Talk:The Basement/@comment-7146806-20130316120326

Nicely done. Dont forget to add categories such as creepypasta, real life and original story. I think this is a solid 7. I felt a little torn away when the violence escalated so quicly. You did a good job of building the suspense, but you snap it off a little too soon. It seemed like you rushed to plug the second 'what are you boys doing'. And as a personal note, the mom didnt need to be pregnant, the story was sad and morbid enough. It didnt really add, it just felt like a little bit too much. Still, a good read.