Talk:Отважный Конан/@comment-7706473-20130722054329

Очень хорошо! That being said, I have one very, very minor complaint - I'm assuming you were going for brave Conan; The above should read Otvazhnii Konan, not Doblestnyy. Don't worry about the ii versus yy thing, romanization is weird and stupid. I'm not sure where you got the d from, but other than that (and the fact I would've chosen Cмелый Конан for lyricism, though it would be a bit funny when romanized)... This was very nice, indeed!

There's a lot I liked. The story is concise, not once leaving focus from the weird game cabinet and the effects on the narrator. It's not too long or too short, the events are unexplained but bizarre, we can establish a lot from Mr. Windsor's character from the few lines he has - and the ending is sudden, terrifying, and finally extremely satisfying.

I wrote a story sometime back called 'Generation' that explored my vague memories of Soviet Era import/export games, shareware and the like, and so I might be slightly biased; but I just really like this story. I'd go so far to say I'm amazed that I'm the first comment, though slightly pleased at the same time. Again - the ending is just fantastic, very unlike most endings in other stories - there is much left unsaid, and that will forever be unsaid, and that is how it should be.

Please have a sweatpea blossom, and thank you for a wonderful story. I'm very glad my evening of random browsing brought me here.