Talk:Cold Link- Chapter 2: 23 Hours/@comment-6470295-20130216205431/@comment-6470295-20130216211919

I don't know, "before I make a great sacrafice." sounds like suicide to me.

But yeah. More detail never hurts.

So, bit of a more generic N'sBoT Review incoming.

This part of the Cold Link creepypasta feels a bit..not exactly off, but it feels less realistic than the first part (Which, i guess saying that is dumb, since i'm writing kind of a real-life deal where it's in the pokemon world, which  doesn't make sense. I guess i can describe it as an episode of the anime, except it's not. You'll see when i finish writing it.), which while i don't really care about realism in creepypastas (Just look at Eyeless Jack.), some people care about it quite a bit and think it removes nearly all of the immersion if it's not realistic. Those people are boring, though. Any ways, as i said earlier, i don't really understand how a virus is able to do all that, but hey! I just said i didn't care about realism, so it doesn't matter  too much. This is still rather creepy, since i've always been a fan of a certain game called "Evidence: The Last Ritual". In that game, you kinda get emails (Not actual emails, you kinda have to register on a website the game gives you and you get messages there when you finish puzzles. The game is creepy as fuck, and it's art style doesn't help.) from the in-game killer named "The Phoenix" which gives you hints on how to pass each puzzle, and you end up finding out more than you wanted to chew. You should look it up--It's interesting.

As far as rating goes, i'd give this a 7.75/10. I prefer the first part of this story, but this one isn't bad if you just ignore the "Oh fuck this game is PUNCHING ME IN THE FACE OW" cliché that alot of gaming creepypastas put in them.