Talk:Spider-Man: The Reckoning/@comment-25021327-20141119002514

The paacing of this story is really fast, without giving muh buildup for events. Things just sort of start, and happen. The spelling and grammar could use a once over, as well as some clarity. I'm not sure what to think about a sentence like; "Spidey wasn't Spidey." If he isn't Spidey, who is he? Why is he being referred to as Spidey again a few sentences later?

This didn't feel very scary or creepy to me, I think it may be because it is so fast, jumpy, and jumbled. I could mostly tell what was going on throughout, but it was still a bit confusing. The ending felt kind of silly as well. There is Venom, one of the biggest banes of Peter Parker's existence, a monstrous threat, and he.... pulls out a gun. Anyone could have done that. I understand if you were going for something different and less obvious than the typical disembowelment seen in most pastas. I just didn't feel like it worked for me.