Talk:I Am.../@comment-24240632-20130814211639

First let me say that you should really do your research before writing something like this. With that said let's begin.

Description: 9.5/10 - It was rather good with few to no grammatical errors and I liked the style you wrote this in.

Plot: 6/10 - I hate doing this, but I have to rate this lower since it was factually incorrect. What else can I say... It was interesting, but factually incorrect. It was well put together, but factually incorrect. The mindf*ck would've worked... If it wasn't factually incorrect.

Entertainment: 6.5/10 - At points it felt like you were saying things that didn't need to be said and at points I even felt like clicking away. Also after I learned it was, Jenova I was a little confused because it's factually INCORRECT.

Overall: 7.25/10 - Good. I... Uh, sorry that... uh... y'know... You made a bit of a uh, mistake.

"FACTUALLY INCORRECT!"

- Marcus

THIS REVIEW CAN AND WELL BE CHANGED IF THE AUTHOR EDITS THE STORY AND WANTS ME TO READ IT OVER AGAIN AND REVIEW.