Talk:A Game Called, "Pong"/@comment-8470110-20131126041417

7.5/10

A pretty good pasta. The detail was great, the pacing was well done and the plot was clear. However, I can't help but feel that this pasta was a bit rushed. It was still great don't get me wrong, but there are parts where I feel that with more time, they could've been done better. The way this story was written it could've been one hell of a mindf*ck. It was cryptic enough to be one plus it had the detail to add to the reveal. Had the title and opening paragraph not have said 'Pong', I would've never guessed that's what it was about.

In any case, a well done Creepypasta with a few flaws but not enough to take away from the experience. If this were a mindf*ck, I'd go as far as saying it rivals Revolution. But hey, good job on the story, Marcus!

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)