Thread:Urkelbot666/@comment-5078598-20151231185822/@comment-5078598-20160104002145

Okay, I almost have my story ready for posting, but could you look at it for me first so I can know if I have to make small or HUGE changes? I tried to do paragraphs, but some are bigger than the other. I also used times to help further the story. The story itself is a prototype since it is not finished yet, as well. I just need one read through and some tips to make it better, that's all.