Talk:My Experience with Education/@comment-9281274-20150418045211

I'll say it right now, not only does the story work on it's own without the twist (or at least is very engaging) the twist itself is HILARIOUS! BRAVOO!!! True it's not creepy but goddammit the twist was brilliant, made sense, and too good make me critique this.

The only real problem I have is pretty much what Mr. 3 said at the bottom. The weird formatting of this pasta makes it look like a poem when it's just another short story. Other than that, the descriptions were incredible, the main character (SPOLIERZ: Arnold) was fun to read and that twist...oh GOD that twist!