Thread:Urkelbot666/@comment-26400886-20151004225511/@comment-25021327-20151005002051

Just giving a brief look, it does seem to be in better shape. There are still some grammatical and spelling issues which could use attention. I may go through and do some proofreading at some point, since you have at least put some more effort into it. I'll leave it in the Needs Work category for now so you and other users can make edits/improvements to it, and like I said, I'll likely go through for a proofreading at or before the time of my net full review of it, so it likely won't be deleted.