Talk:64/@comment-26480939-20161013021031

Eh, honestly? I didn't really like this too much. Way too Anvilicious IMO. And from a coding standpoint, this seems plausible up until the cartridge and portable N64 melt due to the extreme heat, and later on, the computer doing the exact same thing. Now, I'm no coding genius, but I highly doubt that any company would put stuff like this in their game code to discourage pirating their titles. And the part about the friend dying due to extreme blood poisoning is laughable in how it's presented. Anatomy does not work like that. Blood poisoning is real, true, but there is no way that a standard laptop PC would be able to melt in such a spectacular way that it would burn through even bones. Human bone can withstand a large amount of heat, which is why crematoriums have to run the furnaces at 870-980 degrees Celsius (or 1,600 to 1,800 degrees Fahrenheit), which is sufficient enough to destroy bones. (c.f. Wikipedia-Cremation)  If anything, you would most likely die due to the extreme heat and not the poison from the fumes/melted metals.

And another thing, suicide is not something that can 'enter' a body. It is an action, often brought about by feelings of extreme depression, among other things. I would recommend you change that part to read more sensibly. Like this:

"It made me so angry and sad that suicidal feelings entered my thoughts."

As opposed to:

"It made me so angry and sad that suicide filled my body."

Also, there are several parts with some nonsensical things added to them, presumably by some troll. Most notably, these lines:

'the video cant handle criticism u can'

and

"B'i't'c'h Scare"

I'd recommend that someone remove those parts if possible. (I don't know if I have the qualifications to do that myself.)

So, in the end I must give this a 6/10 ''Not bad, but not terribly good, either. Some improvements needed.''