Talk:Brutal Minecraft/@comment-25021327-20151004205437

4-October-2015- I'm adding a Needs Work tag here. The story has some things going for it, the length and pacing are okay, but it is full of typos, uncapitalized letters and tense changes. The plot isn't too original, and it isn't the creepiest of gaming stories, but it isn;t too bad. There were a few cliché elements, one that I noticed that felt a little stale was the mod mysteriously disappearing with no trace after the player completed it.

As this is now a Needs Work page, it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review. Please take some of this time to work on some of the issues explained to give your story a better chance of not being deleted :)