Talk:Have a nice day/@comment-6794436-20150120195815

This is just a complete mess, and it is not deserving of a proper review. This is some of the worst grammar I've ever seen in a pasta, like, holy shit. You either are in first grade or you just don't know how to speak english. If it is the latter you shouldn't post on this site, as it is a site for english speakers and if you don't fully understand the language, you just clog up the wiki with horrible pastas. Also, this story is essentially one huge cliche with blood and guts galore.

Verdict: -12/10- this pasta is just complete and utter trash in every aspect. Either learn how to write english correctly or don't post.

-Incorrect3