Talk:My Buddy Sandman/@comment-26268104-20150710214755/@comment-25021327-20150711133913

Thanks for taking the time to read and review :D I appreciate your critique.

Again, I'm goin to touch on this topic, only because it continues to arise. The 'twist' which people tend to pick up on really wasn't intended to be the hook of the story. While writing this I wasn't really concerned with working up some big reveal for the ending, I wasn't trying to hide anything from the reader.

The main thing for this story for me was working up a couple characters, and trying to convey to the reader what it might be like to experience something (in this case the game) which one later learns, after the fact, has sinister implications.

So, sorry if being able to figure out the outcome of the story soured the reading experience for you, but again, thanks for reading :)