Talk:Retaliation/@comment-25400723-20141020041844

Wow. I must say that this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I hadn't actually read the first story, so I was expecting me to not understand what was going on in this story. But, I understanded it clearly.

Your spelling and grammar is perfect, and I only spotted ONE mispelled word. (Yes, I payed attention).

I loved how you didn't give the character's names away right away. Like with the lorax, I read through the part of the story where he was telling the character about himself. It's fun trying to guess who the character is just by looking at a little information or backstory given.

I'm assuming the Doctor is supposed to be Cat In The Hat judging by the way he speaks in rhyme. (Don't judge me If I'm wrong)

I also love the way the different Who characters we all love and know are placed into different roles in the story. Like Cindy being the leader of the Rebellion, The Lorax being a fellow prisoner, and The Cat In The Hat being the doctor. (Once again, If I'm wrong don't judge)

The events that happen and the character dialouge all seem to be thought out very well.

I love suspensful endings in any type of story, and this ending is just great. It made me think, "Who is the new unnamed rebel introduced at the end?", "Will there be a sequel?", and "Will this character be the one to take down the doctor?".

As for the negative aspects, I can't really seem to find any. I enjoyed the whole story. If I were to give this a rating, it would be 9/10. Good work!