Talk:Usoda/@comment-7706473-20131102053259/@comment-12676723-20131102073440

The big lie was suppose to be from the sceene where he has to follow the friend. Sadly I think I slipped up there in sense that the narrtior didn't say that he would follow.

It's great to see this feedback and I'm really enjoyed by it. I focused on what I thought my strengths may be and maybe that's why it wasn't creepy as it could have been. I have one in the wood works that I hope you'll also like when I get around to writing.