Talk:Slender: the 9th Page/@comment-11037493-20130626021746

Not like I'm one to judge, but it went from you discovering a ninth page and a new ending to Slender, to just mashed up things being added in. Don't get me wrong, but it just seemed like you threw in things from other creepypastas to make it seem more creepy.

Now for what's good about it.

You had great build up(except for the random creepypasta references in the beginning), and then you had the good theme of being a coder finding a dark secret about a Slenderman game. Then you had the ninth page only appearing after you essentially completed the game. After that, the fact that the game automatically shut off and you didn't investigate, but just went to bed was a bit random, but all fine in my eyes.

It had it's moments, and wasn't that bad actually. It just had parts which seemed like a random mix of creepypastas.