Talk:Truth/@comment-5025667-20130813203357

I felt that this was maybe a little too short and there could have possibly be a lot more attention to some detail (such as specific clothing the ghosts wore and what the personification of Death would look like) to help stretch it a little in areas, although it is beautifully well-written otherwise for a premise that has been done before lots of times and I don't regret reading this one regardless. Probably around a 6.5 to a 7/10 right now.