Talk:Isn't This Fun?/@comment-11079349-20131109002357

Alright, now this is an improvement. My empathy for the main character is a bit more present and the whole thing is horrible. Still not the scary that very few creepypastas fill me with anymore, but it was the right type of horrifying for the specific setting. my new rating for this would be 92 out of 100, or rather, 9.2/10. I can't say I like the way you do things, but the fact that you fix mistakes and listen to criticisms make you one of the better authors on this site. (Basically meaning that I've seen much much worse.)

on another note, the reason you get such high rating in my opinion is because I think of the basic creepypasta as a 5, a very bad one as a 2 and a generally good one as an 8. I dont give 10s unless i think someone worked unbelievably hard on it and made it good enough to recomend to friends, and while i think you did extremely well on this, i feel as though i could replicate the creepypasta easily. maybe I'll try some time to test it. (still, you got a great score.)