Thread:TheCosmicDestroyer/@comment-5025667-20130617160248/@comment-5025667-20130618143515

Well, I'm not sure if this is the original or not. I see that it has some grammar issues and uses a lot of capitalization, but here it is on the Wiki:

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/AbandonLONLINESS

You can see what parts of it I pulled out of it (the character, his connection with rival Blue, the bloody tears and the empty eye-socket, the grave), considering that the original was a haunted cartridge and I went with a more "real world" approach. It provides a little backstory to our poor little vee as well.

Reading back after watching Haunted Gaming for so long, I can sadly see that this is very, very cliched in a lot of areas, some of which I took into my own pasta. I wouldn't really know what to call my pasta compared to the original. A retelling?