Talk:Attrition of War/@comment-8198649-20140711174451

white gown and crown told me gardevoir (well that and the powers and stuff the girls do)... then again I was literally talking about pokemon beforehand and by that point it reveals the mindfuck, sooooo...

For the most part its well written aside from some grammar and spelling errors. Its of a good length so that you could get to know the characters better. I like it.

btw, what pokemon are daria and caroline? Unless this guy is the really tall guy.... tbh i can't tell. (then I'd assume daria was the florette )