Talk:The Unfortunate Last Name/@comment-24139390-20131108171930

OH now I know what you meant by the ========== I didn't add that, I don't know how the heck it got in there. I was wondering if you put that there maybe. When you first pointed it out, I didn't know what you were referring to.

Anyway, yes I enjoyed writing it, and I guess I wanted my character to "roam" the world to warn others, and decide to go into a computer to write it. I wasn't really going for "believable" I suppose, since it was my first try. And I hate gore, even if it adds more "realism" to the story, and in movies or stories, I hate jump scares even more, so I would never use either of them.

And I guess I totally missed integrating it into the story that Alma was supposed to notice that my character went dressed as her, but seeing she had the same "unfortunate last name", she got angry.

But anyway that was really good advice, thank you so much for taking the time to help me out! I do have one more question though: What font do I use? I really have no idea. And I never even saw the font button when I was writing the story on here either.