Talk:The Dark/@comment-25625305-20150620080618

This isn't much of a creepypasta. It sounds more like something that would be told around a campfire by a bunch of 4th grade kids... Creepypastas work best when they show events happening, not tell them. It's more scary if the reader were to witness some main character being dragged away by evil beings than just saying "don't go out in the dark or the'll GET YOU! The end :D" That, and also this pasta is really short. By the way, I went and fixed most of the numerous grammar errors. Don't forget to go back and re read your story to try and fix any errors you made BEFORE you send it to the public.