Talk:The Diary of Angela S. Yorke/@comment-9281274-20160620010501

Not a bad tale at all.

My favorite part of this was the missing information. Laving things out gives the audience a sort of mystery to solve and encourages us to put the pieces together. I think there should've been a bigger emphasis on trying to piece the story together from what we coud read, of course this could just be me.

The imagery was well written and vivid. Not the first time I've read a pasta with burning focused imagery but it IS a nice example of it.

I do wish there was something of a reveal at the end, nothing that big or detailed but a little more payoff would've helped.

Overall, I thought it was a nice enough story that could've used the missing pages to it's advantage and a better payoff.