Talk:Bring Your Mother To Work Day/@comment-11366536-20150212171335

Well, it's a pretty good story, overall.

Beginning : The Story properly and formally explains about the main characters, the daughter's depression, and her gruesome fate. The story starts off very nicely this way, giving off a sense of a recolated memory.

Middle : This might be nitpicking, but the story begins to suddenly just drop in scariness factor at this point. At first, the Portal part starts off good, Glados saying something she should never say in the game normally. But the part with the family's faces on the Companion Cube just seemed cliche'd and something that's been done before a lot.

Ending : The Mother continues to play throughout the game, and beats it. The Story begins to get vague at this point, however. When you said "The background had been replaced with GLaDOS' face", which Background? Steam's Background or the Desktop background?

Anyways, the ending is still okay. The Mother is sickened to hear GLaDOS sing the song at the end credits. When the mother goes back to her own computer, she discovers the background is replaced with GLaDOS' Face. (Again, I'm going to assume it's the desktop background)

Overall, the story is fairly pleasant and overall a Great Read.

Verdict : 8.5/10 (Great)