Talk:The Spic (Garry's Mod Creepypasta)/@comment-11366536-20150611185353

Since most creepypastas I've read that are based on Garry's Mod are horrendous, I was suprised that this one came out pretty okay for creepypasta standards.

Plot - The Plot was pretty straightfoward, but executed perfectly. There were some moments where I got confused in certain places throughout the story, but they didn't completely ruin the story. The Grammar and Spelling are perfect, and the story was pretty interesting.

Scare-Factor - This is where I had some problems. I know now that the space between the middle-ending is where the Scary part of the story occurs. (This was one of many major points of confusion for me that I had while reading this as well.) However when I found it, the Scare-Factor in this portion is pretty tame, to be honest, and doesn't really make me want to stay awake at night. Perhaps if you went for a more creepier approach, then it might work.

Believability - For this creepypasta, it's about 45% believable mostly because of some of the cliche's giving away the fact that this story is made up.

Summary - This is one of the best Garry's Mod Creepypastas I've read so far.

Verdict - 7/10 (Average)