Talk:Super Mario 64 Multiplayer/@comment-26051804-20150529181230

Okay, the only really good thing about this story is... that it's a lot better than the previous version... I saw the history...

There are a lot of cliches, such as the overused lines as character names.

The store disappearing...? Same thing.

The protagonist is flippin' stupid. Why would he follow somebody who is clearly called DON'T FOLLOW ME? And why would he trade something for something that is nearly the same thing, and he doesn't even know if it works?

You know what, no, just no. This is my first, my ABSOLUTE FIRST, 0/10.