Talk:MEGAMAN 1/@comment-11366536-20160608181938

I don't know much about Megaman, but I do know that this story is pretty lackluster in quality.

First of all, I already noticed the "I love [old game] and [old game] is one of my favorite games of all time" cliche' right off the bat, and something about the fact that the game store employee knowing that the game was hacked just felt unrealistic. I also don't get the purpose of specific details that are unnecessarily emphasized, such as the "Drive home being hot" and the girlfriend scene.

Secondly, the *Ahem* "scary" part of the story fell extremely short. ''Oh, so every time I get hit the room becomes the Arizona Desert? ''Like I said, not at all terrifying and more redundant.

The last and most obvious issue with this story is the ending. Holy lord, that was a very fast, and not to mention asinine ending if I've ever seen one. You'd might as well just save time by writing: THENESMELTSANDTHEENDYAY 

On a lighter note, I can say that the Grammar wasn't terrible and the story at least seems to be written & uploaded onto the Wiki properly. However, that doesn't change the fact that the story was incredibly dull & definetly needs work.

Verdict - 3.5 (Bad)