Talk:Why Humongous? Why?/@comment-5346853-20130409010412

Wow... I thought this was all fake and cliches until you told me this was real... So this was like an experience of the player... Let's start with the flaws.....?

Well.. Since this is more like an experience creepypasta, I can't really find any flaws since it WAS real and not fake. Now for blood. Since you DID make this into a creepypasta, you could've made it scarier even with the same part with the blood. Even though you can't change what the blood is involved with since then the story'd be fake, you can still make the description of the blood scary. The way you described it didn't scare me, but rather just grossed me out. You could've tried to squeeze something scary in the description to slip a scare factor by me but it seems like that didn't happen.

In general, the creepypasta was good. I know one part that was fake was the player experiencing it, right? Everything else is real facts. I liked how you took something real and still made it into a creepypasta. That hasn't happened too much with creepypastas because of the cliches and blood cliches roaming the place.

Overall, I'd give your creepypasta a good 6/10. It didn't scare me at all so I had to ding 2 points of your creepypasta. I did find it interesting since it was real and I think it'd have some potential if this wasn't your first creepypasta. But since it is, I say to you,

"A job well done!"

Keep improving my friend!

~StarluoAngel