Talk:Flout/@comment-28242661-20160420185120/@comment-17737991-20160421192205

Thank you, I'm glad you like it :D

Can you point out any specific examples of incorrect sentence structures? As for rolling into the wall, I chose not to label this story as a mindfuck because it's pretty easy to figure out what's going on, so it's not meant to be executed with a twist ending. It's about how the character feels during glitches rather than OMG SURPRISE! IT WAS VIDJYA GAME ALL ALONG!!! x3 The "reveal" is only there in the unlikely case someone somehow didn't figure it out (though they really should have).

In regards to present tense, I agree that it feels off... and that's why I use it! Present tense isn't common enough in literature ^^ Some stories I've read, I remember them simply because they were in present tense. Anyway, thank you for the review :D