Talk:Slender: the 9th Page/@comment-6491381-20130216194546

Let me leave my thoughts...

Well, this is many creepypasta segments smashed together. Like a sandwich. Like, if you mash peanut butter, jelly, mustard, ham, cheese, and mayonaise to a single sandwich, it tastes horrible. If you mash peanut butter and jelly into one sandwich, mustard, ham, cheese, and maybe mayonaise together in another, it makes 2 good sandwiches. You need to know what to add, how much, when, and how to make it to make a good c.pasta. Add sprinkles of uniqueness, like honey to a PB&J or bacon to a HCMM *ham cheese mustard mayo*. Just experiment and work on it. I think you can do better. Overall though, the too terribly bad. 6.9/10