Talk:"Whatever Happened To... Robot Jones" Lost Episode: "A Very Robot Jones Christmas"/@comment-24082398-20150501015658

Time for a good old-fashioned review.

What was good? The grammar in this story was nearly perfect save for a few grammatical errors and typos. The story also seemed to flow very well in the lyrical department. The selection of words was impeccable. It was also very easy to comprehend and understand, and it was a Robot Jones pasta, so it automatically gets a million points.

Now, onto the bad. I think the worst part of this pasta was the heaping amounts of Cliché-Sauce poured onto it all. Most of it, from the red eyes and black pupils to the gore-porn scene with the children, are notorious clichés in the lost episode genre. The whole thing just seemed kind of bland, filled in with clichés from other stories. Also, the whole: He was my son/wife thing... surely, wouldn't the narrator notice if his son and wife were missing for a whole day or so with not even a note on the nightstand? Lastly, the method used to find the culprit seemed a bit rushed. It didn't really build anything up, and it just seemed to.... well, happen. I would enjoy this story a lot more if it didn't have such a rushed ending.

My final verdict would have to be 4/10 - A promising story riddled with clichés and logical fallacies that hamper an otherwise great tale.