Talk:April 12th Mind Story/@comment-24540056-20150111145345

“July 9th, 2013

''The subject appears to be in bad condition. This should’ve been brought to our attention sooner.”''

“August 16th, 2013

''The subject’s symptoms are getting worse. I hope it doesn’t progress. Otherwise, it could lead to something very serious.”''

“August 29th, 2013

''We’ve been conducting more interactive experiments rather than observing. We won’t get anything done by standing around and watching. We need to get more involved with the subject. Otherwise, our whole cause will be wasted.”''

“September 5th, 2013

''Our subject is getting violent. We’ve managed to calm it down but we fear it will retaliate again if we don’t carefully manage it.”''

“September 13th, 2013

''Funding for our research is gradually decreasing. The ones who asked us to start this project aren’t seeing results fast enough and are growing impatient. If they don’t get what they want soon, I fear our research will have to end. We need to get results as soon as possible.”''



That's when I knew this story was a good one. The mindfuck was expected. I knew that Helena wasn't real, right from the whole "Phase" thing with the parents being concerned for Martin. Maybe it's just because I've worked with mindfucks for so long I've desensitized myself, where everything can be drawn from the slightest of clues. But what do I think of the story?

10/10. I am fucking confident in saying this. The whole test subject thing was wonderful, and actually threw me off for a brief moment. It drew me in more, and this is the first creepypasta I am confident in voting for CPOTM. (And yes, I only vote for 10/10s.)

Give yourself a 21-gun salute and walk into the sunset while the credits roll, pal. You fucking earned it.