Talk:How to Trick the World's Greatest Detectives/@comment-6794436-20150914152958/@comment-6794436-20150914182402

Yeah, there were some good things. But if I could counter argue a few of those points, when a story is that strangely specific with the gore, even if it's only up for a few minutes, people do remember it, and they would find the news story disturbing. I only read The Sophia Show about one time before it was deleted, and if a news story came out saying that a girl somehow got her breasts "deflated" I think I'd notice something strange.

When you're writing a creepypasta, if you're intentionally making something effortless, you're just making your pasta worse, even if it does have to do with the story. Still, like I said, this was excellently written, I just don't think it was executed very well.