Talk:Mario: FoUnD yOu/@comment-28916908-20160917151917

The storys grammar is ok, But..i think its a little too short. Dont get me wrong, I like the story.

But i find it clitch'e when bowser just rips marios head off. It could have been the usaul mario death game over but with a twist.

7/10 Not The best But acceptable.