Talk:Your Noble Sanity/@comment-25021327-20150421233744

Although I can't quite make sense of it, I enjoyed it. This felt very cryptic to me, but not in a repellant way, I felt kind of intrigued to keep reading. There were some issues with the wording and language as well as what appeared to be some grammar issues that were a little distracting to me. While reading this and trying to put myself into the shoes of the narrator, I felt a little taken out of the piece when I had to try to figure out what a certain wording meant.

In all though, as I said, I enjoyed reading this, and will robably give it another look after a bit to see if I can make some more sense of it. It's a bit tough to follow at times, but as it is, I'm glad I read it :)