Talk:Respawn - A ROBLOX Creepypasta/@comment-11366536-20180603032210

Added "Needs Work". (Though I dunno if anybody might do anything about this one since the Wiki's pretty much dead.)

The story is a pretty much base example of why RO-Pastas never work: They're predictable, bland, and generally terribly-written and fail to bring anything new to the table other than the dated format of "oh something spookey happened to me once with bluud n guts!!!11one"

In this case, we're greeted to a poorly-written and generic experience of a user on ROBLOX made dumber by the agonizing amount of cliche's in the story, such as the entire ending of "he came to my house and he killed me and I died so spookey xd". It's clear from the writing quality that whoever wrote this story either clearly didn't even try to give a damn about what they were writing, or doesn't understand what makes creepypastas a thrill to read in general.

All of that aside, this story gets a solid 1/10 for being a downright blatant reskin of the dead "bluud n guts and then i died" format. That is all I have to say about it.

To make matters worse, the story is also shoveled into two gigantic walls of texts that need to be separated, it lacks a signature, and has not been added onto the listing. All of these issues must be fixed or else the story is subject to being given 48 Hours to Deletion. (I added catagories for it too, but make sure you do this in the future.)

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