Talk:Critical Hits Are Killer: A Memory Game Sequel/@comment-26480939-20160824014402

Like I mentioned on the original story, "A Memory Game", this is actually pretty good. I haven't seen many Poképastas built around the theme of 'if Pokémon attacks existed in real life'. You still have the 'intensity of game attacks not reflecting intensity of real-life consequences' thing going on, but then, I imagine it would be hard to come up with realistic effects for Pokémon moves that make use of things that we don't have in our reality. The Dragon Claw > scratched severely by a cat part is a good example. I was actually expecting something more severe than cat scratch fever. (I kid, I kid. *laughs*) I dunno, I kind of expected a large animal attack of some sort, not cat scratches. The spelling and grammar are already as good as they can be, I feel. Just work a bit more on matching the severity of the real-life consequences to the Pokémon attacks and you'll be fine for part 3. :)

Rating: 9/10, with one point removed for the inconsistency in regards to Pokémon attacks and real-life consequences.