Talk:Dream/@comment-8470110-20130906001714

It was an interesting read and the lack of 'creepyness' is forgiveable. The detail was pretty good and I was curious to see what events would occur. I'm aware that dreams usually don't make sense, but I can't help but feel unsatisfyed with this story. I can't really review this all that well because this is a retelling of a dream you had. So for that, I'm not giving this a score. I can definately say though that 'the tower' concept has great potential for a creppypasta.

-Sshakenbakee