Talk:Siren/@comment-6794436-20150418161728

I've never seen a creepypasta based off of what this one is about, interesting...

Good: Well, the premise is unique enough, and this pasta certainly has decent length. At some parts it can be a bit unnerving, with the descriptions of what's happening, and it was an alright read.

Bad: The grammar in this is awful, and many sentences are just written so confusingly that they flat out don't make sense. As a whole, the pasta really isn't that creepy, and the mindfuck was rather predictable the more I kept on reading, and as so many similarities arose. Also, adding that little ending piece wasn't really the best idea, as it removed any semblence of creepiness upon reading.

Verdict: 3.5/10- This pasta's grammar was horrible, and there were a few other annoyances that really dragged this pasta down. However, the pasta did have decent lengths and this does have quite the unique premise.

-Incorrect3