Talk:SSB: Playtime's over/@comment-11366536-20141120194345

Let me make an attempt to grade this.

Well to start, you used the "Game Is Communicating with you" Cliche', among others. Lack of proper grammar, and Bad Punctuation make this harder to read.

6.5/10 ; I see what you were going for, but you did it in a way that simply didn't work.