Thread:Sshakenbakee/@comment-31735233-20190925021949

Hey, what's up? I'm new to this site. Well, new as in new writer. I've been reading creepypastas from this site and others like it since about 2015 I think. And now, I've finally worked up the courage to start writing one of my own. I started it back in April, but put it on hold. Now that it's September, I'd like to finish it sometime before the month is over (not sure how realistic of a goal that is).

In case you're wondering, the basic premise behind it is a college student named Fox gets a new GameCube for his birthday that turns out to be possessed by an evil entity (who I've named Tozor, not sure where that name came from, though) that challenges people to a game if they ignore the console for too long. If they win, they live. If they lose, the entity will kill them and claim their soul. Once it has 6 souls, it will be unleashed on the real world to wreck havoc. Fox is the last soul it needs to be free, but he will not go down without a fight. Especially because he has something to fight for, namely his friends.

I'll admit, it's a pretty long story with, at last count, 9,088 words. I'm pretty proud of the results so far, especially considering this is my first delve into the horror genre. I'm stuck at writing the ending, though. Honestly, it's kinda ridiculous how I can't seem to make the story end, at least not in a way that I could see it being "satisfying" enough to not raise more questions than answers.

Which reminds me, I wonder if there is a place that I can post what I have so far, so I can get feedback as well as an idea on how to end the story. After all, you can't really help me end the story if you don't know what I have written down already.

However, asking for feedback makes me nervous. Like asking a girl out on a date level of nervous. Asking for help in general gives me this feeling, which is why all my life I've never asked for help, even though I need it.

Sorry for the long read, if there's one thing you should know about me is I talk, a lot. Because I just have so much to say. Introverts, for the win! 