Talk:Forbidden Readings/@comment-24747574-20140819081742

Well, it is not really clear to me how this is a creepypasta to be honest. It is not scary, nor is there a twist. It is just your experience. May certainly be creepy for you as the player, but it has to be scary for us as readers, you know?

Lets say you saw a big ass spider - it would be scary for you (well, maybe, idk whether you like spiders, but i.g.). Tell me that you saw a big ass spider and will say "M-m-meh...". Thats because i wasnt there and it was no threat to me. To you it was a game fucking with your mind, to us its a guy telling us that the game fucked with his mind but nothing really happened after all.

The story feels like a massive setup to a revelation or a twist, but then it just ends. Yay for Homeworld, but overall a little lackluster when it comes to an engaging story.

I know its harsh, but we can only improve with someone critisizing^^