Talk:Contestant 18/@comment-25249478-20150124024621

Interesting read, to say the least.

The Grammar was in good shape, and I didn't notice any typoes. The story also had great pacing, and didn't go too fast/slow. The buildup was good, as well. Now, as for this story's overall creepiness factor...up until the end, it isn't all that scary. The end is creepy, but everything leading up to it kind of wasn't. As for the story as a whole, very well done.

8/10. 2 Points off because of lack of creepiness, until the end. Regardless of that, though, good job with this Pasta!

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 02:46, January 24, 2015 (UTC)