Talk:A Spider Web/@comment-24240632-20131105011549/@comment-6418997-20131105013826

Thanks for telling me! because I personally like having mystery but I guess if you can't understand it theres really no point. I will try my best to fix the grammar but it won't be perfect unforuntaly. I will try to make the execution better as well, because I know I didn't do good on that. It's going to be hard to fix the description because it's not an actual story it's just a talk like you said but I will try my best. Thanks so much! :D