Talk:The Road Not Taken/@comment-6794436-20150222203611

Well.. this was alright I guess...

Good: The pasta itself was written quite well, and Mario Kart is a game that is normally seldom written about. Some parts of the pasta are a bit creepy, and there are a few accompanying images which is quite good. The pasta has a few grammar errors, but certainly isn't riddled by them, and it isn't too big of a deal as most of them could be fixed by another proofreading.

Bad: This pasta is just your typical, standard fair gaming pasta. It isn't really anything special, nor does it excel in really anything. The pasta isn't really that creepy as a whole, say for a few scarce parts. Also, there are a few cliches that are quite annoying and are classic tropes of the gaming pasta genre.

Verdict: 5/10- For a first pasta, this is alright, but as a whole, this pasta is just mediocre at best as it doesn't really excel at anything. It's really just another standard gaming pasta, but every once in a while, that can be a good thing. Since this is your first pasta, I should reccomend that you read the New Writer Guidelines. You will definitely improve as a writer if you read these.

-Incorrect3