Talk:Crack'd/@comment-25021327-20140927233950/@comment-9523715-20140927235839

Thanks for the review! I actually didn't pay attention to the whole photo timeslot...now that you mention it, it does seem a bit too soon. I'll probably have to edit it.

I actually have written some other pastas, but this was my first. I wrote this when I was 15 years old, and slowly edited this through the years. This wasn't my first posted, but it was my first written, and is my personal favorite at the moment, simply because I spent so much time on it. The picture and the lottery ticket were mostly meant as metaphores/harbinger-esque objects, the picture representing the main character's future, and the ticket representing the main character's past.

I agree with you on the way the story changed styles in the end--it were a bit abrupt, but at the time, I didn't really know how else to end it. In retrospect, I actually dislike the ending, but for some reason can't come up with an ending that would fit the story better.

I do, in fact, plan to upload more pastas I have written. Many of the ones I've done can be found over on the creepypasta wiki, but I find that this site is more supportive, judging from your review and how quickly the community responded. Look forward to more stories coming up soon, and thanks again for the honest review!