Talk:Attrition of War/@comment-25029585-20140731060422

''Dawn of The Final Day, time to review... before it is too late.''

Overall, Interesting. I guess the mindf*ck didn't really do it for me, because it kind of fought with the idea of guns. Because guns... in Pokémon. No, that would NEVER happen. I mean I thought it might symbolise something, but when it just bluntly says "rifle", there's no other way to interpret that. But, maybe I'm just being pessimistic, I mean, they never denied guns could be a thing in Pokémon. But yeah, " My voice shouted as there was no other choice - "protect!!! “ Daria woke immediately up and spanned a protective field...". That gave away the entire mindf*ck, and it was only halfway through!

Pros: Decent Mindf*ck, It's Pokémon

Cons: Gave Away the Mindf*ck too Early

Overall, 7.75/10, Decent mindf*ck, but ends up confusing.

P.S.- Your font, it looks wrong.

Steel, The Mark of Insanity  06:04, July 31, 2014 (UTC)