Talk:City Typing Adventure/@comment-26480939-20161003235316


 * tilts head* Okay, a 'pasta based on a typing game. That's certainly different subject matter for a gamingpasta. o.o

This is somewhat enjoyable to read, I must add. VERY good job with that title screen and difficulty selection screen, especially. The other screens? *tilts hand from side to side* Kind of average stuff that looks like they were done in MSPaint. It's a tad jarring to go from such high-quality spriting to low-quality spriting.

Now, a slight nitpick. For a game that has children as its intended audience, the slight profanity is somewhat jarring. A game meant for kids wouldn't have 'damn' and 'bastard' in it. I would recommend removing that to make it sound more believable.

Now for the good: I like the idea of a typing game actively punishing you for typing words wrong. And the use of elements like the 'insert name here', using the filename for the ghost character's name, and the '_1_', as it really makes it feel like an unfinished game that never got completed for whatever reasons. The game itself doesn't have any overt clichés that I could see, and it's perfectly legible.

About the only things I would change is the slight profanity I mentioned earlier, make the character sprites not so MSPaint-styled (i.e. add shading and stuff) and maybe add some audio clips for some of the more menacing lines in the game.

All in all, this gets a solid 9/10 from me. Very well done, only slight edits or changes needed.

And this is probably unintentional, but the font style used for the title screen and difficulty selection reminds me of some of the fonts used in Spooky's Jumpscare Mansion. Not that that's a bad thing, mind you. Just something I noticed. ^_^