Talk:It comes/@comment-24239143-20131024170012

Short and snappy. A pasta that looks good, and tastes okay! But, I feel you're missing some bits:

1) It's kind of cliched. There was the cliche that caused the game to be haunted, which was random messages, which is old and boring.

And

2) You need to add question marks at some points. Like "What was it?", not, "What was it".