Talk:Addiction/@comment-4972669-20130822015741/@comment-4972669-20130822042726

It's an interesting concept, but the 'game = insanity' cliche has been overrused. However, you seem to make it work, Shadow, so I must award you that.

There aren't many WoW pastas I know, so I'll commend you for that, too.

It didn't have 'HYPER-REALISTIC BLOOD' or 'HYPER-REALISTIC SCREAMING', which is good.

I have to say, this isn't bad at all. However, you should work on your prose and make it longer.