Talk:The Devil Is Inside Pt.1/@comment-6830263-20130530052653

It's decent. Nothing that stands out really, but oh well. It was short and I don't like the fact that you're going to divide this story up into parts. I think in some cases, it can work. I.e.: if your story is really long. I do wanna see a part two, because I would like to know what the deal is with the main character's friend. Some grammar and spelling flaws and overall, I'm curious as to what the devil has to do with this.

Final verdict: 5/10