for school that you didn't care for. Nothing felt real, and the protagonist telling us the events never seemed to be frightened at any point while describing what happened. You keep yourself a little over 5.0/10 simply for some good grammar.

Plot: 3.5/10 - Simply bad, lackluster, and had no soul. Honestly, the plot itself was junk, but I can see what you're trying to go for. The story here is cliched and boring, yes, but with some better detail and maybe a few psychological twists here and there and you have yourself a winner. Also, taking something known for it's dark humor and some what creepy atmosphere and replacing it for a crappy episode with no twists or turns just makes it less creepy. Get to work on this.

Entertainment: 4.5/10 - It was short, but my attention was elsewhere for the most part.

Pros and Cons:

+Good grammar

- Cliched, boring, and lackluster story

- Not descriptive enough

Overall: 4.4/10 - Bad.

"Very few redeeming qualities, other than maybe some decent grammar that's not necessarily evenly balanced throughout the whole thing."

- Marcus