Talk:Super Mario Bros. 8 Pages edition/@comment-7027372-20130411220701

There's to much going on here for me to care. Montana? So did she kill herself? Did she run away to be with Slenderman? I just don't know. If I'm missing something please tell me. So this kid is not into horror or creepypastas, but he's being himself, but he also wants to be a goth which is who he actually is which is who he wants to be? I'm sorry but this is bad. The only redeeming quality is the 8-Bit Slender pictures. If you were to make the game, rewrote this, it could be featured on Haunted Gaming. In it's current state I give it a 3 Pi (3.14) out of 20.