Talk:Megaman: BubbleMan/@comment-195.188.243.175-20150528131508

well well well. seems someone needs some advice well lets see what i have for ya

1.remove the hyper realistic blood and two robot masters breaking the 4th wall

2.try and add more detail or change some e.g."the hack was simple bubble man was given a new tatic but nothing unusual bt upon destroying him" try something like that

3.add a edited picture that shows what happens. almost every creepypasta i saw have them none i saw have had a picture that had nothing to do with the story until now

welp thats all i could think of overall it gained a 3.7/10