Talk:The Zoo Tycoon 2 Disc/@comment-25021327-20150517224359/@comment-25021327-20150519033134

Yeah, the spacing is better. I read through the pasta, and I still think it could use a little more work. There are still some spelling and grammar errors that could be touched up, as well as some clichés that you may want to rework, namely the use of the words "Hyper-Realistic." Saying that is a bit of a red flad these days, as it is a description that has been overused in the past. The player smashing the disc is also a bit overused.

But the formatting is looking better :)