Talk:Doomwheel Forest/@comment-6727300-20130225223705

I gotta say... you are a superb writer. There are so many overused elements in this story (pokemon dying, the game talking directly to the player, etc.) that are suicide to put in a creepypasta, but you did it, and you made them creepier than ever. I love the 1st person view, allowing the reader to tap into your thoughts and emphasize with the sense of despair you feel as the events unfold. The buildup is excellent, making the climax very frightening (especially with the added picture and music). Also, what I love the most is that this creepypasta feels so believable and not over-the-top gory, and I love the nod to those cliched beginnings where the narrator buys the game from a mysterious garage sale or whatever. I hope to see more from you, because you are an awesome writer. Bravo, 10/10