Talk:You Brought Them Back/@comment-6418997-20131119042416

First thing I gotta say I love this little piece. its a good peek into a book or any story for that novel.

Character- since its just a sneak peek I can't review the characters as I usually do. The characters in this are really good the whole concept of that what we might think is a good thing isn't always, i don't know the backstory of these characters but again just a sneak peek so not expecting that yet. 9/10 only because don't know that much about them.

details- you explained the whole scene very visually i felt like i was there. Which is something good for every writer. You said the story from a vey interesting point of view as well.you explained how the setting made it feel more darker and sinster. 9.5/10

overall- 9.2/10 can't do a full review because the story isn't very well explained because this only a sneak peek. But overall great I loved it. :D