Talk:Pikmin 3: The Lost Logs/@comment-25021327-20150304195619

I found this pretty enjoyable, better than a lot of other "first creepypastas" I've read. I'm not at all familiar with the Pikmin series, so I may not be the best guy to review this one. The setup with the friend digging into games and finding little lost nuggets is neat and pretty realistic, which I liked.

Again, not being a fan of the games, I was wondering a little about what purpose these log entries would have in the game. Sure, I know it's just a creepypasta, and the entries went unused, but I was having a little bit of trouble imagining where they would have fit into the original game. One other little nitpick I have was in entry 26 The narrator states that he hasn't had any food in 3 weeks, but the fight ver the last bit of food had only occurred about a week prior (assuming these are consecutive daily log entries) Anyway, just something I noticed.

Like I said, I enjoyed this one. The pacing was pretty good and although I would have liked a little more buildup to the events of the last entry, it still pretty much works. There are only a few little typographical errors which is nice, and the story is a nice length. I'm glad I gave it a look :)