Talk:Different Pairs (Of Wings)/@comment-17737991-20130919122134

I think the first section was very Silent Hill-esque, with an abandoned town, broken telephones, car crash, missing wife, blacking out, and seeing things that make no sense. Yea... Also, his dopple-gangers seemed to be following a theme of the Seven Deadly Sins. The first one fucking that girl was lust, the second one with the hobo was greed, and the third wife beater was wrath.

These themes are abandoned though when we get to the Mothman's point of view. The Mothman wants to torment the protagonist by making him remember painful things. Then he decides to force him to remember the deaths of his family.

Then it cuts to... bullies. There's so many characters in this section and some are completely pointless. Like Simon, he was mentioned once then never brought up again. And of all those characters, I'm not even sure which one of these kids is the guy who's now being tormented by Mothman. Is it Fred? Plus, no one in that section died, although it's supposed to be about the deaths of his family. Gerald had his hands stapled which... would hurt. But I didn't see anyone, family or otherwise, die.

I understand it's a collab project, but the story sections still feel disjointed. Despite a lot of resemblance to a certain horror game franchise, my favorite section is the first one, but all the sections are decent. I do think they need to be connected better though. And whatever happened to Rosetta?