Talk:The Ritual/@comment-7706473-20130719125444

Awww, a tale of two lovers. Very sweet and romantic, though the rude interruption by some Hawk-faced person and their friends at the end ruined it for me. Some people just don't get touching reunions... Monkey luddites.

Jokes aside, I enjoyed this immensely. I'm one of the few people out there who actually enjoyed Dragon Age 2 - or at least what it was trying to do - more then the first one. I'm not a huge fan of either, as I suffer from a particularly bad case of 'I'm a hack and I could write this better' syndrome, but this made me want to replay the second one. Even with this entire quest annoying me on many levels, I felt it was actually done well enough.

The use of imagery was really enjoyable, and I felt the loving descriptions of the process only highlighted the derangedness of the sculptor. They weren't actually that gory - just enough so that the reader could fill in the blanks, and that's how it should be. Quite enjoyable! A lilac, I think. A feather in your cap.