Talk:Life's Confection/@comment-29502200-20160930050701

Review time

Title: It's a decent title

Story: It's a bit cliche, and feels as if it drags along even though it's a short story. I deffinitly like the whole "the white candy represents your life" aspect of the story, that was an interesting twist. But the rest of the story was average at best.

Ending: I don't get it. "You can't taste anything if you don't have a mouth anymore." Are you saying the person committing the ritual died? It went completely over my head.

Overall: 5/10 - An average ritualpasta