Talk:Ami/@comment-28056358-20160515193940

Oh wow. Okay, I had some concerns in some places, but all in all this was a very good pasta. Not exactly creepy, and for a while it felt more like a mindfuck than anything, but the sweet ending was a nice touch. I say 9/10. It was a little rushed in places, and I feel like there may have been some grammar or spelling errors, but I love how it wrapped together too much to pick it apart enough to find them. Great job.