Talk:The Storm Lurcher/@comment-25021327-20140704222649

Hmmm... well, this is pretty standard slasher fare, kind of campfire story stuff. Maybe I've just read too many stories, and seen too many movies like this to fully appreciate a writing like this one. Aside from a few lines that struck me odd like " She couldn't believe it, but She believed me," and " I then sprinted down the stairs faster than ever before. I walked downstairs..." which I feel could maybe be reworked to read more cohesively, I don't have any major complaints about this.

That said, I don't have any major praise either, I'm afraid. The pacing was okay, the writing style, the format, grammar, were all just alright for me. As it is, it's just another story about a supernatural(?) killer with no motive, who kills some poor guy's family... and neighbor. And I suppose that's an alright read every once in a while.