Talk:What Have I Created?/@comment-6418997-20131112051829

Okay first thing I gotta say, I love the twist at the end. The story itself was really original, it well deserves that category.

protagonist- was very good, and I though it was very interesting instead of God it was death. The only thing I don't like about him is one we don't know much about him, but then again I don't think your supposed to. Something I really liked is that he has been collecting souls for so long that he is just used to it, which is what made it believeable why he fell in the trap. You make feel bad for the character I think that in real life we do things that we regret. The only thing I thought was flawed is why didn't Death try and lead him in the right direction. So I really liked the "hero" of the story. 9.5/10

antagonist- Im not quite sure if death is the antagonist or if its lucifer. But im just gonna say its lucifer in this case. You portrayed lucifer pretty well, it was obivious that he was already planning this right in the beginning, and he used things death wanted which is how I think the devil works. 9/10

story- I would have liked for it to be longer but it still was very good. I already said how it is was orignal. 8.9/10

analysis- 9.2/10 very good, if I hadn't already voted for CPotM I would have voted this. Next month. :D