Talk:Love and Hate/@comment-6418997-20140104064819

this was pretty good marcus i was curious as to where you were going with this and the twist at the end was very well done, i feel it was kkinda fast but i did enjoy every second of it. it had a dark backround, the only thing i didnt like is how you didnt really go into detail why he killed her. however i do like how confilicted he was about it. 8/10 great job