Talk:Mongolian Internet/@comment-25021327-20160812215634

As a man with Mongolian Internet, this hits close to home for me. I liked reading this one. it did some of the things that other chatroom pastas do, but I don;t feel like it fell into the tired explanations or reasonings that they sometimes do. I like that the whole thing remains unresolved.

I was afraid that when it got to the part where the narrator was trying to explain what had happened, that all the messages would have disappeared. I like that they remained on his Skype window instead of just magically disappearing or it being some dream or hallucination. Some people might be disappointed that there is no big reveal or resolution in this story, but I enjoyed that it was just a recounting of something strange that happened once and can't exactly be explained. Unless of course, everyone else in the chat is pulling a prank on the narrator, which is also interesting to think about.

The spelling, grammar and all that jazz were in good shape here. I liked the pacing and the length of this one, it's a pretty quick read. I thought having the narrator have a personality in his storytelling helped this one as well. I'm glad I gave this one a read :)