Talk:Torn/@comment-25021327-20140703153705

The more I analyse this, the more I appreciate it! I must admit that initially, I thought the writing was somewhat convoluted, bordering on pretentious. However, I feel that this style was used as much for utilitarian purposes, as it was for those aesthetic. You slow the pacing, and compel the reader to think more about what is written.

Having never been a first had witness to the atrocities of war, I can only speculate on the accuracy of the depictions offered here, which are presented fairly well, if fairly standardly. The physical descriptions of events and surroundings were nicely detailed, helping create a clear image of what the author saw in their head.

So i think this is a well thought out ad executed effort. As i mentioned, my only complaint would be that the language might come across as overly-complex at times. Great descriptions, and style give this pasta a more unique feel than many others :)