Talk:PARADISE SIMULATOR/@comment-4332975-20130318212420

Nothing too spectacular, but not so deeply flawed as to be horrible, either. I only really have two main complaints. One is that it always bugs me when someone makes a pasta talking about a completely original game, but says almost nothing about the gameplay. I know you say "like Sim City on an island", but how does that work? Did the player need to gather resources? Were the building and social aspects different modes, or did the player build from their avatar's perspective? What were the socializing aspects of the game like? Yes, I know, it ultimately has no bearing on the story, but it's one of those things that helps make the story feel more real.

The only other thing is that my eye develops a twitch whenever someone uses the word "tween" as an age descriptor, and they aren't referring to a hobbit in their twenties.

Other than that, not bad. I don't regret reading it, but I'd only give it about a 7/10.