Talk:Flout/@comment-25021327-20141211152000/@comment-17737991-20141211163506

Heh, I made this story over half a year ago but was too paranoid of my idea being stolen to tell anyone or ask for suggestions xD But I got off my butt and finished this sucker!

Yea... it doesn't need a reveal, and there's a reason I didn't add the "mindfuck" category as it should be pretty obvious what's going on. But there's a reveal anyway, as there are some truely dense people... some still think the character in What You Deserve is a male xD

As for the glitches, it's mostly what happens with glitches in general. I based them off of SPOILERS  Ocarina of Time glitches, where you roll into the corner of a door enough to get through a door, some glitch I often hear of in several games where items duplicate, a generic glitch where the sprites mess up (his mom), and then the last bit you'd probably find in hacks moreso than glitches, but you can force the sprite to load into the wrong body using glitches in some games, which just completely messes up their appearance. Oh, and then there's a generic broken world with texture detail messed up and seam tears. ENDSPOILERS

And yes! All hail paragraph indents! Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for the comment ^^ Also, "breath" and "breathe"… are you fucking, all my proof reading and I missed that! Damnit xD