Talk:My Friend Miles/@comment-5025667-20130719181208

This was very, very obvious right from the title, so it wasn't much of a mindfuck. The minute you mentioned machines and running from them, I got it immediately. As far as the story goes, it was well written, but wasn't very creepy or shocking in any way, except for perhaps Tails' death at the very end. The writing also seemed to be very repititive, but the writing and narrative flow were decent. It seemed like I was reading a fanfic, and this is coming from someone who has their own pasta with such claims, but this pasta doesn't try to be different nor detach from the source material, which is a major problem considering the pasta and especially mindfucks.

A um...5 out of 10? Not really sure how to rate this.