Talk:You Won't Survive/@comment-26525461-20150709154438

3.5/10

I can't really be nice about it and i feel you might need constructive criticism to help you.

Grammar- Major problems here. This really made me lose my immersion in the story and therefore i couldn't enjoy it as much as i would've liked to.

Story- Odd and filled with cliches. I'm sorry but this is something i can't get over.

Other than that, there wasn't other flaws but grammar and story are huge parts and i recommend you focus on those in your next story. Thank you for listening and... Dont take what i say to heart. You probably just have one bad sotry and then a streak of amazing ones.. Alright? (=