Talk:The Ice-Cream Man/@comment-18108967-20130909205204

I would give this pasta a 6.5/10. One thing that certainly caught my attention was that after the ice cream man killed Joe, he seemed happier. I'm not sure if you did this on purpose but I liked it because the only way the driver was ever happy was after he commited some horrid act. There were some grammatical errors but nothing to rage about. The story about an ice cream man is deffinitely a very good concept, but why would the chatracters be so un-nerved about the man's actions. He IS just an ice cream man. Perhaps just notice his unusal behavior but pay no mind to it UNTIL joe is killed that night and it all comes back to you and starts to make sense (if that makes any sense). Overall, very good CP, looking forward to reading more of your work!