Talk:A Question/@comment-5952138-20131203042112

Sometimes... I think that this is the right kind of pasta to read. It's not exactly the suicide part I liked but really, I love the detail of it. I tend to mess up with my pastas and say'pulled the trigger' which is boring, I'm sure you'd agree. I also like the fact the main character didn't exactly put any event in between the 'woman who left' and the 'man who stole the woman'. That way the reader doesn't exactly know what the main character has been thinking.

Just the fact that he had a simple reason (that makes sense depending what happened)why he killed the two characters, and possibly himself. BUT, for some reason I can't call this a creepypasta. But I can call it a good story. 8/10 :)