Talk:3 Colors/@comment-32602006-20140405075210

Ok I hate to say this, but after being asked to review several of these I probably should:

Sorry, but I'm probably not the best person to ask to review "feelpastas". Often I just really can't find much to say about them.

That said, I do think this could perhaps use some expansion. For a feelpasta it doesn't fall short. But I feel this could use more distinction among the "three colors". Reading throughout, I couldn't really tell when and if you were discussing danger, agony, or denial or how they are supposed to realte to each other.

Maybe throw some personification in for each of them.

Also "danger" kind of throws me off since it is a circumstance wheras the other two are emotions.