Talk:The Battle of Flight/@comment-6794436-20150418174541

Hmm... I was recommended to read this one... how did it fair in my eyes?

Good: Well, this pasta was pretty original, as I've only seen one other pasta about the topic this one is about. This pasta also uses some great vocabulary and has some great, vivid descriptions that really let the reader picture what is going on. The pacing was quite good, and the mindfuck was executed well, as I did not see it coming. The blood and gore were used in an effective way, and the story overall was quite suspensful and intense.

Bad: There were a few grammar errors that became quite annoying over time, and the pasta did feel as though it dragged on a bit given its length. At some parts, I did become a bit bored while reading, and although the mindfuck was quite good, it made the pasta a bit more humourous than creepy. A few parts of the story were unnecessary, and I feel as though this pasta really could've been trimmed down to make it more engaging and concise.

Verdict: 7/10- I did enjoy reading this piece, although it was very long and felt as though it dragged on. The mindfuck made it more humerous in my eyes, and this pasta could certainly use a good trimming.

-Incorrect3