Talk:Hair/@comment-6794436-20150506011303

Sorry for taking so long, Sif. I've been busy as of late and haven't had time to really sit down and write a review...

Good: Well, as always, this was a good mindfuck. I really wasn't expecting the ending when it came, something that I seldom say towards most mindfuck pastas. This was also written quite nicely, with some great vocabulary used and very few grammatical errors. There was great buildup and pacing, which really heightened the effect of the mindfuck. I never thought I'd see a TV Show mindfuck done right, let alone a Courage the Cowardly Dog one!

Bad: This pasta is really nearly impeccable in every aspect other than creepiness. This pasta really isn't very creepy at all, which was kind of dissapointing considering the episode it was based off of was one of the creepiest in the series in my opinion. I feel like this could've been executed a bit better to make it much creepier, even if that meant straying away from the source material if needed.

Verdict: 7/10- This pasta really is nearly perfect. There were very few grammatical errors, and the only real thing that dragged this pasta down was the lack of creepiness even though it easily could've became much creepier.

-Incorrect3