Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-24181739-20140703212234/@comment-8470110-20140703221207

I'm glad you like it! The story is atrociously long I know, but it has to be for people to care about the characters and plot as a whole, as well as set up for the ending which you kind of spoiled in your review. Regardless, I'm pleased you liked it and I value your critism!