Talk:The Winter Knight Experiment/@comment-6794436-20150209235630/@comment-14341590-20150210011519

Well, I never expected the Mindfuck to anything more than confusing. I was going for a subtle mindfuck, nothing that's too over-done. So, I've stuck with a middle kind of mindfuck. It delivers it well and as you said above: It was a slight bit predictable. To you maybe, but to others (it might not seem that predictable) - I applaud you for managing to figure it out before you got to the end of the Creepypasta though.

I'm fine with the shorter review to be honest. I don't mind a more durable review, cause why not. It's just, I'm happy with what you've delivered as a review. (8.5/10) ? Wow! I'm impressed with myself. Although, 8.5 or 8.0 is what I've been rated on during the end of 2014. So, it's not a great big deal for me. Although, it's a good sign to prove that 2015 is shaping up to be a great year for my Creepypastas to shine through to others.

Now, my comment (reply) may be long now but I guess I got carried away. The grammar is one of the biggest things I work on, refining it or rewriting parts to improve on them. Very few cliches is great! Again, it's very hard to avoid cliches. Especially, when you don't see them yourself. A bit creepy is also good. I'm aiming for a dark atmosphere.

Thanks again for your awesome review! Like I said above: if you want to post a longer review, go ahead. I'll be more than happy!

- Rockyz