Talk:Herobrine/@comment-13205380-20130920071553

Things to fix: categories, you need to add more, the spacing of the paragraphs makes the pasta feel longer than it is, and I'm sorry to be this wrench in the cogs but the Herobrine thing has been done before numerous times. I'm not going to say that this is a bad story because it isn't and it serves as an entertainment piece, but what irks me is that this is a story that has been told time and again and either much more effectively or much more poorly.

Something important when dealing with creepypastas of this nature is to provide supportive evidence, i.e. screencaps or video recordings. THAT is what helps carry these pastas to very chilling heights.