Talk:The Dark Cave/@comment-8470110-20130915232402

2/10

I agree with what the previous commenter said; this feels more like a summary than anything. If this was supposed to be a mindf*ck, unfortunately you failed. It was much too easy to realize and know what the pasta was about. The plot was rushed and everything was just bad. When making a mindf*ck remember these 'rules'; keep things cryptic, add a lot of detail and ALWAYS have some build-up.

-Sshakenbakee