Talk:Trichotillomania/@comment-24240632-20131128233611

Um... C'mon Marcus, witty comment time. I got nothin'.

Description: 10/10 - Brilliant word choice, and description. Everything was detailed great and everything felt so... sureal. Other than maybe one or two tiny grammatical errors, I can't criticise you. Bravo my friend, bravo.

Plot: 8.8/10 - Although odd and out of place, the story was still extremely original. The idea that a conductor is feeding on your very emotions is not only a creepy one, but one that also makes me think. I mean, don't we all have a monster inside us that grows stronger through depression, anxiety, or stress? Very well done on this aspect as well.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - I never wanted to click away...

Pros and Cons:

+ Great word choice

+ Well described

+ Thought provoking

+ Original

- Feels odd and out of place

Overall: 9.3/10 - Outstanding.

"It'll hold on and never let go."

- Marcus