Talk:"Whatever Happened To... Robot Jones" Lost Episode: "A Very Robot Jones Christmas"/@comment-11366536-20150502001550

Every good story has a Train Wreck somewhere inside it.

This story is a primary example of this phrase. While the Grammar, Pacing, and the Way the story started out were pretty good, the Cliche's were everywhere in the middle section, killing all and any creepiness from the plot. The Ending feels rushed and predictable, not to mention the sheer amount of unoriginality in the Creepypasta overall. (It feels like somebody rewrote 'The Amazing World of Gumball' with a different title and mildly changed features.)

Honestly, It's about as Average as a story can get.

Verdict : 5/10 (Average)