Talk:LMESKD/@comment-25830410-20141208201903

Holy crap this was good! This pasta was incredibly creepy and the story had great buildup. The descriptions of the people, settings, and things were all geniously written and they really showed you writing chops. Also, the story was really engaging and kept me interested the entire time, which is an abnorality for pastas that are this long.

There is only one problem with this amazing bowl of spaghetti, and that is all of the grammar issues. There are a lot of grammar issues throughout the story, but it isn't that big of a deal as that can be fixed up by a proofread.

Verdict: 9/10- This was a delicious tasting pasta that only needs to be proofread to get rid of the grammar errors.