Talk:Evil Blue/@comment-25021327-20141010220639

I wouldn't mind reading through this at some point, but it's a little too long of a Wall-of-Text for me to make the effort right now. Please try to go back through and break the story up into paragraphs.

The little bit I read also seemed to have some grammar issues that might be better if proof read. For starters a lowercase " i " as a pronoun is typically frowned upon. I added a "Pending Review' Category, and if an Admin (or lately, whoever feels like it) feels so inclined they could add a "Needs Work" category, putting your pasta in jeopardy of being removed. And nobody likes that :)