Talk:The Wallace And Gromit Starring Episode/@comment-184.13.27.250-20150924005100/@comment-25021327-20150924012150

Well, I don't think I've ever read a Wallace and Gromit creepypasta before, so that's a good point as far as originality goes. I'll point out that the standard spelling is Wallace, and not Wallis (I think that might be a Germanic spelling) so that's something you might want to think about editing.

The story here is pretty short, but that;s not automatically a bad thing. Here, I think that it feels a little rushed and incomplete. I would have liked to see more description of what was on the tape. What is told about the tape feels a little bit unoriginal, with the character crying and (presumably) killing himself. It just has that somber tone that a lot of lost episode pastas tend to go for.

So this one isn;t necessarily bad, it just feels a little light to me, like this could have been explored further with a bit more originality. As this is your first pasta, I encourage you to keep writing :)