Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-25769095-20141129043649

I like the video game creepypasta genre, but all too often I read one only to end up disappointed at the predictable bad grammar, cheap gore, and/or overwrought drama.

I'm glad to say that this pasta had none of that. The "corruption" of the game was gradual and believable, giving a slowly growing feeling of unease. The twist was foreshadowed well, and I picked up on the abortion subtext well before the reveal. By the time you made it to Mother Brain, I was skimming the story - not because I was getting bored or losing interest, but because I was on the edge of my seat, dying to know what this was all leading up to.

Overall, this is the sort of VG pasta I wish we had more of, and I'll be reading more of your work in the future.