Talk:A Christmas I'll Never Forget/@comment-5025667-20131223150903/@comment-5757488-20131223152101

Thanks for your review and advice.

I do see what you mean about the narrator not asking normal questions. Even when writing, I didn't add the detail about his mobile phone being removed until after everything was finished, as I sometimes tend to get wrapped up in the story. I guess this can lead to the narrator seeming detached from the story.

And about a prequal story? It's definately a possibility, as there were quite a few details about the plot and characters which I removed from the final draft, which could be explored futher in any continuation.

Anyway, thanks again for reading, and for your compliments, it really made my day!