Talk:How to Trick the World's Greatest Detectives/@comment-6794436-20150914152958

If only I was there to read Gcumt's pastas, I would've scared him off from the internet in one go...

Good: This was written quite well. There were only a few grammatical errors, but they were few and far between, likely the byproduct of mere fast typing. The story flowed very nicely as well, and you used a lot of words that really show off your extensive vocabulary. I think this pasta was the perfect size for this type of plot. I didn't find myself bored at all throughout this story, and it was a quick read.

Bad: It was actually quite hard to review this pasta considering the fact that the bulk of it was meant to be bad, but I'll try my hardest to critique both sides. When it comes to Gcumt's story, I don't know which part was worse, the gore or the grammar. Both were equally awful in my eyes. The whole murder scene in the story just felt out of place and rushed. It wasn't shocking, it wasn't grotesque, it wasn't creepy. No real effort was put into those descriptions it seems, since that whole entire part was, "And then he did this... and then he did this... and then he did this...". After the story part,  the next part of the story wasn't very good either. With the whole Joker line fiasco and the story being actual murder, yeah, I saw that coming from a mile away. That "mini-mindfuck" I guess we'll call it really just failed on all fronts on account of the predictability. Also, I find it a bit hard to believe that a body being found that was killed in that brutal of a manner wouldn't have spread like wildfire, at least in the country that it happened. Also, even if the narrator never heard of the brutal killing, I'm sure at least one other person on the wiki would've found out about it and alerted everybody.

Verdict: 4/10- This pasta I found to really just be mediocre. It was written exceptionally, but the main bulk of the story after that first paragraph really just failed on all fronts for me. I know that for many people, this will be an amazing pasta, and hell, it is still a great piece of writing, but it really just didn't do it for me.