Talk:Needs Work/@comment-17737991-20150325200801

Geeze, I wonder what events could have inspired this pasta xD R.I.P. Devon. Your username was amazing. If only he'd been in his ocean home during this story ;-;

Too bad his dad didn't notice Tony leaving his computer on and wasting the fucking electricity.

Well, this certainly makes me glad that shit pasta writers in real life are too mentally deficient to figure out how to hack, and/or have PCs with parental restrictions and need mommy's permission to download hacker ware. It is concerning though, because some of these shitpasta writers truly must have something wrong in their brains if they think their stories are good. The fact that these kinds of events are technically possible, and that the shit pasta writing would probably indeed be a fucking lunatic, isn't too comforting.

What really hits home for me though is the live stream, because that's probably how it would go down in real life .-. With all the pranks people pull online, combined with the fear of contacting police and turning out to be mistaken, I can really see a group of people witness a murder online and do nothing >.<

I guess it wouldn't have mattered though, the time it'd take to call police, get them to track down the location of the stream broadcast and then to contact the local police there, he'd be dead anyway. It still bugs me though .-.

Long comment is long.

Anyway, I don't quite understand the significance of the last sentence ^^' Does he want to write more shit pastas in prison, torture inmates on livestream, brag that he murdered a member of the endangered MerMarth species, or cause hacking mayhem? (Unless not knowing his intentions is the whole point, then I guess that sentence works perfectly x3)

So, I like this story. Probably not as much as a certain parrot would, being that just seeing the title would make this the best piece of literature ever created in his eyes, but I like it ^^

Lastly, I found two small mistakes:

 "strung together my a central character."

 "only o be ridiculed"

