Talk:Gorefest Asylum/@comment-29588684-20160424022912/@comment-28073721-20160424220133

I never expected that to happen, but yeah it's good. I know it's not great so I'm a guy who can take critisism wether the story is good or bad. If you want to review and or rant about it go ahead knock yourself out. I'd like ask favor in your review, grammer errors. Is there alot and if you would, point out any grammer mistakes Iv'e probably made. When you make your review I'd like to know your honest opinion so send me a link or some other method so I'll find your review wether it's a video or just somethng written. One more thing, how did you find my story anyway? My guess it was just by chance by if not I'd like to know.