Talk:Nora/@comment-4332975-20130628002020

I presum that this is supposed to be an original Gameboy game from context, but you should state the system that it was for in the introduction. Other than that, it gives me a bit of the feeling of Polybius, but not as well developed. The pictures help, but I feel that fleshing things out a bit more could have really helped. In particular, the fact that there seems to be no purpose or reason behind the effects of the game makes the story feel less disturbing, and more, simply...shrug-worthy. In its current state, the story seems just a little rushed.