Talk:Lost at the Bottom of the Well/@comment-6418997-20140103225401

this hasa lot of cliches gaming creepypasta wise, like the blood. i did like the ending that said link was in hell, that would be a great mindf**k only everyone kinda already assumes that when they play that game. i feel this pasta would do better made into a theory and a mindf**k. i feel like this concept has been done so much it just kinda annoys me now sorry. i also like the finale quote you need something that the audience will remeber the story by and that one line could make me remeber this story. the way it was written was okay but the word choice was bad. 6/10 it was better then average