Talk:Pikachu's Rage/@comment-7563211-20130416021335

Not many cliches, which is good. Also, there's not many grammar errors. This creepypasta gives off many emotions. And I agree, the ending could be better. But I'm not that great at making creepypasta, so eh. But all in all, I have to give this 8/10.

Now, if you need me, I'll be taking my Pikachu out my team...