Talk:Revolution/@comment-29588684-20160425224656

Wow. I think this can really happen if we do not have the best authority

Story: This was a very well together story of before the evil 'doctor'. The whole revolution thing really sound like you did some homework! 9/10

Grammar: Excellent, but a few errors. 8/10

Overall: 10/10. Gooooooooooooooooooood Job!