Talk:Spring Break Society/@comment-25021327-20150824004222

I was very intrigued by this one. Thre seemed to be a lot going on, and to be honest I couldn't quite fit all the pieces together. I'll likely read it again at some point and see what else I pick up. I wasn;t sure how the events of the night with the sister, and Steven and the Hooded figures related to the website, and the newspaper ad. But I'd like to try to see if I can figure it out at some point.

The pacing here was good, in my opinion. I tend to like stories that are paced a little slower and more evenly, and I thought that this one fit that description. Things picked up at the appropriate times, and didn't feel too jumpy.

I liked that the narrator had a more unique character than a lot of standard pastas, and that we got some insight into his thoughts and his personal life. I think that can go a long way in terms of making an engaging story. The spelling, grammar, and format seemed to be in good shape here, nothing that distracted me while reading.

So I'm glad I took some time to read this one, even though it left me scratching my head a little. Like I said, I think that there is a lot going on here, and although I wasn;t able to fir all the pieces together on the first readthrough, I'll likely try again at some point :)