Talk:The Truth About Dentists/@comment-25021327-20150214020707

I dig the conspiratorial feel of this pasta. And tooth decay/dentists/parasites are all good fodder for pasta, and provide plenty of unnerving possibilities. I would have liked this story to be a tad longer to establish more of a style, or feeling to it. As it reads now, I can;t tell exactly if it is going for straight scares, or if it is trying to be a somewhat tongue-in-cheek-yet-still-creepy kind of tale. I like to think it's the latter, but There isn'quite enough here for me to make a full decision.

I've always thought that the concept of something common having a terrible secret was good. And I think people wonder (at least I do) about how products actually work. Are the Antidepressants perpetuating depression? Is the toothpaste encouraging tootch decay? It would be a pretty good business plan for the manufacturers. So that aspect of this pasta workd for me.

Like I said, I would have liked to see a bit more meat to this, and maybe a more distinct narrative style. There were a few typographical errors, but nothing distracting. For me, this is a a piece that has potential to be a fun and creepy story, as it is now, it feels a bit lacking to me.