Talk:Doctor/@comment-25029585-20140704030436

''ME: Ooh! New story! (reads story)...(explodes)''

Well, this was... interesting, I can say that much. Definitely pulls in the reader, check that off. It's just SO confusing... to me, anyways. So, would you kindly explain the ending, maybe even the whole story, so I can get a better grasp on it? (Bioshock reference ftw!)

But, I'll give it this, WONDERFUL writing. Seriously, I'm probably going to go look up like, 10 words now that I've read this story. Yeah, but it's just kind of confusing, I guess this story is also an enigma.

Pros: Wonderful writing, Interesting Plot that pulls you in.

Cons: Confusing.

Overall, 7.75/10, this is my temporary score, I'll probably bump it up after I understand what the heck is going on. But anyways, good job.

Steelwingred (talk) 03:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)