Talk:Shake Shake/@comment-6830263-20130518103148

It's decent. It's long enough, so it doesn't feel rushed. There's enough detail, but not so much that it feels forced. The ending was very abrupt though and there were some clichés like an in-game character taking revenge for something you have done and the "I-love-this-video-game"-cliché thing. The source from which you got the game, seemed reliable, so no old guys. I do think it's kind of stupid that you "accidently" Shake Shake'd the final Clancer. Not nessecarily bad, but it could use a bit more work.

Final verdict: 7/10 (Grammar and spelling were good though)