Talk:The Unlucky Zombie Slayer/@comment-26147355-20150424192326

Overall, I feel that this is a good Pasta. I do have a few complaints, however. In my opinion, the story wasn't at all creepy. Also, The mysterious voice wasn't very fleshed out. I feel like if the story was longer, it would have been better. I hope to see more Pastas from you in the future!