Talk:Breakfast (Micro Fiction)/@comment-29502200-20161010183005/@comment-26268104-20161010190310

Thanks for your critique. However, my point in this micro fiction was to hint at a larger story, mainly, by letting the audience imagine what may have caused the bombs or what may have caused Robert to give up. As for the character, while, this is micro fiction, and trying to squeeze character development into a few paragraphs, or in this case, one, can come off as rather awkward. Also, you said "It portrays suicide as the only answer, which is terrible." Well, terrible is a wee bit vague, and subjective.

Anyway, like I said earlier, thanks for your time.