Talk:Nightoss Pastas/@comment-24582398-20140302222924

7/10. Fix the typos and mistakes, and it would be a 9/10. It's a genuinely good Pokemon creepypasta. It doesn't have any of the idiotic cliches of the normal ones. It manages to create a good story, and is also believable. One of the other little issues is him getting this after the GBA and Gen III is out, as well as his mother being dickish and him thinking Pokemon games end.