Talk:Regret : A short Poem/@comment-25021327-20151022023829

I'm not much of a poetry critic, but I didn;t think this was too bad. A little light, but that's not a bad thing, sometimes poetry can get to pretentious for its own good. The theme seems to be pretty apparent throughout, and it's short and doesn't drag on too long. One thing I would suggest in terms of format would be to consilodate the first four lines into two lines so as to keep the overall format of the poem consistent. The first lines have an A,B,A,B rhyme scheme, but the rest has an A,A,B,B, etc. rhyme scheme.