Talk:A Place in Legend/@comment-5025667-20130828163601

Well, this is the first creepypasta of yours that I read beginning to end since I wasn't distracted or pulled off this page. While I don't see anything creepy in this, that mindfuck at the end was pretty damn good. Not to mention the describtion you used for the cave and the man inside was so very good to the point where I am jealous of it. So, lacking creepyness for a magnificant mindfuck and details that of a professional writer seems like an even trade for me. 8/10