Talk:死がまもなく来ます/@comment-13930237-20131227234048

Very dark, and quite depressing. This was very well written, and it's quite original in my opinion. My only flaws was that the narrative could of been extended a bit more, and the characters felt a little difficult to get into. However, it was very creepy. and you build the tension up very well.

I will give this creepypasta a 8.4/10.

Keep up the good work.