Talk:Super Smash Bros Melee: Happiness is Contagious/@comment-3417255-20130218081346

I actually found the story rather nice, though it didn't really come off as a creepypasta, IMO. The character appearences in game almost sound like they were reskinned for a funeral, with the entire game reflecting the often depressed nature surounding such an event. With the messages being presented as being writen postmortem, it kinda made me wonder if the game was posessed, and was editing itself according to the emotional state of the spirit.

While there seemed to be some grammar issues, they weren't exactly a deal breaker for me. The ending, while nice and all, seemed to be more of a happy ending that resolved the story. Now, I'm not saying "happy endings have no place in creepypastas", but I will say that they are a little harder to get away with in any form of a creepy story. Regardless, it worked with everything else going on, and it didn't force anything unnecessary, so it's still good as far as I'm concerned.

I'd say 6 out of 10. I liked the story, but it just didn't come off as creepy.