Talk:Shake Shake/@comment-9697749-20130518153006

There we go! I fixed several font issues, though I had to go into the code to do it. There was a lot of automatic formatting that I didn't put in that popped up, and it was even worse last night. It's much better now, though. H. was right, so I DID change that accidental part. When I read it again, it just didn't work the way I wanted it to, so I just got rid of it entirely. I like the new way better.

I kept the ending the same, however. A tad rushed though it may be, I didn't really want to turn this into a novel. It was a couple hours of writing that I decided to do, and I'd rather learn from it and write a better one in the future than spend the next several days laboring over it and tweaking. I'm happy with this one as it is, unless there are some minor fixes I'm missing. Anyway, thanks to anyone who read this for reading!!