Talk:It Has a Rather Lovely Ending/@comment-4332975-20130226175342/@comment-6761334-20130227071214

Thank you for your feedback. Orlginally, I was going for a natural tone with the Sortas and kindas. However, I see you point. Part of the problem is that everyone in the story talks like that. If i was going for a personalized dialect I should have restricted it to one person. All I did was give me voice to three different characters. I didn't make them individuals.

Instead of trying to create three diferent ways of speaking, it makes more sense to rewrite it to remove them.