Talk:The Home Run Killer/@comment-37941341-20181227002157

This story is complete trash. Logic is thrown out the window, grammar and spelling are poor, the antagonist of this story sounds more the author's shitty OC than anything, and the detective is as dumb as Derek Green. Nothing about this story is good, the title is stupid, the setup is bland and extremely cliched, and there's no explanation as to how this was even written. It's written from the 1st perspective, but the writer is able to describe their own death, SO WHO THE FUCK WROTE IT?! The cringy attempts at establishing the antagonist as "worse than Jane or Jeff the Killer" are only successful in prematurely affirming that this story is going to be as shitty and generic as it is. The dialogue and descriptions feel as though they were done by a 13 year old, and judging by the author's note, that's probably the case. This is a stupid story given far too much praise and credit, and I can only hope that it completely dissapears from the public's memory entirely, or that it receives the beating it so appropriately deserves. Final score: 1.2/10