Talk:It Knocks On The Door Of Your Mind/@comment-25021327-20150106203348

I... I feel like I should be adding "Needs Work," but... I mean, if this is just a retelling of a dream the author had, then the storu and creativity maybe ought to be judged on a different scale? The story doesn't make much sense, and frankly had me giggling at the end. You were sleepwalking, and went into the garage, picked up a rubber mallet and bopped yourself in the head? As tragic as that ought to be, it makes me want to laugh.

I don't think I'm going to add the cat, although maybe something like this story should be done as a blog post instead of having its own page as a pasta. I'll... I 'll have to think about this one.