Talk:Silent Noise/@comment-25021327-20140620032719

Interesting concept, linking tinnitus to a deeper mythos. I found the introduction with the suicide vest to be a bit out there, but reading the piece as a whole, it fits with the somewhat surreal feeling. I commend you on the Egyptian legend backstory, as it seems fairly solid. Personally I found myself wanting to know more about those unfortunate souls who were for whatever reason afflicted with the condition. That's not a negative point, just a matter of my personal preference, as the story you wrote explored the possible supernatural origins of the affliction.

I think that the unfortunate link between tinnitus and depression/suicide is fertile ground for pastas, and it was nice to see it explored. This could be expanded upon, but works just fine as it is :)