Talk:The Basement/@comment-5025667-20130814050426

This was rather well done, actually. It did feel rushed to tell the key points of the story, but the gore here was otherwise used appropriately and actually added to the story as you can envision the story in your head rather than just saying "lawl his hed exploadad" or something of that vain that a lot of other pastas seem to do. Nice effort, 7/10