Talk:Cold Water/@comment-30102911-20161129032800

I can see some of the intention of this story and it actually does give a bit of a glimpse into the mind of what a suicidal individual might be going through (I actually sort of dipped into this territory mentally when I was in my teens so I'm overall familiar with it.)  It practically feels like a story that could be seen as a very grounded idea of a horror story, although I guess it does have the problem of feeling like a poem that would be found in an emo place or someplace similar. I'm not sure if I can say that this is creepy per se but it is a fairly interesting read.