Talk:My Summer Job - A Five Nights at Freddy's Creepypasta/@comment-6794436-20141213173112

WALL OF FUCKING TEXT

Also, this is a FNAF pasta, arguably the worst kind of pasta, and this story proves it. First of all, this isn't creepy at all, it just emphasises the creepiness of an already creepy game! Horror games tend to make crappy pastas, and as said before, this is no different.

The story is incredibly hard to read and is very boring. I could barely make it through this pasta, and that is not a good sign...

The pasta is also chock full of cliches and an abundance of spelling/grammar issues. Fix the formatting, shorten the story, make it interesting, and change the subject and maybe this story won't be up for debate on being in needs work.

Verdict: 3/10- Deserving of needs work unless there are a lot of changes to the premise, and it the formatting is fixed. Also a good proofreading would be nice...