Talk:Attrition of War/@comment-24540056-20140825205727/@comment-24747574-20140826073416

Thanks for the review^^

Many said that the font is strange, though i dont know how i managed to do that XD

And yeah, i know that its not very horrifying. It was rather meant to unsettle people who play the game it was based on. Next time you boot up one of them and go into a town with skyscrapers and stores, but only a dozen residents. Or when you notice that there are really no firearms, although the technology is fairly developed, even more than our current. When you see that the amount of children surpasses that of grown-ups and many of them are elderly, obese or scientists - thats when it is supposed to unsettle and remind you why the world is the way it is.

Sure, month will pass, you will read other stories and they will creep you out more while you read them, but once in a while, when playing that one game, you will see all the minor details you havent cared for before and maybe, just maybe some chills will run down your spine - that is of course if i managed to write it properly ^^