Talk:Metroid Dark Echoes (Creepypasta)/@comment-5358960-20130429040902

This is bad. You stated at the beginning that "I'[ve never completed this game" then when you were beating the worm boss "I played this game a couple of times and that doesn't happen". A weekend is 3 days long, your commas and periods are severely misplaced. You could remove the first two paragraphs and it would affect nothing. The trip to Gamestop was pointless. I mean, dear God read a book before you write one.