Talk:Funniermouth/@comment-11139677-20140616041144

Well, honestly? I think you've redeemed yourself. This is awesome!

Right off the bat, the premise of the protagonist wanting to discover more about "Funnymouth" is enough to spart the reader's interest, but while also slowly raising more questions that the pasta answers in the end. The buildup is slow, but also including bits and pieces of information, which all come together in the end. The best part, though, is how it reveals much more about the whole Funnymouth scenario without taking away the sense of mystery.

Could be a bit longer, maybe a bit more description from the narrator, but I digress. Good job 7/10