Talk:The Monsters of Plyskiv/@comment-25021327-20140927144031

Not too shabby. A bit predictable, but that's not always a bad thing (personally, I think MindF*cks can be a little overrated sometimes, but that's neither here nor there.)  The shorter length of this worked well for me, It set things up fairly well, and didn't overstay its welcome.

On thing I woul comment on was that the descriptions of the accents confused me a bit. I get Medium, and Thick accents, but we're not sure what kind of accents they are. One can assume Russian, but the fact that the bulk of the dialogue is in English, aside from the German parts which we assume the narrator can't understand completely, got me wondering if this was in some english speaking area.

I know i's hard to write a story taking place in a country where your native language isn't spoken, and we usually assume that the dialogue we are reading is being spoken in a native tongue. It really isn't a major issue, but it was just something that stuck out to me for whatever reason.

All that rambling aside, not a bad effort.