Talk:Somniare Mors/@comment-17737991-20150901020353

It's interesting to read, though by the end of it I still have no idea what was going on, or why he disappeared along with a note... or the voice, or 500 dollars, or headless fedora man. I also like most the descriptions, but some of them seem wierdly out of place considering the overall atmosphere of melancholy and mystery, such as a kid looking at men's magazines or feeling like Indiana Jones. I'd assume those juvenile thoughts might hint at the protagonist being a kid his/herself, but they still seem out of place. Despite that though, the atmosphere is great, it's my favourite part of this pasta.