Talk:A Letter to my Valentine/@comment-25021327-20150220001231

19-February-2015- Adding Needs Work tag. The story here is pretty average, nothing groundbreaking, but nothing too horrible. It doesn't do too much in the way of originality. The main issue here, is that the story needs formatting and proofreading. It is a wall of text, and needs to be broken into paragraphs. There are some spelling and grammar issues as well (issueas with homophones, uncapitalized letters, things like that)

This story will be in Needs Work for about 9 days, and will face deletion after that time if it has not been deemed adequately improved. I encourage the author to format this story and maybe take a quick look atthis article.