Talk:Superbia/@comment-24181739-20140630180557

Let me say this. This was an absolute chore to read. It took far too long, it has a few chiches sprinkled in there, like the messed up text and the mods and such. It didn't feel like very good past tense.

I give it this - It went into very good detail on what was going on. Props to you for that! Also, being your first pasta, you can get away with the cliches. Work on those next time and you have a pretty good pasta!

Expectation: 3.16

2.41 / 3.16

76.27%, or a C.