Talk:'Happy Birthday' from Youtube/@comment-11079349-20131127151000

wow ... that was something new. list of things to say, coming right up.

1. Alright, I want to adress the end first. This person talks to the audience, but then commits suicide at the end. yeah, death doesnt work that way.

2. the concept is something new. an insane person that watched a youtube video that made him kill himself? wow. or better yet, a youtube video that distorts one's sense of time so much that they dont even realize that years are passing while they sit in their chair.

3. the execution gets extremely good once you get into the actual video. too bad it doesnt last.

4. I'm sorry, the first thing i would ask would be why the moment the girl said to leave. then once she ran away, I would too.

5. I honestly don't know what to say about the main character. an insane guy with massive debt and no posible way to truly survive besides eating bugs? he was likely about to die anyway.

6. why is "the cake is a lie" written on that first picture. there's no point to it. I'm gong to let that slide, but that sort of referenc is best used elsewhere.

7. rapid birthdays? yeah, i would have turned it off by then, but then again, I'm not crazy enough to keep watching in confusion.

So all in all, this is a great pasta. I would give this a good 8/10 ... under a circumstance where I thought you didnt forget a couple plot points you made. 7.5/10 is the best i can give you here.