Talk:Everyone Talks/@comment-4501030-20130621044235/@comment-4332975-20130621064503

My rule for mindfucks is this. It's not enough to keep the person reading it from knowing how it ends. You have to do two other things. First, you have to trick them into thinking it's something else. Second, when the truth is revealed, the clues leading up to it should all make sense, so the reader feels like they should have known.