Talk:The "Unknown"/@comment-11037493-20130626025920

It was alright. The ending seemed a bit rushed to explain why you were able to write it. I mean, hiding in a box... You Solid Snake or something?

Either way, the antagonist was quite good, but a few things weren't very well explained.

Rating:

-1 for grammar & spelling

+6 for good storyline

+3 for originality

-2 for plot holes.

+1 for making the protagonist actually attempt to call 911

7/10 - Great story.