Talk:Garbage/@comment-24240632-20130717062341

First let me say that I find this quite new and unique. With that said let's begin.

Description: 9.75/10 - This was amazingly done and was just one of the many, many, many things I enjoyed about this pasta! The only problem would probably be the overuse of the word "sensation".

Plot: 8/10 - This was interesting and I became intrigued in the character and what would happen next, but I found that the idea wasn't executed quite well enough and sometimes I felt lost.

Entertainment: 10/10 - I was always entertained by the great plot, description, and thought put into this entire idea. I only wish I could entertain myself this well with one of my pastas!

Overall: 9.25/10 - Outstanding. This pasta only could have been slightly better, but it's just fine the way it is because it both intrigued me and creeped me out.

"A pasta everyone should read right now. An amazing story, intriging events and amazingly good description."

- Marcus