Talk:Rebirth/@comment-24240632-20130915185535

Rebirth to the mindf*cks!

Description: 8.5/10 - Not bad. Although vague at many points where it could've been more descriptive, there were also times when you couldn't have done it better just because of the way it was written.

Plot: 9.0/10 - It wasn't easy to see coming (Except for the fact your profile pic is, Pit and you've done something similar to this in the past.) and I was overall much happier with the plot and character development than I was with your pasta, War. There were problems with it like the fact that it once again felt a little messy at times.

Entertainment: 8.7/10 - I was an enjoyable read, and the ending wasn't expected, but this is very similar to, War and since I've already read that it felt like you just took that story and improved on it quite a bit.

Overall: 8.7/10 - Great.

"Unexpected, but it feels too similar to a pasta from the past."

- Marcus