Talk:Catch Me If You Can/@comment-25021327-20150115015026

I found this to be a farily well executed pasta. It's paced well throughout, the spelling and grammarm grammar, and clarity are all good, and the descriptions were well done also, I was able to envision everything that was being described.

The story itself has a kind of typical monster-in-the-dark feel (or perhaps the dark itself) but ties itself together with the early reference to the story that the narrator has read online. It makes one wonder if this is how whatever force is being dealt with perpetuates itself, through the passing of the story, and the words "catch me if you can."

The narrative starts off slowly, and builds pretty nicely as the reader continues through the story. By the climax it's pretty exciting, and I was zipping through the paragraphs. And that's nice, I found the action to be well presented and organic feeling, a story like this could easily have gone to cheap gore for scares, but didn't.

I also liked how in the end, this wasn't "All-A-Dream" and actually left lasting effects on  the real world. There was no real twist that led us to think that the narrator perpetuated these actions unconsciously, and the reader is left to wonder what exactly happened here. I like that no formal explanation is given as to the exact reasoning behind the events, it's vague and open to interpretation.

I liked this one :)