Talk:The Escape From Pain/@comment-11366536-20161022225552

Honestly, wow--I'm very impressed by the high amount of quality and effort you threw into this Creepypasta.

The lore behind the story is rich and immersive, actually making you capable of being able to feel the emotions of the main characters as well as giving a very in-depth look at the science-fiction world you created just using words. As for the story itself, it's very relateable and holds a theme the reader can actually look and relate to: sacrificing everything to fufill a single goal. The scares in the story are delivered quite nicely, taking on the form of more disturbing elements that provide insight into Nick's desperation rather than full-on scare attempts that just wouldn't work and would be thrown in cheaply. Now I did notice a few issues with grammar here and there, but they weren't too bad enough to be all that noticeable.

Overall, everything about this story is just...Amazing, especially for the wiki's standards. Seriously, your stories are possibly some of the best ones I've ever read on this Wiki, and this is no exception.

Verdict - 10/10 (Excellent)