Talk:Herobrine/@comment-24240632-20130713204431

Okay first let me say you did alright. With that said let's begin.

Description: 7/10 - The description was okay and it did add to the story, but sometimes felt vague and incomplete. I may understand that you were trying to make it vague, but... Come on that doesn't complement the story at all.

Plot: 3/10 - I don't want to be mean so I'm giving you a three out of ten... I think you know why.

Entertainment: 6/10 - Well... Another herobrine one that has a fair share of cliches, but isn't bad and is slightly enjoyable to read. I also like the facts at the end.

Overall: 5.5 - Mediocre

"It was an enjoyable read I suppose at parts, but not great or really even that good, but it has it's moments."

- Marcus