Talk:Umbra/@comment-26268104-20150808142831

Hey, a deep web creeepypasta.

Good: This was quite a fast read and I personally liked that. The story is quite plausible, considering what is on the deep web, and the grammar was in pretty good shape.

Bad: The main problem I had with this story was the detail. I could mostly imagine everything, but felt as though a bit more detail would have made this more creepy. Also, I expected the disturbing part to be more disturbing. Since the narrator passed by several links that contained human torture and wasn't afraid of them, it's surprising he was afraid of a women being raped.

Summary: 4.5/10.