Talk:Three Red Seconds/@comment-5025667-20130412154813

Well lookie here, it's my time to write my thoughts about one of your pastas this time! After your comments that give me a well-educated impression and inquries, I had lots of expectations for this to be good. And well, it did not disapoint. The story shocked me as I had expected the summoner to have more dark desires, much like the demon did. Instead I get a story about a demon enjoying himself, which was a nice change in pace for once.

The ending was surprising and I actually had to re-read it several times to understand it and it does raise a point about selfishness and not doing anything in return. It's a shock ending that was probably a bit too sudden at first, but it does fit well. 8/10 from me, good work!