Talk:Sonic Has No Colors/@comment-6700032-20130529163638

Hi, there! I'm the author of "The Megaglitch" and I saw your comment. I'm sorry I didn't see it before now, but I'm happy to read and rate!

That was a decent pasta! I do like the concept, and it is written fine. My only complaints is that you have a cliche in there. " The stage is easy, just a straight path with no enemies or obstacles..." This can be considered the pasta-tainting cliche. A lot of creepypasta's use this. Also, I would try to change the name "Black Doom 2" because it breaks the immersion. If you named it something else, it could add mystery and creepiness. Something like "the dark figure" that's not super specific.

Overall, I give it a 6/10, which I consider "Decent" (I would consider 5 "Average and 7 "Pretty Good".) Keep on writing!