Talk:Have a nice day/@comment-11366536-20150120171425

Like Urkelbot said below, the story is essentially a mess, as it is very frustrating to read due to grammar.

The story is horrifyingly cliche'd, and doesn't make much sense. What did the clerk at the Game Store had to do with anything in the story?

The story isn't scary either. It's pretty much just 'Blood Blood BLOOOD GUTS GORE A STRANGE GAME NOSTALGIAAAAAAAA'