Talk:The Pyro/@comment-6794436-20150307163237

Yay! An actually decent creepypasta!

Good: This pasta is a bit creepy, nothing to creepy, but it is a bit unnerving. The grammar is alright in this, with not too many grammar errors or typos. The plot for this is alright, and it is a bit unique as there aren't too many decent pastas that revolve around TF2.

Bad: This is just another typical gaming pasta that really doesn't excel in anything. It has got numerous gaming pasta cliches, and overall just is a standard gaming pasta. Sometimes it can be good, and I guess it kinda is here, but just being a standard gaming pasta means no matter what, your pasta is probably not going to be better than decent at best.

Verdict: 6/10- It's decent, I'll give it that, but it really is just a standard gaming pasta that I feel as though I've read numerous times before. However, the uniqueness in the game chosen makes it feel a bit more original to me, and I also like how there aren't too many grammatical errors. If  you want to become a better writer, I'd reccomend reading the New Writer Guidelines, as they will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3