Talk:One/@comment-11079349-20131221174807

so ... that was an odd one. I like the idea there. It honestly creeps me out a bit, but I have no clue as to what went on at some points. Now, for the record, these points were fairly rare, but sometimes they didn't make sense at all. Finally, The end was a bit sudden for such a slowly drawn out piece. I'm not saying it was bad, just that it was short. so, good job, and now I give my rating.

This is difficult. This CP makes me want to give it a 4, 6, 8, and 5 at the same time, so I'll just go with 6/10 for now. good job, but needs work.