Talk:No Matter the Cost/@comment-24210419-20131027045901

Welp, time to review.

The story is good, so is the grammar for the most part, HOWEVER(!) there is an issue that irritates me in the paragraph

" He wasn’t sure whether this is Hell or some twisted Heaven. It honestly doesn’t look like either of those, too dark and nondescript to be any sort of Biblical location. Was he in limbo? Is this purgatory? He looks around, wondering who or what will be judged."

The issuses are as follows:


 * Limbo isn't a seperate realm, but a circle of Hell


 * Limbo began with a lowercase L.


 * Purgatory also began with a lowercase, even though it's a proper noun.

All in all, after the issues, this gets an 7/10. It seems promising, but it just doesn't deliver as expected.