Talk:A Game Called, "Pong"/@comment-24.13.105.98-20131130155001

Hmmmmmmmmmmm the boys name was Marcus. hmmm never heard that name before.

jokes aside

I do have probelms with this pasta, like at times it is confusing. Also you kinda of spoiled the ending that could have been quite surprising. The scene with the boys leaving could have been quite dramatic and sad, but wasnt because the parents didnt see them leave and the boxes are quite confusing. I think you should change the title and first paragraph because this is a pasta that will work well as a mindf***..

Now there was a lot of detail in this pasta, so that detail pretty much saved the day in this pasta. Also it was hard for me to get into this because I really dont play ping pong, but not letting that take away the experiance. Well whenever I do play ping pong because its gotta happen sometime this pasta will be on my mind. 7/10 :D