Talk:Immortality/@comment-6470295-20130520050607

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So, this story has that innate quality that just seems to stick to your writing like I stick to people I want to kill. :p

Quite short, not very creepy, but I know  that you weren't going for Creepiness, and much more for Sadness and Insanity. And for your writing style, short stories just seem to work. :p

As far as what you were going for, I can definitely feel the sadness and insanity that an immortal being would feel after so long, and as weird as it is to say this..I can almost relate to this person. :p I know I'd be sad forever if I lost my best friend and my wife, and I'd probably do anything i could do to make sure my mind forgot that I was still alive.

Overall, have a 8.25. My only real gripe with this story is the lenght. :3 Looking forwards to more of your writing, friend.