Talk:The Tall Man in the White Mask/@comment-6830263-20130530054015

Pretty good. One question though: why four notes? If there were eight, there would be more build-up as well which is always a good thing. It portrayed Slenderman very well, as the killer he is. And despite the fact that there could have been more build-up, there was still enough so that this story could be enjoyed. Grammar and spelling were all right.

One tip: Maybe you can add a sound file of John's speech, just a suggestion though.

Fianl verdict: 7.5/10