Talk:Paper Mario 64: Cease to Be/@comment-162.201.46.106-20161026042242

The ending... wasn't the best. You could've definitely done more with this, or even just... I don't know, not had the main character just throw the controller and break all their stuff and decide it was Hell. That just seems kind of unnecessary, I think. Like, if you just go chucking controllers at the TV at stuff like that, it makes you wonder how many TVs have been broken and needed to be replaced.

That said, although there's some things that seem like plot holes, I think it just takes a bit of linking there. Sure, they're apparently unexplained, but I'd figure that the whole thing with killing everyone is probably related to that thing with going to bed in the Toad House. That said, there's some things I just don't really get too, so... it definitely could've stood to have at least a bit more to tie things up better, so we can understand it a little better even if the protagonist doesn't. I mean, hopefully, the writer gets what they're trying to write, so we should be able to figure that out too, whether the characters get it or not.

Could use some general editing for grammar and whatnot too, though.