Talk:No Matter the Cost/@comment-24210419-20131027045901/@comment-5025667-20131027071404

Alright, I'll fix those things sometime when I have more time. Thank you for the correctons on that, although the whole reason for that was Tyrin was mostly confused and had no idea where he was of course. Mostly just naming of different Biblical afterlives and other states of living after death.

Keep in mind though this is chapter one, the real beef begins next chapter. Not sure how much this will effect your rating if at all for later chapters, but sometime to bear in mind.