Talk:A Spider Web/@comment-5025667-20131105024903

As the others have said before me, the plot was confusing and probably could be explained in detail within the poem itself rather than the author's note, to make it more easy to understand of course. That said, the basis of the story revolving around conversations does serve this justice in terms of its theme. Perhaps if it was a bit longer and more drawn out, this could be even better. 6/10