Talk:Legion/@comment-15963904-20140216111100

To be honest, I didn't find it a mindfuck, but only a list of unfortunate events. And to be honest, the read slightly bored me. It just didn't have any oomph to it. The words were kinda dull, and the layout was a bit misplaced. I mean, that last sentence. Does it even relate to the pasta? At all? I really don't know. It just needs some more tweaks here and there, but for now, I don't really think it would gain my vote for CPotM.

Rating: 4.25/10

"It just bored me, to be honest. I found it dull, and just overall, plain. Good luck in your future pastas..."

-> Morgan.