Talk:7-Eleven Special/@comment-7706473-20130910150832

I really liked this.

To be honest, I don't know if this is so much a modern creepypasta as giving off that seem, disturbing, small-website-hosted-on-geocites feel that a lot of the earliest, scariest stories had. Don't go into a room at midnight, don't ask the attendant about the supposedly demolished wing, and whatever you do don't look at it if you hear crying. Simple instructions given to a rapt audience, and what they find is...

After the ending, I reread the story and noticed several phrases that only made it all the stronger. I especially enjoyed the idea that Sterling's undervalues their ingredients, at least according to some - I, for one, just think they're determined to aid lost pioneers - and their descendents - the old, familiar way. And despite the last rule being the 'shocker'...

The first one is the most delightfully creepy.

A scarlet fuschia - for good taste.