Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog: The Craving of Death/@comment-25249478-20141231023949/@comment-25249478-20141231032325

Thanks for fixin' it up. :)

Now, 'bout the pasta. Not bad, but nothing great. Definitely one of the better pastas being posted here nowadays, which is good. The grammar is nice. Not too many typoes, and the ones that are present don't affect the feeling of the story. Now, this wasn't exactly the creepiest story I've read. It's got its moments, but as a whole, not the scariest story I've read.

Overall, I'd give this a 6.5/7 out of 10. Good work, but the horror element could be worked on a little more.

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 03:23, December 31, 2014 (UTC)