Talk:It's Mreley Yuor Prespcetvie/@comment-6794436-20151018132642

Wow, that was actually pretty good...

Good: This pasta definitely was intriguing right from the get-go, and it was definitely interesting enough to keep my attention the whole way through. This was written excellently, and I didn't see too many unintentional grammatical errors or any other real problems when it came to the writing. The story was short and sweet, and the ending was really unique. This story took a turn that I was not expecting, and definitely one that was done right. Going back to the way this was written, I liked how it was written like an insane person was just rambling on to the reader, which made the story actually flow a lot better. When it came to creepiness, I think it was decently creepy.

Bad: My biggest problem with this story has to do with one of my favorite parts of the story, the twist at the end. This pasta faces a problem many other pastas of the like do, that being that the story couldn't really hold its own without the twist. Sometimes that really isn't all that bad, but in this one I think it just showed the real lack of story elements.

Verdict: 7.5/10- This was definitely a pretty cool read, and one that was short and sweet. The twist at the end was executed quite well, and overall this was just a good creepypasta. Not much else really to say...

-Incorrect3