Talk:The Tears of Parents/@comment-26480939-20160814145553

o_o *eye twitches* All those grammar and punctuation errors...

Okay, this was good up until the Hoenn part. That's where it got into the absurd category. First off, did you even play RSE/ORAS? Because it sure seems like you didn't. First off, the evil teams of Gen III NEVER tortured Pokémon with whips, shots, knives and poison. Unless you read PokéSpe, they might have brought those up, but I'm basing my opinion on the games themselves.

Now, the Gen IV part was fairly believable, up until you mentioned Team Galactic chopping off the limbs of Pokémon. That is never done in the games proper AFAIK. The worst they did was forcibly extract the jewels from the Lake Trio to create the Red Chain.

The Gen V part was fairly reasonable compared to the Gen III and IV parts.

Overall, the pasta could be improved by correcting all those grammatical, punctuation, and slight spelling errors. Work on proper spacing, adding some punctuation, and proper spelling. Because the errors make this rather difficult to read.

Rating: 7/10 Decent, but needs some fixes.