Talk:Spongebob Credits/@comment-11366536-20150530013725

Good start... Bad ending.

I'll be completely honest, the beginning of the Story had me truly intruiged. I spotted no grammar errors as well as a well explained exposition goes. Like I said, it was interesting.

That's where the actual description of the episode comes along. It started out pretty decent for a Lost-Episode Pasta until you killed it near the end with the cliche's such as the loud screams and whispers throughout the video not to mention "Side-Effects" people had.

In short - Good Creepypasta; Could use work on the Middle and Ending.