Talk:Death.../@comment-14808524-20140301001259

It's a somewhat creepy look into death. The fact that the narrator says that he's to blame makes me wonder about what he/she did. Did they kill many then killed them self? Did they accidentally set off a chain of disastrous events? I don't know, and I would want a sequel for the answer, if the creepypasta wasn't so short. The narrator seems to know how to act when death comes, which makes you think if you really know.

Story- 2/3 Length- 0/2 Creepiness- 3/4 Characters- 1/1

6/10. Not the best, but it was okay. The character depth isn't really something that's added in this type of story usually, so I can't hold it against you too much. The length was the real killer. It was too short, but luckily creepy enough to get you through. The story usually doesn't shine too much in this kind of story either, but it was enough to pull through.

Keep writing and getting better. I see potential for longer stories.