Talk:For, Sandra/@comment-6223890-20131024213354

This Pasta is pretty good my my standards. As most people pointed out, slight grammatical errors, but I personally will not count that against you in my overall rating of this Pasta. This Pasta is well written in the certain sense that, not only could I see the darkness within the main character, but I could literally feel his emotions as I read on in the story. Another thing I really enjoyed about this particular Pasta are the metaphores used to define the main characters personality. One thing I would like to see, however, even if it is included in a seperate Pasta, is a background of sorts. Maybe a prequel explaining the history of the main character and this 'Sandra', I also found myself very curious as to how Sandra met her death, but perhaps that's just because I'm a very curious person.

Overall rating 10/10.