Talk:Isn't This Fun?/@comment-11079349-20131011010834

hate to say it, but this is boring. Maybe it was the length (which was short) or maybe it was the pacing (which was way too fast), but nothing even made me feel the slight terror that comes when I read creepypastas. besides that, it's alright. I mean, I've seen worse and I've seen better. if this were to get a grade, I'd give it a 75 out of 100 because it's average and the spelling errors were kept to a minimum. If I were to give you a tip, I would say to spread the events out over a few more days first. Then start hinting at the parents' deaths, and then have the games outright say it. And then have around two more days showing the mental decay of the main character. then it would have a better impact.

5/10 for average story in an average setting and an average style.