Talk:Channel One/@comment-24609807-20140817131347

I started reading this with a faint hope of it being something, but boy was I wrong. There were a few grammatical issues, but I can dismiss them as things that you overlooked while writing.

Other than that, this was a great story and definitely worth the read. Being 14, I never really had fun with fancy TVs such as that, but I do have static channels on the TV in my room and as a younger kid, the static channels scared me to a certain extent and made me paranoid to a certain extent. I couldn't really tell this was a first thing, because it's well written. An honest rating, I'd give it a 10/10. But my rating doesn't carry much weight, but I really enjoyed it.