Talk:The Ritual of Rebirth/@comment-24841964-20151127145052/@comment-50.0.6.114-20151127183204

ahaha i just threw that message together at the last second, i think it was 2am when i finished and posted this if not later, i'll get around to fixing it, anyway what would you say is good and bad about my story? i don't normally write stories like this so that's why it's subpar overall (at least in my eyes) i normally write either in the style of a novella or a web comic, and horror is a whole new ballgame since i normally write science fiction