Talk:Four Letters/@comment-7706473-20130910153539/@comment-5245439-20130923021736

Sorry for my late reply Storm!

My friend who I showed this pasta too said the exact same thing as you about James Brown; he's a believable human being. And I do like to write believable characters. It just makes sense to me, or as you say, I just have a knack for it :D

Originally, for that BEN reference, I wanted the Gamestop clerk to say it. But I did a bit of research and saw that the pasta was made 3 years after 2007! Yikes! So I had to scrap that. But something nagged at me to make a reference somehow, and at the end, I saw an opening.

I'm glad I'm improving with my pasta skills! It's true, there would've been a happier ending if he did trust his psychologist, but life doesn't always give the happier ending, and certainly not creepypastas!

I feel this is my best work so far (Majestic's Game too long and Peripheral Vision too short), and while I've taken a bit of a hiatus right now (just occasionally contributing to Different Pairs of WIngs), I still hope to improve as a pasta maker and a writer in general.

I had the inspiration to make this long ago, which is why my special thanks this time around is to every bad CoD pasta ever. Mutahar said that CoD can never make a good pasta, and I essentially wanted to prove him wrong. I've seen that Marcus has also made a great CoD pasta, and I'm hoping one of these gets to him so Muta can see the true potential of using CoD.

Say hi to your relative Tiger for me ;)

And, again, thank you for reading and reviewing!