Talk:The Blind Man Ritual/@comment-27669113-20160819053616

You have actually gotten better! The creepiness factor is there of course, but this one is pretty unique on the concept of the blind man. The timing is awesome too. One thing that I noticed a bit is on how little detail you give on the antogonist, maybe next time you can focus more on the bad guy? But that is a little nitpick. Awesome read, bud.