Talk:The Dark Dratini/@comment-11079349-20131011015813

i want this dratini. why? because it's black and evil and i want my alakazam to use his psychic powers to control and destroy it, or just control it. and for anyone that believes that Alakazam cant do it, you must realize that besides legendaries, alakazam is made to be the strongest psychic type, so he could not only control this dratini, but he could crush it with no more than a stray thought.

criticisms? well, the story is a bit cliche, but they fit in with the story and make it a good one. the only problem i have with this is that it relies too much on the demon aspect and that honestly takes a bit away from the whole thing. 9/10 because i would recommend this to friends.