Talk:Darker Findings/@comment-15963904-20140302091359

This reminds me of a song, funny enough!

Well, the story flows pretty swell, for as far as I can feel it. About a boy who did things for his girl, and gets a slap on the face for helping her, doing anything he can. From what I judge, at the end, he doesn't care anymore. However, I felt the sadness flow through my body, I felt empathy. The language was strong, and I knew for a fact that this is gonna win CPotM sometime.

Score: 8.75/10

"It flows well, it has decent language, it has empathy. Well done, Shake."

-> Morgan.