Talk:Hacker/@comment-6761334-20130929125444/@comment-11329482-20130929150941

Thank you for the help I really apprieciate the criticism, and I know my grammar can be a bit flimsy at times it's good to know at least this pasta had some good elements in it. I will try to fix this further in the future and maybe just reading my own story out loud can help me notice these errors. Sometimes spell check doesn't notice any errors so it can be a problem when it doesn't tell me if I typed something in incorrectly. I will revise this story fix the issues and try to make it better. Again thank you for the help I really do honestly really appreciate it.