Talk:Namcap/@comment-7331756-20130513122921

This is a nice idea, yet it did not see its full potential. First things first, although there is no blood or gore, there is still some cliches. The begining is the most overused cliche avalable. It seems a bit on the short side as well. I do have one tip for you though. Make sure you have a good build up.

overall not a bad try. 6/10