Talk:My Innocent Job/@comment-25021327-20150825211821

25-August-2015- I'm going to add a needs work tag here. The spelling and grammar here are in rough shape and make it hard to read this one, and in some spots hard to try to take seriously. There were issues with homophones (Words that sound alike, but are spelled differently) and I couldn't help but giggle a litte bit at the mention of a "toe-truck" instead of tow-truck.

The story itself isn't too bad, It's a short, twist ending story, and that sort of thing can work. One thing that confused me a bit was that the narrator didn;t understand why he was out of gas. If he had to fill up about halfway through the journey, it isn't too unreasonable to think he might have to fill up again after driving the other half of the trip.

Anyhow, this one needs some work with the spelling and grammar. Every sentence sould begin with a capital letter, and any time the letter "I" is used as a pronoun, it ought to be capitalized. As this is now a Needs Work page, it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved following another review. Please take some time and work on this story to lessen the chances of this happening.