Talk:I'll Never Be the Same/@comment-14341590-20140120143243

After reading this, I felt satisfied with the pasta. (It did it's job.) Before however, when I started reading the pasta; I felt a little confused. When I read the first paragraph I liked where the pasta was going. And for a PokePasta, this is definetly worthy of being a good short story. The emotional scenes were also very vague yet I managed to imagine the situation (which is always good in story telling...) When I read up to the final paragraph, I was pleased with the story. If there was anything bad about this pasta, I'd be wise to say this:

"A few cliches, and I didn't like how it was a little repetitive at the start with the paw movement..." Over-all I'd have to say this: It's a worthy pasta in the competition against many other PokePasta's. And it did its job perfectly. Thanks for writing this, I'd have to rate it this:

7.1/10 - with just a few more tweaks, I'd easily give it a, 8/10! If you made it a little longer than short and sweet, I'd happily give it a 8.5/10 - That's the best I'd give it though. Thanks again - Rockyz -