Talk:Mutations/@comment-8470110-20140202213453

This was definitely an original mindf*ck. The reason I say that is because it looks at SSB at such an obscure angle. It kept me guessing though I did think of SSB as being the twist during the middle of the story. Pretty good for a first CP, though I'd recommend going through and correcting the grammatical and spelling errors that the story has here and there. Good job, my friend.

Rating: 7/10

-Sshakenbakee