Talk:Metroid Corrupted./@comment-31553783-20171103133301

Honestly, this wasn't all that terrible. I mean, yeah you did mention Gamestop which is a big no no when you're writing gaming Creepypastas, but no hyper realistic blood, no dead bodies lying all over the place, and no spooky ghosts or dolls flying out of your TV screen. Overall, it's not bad. Please keep writing. Keep improving, because holy hell, there's a lot of potential in this story.