Thread:MistxLobsters/@comment-29502200-20160907044541

I want you to message me when you get this. I like the gist of the story, I hate how it was presented. I want to help you make this story amazing. If you want to say "i don't care, i'm done with the story" then so be it. But if you are interested in revising this story and making it MUCH better, please contacct me.  