Talk:My Buddy Sandman/@comment-26918109-20150913044507

Wow i gotta say this is really well written, the large amount of evidence you provide makes this story seem very believable. its clear you put a lot of time and effort into this! But sadly this story suffers form a large amount of cliches plus i found story to be very predictable. Even though i didn't find this story all that good, i can at least say you've got some talent!

Highlight: what protag wanted to say to sandman after he played the game.

Lowlight: the twist of the photos being real murders has been done before, and to much greater effect.

Over all: aquaman/10