Talk:Iuvenis Perpetuum/@comment-26480939-20160807213602

It took me until about the Day 277 point to realize that this was a Poképasta. As a huge Pokémon fan, I'm both amused and saddened that it took me so long to figure that out.

It's a novel attempt at explaining just how our lovable protagonist from the original games came to be. So congrats on trying something a little bit different. That's 9/10 right there.

Also, now that I've completed it, I realize that the tall man with a lab coat and graying hair mentioned at the start was Professor Oak. XD

So, yeah. This is pretty good. Only problems I saw were some capitalization mistakes, really. I look forward to what you can do in the future.