Talk:Don't Get Lost/@comment-24.13.105.98-20131117232401

Alright its me scary if you were woundering. Anyway like I said before in chat the constant saying of jacksons name did kinda of throw me off. But after a while I got used to it. So its not that big of a deal.

Characters- very well portaryed, you were able to get by the characters and understand what they were going through. If you ever have been hurt by a loved one this is kinda of what happens you begin to get angry with yourself and even at "God". even though he did swear during the outbrust I think it fit, and I was able to get behind it. Which is very hard for someone to do to me. 9/10 only because of the constant saying of the names it did throw me off.

story- I liked the whole child abuse story, its something not done often and you could see how it was tearing up the main characters inside. How it would mess with their minds, which is something I really liked. It isn't quite clear though, but it does have a lot of details I would have liked to see more clarity in the beginning. 8.5/10

overall- a great read to say the least was quite surprising and well written. 8.9/10 I have yet to give you a bad reveiw.