Talk:How to Trick the World's Greatest Detectives/@comment-25400723-20150910132242

Hm, interesting story you've got here.

The first thing I want to point out here is the fact you actually remebered Insaneketta. Jeez I had completely forgotten who he waas at this point XD.

Okay now I'll get on with the review. This pasta was kind of short, but it was okay. To me, the idea here didn't seem very.. exciting or as interesting as others, and I saw that ending coming from a mile away. The gore in the story was kind of extreme, but not really as bad as some other stories. Now, I don't exactly get why some parts of the story look to be written by a toddler, whereas the other parts are written in extreme detail. I get the fact that it's for "Hiding it in plain sight", but if it's posted on a Creepypasta site you could still write a story using all the correct spelling and grammar you need to describe a murder. People would still think it would be a made up story.

The spelling in this story was good, I did comb through and fix a few noticeable ones for you. And the pacing was pretty good, it didn't read out too fast or too short.

So for everything I've mentioned I'd give this a.. 6.5/10

Not too shabby, P.S. I like the quote ;)

~King