Talk:Petey's Suicide/@comment-32602006-20140402061234

Well this is certainly better in terms of character developement and background, but to be honest now this just seems a little over the top. The whole thing with him kidnapping and killing them in different ways and taking over the funhouse, I mean I unserstand you're probably trying not to seem like you're exploiting school shootings so you've moved away from that direction, but now the whole revenge story is just kind of generic.