Talk:Deserted/@comment-15963904-20140104161300

Whoa.... pretty descriptive.

Starters, I didn't really feel that creeped out- to me, it just felt like that story between 2 friends. A typical story, that is.

But, what pulls it back is the feature of the denial of the main protaganist against his mistakes. It was pretty descriptive, as the character tried to keep low.

However- the ending sentence- the heck? Well, looks like I'm finally done. I guess I'll go play Pokemon or something... Oh, hang on, I've got a call. Uh.... okaaaay?

A good creepypasta, though. 7/10 at the least.