Talk:The Sims Creepy Mansion/@comment-11366536-20150302174819

The Beginning and the Middle of this Creepypasta are written very well. There is a few cliche's here and there, but none of them ruin the story or disrupt it completely.

The Ending is what really killed the story here. "A few days later I heard my doorbell ring. When I answered it, it was none other than help me..." WHAT?!?!

The Ending felt really redundant, and the cliche's at that point were obvious enough to kill the story entirely.

I guess It's an Average Creepypasta, all in all.

Verdict : 7/10