Talk:Shake Shake/@comment-6830263-20130518103148/@comment-67.251.106.36-20130518150114

Thanks! I guess I didn't really feel the rushed ending as I was writing, since it was about 2 in the morning, funilly enough. And the accidental part...yeah, it is kind of stupid. I think I'm going to tweak that. I thought it would work a lot better than it did, upon rereading. I've never really written creepypastas before, so I knew I wasn't going to avoid all of the cliches, so I tried to just keep it down to just a couple here and there.

Also the source I got the game from sounds reliable because I pulled inspiration from an actual game store. Best stories are based on real experiences, right?