Talk:Pokemon Black, White, and Crimson/@comment-6470295-20130306210349

Now, i have to say, this is a somewhat neat if kinda cliched backstory on the chracters ingame.

But i have to say...

Please, go back and edit the verbs. The story kinda starts in the past tense, then goes to present, then to past again, and so on. It really takes the immersion out of the story.

But, as far as the story goes, you get a 7 out 10 from me, good sir.

Again..Please fix the verbs, though.