Talk:Campfire Tale/@comment-9847798-20130814202316

Hey Educated, here is my review to another one of your awesome pastas.

Writing Ability - Wow, this pasta is really interestingly written. Its really good, it didn't force me to go on. What I mean is that this pasta did a good job at its flow. The pasts was a bit too short and I wished to hear a little more, but I can't say that that is a negative.

Plot - This was a strong plot that I really liked. It felt like an old episode of "Are You Afraid of the Dark" as it did a good job balancing between the story itself and the interaction with the audience. The narrator was strongly written, I could visualize him stumble over his words at some points. I think, again, that it was a bit too short however.

Originality - This was a really original pasta in the way that it was told. The story itself would be looked at as cliche if not for the fact that the narrator kind of knows that it is cliche. However, it did add some new ideas to the table.

Creepyness - This was not necessarily a creepy story. But the ending was a great payoff and really surprizing.

Overall - This was another excellent creepypasta. While not as good as The OD, this was still incredibly strong and well worth a rating of Goood! Well done Educated!