Talk:Unchθsen/@comment-26480939-20161101032330

Okay, honestly? This isn't God-awful, as Unknown Afterlife implies. I like it. Yes, there were some clichés used, and I acknowledge that. I also agree that clichés aren't inherently bad, if they're used in the right way. It was by the numbers, but entertaining to read nonetheless. I just have one little nitpick though. How did 'Chikorita' manage to talk via a GameBoy? There's no voice capabilities (either recognizing speech or making use of it) in Gen 2, AFAIK. The only games that have that capability that I know of are the HY,P! duology (Hey You, Pikachu! and Pokémon Channel, in case you didn't know) and the Gen IV core games. It would be far more believable and plausible if you used text and not speech for that part.

DAE Rating: 7/10 Some issues, but an enjoyable read regardless.