Talk:I Won't Leave You/@comment-24813681-20140707192607

This is not a good creepypasta, as it tends to neglect being a creepypasta for a cliche friendship/love story that goes in circles anoccasionally drops a cliche moral, the names are ridiculous, really, Lonliness? That is the worst name I have ever seen, the characters themselves are bland, and cliche and the whole thing reads like a bad fanfiction.