Talk:The Home Run Killer/@comment-25442311-20141110014853

Umm, WTF! This is was way awsomer than expected!

Now a word from FRANK:

The pacing was very good, although there were a couple parts that I was like...

"HOW DA HELL COULD HE KNOW DAT!"

if you know what I mean...

And I did quite like the ending! And most inportant! It was not clich'e, and It was simply awsome!

Luckily you executed the idea well this idea could have easily have become a shitpasta! Like mine :(

Now the scores...

FRANK THE OCTOPUSES SCORE: 9

MAX'S SCORE: 9.5

Overal AWSOME! One of the best pastas me and Frank have read in a while :)