Talk:Still/@comment-24540056-20141115153825/@comment-24540056-20141119023533

I am not very pleased with this story. The concept is.. weird. Original, but not thought provoking or even that good. This pasta is just.. there. Not entirely good or bad... There's just nothing to rip on. The story is cliche at times with the whole chanting at the end, and reading it just felt like a chore. Just like writing this review, it's not very significant to me. You have a certain style to your pastas, and it makes these reviews redundant. It's not a good pasta, that would give me something to talk about, but it's not a spectacular mess. That would give me something to talk about.

5/10. This pasta exists, nothing more. Nothing less.