Talk:The Infinity Maze/@comment-6794436-20150609195905

Two Pac-Man pastas... That's a strange coincidence...

Good: This pasta actually had an effective mindfuck. This game the plot is focused around is pretty unique, as there aren't too many Pac-Man pastas. The grammar is alright, and this is the perfect in between from too short and too long, as it doesn't feel rushed or like it's dragging on. The pasta itself is somewhat creepy, and certainly was pretty enjoyable to read. The buildup to the mindfuck is nice, as it is able to be creepy on its own without the need for a mindfuck and also because if you read it again, the hints were staring you in the face the entire time.

Bad: This plot has been done before in a strikingly similar fashion. This was so similar, in fact, that I had to check to see if this was plaigarized. The fact that I've seen this pasta before and also that this idea was quite frankly done better before really dulled the experience for me, and also made the mindfuck predictable a few paragraphs in. However, that shouldn't be a problem for anybody who hasn't read the other Pac-Man mindfuck.

Verdict: 6/10- By itself, this is a farily decent pasta. However, it is partially tainted for me at least by the fact that this pasta is practically identical to another Pac Man pasta. Still, anybody who hasn't read the original pasta should enjoy this pasta for what it is, a simple, but enjoyable gaming mindfuck.

-Incorrect3