Talk:Deadly Nightmares/@comment-8470110-20131016002123

8.5/10

This was a very interesting Creepypasta. The build up was spot on and the characters such as Jacob and Daniel were very fleshed out. I like the sense of mystery and creepiness it had, kept me intrigued to read more. I did notice a few spelling mistakes such as 'They didn't quite until someone made them' instead of 'They didn't quit until someone made them' but other than that, everything was pretty good. As for stuff to change and such, I'd like to see more backstory about Daniel, maybe some diary entries from his cabin in the woods. He's a great character and I would've loved to see more revealed about his character. In any case, it was a very good pasta, my friend.

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)