Talk:The Stalking Mimic/@comment-26478350-20150709170154

passable

good: It seems that you've put alot of efforts on that. The begining is good its not a ramdom old man giving a doll the atmosphere at the begining was ther and the lenght is perfect

bad: there were  grammar errors, the story whit the doll haunted is cliche. How did she get claws from a voodoo doll exactly? The ending was terrible and what does the title have to do why any of the story?

verdict 6/10 ok you're the only one who is first creepypasta is passable