Talk:2014/@comment-6794436-20150220185636

Okay kid, don't even try to pliagarize the story 1999. Well, I'm not quite sure pliagarizing is the word, but you can't take credit for the pasta 1999, as it was obviously written by someone with some semblence of writing skills, and certainly not you. But, I guess I should review this trash that you've concocted.

Good: Well, this isn't a wall of text. That's it.

Bad: You are just a terrible person, trying to take credit for something obviously not created by you, but that's besides the point. The pasta isn't creepy at all and there are numerous instances of run on sentences and other grammatical errors. The premise of this pasta is quite idiotic, as it is obviously just a cheap ploy to try to ride on the immense amount of success of 1999. I can't say much else about this pasta, it is just really bad and the premise is not a good idea.

Verdict: 2/10- This is just very bad and it is shameful that you attempted to take credit for the far superior pasta, 1999. The pasta as a whole is incredibly bad, and you certainly should take a look at the New Writer Guidelines, you need it.

-Incorrect3