Talk:Our Benefactors/@comment-5173931-20130512204442

You call it a mindfuck? Just from a title I knew it was about Half-Life 2. The idea of showing the horrors of Seven Hours War would be great if executed correctly. In this case, it wasn't. Everything happens way too fast, which (I believe) was to show an incredible pace of the invasion (the Combine conquered the whole planet in 7 hours!), but it lacks details. The ending was a bit off. A single soldier sneaking into the Citadel (I believe) and being stopped from destroying the core with a single grenade? Come on!

Still, if the pasta was longer and more subtle, it would be a great start. This one, however, is just bad.