Talk:He Whistles When He Walks/@comment-25021327-20140825144548

I really liked this! So many of the ghost/monster/slasher stories are so cliché, and I feel like this one had more of a spark of originality.

I felt that the characters were fairly believable, and the narrator was fun and pretty relateable. The style is what I think sets it apart from some other, similar stories for me. The narrator's matter of fact tone, and insights made me want to keep reading.

Spelling, grammar, format. They all appeared well up to par. The pacing seemed consistent, and worked well with the length of the pasta. the descriptions were good enough for me to imagine what was happening, and I liked the er, 'antagonist.' No apparent motive, no malicious cackling, almost as if he was just doing a job.

Personally, I found this to be a fairly refreshing read :)