Talk:Surviving in Hell: Sequel to Nightmare Fuel/@comment-25021327-20140623020648

Having just read the prequel to this, I was a little worried about checking this story out. I tend to have an aversion to sequel stories, as so often they fail to live up to the originals. that said, I did also enjoy this Pasta. It was a less innovative than the original, but in the same respect wasn't too derivative. As in most sequels, the key plot elements are set up, and the action starts sooner. And oh boy, did this have a lot of action, haha. Monster fighting and Blood'n'Guts trumped fright and creepiness in this story.

I would have liked to read more descriptions of some of the ghouls, and settings, and seen some more original scares. I did enjoy the ending, and it nicely ties up the first story, while leaving the initial Nightmare Fuel story to stand on its own, or with this. I was wondering what was going to happen in the end. In the dream world you mention how much time has passed, but we all know that dream-time is entirely different from real life time, and I was wondering if the narrator would awaken in his bed, or somewhere... else...

For me, it could have been better, it expands on the first story without dumbing it down or sullying it, some spelling and grammar issues, but it's a quick read, and I think it was good for what it was :)