Talk:Meat.../@comment-25021327-20141111040421/@comment-25021327-20141111053748

haha, yeah Sorry about the wording, I don't intend to sound discouraging. The term "good" is always relative. And if the definition of a "good pasta" is one that entertains (which, I suppose is the goal of most fiction) then for me, at least, this was a good one. And remember to, write for youself first, And not worry too much about.

Glad to see you're still writing, and always attempting to improve. Be sure to read lots also, as that is an important part of learning as a writer.

I read OPAL when you first posted it, but I'll try to get back, reread it, and comment my thoughts soetime within the next day or so.