Talk:Just an Average Day/@comment-6794436-20150128222836/@comment-25021327-20150129193833

I thought this may have been referencing a game as there were many details given, but I never found out which. Probably not the fault of the author, I dont follow much modern gaming.

It's tough to effectively post a story here that would fall into the Mindfuck category. I imagine what you wanted was to have a sort of open ended reveal here at the end, letting folks know that if they thought it was about a certain game, they were right. However It is often counterintuitive to add the category of the game you are referencing as it may give away a twist ending. Similarly adding the Mindfuck category is less revealing, but still sets the reader up to expect a twist of some kind.

As it is, it's hard to know what categories to add to a story like this. I'd suggest removing the Real Life cat, and replacing it with Video Game, as this would probably let folks in on a bit of the secret of what they are reading about, but wouldn't blatantly give away any possible spoilers. That said, I'll try to do a proper review of this soon :)