Talk:Diary of a Madman/@comment-8198649-20140115231146

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theres a lot of exclamation marks in there, broseph. Especially in the first paragraph. Exclamation points arent exactly a good thing in horror; subtly is more where its at.

Also, categories, and I would like to mention that there was barely any build up, and didnt exactly feel like a creepypasta. I felt more like I was reading about rocks before geting "hail satan" thrown in my face.

There is a lot of room for improvement here, so keep going.