Talk:Broken Memory/@comment-5025667-20130429192838/@comment-5757488-20130429193532

Thanks for your review!

I see how the story falls down in the final act, defintely. It was kind of rushed compared to the others, as I just wanted to get it up and done. I do tend to have trouble finishing.

Also, I do see that the way it's written would cause confusion, I tend to go overboard with the ENTER key.