Talk:The Forgotten Ones/@comment-9847798-20150130215239

This was a damn good pasta Snicker, you should be very proud of yourself. I am not the biggest fan of gaming creepypastas, but I do think that you did a good job with this one. Well done.

I also respect that you took your time with telling the story, no worries on making a long pasta as long as it is good.

Overall, I'd have to give this a Goood or a 8.5/10. My only are that I think that it was a bit cliche, but I find this as inherent to the gaming creepypasta form. No slight to you though, you should be proud of your work here!