Talk:HATRED/@comment-26480939-20190125231124

Okay, I have to comment on a bit in this story.

1. Black and White take place in Unova, a region that does not have Rattata in it (well, at least not until B2W2 came out.)

2. You never get money for defeating wild Pokémon. Never have in the entire series.

3. Fix those all-lowercase messages. They look really bad. Unless your intent was to get the point across of how badly the game was affected by the accidental dropping of the system while still on, that is.

Other than those particular points, this seems to be a general Disproportionate Retribution/revengepasta.