Talk:Pokémon FiredRed/@comment-26051804-20150529194613

Great... time to review my own pasta...

The GameStop store is a huge, HUGE cliche in all video game pastas.

I kind of went a bit overboard with the 'FIREDred' thing.

Also, like my first reviewer said, the level one pokemon with one move is cliche as well.

And the person not being able to play his device/his device being destroyed is a cliche as well...

Overall, I rate my own pasta, 4/10. It's definitely not the best I could of done.