Talk:Doom The Final Secret/@comment-8198649-20140605053802

I know nothing about doom for the most part, so I'll only judge the writing.

First off for a first pasta (its never an excuse but its usually a good thing to mention) its written incredibly well. I'd expect this more from a veteran than a newbie; do you have experience for writing? Or did your past school not totally suck? Aside from some repetition and typos I say you did damn good in that department.

For the story it was well paced,  believable set up (at least thats what I've heard of people that age), and aside from some cliches, its golden. Bravo!

Im gonna give it an 8/10. I normally dont give a number, but I felt I should this time.