Talk:Terrified/@comment-30102911-20161108020730

I guess this had a bit of originality to it although I'm not totally sure how to evaluate it properly. This story feels like a segment that was cut out of a larger one and sort of leaves the reader on the ground running without much of a clear destination. As a plus though I can say that the ambiguity behind this segment does mean it could be left open to some interpretation, although some buildup probably would have benefited the experience.