Talk:You Failed (Dark Cloud/Chronicle 2)/@comment-8470110-20130907194020

5/10

I've never heard of this game, so I can't really relate to it as much as I can to Pokémon, for example. In any case, it was a decent Creepypasta. It had its clichés, a few that did make me want to stop reading. But the plot was interesting and I liked how the player reacted like a normal persone would for the most part. The format of the page was a bit odd and there aren't any catogories; I recommend changing that soon. For your next pasta, try to keep clichés to a minimum and maybe add a little more buildup to the creepy stuff. A good read either way.

-Sshakenbakee