Talk:Time/@comment-24400536-20140112201447

Mmmmmm cerebral, and it plays well to the cosmic uncertainty.....it's also quite depressing in a way and just a tad bit disconcerting that your entire life is there from start to finish a quadrillion times over and you can't ever be original as you may believe. all in all I'd rate this high on my favorites category, among Ben Drowned on that regard.....but I'll give you a more objective rating based on how it works as a whole

7.5/10, it could use some more elements on how it affects the universes it inhabits (Remember not all universes have time) and what happens to time in the void, where nothing exists at all. Something to strike some resounding fear into it to make sure it's ememorable as Time might wish it to be to it's readers. But this is just my own personal say so on the matter and I'm new to writing, so you can take this as you will, but again this is one of my favorites, so good work onto you ^_^