Talk:Come Home/@comment-6418997-20131022040047/@comment-24240632-20131022040740

Wow, thanks for the AWESOME review! Honestly that review really helped me a lot! I did try to make the antagonist the dad for the most part yes, and I'm really glad you liked that part! I know that the protagonist could've used some work, and don't worry this story will be improved upon, but I'm happy I got this done because now I can take what you've said and learn from it! Thanks a bunch! :D