Talk:Richtofen's Revenge/@comment-6511809-20130901183533

This isn't Creepy at all, all this is, is just a custom story you came up with.

Realism was dead by this point, some guy gives you a bunch of letters and you find a map in your map screen. There was no buildup, no development. All it is, is just 2 players and a mysterious player who gives the main protagonist messages, and somehow a map appears on the PS3. I don't think you can just get a map instantly, I think it would need to be installed, and this says it was in Berlin, with vast roads and routes and even a Metro. Also, I don't think the Voice Actors could just say these lines, and they appear in a Custom Map that is obscure.

And the end with the message 'I'm Your Biggest Fan.' Was just out of context, we have no idea who this guy is, so he just says I am your biggest fan, and somehow at the end you go to sleep, not even traumatized.

I don't like this story, it really kills off the Creepyness, and had very little potential. I did enjoy reading, but it's not worthy of a Creepypasta. I can say, yeah you tried, but this wasn't Creepy. The Protagonist just shrugs off the map, and Richtofen is a Zombie now, because some guy on PS3 made a patch.

Now Creepypasta's are very unrealistic, but with some Creepypastas, they are made to be Realistic, but not based on a True-Story. Anyway, I don't like this story, not as a Creepypast, but as a normal story, it has flaws and alot of cliche's.

I will seperate the Creepypasta and Story rating.

Normal Story: 5.5

Creepypasta: 0.