Talk:Sonic Xtreme - A Strange Disc/@comment-11366536-20150722003122

This feels pretty... Meh...

I'll say, the story looked pretty good when I started reading it. The Grammar was perfect, the plot was very well-explained and the story introduced itself quite okay. The plot feels kind of similar to Genocide City, but it wasn't too similar. I liked how you implemented the game starting to glitch out by creating various "Void" Zones.

The entire story was executed perfectly until the ending. The ending to me felt out of context and cliche'd. The story could've ended instead with some kind of eerie bug that prevents the player from pressing onwards or something, but no.

All in all, I think this was a pretty great read.

Verdict - 7.5/10 (Great)