Talk:The Anger Spirit Ritual/@comment-6794436-20150708013239

Normally I'm not a fan of ritual pastas... but this wasn't terrible...

Good: The grammar in this piece was alright, as there weren't too many typos or grammatical issues. The way the Anger Spirit works is pretty unique, as not too many other rituals cause an angered spirit to come out and target certain people based on what bad things they've done. This story also had decent length.

Bad: This pasta is really just not creepy, like just about every other ritual pasta. It feels just like a standard ritual pasta that really doesn't do anything too special. The effects that the angered spirit does are quite strange, such as getting rapid alzheimers. This overall just felt like just another ritual pasta that really doesn't excel in anything.

Verdict: 5.5/10- For a ritual pasta, it wasn't terrible, but it really didn't do anything special. Still, the grammar was great, and the story was a decent length, so it wasn't too terrible to read.

-Incorrect3