Talk:The Red Box/@comment-11366536-20150627222622

I'll be honest, I had trouble understanding this Creepypasta due to the almost poetic-like way in which it was written, and not to mention multiple points in the story where confusion draws from. (The Part with the Mirror)

I have to say, when I did understand the story, it came out more or less okay. I can see that you put some effort into typing this story up and writing the plot. The Grammar is a tad bit off at times, but at least it's readable. The plot is pretty intriguing to read at times, and the Cliche's aren't too bad in this story.

Overall, I think it's an Okay Story, but could use a little bit of sprucing up.

Verdict - 6/10 (Okay)