Talk:My First Pikachu/@comment-66.110.228.157-20140124221534

Good, but missing a climax. You built up the suspense, and left what amounts to a sequel hook, but left us without a satisfying ending. Still, well-written and genuinely spooky, without going for the cliches. 9/10, and I honestly would like to play a yellow with the extra features you mentioned.