Talk:A Terrible "Fate"/@comment-6830263-20130628183915

Jeez, that was good. The so-called lack of detail didn't bother me, in fact, I believe there was just enough detail. I liked the new characters and their relevance with the case. I also like how this is actually the mother investigating the case instead of the police or something. You certainly developed new layers in your story, like how the hack is contextual. For the theory, I'm pretty sure it has something to do with the hack. It's one of those hallucinations. Only that means that she has to have played the hack before, which is not the case. But hey, if this works for you.

Final verdict: 9.5/10