Talk:Little Red Riding Hood/@comment-6794436-20150112030830

This was an incredible poem, but is it truly creepy..

Good: This pasta was exceptionally written, and you show your extensive vocabulary and your amazing poetic chops. There aren't any grammar errors that I can see, and you paint a vivid picture with your words. All in all, this is just great from a writing standpoint!

Bad: This pasta can be a bit confusing at times, as the plot strays from one point to the other a bit abruptly on occasions, but that isn't too troublesome. My only other problem with the pasta is that it really isn't creepy, and I understand that being creepy wasn't the sole purpose, but it still should be at least a bit unnerving. This story is just about death, which occasionally just that premise can make for a chilling tale, but that didn't really work out in this one.

Verdict: 7/10- This was an ingeniously written poem, and it has little to no grammar errors. However, this isn't really that creepy and sometimes the plot can be a bit confusing.

-Incorrect3