Talk:The Diner/@comment-5675310-20131221041526

The Diner holds an interesting tale. (Istillcan'tcomeupwithanythingbetter...nospacesforthewin.)

Description: 7.7/10 - Things were described and deatailed quite well, even though sometimes it felt a little rushed. Your word choice is still great, but sometimes it feels uneven. Sometimes you'll drag out the description of something important in the story and at other times it can feel like you just skimmed over the details.

Plot: 8.6/10 - An interesting idea. The plot twist at the end only made it even better.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - A deviously joyful read.

Pros and Cons:

+ Great plot twist

+ Interesting idea

- Description feels slightly unbalanced

Overall: 8.3/10 - Great.

"An interesting tale with a great plot twist."

- Marcus