Talk:A Message From Me to You/@comment-25021327-20141220230406

Haha, that was a pretty fun little read. I'll say that I felt this story was short, and to be honest, a little cheesey, but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it.

I think it pretty much does what it sets out to do as far as setting up a somewhat frantic, conspiratorial, feel, then pulling the little swerve at the end. And though I got a bit of a chuckle out of it, I can see how this could possibly unnerve some readers.

As I mentioned, the "I'm you from the future, look out!" theme feels a kid of silly, and the hidden message is a little cliché. There are some unanswered questions (in addition to the standard time travel logistics which are always up for interpretation) but that isn't the point of the story. It's a quick read with a pretty fun twist at the end, and I think it accomplishes what it set out to do in a span of only a few sentences :)