Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-8470110-20140705183244

My opinion is about the same as Cosmic: this is very well done gaming Creepypasta.

The realism of the photos adds to the eerie atmosphere you've set up and that exists in Metroid already. The build up is great and it leads up to a very satisfying ending which can disturb the reader. Mixing the virtual and real worlds like that (as far as I know) hasn't been done like that before so well done!

While it won't make one of my favourite stories, it is still one I'll come back to when I'm bored and wanting to read something. If I had to compete for CPotM with one story, I'm glad it's this one. Best of luck to with this month's competition and congrats on a great story!

Rating: 8.5/10

-Sshakenbakee