Talk:I'm Sorry/@comment-24540056-20140922190659

Sifenchar's Critique

Excluding the fact that this pasta is a first, I have to say that you definately have talent. Some of the dialogue is a bit cliche, but I don't really care. It's long enough to keep the reader satisfied, and it works.

8/10

(EDIT: The reason this pasta doesn't get a 10/10 is because I think that perfect scores are pastas that go the extra mile and then some. I'm not talking about pastas that do it all right, but I'm talking about pastas that do so much for the industry, you can compare it to the first time someone had suggested washing their hands before surguries. Pastas like the NES Godzilla Creepypasta and the original Slenderman pasta deserve that perfect score.)