Talk:Man of Needles and Guns/@comment-25021327-20150317221713

I enjoyed this one quite a bit. I liked the pacing here, as I tend to enjoy stories that are paced a little more slowly than a lot of other folks. Although not much action happens between the beginning of the pasta and the end, I didn't feel bored or impatient with the story. Part of this may be due to the fact that I think that the descriptions were well done here. I felt like I could easily envision everything that was being described.

I think the plot is pretty interesting, and though the ending reveal almost comes off as being a little contrived, I still enjoyed it, and it does have some thought provoking, if lofty implications. Also I felt that the narrative switching from having been implied 3rd person (that's what I though anyway) to 1st person near the end worked well and was kind of a nice little twist.

Only one or two little typos, nothing at all that distracts from the story. I think this is a good little story, it's a pretty quick read, and I'm glad I gave it a look :)