Talk:Hitman Absolution: Lost Mission/@comment-6794436-20140610002304

Ok, that was not a very good pasta. I can sort of see where you were going with it, but you still failed it on all fronts. I was looking forward to seeing a possibly good hitman pasta, but I was quite let down. I still think you have a lot of potential as a writer if you use better vocabulary and work on getting your climax across in a much smoother, better fashion.