Talk:Honey/@comment-24240632-20131015030156

Honey, keep writing.

Description: 9.0/10 - Hmm... An interesting, and creepy way to write a story of a man who grew tired of his wife, and basically life itself. There were very few spelling, or grammatical errors. Good job!

Plot: 8.5/10 - It's been done before, and it's been done in the same fashion before, but it was still an interesting read!

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - A good read, but it felt slow, and repetitive at times.

Overall: 8.8/10 - Great.

"It's been done before, but you just might find something special."

- Marcus