Talk:Pokemon Sickly Green/@comment-6634820-20130221061749/@comment-6634820-20130221221930

I'm sorry, I meant it fell in terms of the ending. It seemed like their wasnt that final chill moment. I think you should just work on your endings a bit, but yet again I am just a barely average pasta writer, so take that for what it is. D:

Still, I really liked it. :D