Talk:Roots/@comment-6418997-20131222051327

Wow I like it. Its a short poem about sin, war, and corruption. I really like the concept here and your word choice was very well chosen. The title of the poem is perfect for the message your trying to say. It gives a deeper and better understanding of this piece. I wish it was longer, maybe show how all that stuff started or show more evidence about our world. 8.5\10 :)