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Review time

Title: It's interesting and cought my attention

Story: It's bad. I felt no attachment to the characters, and didn't care for what was occuring. It felt like my 9 year old sister was writing her very first creepy pasta.

Ending: It's terrible and makes no sense.

Overall: 1/10 - Baby's First Shitpasta

I am not here to offend or mock you, I am here to give an unbiased review. I ask that you learn from your mistakes and practice. With these two elements, you can write flawlessly. If you have questions about anything, please contact me.