Talk:Kisses & Kerosene/@comment-6794436-20150212194653

This is just more weird than anything, and is just pretty much BDSM. This poem breaks one of the biggest rules of creepypastas, don't make gore the entire centerpiece. I ended up having to skip a few parts because this was just pointless torture. Not really creepy, not really unsettling, just plain old torture. Now, don't get me wrong. In some cases, gore can be used effectively, such is the case with "The Dating Game", but a poem that is just a description of the narrator torturing someone isn't creepy. I would've given this a standard review, but this isn't really a pasta or a very good poem.

Verdict: 4/10- It is written well, but it really is just a description of torture which breaks one of the biggest rules of creepypastas. Gore for the sake of gore is not creepy..

-Incorrect3