Talk:Every Rose Has Its Thorn/@comment-11079349-20131223073852

Great story, but after reading this, the prequels, and the poem, I can't help but suspect a truly horrible ending. Still, if you create an ending which makes me feel the same sadness I felt when Jak's father died in Jak 3, then I will tell you that you have been truly successful in making something horribly sad enough to make me cry.

As for a rating, I'm going to save that for the end so I can rate the story as a whole. Just know that you're doing really well. One sad fact about doing well, though, is that it means you have that much less room for accidents. that is the only problem with good stories; every new chapter is another chance to let someone down. No pressure, keep up the good work.

Also, proof read this and you'll find one or two grammatical errors. Just a note.