Talk:Creature From Below/@comment-25021327-20160811211305

11-August-2016- I'm adding a Needs Work tag to this page. The story here just feels rushed to me, and tough to understand at points. The journal format isn;t really used to its own advantage here, the story could pretty much be condensed into a normal narrative and be just as effective, if not moreso. The entries are short and leave me wondering why the writer didn;t add more than a sentence or two each day.

This one doesn't feel as creepy to me as it does just confusing. Yeah it's kind of freaky to find the journal or a crazy guy, but I don't feel like there is much more to it than that. Also, the story seems to have some grammar mistakes and odd wordings.

As this is a Needs work page, it will face deletion after about 9 days if it is not deemed adequately improved following another review.