Talk:Pigtails/@comment-6418997-20131103022555/@comment-11386456-20131103204111

First off, I like your user name and I think it's fantastic that you were actually in pigtails when you read this. There's less of a cliffhanger if you watch the video I linked to on my YouTube channel. I inserted a sound effect or two to illustrate the events I envisioned as the ending. But as for the story itself, I do like a nice ambiguous ending that leaves some things open to interpretation of the reader.

As for why he targetted this specific girl, I look at it like he had a bit of a fetish before, but it evolved into an obsession due to a number of circumstances. Mainly, the puzzling fact that she stood motionless in the middle of a bustling city. Through his eyes, this makes her seem poetic and beautiful for going against the grain. Admittedly, when I was having the video game moment in Saints Row 2 that inspired this story, I too was wondering why the NPC wasn't moving like the rest of them. It's possible that this entire creepypasta was brought about by an outdated game's somewhat faulty AI.

As for your rating, I'm glad you liked it. I would also like to thank you for reading and especially for your feedback. :-)