Talk:Cracking Up/@comment-29502200-20161001143406

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Title: I expected something humorous, oh well.

Story: Not very interesting. It has it's moments, but not to the point where it wants me to continue reading. It's working off the idea of realism, but not too well. MANY speeling/grammar/punctuation mistakes.

Ending: I didn't like it. I understand you are going off the idea of schizophrenia, but I didn't like how it was set off.

Overall: 4/10 - It makes a point, but it's an uninteresting point.