Talk:A Midnight's Cold Bite/@comment-9847798-20130818193533

Here we go, let's review!

Writing Ability - This was your weakest area of the pasta, it just wasn't really written well for my taste. I think that it has a lot of room for improvement. Please reread this pasta out loud and you'll notice.

Plot - I can call myself a fan of werewolves. They're are cool, and sometimes tragic creatures, just watch "The Wolfman" from 1941 and you'll understand. So you do get some points.

Originality - This was definitely an original creepypasta because it was about werewolves. I am constantly surprised that werewolves, vampires, and other golden age monsters are not written about more often.

Creepyness - I gotta say that this wasn't really a creepy story and it goes back to your writing problems mentioned before.

Overall - This was an alright creepypasta that had sky high ambition. It could be a great pasta if you seriously improve the writing. Nice effort all around, I give this pasta a Skimmable! but with ''Goood! ''ambition!