Talk:Immortality/@comment-4332975-20130526220111

Not much I can say to this one. The idea is nothing new, but it's not poorly presented either. I suppose if I were to criticize anything, it would be that it's a very safe story. While it presents the idea of immortality as a curse rather well, it doesn't really do anything new...or really much of anything at all...with the concept. That's really just nitpicking, though, and comes from the "I've read enough horror to know where this is going" camp. For people who might not have encountered the idea of eternal life being terrible before, this does a good job at explaining why it would be.