Talk:I'm Free... AT LAST/@comment-12676723-20131031191827

You need to use paragraphs overwise it's becomes a bit tricky to follow. A change in time, place, topic and when somebody else speaks is where you should add paragraphs.

I would have like to have a clue or some idea of why all this was going on.

But on a postive note I do like the idea of a Burried Alive or White Hand prequel in the sense that we see the origins.