Talk:Doctor/@comment-24181739-20140704050044

What's going on?! Why did I expect a higher score than this deserves?!

This pulls the reader in, as it did me. But that is one of the virtues to an otherwise dissapointing story.

The writing's good, I could grasp almost everything. But that's one of the drawbacks - Some things are just TOO hard to grasp. The darkness cliche is there - Why darkness? Why not a bright white room, so bright you can't see?!

And the formatting, I've never said that, but it's BROKEN. The words are super small, and hard to read. And without the formatting, it's what I call; JUST. TOO. LONG. A chore to read, in fact.

7.65 / 18.50, 41.351%, or an F.