Talk:Yer Majesty/@comment-29502200-20161018185722

Review time.

This story is original and I like it. You broke away from the gaming-pasta stereotypes, and made your own idea of being stuck in the game, and the game coming to life. It's not too long, it's well paced, and it stayed interesting. The ending was a little cliche, but nothing is perfect.

7/10 - Original Idea, Do Not Steal