Talk:A One, Are You?/@comment-26974903-20150727205909

You know, the thing about this pasta is that based on all the cliched and really weird elements of this pasta, it seems like it should be getting reviews that are worse than what's its been getting. I mean seriously, the game talking to you? Fawful merging with the protagonist to become an indestructible monster? Seems farfetched, even for a creepypasta. And yet... there's also elements to this story that are totally new and strange! Somehow, this pasta blended cliched and over-the-top elements, with new, and never-before-seen amazing elements! Coincidence leading to creepiness leading to tragedy, all wrapping up with the bittersweet ending to end all bittersweet endings. The only problems I have are with the very last two sentences about uploading this story to the wiki, and the picture. I think that it's a nice ending, but it could've been worded better, and the picture, although a good start, seems a little sloppy. But those are just my insignificant issues, and other than that its perfect. I see no reason why Mutahar shouldn't turn this into a video and upload it. Rating: 20/10