Talk:It Was Him/@comment-25753652-20141208210250

Reading through this pasta, it was nice and clear. Good buildup and pacing throughout. However, being a comic book fan, I read 8 lines and knew instantly that this was about the Batman/Bruce Wayne. However, putting this aside, I thought it was a very nice pasta, with excellent grama, and a clear understanding of the characters and tone. But the twist, for me at least, was very easy to pick up on.

This does not detract from the overall pasta, not at all a scary read, but a very intriguing and thoughful one.

Pros:

+ Great Tone

+ Excellent grammar

+ Clear understanding of characters and moods

+ Good length, no useless exposition

+ Reader appeal

Cons:

- Predictable twist (again, this may only apply to people familiear to the character of Batman)

- Rushed depiction of Batsuit.

Verdict: 7.5/10 - A good read, with more good than bad, very little refining needed, prehaps a more vivid description of the events of the night.