Talk:One/@comment-24240471-20131016213442

Pretty good, the build up was pretty good, it started off as an average day and it slowly ended up turning into a nightmare, i quite like the mistery behind the man and the note and everything overall, theres a sense of creepyness to it, i do hoewever have some complains, and its that, it keeps so many information away from the reader that kinda drives me away, i mean, you dont have to reveal everything, mistery is a nice creepy factor, but if you keep away that much from the reader, he is going to end up confused and kinda turned off, the ending was creepy enough, but it think it was not in the right context, since i was left with a "WTF??" expression and in the wrong way, since...well...since im left do judge what happened to him, and i still dont know the cause of it, overall pretty good and interesting creepypasta, pretty innovative in my oppinion, great build up, interesting ending, but...too much mistery just kinda drives me away.