Talk:3 Colors/@comment-17737991-20140107194935

Hm, interesting. It's very cryptic... this can be a good thing since it allows the reader to interpret it in anyway they want. For example, I see it as some person unable to follow the rules of society, so "normal" stare darkly at the protagonist making that person feel extremely guilty. That's probably way off though, so I think you may have made this a bit too cryptic ^^'

Like Scary said, "maybe make it slightly easier to make us understand what he is trying to say because it is confusing at times." Doing this might also increase the length to your pasta. I mean, I think the length is fine but if you want to expand it then that might help.

But if you WANT the story to be cryptic then keep it as is! I like the strange way things are described in relation to the senses.