Talk:My Experience with Education/@comment-24082398-20150413000325

Alrighty, another review!

What was good? Well, the story itself was great. Excellent pacing, great vocabulary... the whole schebang. Everything, from the diction and grammar aspect, was perfect. The mindfuck was also great; I never would have thought in a million years it would've ended the way it did. Great job!

So, how about the bad? Well, much like Incorrect below me, I believed the story was far from creepy or eerie or any sort of heebie-jeebies. I also disliked the way it was presented, but that's just personal preference. I'm never good with reading or creating prose, and even worse at interpreting it.

So, my overall verdict would be a 6.75. Brilliant story, excellent mindfuck, but the creepy factor is missing and that is the worst thing about it.