Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-24527356-20140701164135

...Wow.

Now, coming into this story, it started off a little bit...slow...but when Martin started reading Helena's father's journal, things started going at a good pace. And then the ending LEGITIMATELY made me laugh and clap my hands dramatically and slow *clap...clap...* in shock. The sad thing is that I'm doing that in front of a computer screen... XD

But seriously. Shake, this Pasta is now among the favorites of mine. I'm glad I got the opportunity to read such an amazing piece of work!

10/10.

"My compliments to the chef! This Pasta tastes amazing!"

''FM, the human God. 16:41, July 1, 2014 (UTC)''MaxCarnage