Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-29588684-20160508211417

This was very suprising. The visuals are weird, and make the reader creeped out with just the visuals alone. The story is vivid enough to be alone with no pictures in it, but that is my take. Story wise, it's a intresting and long inrtoduction and it builds up with normal gameplay to bizzare gameplay.

The ending turns out to really sound like a real person actually does, when seeing the screen, she gets an abortion. The only crituque is the 'why'. How can such a thing happen to a normal cartidge? Will her baby refuse to die in the clinic? The last one might add to the story a lot. Like in V, how the duaghter gives birth to a baby from her alien boyfriend, which comes out is

That stuff adds more frighting stuff to a creepypasta. This is a very well done pasta, and this can be a classic pasta right next to Slenderman. Well done, Urkle! 8.8/10