Talk:I'll Never Be The Same (Version 2.0.1)/@comment-6794436-20150205235646

W-why... why does it have to be so sad?

Good: This pasta was written well, with decent vocabulary and great use of similes and metaphors. There are little to no grammatical errors, and you used great descriptive words. The pacing and buildup was nice, and at the beginning I was left wondering what the pasta would be about.

Bad: This pasta isn't really creepy, it's a bit more sad than anything. That can work sometimes, but I don't really feel as though it did in this one. Also, climax really doesn't make sense for Pokemon at least. When a trainer is done with a Pokemon he/she stores it in a PC, it isn't abused by the replacement Pokemon. Another thing, in the Pokemon universe, when a Pokemon is released, it is healed first and then let into the wild, and it certainly wouldn't just get ran over by some bikers. Sorry I had to bring that aspect up, as it made me sound like the biggest pokemon nerd, but still, it's true.

Verdict: 6/10- There are very few grammatical issues, but the whole idea of the pasta is a bit flawed. Also, it isn't really creepy, more sad than anything. Still, this was an excellently written pasta and was a good read.

-Incorrect3