Thread:SomeOrdinaryGamers/@comment-8470110-20141010043027/@comment-5757829-20141020032809

At a first glance It's quite nice! I really enjoyed the nods and so forth and especially the gritty tone you set but I felt it was a little too long and would prefer it shorter then it is now? I like things to have a little vagueness because it gives my imagination something to shoot for but finding it can be very tough so on that it's really based on fine tuning. In the end it's really awesome and you really have something awesome bro!