Thread:Nightsbladeoftruth/@comment-4325363-20130504033112/@comment-6470295-20130504034110

I frankly don't care if the ellipses are in the characters' dialogue. You can edit it. Overuse of ellipses isn't good.

Also, they aren't the only problem. As I said, the story suffers from all around bad writing and clichés. If you feel like fixing it all up, feel free to repost it.