Talk:Five Nights at Freddy's - Not/@comment-4474599-20151214064351

after reading it all the way through i did find it interesting, though as stated by a few previous reviews, the ending was a bit forced but as a writer myself i know how hard it is to make a good ending that'll be satisfying for the reader, and in general the whole body of the story could have used a little more to tie it together, however one thing impressed more than anything, in your first pasta you didn't degenerate to "blood, guts, gore, violence, more gore, buckets of blood everywhere!" plus the pictures made it more believable too and that in itself at least in my eyes, is a sign of good things to come. i'll give it a solid 7/10