Talk:Nightmare Fuel: Can You Survive?/@comment-7706473-20140531221031

Wow, this was atually pretty cool and unique - I'll start with the elements that kind of grappled with my sense of immersion. Most notably, the username of the individual who ropes the narrator into this and the fact that the narrator is all 'Oh, and by the way, I stumbled into a torture porn site' and doesn't really give two iotas of care. Plus, would you just randomly click a link on a torture porn site? A download link? Without any warning? On a black screen?

That being said - the meat of the story and the 'game' itself are wonderfully weird and creepy, and the ending, though somewhat telegraphed, felt great. I feel like after joining the ranks of those lost in the endless dreamscape, the narrator might slowly twist and change until they resemble one of their own nightmare creatures as well - but that's just me. What was really effective was how 'dreamlike' this story felt. It reminded me of a story from way back when - not a creepypasta, but one I enjoyed writing all the same.

Very good. A ring of fairy toadstools for a gateway to the lands under the hill.