Talk:Sonic 1 Tails/@comment-25021327-20140831190235

This is an okay pasta for what it is. It doesn't do anything too original or fantastic. The jealous/tortured sidekick angle is kind of common, and doesn't allow for too much creative freedom. I feel like this story would have trouble standing out in the glut of Sonic based Creepypastas.

The story could use another round of proofreading for minor errors, but nothing in it was too distracting. The visuals were a nice touch, I'm a fan of screenshots. But I'd like to be able to view higher resolution versions. When I clicked the images, they displayed at the same size as the thumbnails in the story.

The only problem I had with clarity was near the end.''  I finally considered turning the Genesis off and going to bed. ''I wasn't sure if that meant that you actually did turn off the system, or just considered it when something else began to occur. By the ending I realized that the final few paragraphs were a dream, but I wasn't sure until the narratot woke up.

The pasta isn't really too poorly executed, it just suffers from treading similar ground to many others.