Talk:Man of Needles and Guns/@comment-6794436-20150317032249

(Copied from what I told you in the chat)

7.5/10-  Although the pasta was written incredibly well, it was't that engaging, or at least to me, and I feel as though it could've been expanded upon a bit more to make it even more creepy than it actually is. As a pasta, this is alright, nothing groundbreaking (other than being an incredible first pasta) or incredibly creepy, but it is written so astoundingly well that I just had to give it a high score. Had this been added upon and made a bit more creepy, it would definitely be an 8, or maybe even a 9, but as it stands, it is still a 7.5/10 for me.

-Incorrect3