Talk:Legend of Zelda: The Waker/@comment-11366536-20150224172157

It's Okay, I guess.

For a First Creepypasta, you did pretty well Grammar-wise. I would suggest that you separate the paragraphs a bit. There's a moderate amount of Cliche's in this story, which kind of killed the mood a bit, but didn't kill the entire story. The story was kind of rushy, and wouldn't sometimes explain things properly.

On a Good note, It is Pretty Original and Fresh. It at least emitts a feeling of paranoia on the reader, unlike most First-Pastas.

Good job, writing. Keep it up!

Verdict : 6/10 (Okay)