Talk:The Seeker/@comment-11366536-20160702011229

Summary - A very mediocre attempt at a mindfuck pasta. Although the grammar and story structure is alright as a whole, the content is not pleasing at all; Cliche's are easily spotted throughout the story, and I eventually found myself sighing with boredom at the unsurprising ending. The story itself is also your typical "Internet Predator Psycho-Killer" creepypasta that you would find on the creepypasta wiki back in 2013.

Final Verdict - 3/10 (Bad)

Just a note, Mindfuck stories aren't really supposed to work this way, and are considerably the most difficult type of story to pull off successfully on the wiki. You can find out more info about how to improve your stories here, as it will improve your future writing attempts.