Talk:Memoriam: Chapter One/@comment-25021327-20140716031404

What you've got here is pretty standard fare for a gaming creepypasta; mysterious game that no one has heard of with seemingly impossible attributes that interacts with the player and possibly affects their physical feelings, or well being. Nothing yet that is really unheard of.

That being said, It seems pretty well written, which is nice. Even the same story about a mystery game can still be an interesting read if the characters are relateable, has nice pacing, and is easy to read. So far, this was easy to read, and paced steadily, We don't know much about the main character, but maybe that will come in later chapters.

Nothing spectacular yet, but this part at least kept me reading to the end :)