Talk:Tails the Third/@comment-6786644-20130227195633/@comment-6470295-20130227200434

Might want to fix that wall of text, there.

Aside from that, this story isn't too bad. It doesn't use the oh-so-typical SUPER SPECIAL CREEPYPASTA TOMATO SAUCE (Disclaimer: Sauce may or may not be made with bone marrow.) and other clichés. The one cliché i see is that the thing is based around tails. This is VERY typical in pastas. But yeah. Aside from that, you didn't do too bad! :D Pretty short, though.

7.25/10