Talk:Online Interaction Not Rated./@comment-25021327-20160815034201

I liked this one. I wouldn;t say it's the most groundbreaking or original concept, but I think it's executed pretty well here. The pace is pretty quick and kept me interested to follow through to the end. It doesn't linger too long on the narrator having to deal with the fact that no one will believe his if he tells the truth, which can get grating quickly.

TI liked that the story was on the short side and didn;t drag on, or push the limits of believing that there was a guys stalking this kid and his family, but no one noticed. I was thinking it might have been nice to find out a little more about the Listener, but I'm not sure how it could have been done and felt realistic or un-forced. So I think leaving it vague works.

So I'm glad I gave this one a read. I think it's pretty solid for what it is, and has some creepy elements to it. I like having the ending wrap things up as well, It's nice to not have a story that ends on some cliffhanger or something like that. I think this story did certain things right, that similar stories sometimes don't