Talk:A Thousand Arguments at Once/@comment-6418997-20140112044643

Not bad my friend I'm not saying it was really good its just that most people don't use halo as a creepypasta so that aspect offers something new to the plate. There are problems that I have such as the wall of words toward the last paragraphs. I do feel that gaming pastas are clichéd and this unfortunately is no expection, maybe you could have added more personal stuff that related to what was going on in the game. You could have also made a creepier setting. Also if people never played halo its kinda hard to follow. I like the idea.. I just wish you had more emotion and that it was a little deeper 6\10 above average but not good