Talk:Driven/@comment-17737991-20140205194730

There's a lot of grammar issues. I can fix them if you'd like, but since you don't seem to care about how well received this is, I can understand if you don't care about the grammatical issues either.

Anyway, for pulling it out your ass, this isn't bad. The creepiness could be amped up a bit though, maybe have the guy do something more disturbing to his victim than just laughing. Eh, do you even want feedback on this? TOO BAD, YOU GOT SOME :3

Seriously though, it's not that bad, especially since it was pulled out your ass.