Talk:An Odd Occurrence at the Train Tracks/@comment-6830263-20131218075501

It's a good mindf*ck and, as usual, very descriptive and well written, but it's not at all creepy. It's also short and there's not a lot of character development, but then the ending is about other people than the two main characters.

Final rating: 6.5 bullets caught by Abraham Lincoln's skull / 10