Talk:Somniare Mors/@comment-25021327-20150831134057/@comment-24841964-20150901011807

Thanks for the review, me and Selto are probably the best team for both of us (not trying to brag) he's the reader, I am the idea person. He wrote this whole thing while I just sat back and fixed spelling errors, something was not what I wanted, what have you. We took a day to get everything fixed, how to start it, how to keep the flow, and how to end the thing.

I chosed the open ending. People hate not having a closed ending and I agree, I love having a good closer. But, I just think open ended pastas, especially with dream pastas are much more efficient in getting the person to think. Mind fucks are cool and all, they all the same, a magic twist at the end, or some shit like that.

Open ended are sometimes far and few in between. I could tell you what I had in store for this pasta, what the idea was, and I think you know that. I know I told you what I wanted, and maybe that's how you thought through the vague part, but hey, as a story thinker, as Selto as writer, I think that leaving the reader to decide something on how something ended will be a good mind trick, possibly maybe even better than a mind fuck.