Talk:The Amazing Mega Man/@comment-6794436-20150302194845

Yes... I know I edited this... but the entire plot of this thing is a cliched mess. I would've helped point out the flaws to you Shadow, but like I said, I'm just your editor, and I can't come up with any of your ideas...

Good: I'll just say this, because of my editing, the grammar is decent and so is the pacing. I don't want to sound too conceded so that's all that I'm going to say.

Bad: Oh boy is this thing cliched. This entire pasta really is a cliche after the game starts acting oddly, and it just really isn't very creepy. The fact that you wanted Mega Man's enemies to be dismembered with human organs just really doesn't make sense, and as Trollish said, sort of ruins the plausability in a sense. The ending is also quite lackluster, and the narrator dying is another classic pasta trope.

Verdict:3/10- The grammar/pacing is alright, but the pasta as a whole is lackluster. Whilst editing this, I tried to leave in as much of your original work as I could so that it wouldn't just turn into me writing pretty much the entire story. All in all, even after my numerous edits, this pasta is pretty bad.

-Incorrect3