Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog 3 Hacked Cartridge (Genesis)/@comment-167.142.113.82-20151115061414

It was an okay read. It had great build up, but the actual story to the cartidge was hard to follow. The "buying a hacked/cursed cartridge from a used vendor" is pretty cliche, but I would doubt there are any choices left after the myriad of Creepypastas. The character and her friend were a bit weak. The girl had an easy irratable stomach and was pretty emotionally weak. The male wasn't that bad, but the actual outburst and soft "no..." was actually pretty sterotypical of a story and doesn't really help immerse me.

The pictures were a great added bonus actually. Despite not actually getting the story before it was explained by the author of the rom hack, it was a good story. The subtle movements were noted and the curiosity was actually well in place. The hack couldn't have hurt anyone, and thus, there were no reasons to discontinue playing.

Overally, my main complaints are just the weak-willed main character. The ending wasn't that bad. It made me fantasize of doing the opposite - tracking him down, doing whatever. Good stuff. It's both not and is such a stretch to assume someone interested in hacking games would be interested in cyber security (such as hacking), and it is quite the stretch to believe those two are not different.

It was a good read, and I'm glad Mutahar read it.