Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-5025667-20130730161704

Not bad, not bad at all. Not particularly mindblowing by any means, but as a first attempt of a pasta it is impressive with the level of detail in it as well as the ending which I liked. I understand that you wanted to keep some details vague and up to the reader's interrpurtation, but this kills the mood at times for me in reasons that I can't really explain. Too much happens off-screen to have an impact for me in the final logs is I guess what I am looking for. 7/10