Talk:Meta Man M: Passcode of Horror/@comment-17737991-20140203161832

My, that was a long read. The begining was kind of hard to get past. It was repetative and became dull, although it did evetually start changing enough to get me interested again. While some of this is clichéd (glowing red eyes,  blood  red oil, gore, sadism), some of the imagry was genuinely disturbing. Such as Launch Octopus feeding on a fish robot and decapitated limbs floating in that mini boss.

I have many questions though. Why is Boomer Kuwanger in on this? You say "Meta is a Spirit that forces things to do his bidding" so how why does he refer to Boomer as his brother? Why does Meta look like X? Is he an evil dopplegänger or something?

Lastly, the grammar and spelling. There's several small mistakes in this, like "Ever sense then" should be since, not sense. And half the times you use the word "seen" it should be "saw". Also, why the random links to this story on CreepyPastaWiki? Anyway, it took a while but I eventually got into the story. Not much happens, basically the game is weird and bosses are brutally murdered, but there was still enough here, (particularly the Boomer reveal and imagry) to keep me interested.