Talk:Timothy's Journal Entry One/@comment-25029585-20140722000623

''Like 100, it's 200... RANDOMIZED!! ''

Hmm... I like what you've got here. The problem is... There's not enough. I didn't go in depth or have any build up, so any shock value I might've gotten from the "chopped-off" legs moment, just didn't scare or creep me.

Pros: Interesting story.

Cons: Lacks depth/build-up

Overall - 6.175/10, Needs some more story, but I do like the base, cliché'd as it may be.

''Number 200, Yay! :D''

Steelwingred (talk) 00:06, July 22, 2014 (UTC)