Talk:Checkmate/@comment-24540056-20140828140049

It's an interesting theory. I've never seen anyone on this wiki do a theory (or pasta, for that matter) on chess. It's interesting, and while short, I do like it. The grammar has a few errors, but nothing too bad (*Cough* Pokemon Blood Red *Cough*). I will say, however, that the flow of the story is very choppy, and phrases such as "they having their theory that we are all on a chess board and we are all kings until we cant move no more" don't exactly roll off the tongue too well. It's short and sweet. I give this pasta a 5/10