Talk:The Man in My Game/@comment-24747574-20140826092413

You might want to re-read your stories before the final posting...I mean, sure, we dont all have to like satin, but its just fabric after all...you know...its silky and smooth.

Most of the spelling errors could be avoided by putting the text through auto-correct in word (or the open office equivalent, if you dont have access to microsoft office). Dont be lazy when it comes to writing.

You worked on your format, so props for that, but you might want to make your paragraphs 5-10 sentences long, depending on the content.

Try to avoid pointless separation like in:

Ten minutes later

''Mike woke up to a familiar face, Mike was shocked It was the man again! ''

And instead "Ten minutes later mike woke up to a familiar face - again it was the man!"

It makes the story tighter and therefore easier to read.