Talk:The Soldier's Return/@comment-5025667-20131218082427

If the only thing I have to complain about is the way some sentences were constructed, a story must be pretty damn good.

But seriously, the scene was set-up magically and was very ongoing, tied with a nice conclusion at the end that makes the build-up deserving. Hauntings and PTSD do not go well together, I'd imagine. We are tuned into a character who we see losing grip over reality and himself, being beaten down by past sins and war. One who we can like and feel sorry for.

The ending could be seen as a little predictable for those who have read similar stories to this one, or any true ghost story in general I suppose, but it doesn't kill it. The story is done well enough to ignore that. 8.5/10