Talk:Geemer/@comment-25021327-20140924133505

I liked this story a lot. It's an interesting take on a strange little Easter egg in the game. The story is helped by the plausibility of this happening with some maniacal hacker silently uploading his altered SMILE program/Super-Metroid ROM.

The pacing is consistent, and made me want to keep reading. I felt that the descriptions were quite good, although I'd like to hear from someone who is unfamiliar with Super Metroid to see if that's just a symptom of my being familiar with the game's sound, graphics, etc.

I liked how the Samus/Geemer relationship was initially off-putting, then morphed into an almost tragic, somehow comedically unhealthy obsession. The Geemer almost became a sympathetic character, or maybe I'm just reading too much into things. In any case, I enjoyed the pasta, and I'm pleased to have read it.