Talk:Ned Flanders Creepypasta/@comment-24238747-20141107174056

I'm sorry, but this pasta is bad.

The beginning was very quick, and I didn't get to the know the character and relate to him, making it impossible to be creeped out by the pasta. In the actual cartoon, it was cliched and very rushed.

Next, the whole 'the computer is talking to me' thing was corny.

To top it off, the last part was clustered and odd. Would the creator of the show actually answer? What the heck, why is he yelling? He died? Uh, I'm sorry, but he is still making episodes, so he didn't die. And geez, your friend KNOCKED YOU OUT WITH A BOTTLE and sent you to an INSANE ASYULUM? Thats pushing it, not to mention it was all in one setence, so it happened way too fast.

2/10