Talk:Carrie.JPEG/@comment-11079349-20131202151752/@comment-11079349-20131206012723

also, I've never seen the movie this is referencing, so you gotta keep that in mind.

numbers 3 and 4 are probably my biggest problems with this. as for number 6, well, it stated fairly well what i though, and yes, at least you didnt use the "hyper-realistic" line. finally, on 7, it sounded like i was being a bit ... harsh, but i mainly meant the execution was average and average only. honestly, I rounded the score down because of how much garbage i had seen on the site recently thanks to a certain member who shall not be named. the honestl score would probably be around 5.4/10 or 5.6/10 because you definitely have good enough talent for this, just not the best first attempt. still, better than my own first attempt.