Talk:The Origin of Cruentus Demonia/@comment-6470295-20130215213219

Yeaaaaah, this.

This isn't too bad, and i did like the kinda insane personality of the main character, but the "THIS IS REAL GUIS TOHTHAHHLEHH" thing at the top REALLY killed it for me. And i mean really, really killed it. It's that kind of thing that ruins a story, simply called "You tried too hard".

The actual story is nice, but the use of faceboook is just weird and meh. What kind of demon would possess a social site? The images are also..really, really cheesy. The kind of things you hear and see in the  first Resident Evil.

I'll just put this here..

5/10