Talk:Lost Soul/@comment-11079349-20131226172856/@comment-8470110-20131226190859

There are improvements that can be made for sure as Kyosu said. While there is potential here, I hope Cya will make the necessary corrections in order to reach said potential. If a few more people are willing to proofread the final edit once Cya has finished it, I think that it will benefit him greatly.