Talk:Lifeless Bodies/@comment-6794436-20150210204903

This is a bit confusing and rushed...

Good: This pasta is written quite well, and there aren't any cliches that I can see at least. From what I understand about it, the idea is quite good I guess, as the whole "everyone is dead" thing can be good once in a while. Also, this isn't a wall of text.

Bad: There are a few grammatical errors, some of them being mere typos and others being tense problems. Also, this story is a bit confusing and it is somewhat hard to follow. The ending also really doesn't make sense, and it is just more weird than creepy.

Verdict: 5/10- This is just a good premise, with bad execution. Still though, it is a pretty good pasta. You should take a look at the New Writer Guidelines, as it will aid you in all of your future writing endeavors.

-Incorrect3