Talk:Addiction/@comment-26480939-20160812003725

Eugh, that. Was. ATROCIOUS. *rolls eyes*

Time to give this the full DAE treatment.

Grammar/Spelling: Did you even pay attention in English class at all? Run-ons, misspellings, lack of capitalization on proper nouns and probably some other things I can't think of at the moment abound. 1/10, and I'm being generous here.

Scare Factor: Nonexistent. 0/10

Shock Factor: Nonexistent. 0/10

Meat: I know next to nothing about WoW other than what I've read about the game online. So I can't rate this category, honestly. N/A/10

Cliché usage: You used the 'strange circumstances/events happen, but protagonist shrugs them off' cliché, but I couldn't find any others besides that. 9/10.

Overall, this gets probably one of the worse scores I've ever given something at a dismal 2/10 ''Very poor, significant improvements needed. ''What dinged this score so badly was all the grammar mistakes and spelling errors. Remember, Spell Check and Proofreading are your friends. You do have some potential, but you need to work on your grammar and spelling.