Talk:The Zoo Tycoon 2 Disc/@comment-25021327-20150517224359

17-May-2015- I'm adding a Needs Work tag here. The main reason for this is that this story is largely an unformatted wall of text. I haven;t read through all of this, but from skimming through, I can tell that there is some unformatted dialogue in this piece, as well as a misused homphone (your welcome where it should be you're welcome) and someone selling the game in question for an extremely low price (a bit of a cliché these days)

I apologize for not reading through this story thoroughly, but it can be hard when it is in the form of a block of unformatted text. I'd suggest breaking this up into paragraphs, and spacing out and formatting the dialogue a bit for a start :)

As this page is now tagged "Needs Work," it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review.