Talk:DEMISE/@comment-21086298-20141119135503

The opening wasn't bad. I kind of enjoyed the dreamlike atmosphere in the first half of the story, even if it did get a little nonsensical.

As for the second half, the story got really cheasy really fast. The main character forgot the name of his own father untill he reached a convenient place in the story to remember it, then instantly goes full evil mode, and finally kills everyone else in the world.

On a side note, did the video game turning the main character evil remind anyone else of "Kill Screen" by SlimeBeast?