Talk:What Happens inside Is a Mystery/@comment-4332975-20130517153031

Overall, not bad, and being long is definitely not a bad thing. There were a few plot holes that came from someone who knows games trying to write a non-gamer (though I think "basketball bat" might have been unintentional hilarity), but overall it's well written. I liked how the game produced echoes of its past victims, with these echoes eventually leading the latest to leave a message to the person that would come with them. If I had one complaint, however, it would be that the overall story was very reminescent of "Creepy Black" with the player starting out with an all-powerful ghost that mows down everyone in their path until it eventually turns on them, punishing them for how they abused its power. That said, I don't regret reading this.