Talk:The Ice-Cream Man/@comment-24240632-20130827214407

I HAVE CHANGED MY REVIEWING FORMATT A LITTLE BIT.

The Ice Cream Man didn't serve the sweetest tastes.

Description: 6.0/10 - It was at best okay with some parts that sounded fairly decent, but you have a lot of grammatical issues. One is the way that you always forget to make the "I" a capital.

Plot: 5.8/10 - Not bad, but I feel like you have a lot of wasted potential here. Like maybe you could find a way to tell us why he's depressed and what's all going on. As it is it feels a little half baked, but it's not bad.

Entertainment: 5.5/10 - It feels like the story is wasting a lot of potential and the lack of detail didn't help either.

Overall: 5.7/10 - Mediocre.

"It's got potential as a story, but not much more."

- Marcus