Talk:The Dark Dratini/@comment-26480939-20160826191756

This isn't too bad, in my opinion. I like the idea of truly evil/corrupted Pokémon quite a bit.

But the gore is a tad bit excessive. I recommend you leave the worst to the reader's imagination, rather than overtly describe it. It's scarier that way. And there's some capitalization issues as well. Types are always capitalized in Pokémon. The attack 'Telepathy' is spelled wrong as well.

Other than those, there's nothing really wrong with this pasta. Good job.

DAE Rating: 9/10 Very good, only small improvements needed.

Also, would you mind if I did a sprite edit of Dratini to make it look like the one in this 'pasta? I have an interest in spriting, and I'd like to make a contribution to this site with my art skills.