Talk:The Flintstone ROM/@comment-25021327-20160611024544

Okay, let's see. This one was better than I thought it might be when I began. There are some things here that feel a little old (the binary message, and the intense nostalgia the player had come to mind) but they didn;t feel too forced, and the rest of the story didn't go too deeply into cliche territory.

I think that the descriptions here were okay, and I would probably have a better time envisioning things if I had played a Flintstones game on NES. But that said, I could follow along pretty well with the descriptions. There were a few wordings that I found a bit strange, but nothing distracting. I believe that the character you refer to as Velma, is actually called Wilma, if it's Fred's wife to whom you are refering.

I'm a little confused by the ending, though I won't ask for an outright explanation. I usually try to read a story a few times if it seems confusing to me, so I may just do that :)

In all, not too shabby. Though it has some well worn creepypasta elements, and it seems a bit unfocussed in parts, I feel like it is a bit more memorable than some others I've read.