Talk:Power Outage/@comment-24240632-20130525003906

This had a lot packed into two paragraphs and at its best it really was creepy. There wasn't much wrong with this and I found it quite enjoyable. The detail was great and the way you described the creature was great, but I have to say the lack of story was kind of a bummer because I expected a bit more. Although I'm sure you wanted to get us wondering I just felt a little dissapointed. That's no reason to reduce the score though because making me want more is a good thing! Final verdict 10/10.