Talk:Coexistence/@comment-29665471-20160209175451

How interesting, and cool.

The good: What a interesting concept, and there is a almost disturbing lack of cliches here. Honestly, its pretty darn good.

Now the bad. The only 2 things, i dont understand the Mindfuck, and, What are the shapes? Monsters? Ghosts? This pasta needs expantion.

Overall, 8/10.

Good pasta, needs a bit of expantion.