Talk:Grin/@comment-17737991-20141205112240/@comment-25293160-20141207163002

Alright, changes have been made to the story...a lot of changes, I do see what you mean and have taken it on board and fixed the plot holes, the only thing that was a genuine mistake was the part with the orificas as that part was a typo (the rest was either a cock up in the story or a spelling error).

Now there is no conclusion from the police, the Grin is now only mentioned as a man (because a lot of people say that it's just a man because clowns are one of the things that people are most afraid of and the Grin takes the shape of them when it takes a victim). Next the reason that the victims don't fight back is first because of the Grin's screech causing paralysis.

If there is any further changes that need to made, let me know. Also I did only spend about half an hour on this so was expecting someone to point out the faults, so thanks for letting me know.