Talk:Banjo's Dream/@comment-6470295-20130216015939

Now, i'm not familiar with religion since it's not my thing, but..I can definitely see the very clever implementation of the 7 Deadly Sins in this story.

And i love that to hell. Clever things like that. They make me  happy, yes they do. And Grunty's rhyming was a very good touch as well! I've read so many creepypasta where she and her sisters don't rhyme--It's glad to have one where she actually does, and where the rhymes are actually pretty clever.

You get a 8.5 out of 10 on this nifty little topaz of a gem. I'm probably a bit biased because i love clever things to oblivion, but this story..I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you write more of these in the future, sir!