Talk:EMOLGA/@comment-8470110-20150322234028

Though a few things felt a bit out of place, I liked this story. The pacing was pretty good and the protagonist dealt with the situation realistically. There were a couple times where I felt there could have been a bit more build up to the ending (maybe Emolga intrudes more than a couple times which starts to grate on the protagonist), maybe things would have felt more justified near the end. Regardless, this was an entertaining story and I did like it. With a bit more build up to the reveal at the end, this can be a great story.

Rating: 7.5/10

-Sshakenbakee