Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog 3 Hacked Cartridge (Genesis)/@comment-28916908-20160917153249

I like the story and its pretty good! But heres some things you could fix.

Beginning: Pretty good.

Middle: Good

End:  Its awesome but some parts are kinda dull, Well i guess since its the aftermath.

Grammar: Pretty good but some parts need fixing.

10/10 The story is very good, AND I MEAN VERY GOOD. Heck it was even read by muthar! You did a nice job with this story! And i hope you make more!