Talk:An Awful Life/@comment-24240632-20130714035040

First let me start by saying this was interesting. With that being said let's begin.

Description: 7/10 - Not too much to say here the way you wrote it matched the story, but once again I feel half empty with this pasta.

Plot: 7/10 - I love mindf*ck pastas and this was a descent one, but the strength of the beginning was weak and seemed like a lame excuse to begin your story, but not bad.

Entertainment: 8/10 - Once again like I said before I love mindf*cks and this one wasn't bad, but even though this pasta is extremely short I still got bored a little way in until I reached the end which luckily wan't too far away.

Overall: 7.5/10 - Good. This pasta was quite enjoyable, but got a little boring because things weren't described too well.

"A pasta you'll enjoy and is fun to read, but after reading it once... I wouldn't read it a second time."

- Marcus