Talk:Sweet Kiss/@comment-25021327-20140627224238

I've never been a huge Pokémon fan, so I haven't read a ton of poképastas. Therefor, I'm not sure if the whole pokémon being attracted to, or falling for its trainer, or player is used often. That being said it is a concept open to lots of different interpretations, and I enjoyed the way it was presented here.

I thought the pacing was pretty good, and I liked that the phenomenon in the story was presented pretty realistically. Sure, It's quite unrealistic, and supernatural to have a player feel the touch of the in game Gardevoir, but this story didn't go way over the edge with it. So many pastas have players feeling pain, or being scarred by in game events, I like that this one just hints at the sensations of being touched by someone who isn't there, which I think most people can relate to. It also leaves it up to the reader to decide if the mark on the narrator's neck was real, if others can see it, or if it's just something he notices.

So, from my limited background in pokémon, and pastas/fanfiction surrounding it, I can say that I liked this story. It was a nice length, and fairly concise, and kept things relatively realistic :)