Talk:Amazing World of Gumball : The E-mail, The/@comment-24082398-20170308162817/@comment-24082398-20170315012231

3/14/2017

Hey, thanks for being such a good sport! It's not every day people react this nicely to being put in Needs Work. I looked over the story and saw the edits. They fixed up the narrative a bit and I found it easier to swallow, so I'm gonna remove the tag!

For a first attempt at a pasta, this was really well-done. You didn't overuse the cliches in the genre, you tried a fresh take on a tired medium, and you even fixed the story up after being told about it not being up to par. I really can't tell you how refreshing this is. Thank you so much!

The story will now be marked as Fixed! Please keep writing! I'm interested to see what else you come up with :)