Talk:Gm Construct Framework/@comment-7706473-20130718101341

Thank you for not finishing with ... "And please go easy on it!" That alone makes me respect you even more.

I - well, I really liked this. I haven't used Gmod too much; I'd prefer to doodle thoughts, generally. But I instantly got the plausibility and fear presented here, and what's more I really liked how it was done. Very little was answered, which is one of my favorite things. What was the Framework? Why - far worse then doing something unpleasant - did it choose to let the Narrator go..?

By leaving those questions unanswered, I think the pasta was superior to the few lines of text and repeated image that the Epilogue added. If it's all the same to you, I like the ending that simply ends with the narrator badly disturbed, but passing the message forward - as we, the listeners snort and mutter "Yeah, right!"... but then make a conscious effort to stay away from that building next time we play Gmod.

A lobelia, for distinction. Especially for a first pasta!