Talk:Hangman/@comment-24521219-20140509171059

Grammar: 9.5/10

Story: 6/10

Creepiness 7/10

Conclusion 6/10

This was a pretty good pasta but there were some clichés such a hamfest being like a flea market and the white man "talking" to the player (it felt so for me.) But otherwise it was pretty good, the blood was placed right and the picture creeped me out a bit. But the ending was poorly executed because the player wants to see what happens if he fails, which isn't that creepy. You can do better I'm sure, keep on!