Talk:The China Shop/@comment-30102911-20161207135648

Standard stuff, could be worse but not really anything too memorable. I'm a little bit confused on some deatils though, how did the main character know the owner to the point of where he managed to have his phone number and why did the same owner not clear out the shop when it was supposedly closed down? I didn't really get too much of a vibe of anything creepy other than the character seemed to find some weird stuff that wasn't cleared out. A bit more detail in description could probably give the reader an idea of what could be interesting but as it stands the story is just not that compelling.