Talk:48 69 0d 0a/@comment-29588684-20160420234335

Many unessascary broken 4th Wall dialouge, We never got to care much about 'Jim' at all becuase he is used as some kind of character in a dating simulator, and many misuesd creepiness. The Good thing is that this a great idea and I hope you can do better with this someday. I will give it a 6/10.

~Xeno