Talk:A God/@comment-6418997-20140215222244

It shows quite a few emotions inside of the story. Showing the major conflicts in his actual problems and in his soul. It creates a character who we feel sorry for, since we don't feel he didn't do anything wrong, and even if he did we would still feel sorry cause its an act of desperation we all been there so it creates a relatable character which is so great about Daniel. I would prefer to see more back story in the beginning though. It is kinda hard to follow at times and is fast paced. But it has great details that give a chilling tone, however this pasta really wasn't that scary at least for me. 8.2\10 pretty good