Talk:Sombrero Wearing Dinosaur/@comment-24240632-20131117214043

Sombrero Wearing Dinosaur, eh? I have nothing witty I can think of for that title.

Description: 6.0/10 - Although this story is plagued with grammatical errors, you did a good job with the pacing; It wasn't too fast and it was never at any moment too slow. You described things rather well and definetely got the creepy atmosphere down on this one by using simple, but effective words. I did find, however that the dialogue was quite a bit cheesy like, "It is if like a dinosaur did it," of course I could just be nit picking here, but I just didn't like the dialogue much.

Plot: 8.0/10 - The story was very interesting. To think that there's someone with a f*cked up mind is changing the story over and over without relent for the characters emotions is a rather creepy and original one. Of course I could just be over thinking it, but that's what I thought it was about.

Entertainment: 9.0/10 - Although I was a little turned off by the idea at first, I ended up really enjoying this.

Overall: 8.0/10 - Great.

"Odd and mysterious, this pasta will keep you on the edge of your seat."

- Marcus