Talk:The Diary of Max Netherban/@comment-11366536-20150714152319

This is a terrible mindfuck.

Plot - The Plot is basically a summary of Half-Life 1's Storyline. That's it. There's nothing special about it that makes it scary, which is what mindfucks are supposed to do in the first place.

The Grammar is also attrocious in many places, which doesn't add anything to the already-rushed plot.

Scare-Factor - N/A (There is nothing scary about this Creepypasta)

Originality - Half Life 1's Story that's Copy-Pasted onto a Creepypasta Page is NOT a Creepypasta.

My god this was really terrible. The only points I give this are solely based on the fact that there's categories, and that the story isn't a gigantic wall of text.

Verdict : 0.5/10 (Never Say Never - The Written Movie)