Talk:Columbine High School/@comment-173.28.57.175-20150407233957

This pasta is actually pretty okay, but it could use a little more description. It kept my attention to the end, but it really didn't scare me as much as other creepypastas do. I think once you work a little more on it, it'll become more scary. I like the idea, and the pasta sure does have potential. I have faith you can turn this into something better.