Talk:Soul Sand/@comment-11366536-20150812184703

Wow, I really have to say, this is a great minecraft creepypasta. Never in my whole time here have I seen something at least as good as this story. (In terms of minecraft creepypasta)

The descriptions told in the story accurately gave me a vision of what was going on in the story along with the nice details. The story was enjoyable, the plot was very original, and I can see how the horror of the situation would play out in my imagination as well as while playing the game.

There were only two things I had to complain about were the ending being less-in-quality than the rest of the creepypasta. In all honestly, it felt pretty rushed and overall just had a bad effect on the horror. The other thing I must criticize is the writing itself. After the exposition, it slowly begins to decline in quality, which kind of bothered me to say the least. (I spotted a few Grammatrical Errors)

Still, I like this creepypasta and I will say that it shows how much you've improved on your writing since you've joined. Keep up the good work!

Verdict - 7.3/10 (Good)