Talk:In a Dream/@comment-26268104-20170102210152

I think this is somewhat of a neat story, but I'll clarify that it isn't quite a poem. The main quality of a poem you missed is that poems are hidden behind metaphors, simlies, and other figurative language. If you can understand the whole story by the first read, then it isn't a poem. This is still a good story, with nice flow and a neat twist, but not a poem.