Talk:Our Benefactors/@comment-6511809-20130716125235

A Half Life Creepypasta? This is very intresting I like it's view. I have spent months on end playing Half Life and the Cannon of the story contributed to the Half Life story is just appealing. I think it's a good Creepypasta, it does have it's flaws with the single soldier in the Citadel, but still it's a good read. It sounds like more of a drama read then it is of a Horror Story, still. I enjoy it, I understand this is your first Creepypasta and I find it very good. In the Next Creepypasta you ever make, try to make it a bit more detailed, give some Charecter Development, and try to give a scary situation to the story. But still, good read. I will give it a 8.5 out of 10.