Talk:Dark Mind/@comment-25029585-20140618213236

Hmm... Interesting. So, I presume the story goes like this, A kid recieves some dark thoughts, causing him to go insane and go on a killing spree. I think I'll make a pro and con list for this one.

Pros: Interesting topic & somewhat original

Cons: Mispelling, lacks build-up

Another con is believability, I doubt this kid could be able to cause genocide and not be caught and arrested for it. And, how does one kidnap the mayor? This must be like one of the worst cities if they can't even keep their mayor safe.

Anyway, 5.5/10, needs a spellcheck and a more believable story.

P.S.- You forgot categories and signature.