Talk:Kura/@comment-9281274-20151103043844

Damn, that was cruel. Anyway, as a whole this was amazing!

Good: Both of the characters were incredibly sympathetic and interesting to read. I found myself caring both for Rick and David as they unwittedly made the biggest mistake of their lives. Even Kura was fun to read about, in a dark rooting for the empire sort of way. I do like the fact that David made it back to the real world....hopefully that's what happened. Please let it be what happened. The imagery here was nicely detailed and descriptive, I could easily imagine that hellish hopsital. The ending too was nice and scary, and delightfully cruel. Also really digging Rick's new name.

Bad: Not much ,really. There was an odd thing were some sentences would be in italics and the next sentence would be normal and then the sentence after that would be italiced, when it looks like the whole pasage was supposed to be in italics. I would've preferred an ending where they both got out but I like the neding I got just fine.

Overall: 8/10!