Talk:Eric/@comment-1196539-20140704123425/@comment-1196539-20140704234422

The ending devalues all of the creepy stuff that had happened up to that point. It ruins the whole thing.

"Oh, this kid was just his cousin. Just some random kid who typed badly and knew where his house was because he's his cousin."

Sucks absolutely all the "creepy" right out of it. If this were just, say, a fanfic? I wouldn't complain if it had won some award or something. I wouldn't complain if people thought it was a genuinely sweet story. But as a creepypasta? No. Something should win CPotM for being creepy. Not for being a sweet story.