Talk:Garry/@comment-6794436-20150426213515

This pasta isn't complete shit, but it isn't very good...

Good: This pasta has great length as it isn't so short that it feels rushed, or so long that it feels like it drags on. There is some mystery about Garry, what he is, who he is etc. which was pretty cool. This pasta does seem pretty realistic, and there weren't too many cliches for this type of pasta. The whole thing of Garry talking in reverse is a bit unnerving even despite the fact that it is somewhat of a cliche, and I thought that was pretty impressive that you were able to use a cliche in a good way.

Bad: This pasta needs a lot of explaining, most importantly about what the hell Blockland really is. When you're using a video game in your creepypasta that isn't something incredibly well known such as Mario or Pokemon, you really have to explain your game. I also would've liked to see more information about Garry and some Steam images, as you did say you had some. This pasta isn't neccessarily creepy, and not knowing the game Blockland isn't really helping. There were some grammatical errors here and there such as tense changes that became quite annoying as the story progressed.

Verdict: 4.5/10- This was a mediocre pasta, nothing incredible that excels in anything, but it was an alright read. It is pretty much your standard creepypasta fare, and I think it could benefit from some more explanation and some of the images you said you could get.

-Incorrect3