Talk:A Slight Sensation/@comment-25021327-20141021034256

Not a bad little poem. It flows fairly well, and has some nice language in it. I see what you were going for here, and I imagine you hit the mark as far as some are concerned, for we all interpret thing sin our own unique way.

I can only speak personally, but as someone who is a little under a year removed from a very nearly fatal suicide attempt, this didn't quite capture the emotions, or responses that were rattling around in the ol' noggin for me. I feel like I know people though, who may have gone through a thought process more akin to your writing.

All that said, I did enjoy the piece. I'm also very glad to read that despite the subject matter of the writing, you have never made an attempt on your own life. Rock on