Talk:PH1-1/@comment-8657694-20130424172347

7/10 I like this creepypasta but there was some confusion I had about it, one thing is minor, such as why his week had been so terrible to begin with. However a major issue I had with this creepypasta was the significance of Roar, the terrible creature he seems to fear the whole time. But nothing ever comes of that, except for the vague inference with the individual who tried to run him off of the road. Another Major complaint I would have to say I have is the lack of explanation of the "Mr. Grey" that appears in each picture and what the significance of that person is in the first place, that needs some clarity, I mean did the guy become another Mr. Grey at the end? Is Mr. Grey just born from crappy camera phones? as stated, please clarify this.

Now then, the things I loved about this creepypasta was the ALMOST complete and utter lack of the WAY overused *stupid* cliches that seems to be staples on most gaming-related creepypastas nowadays I mean torn up game case and shifty clerk with the disappearing store ARE all cliches that have been heard before but thats OK since there was no *Hyperblood mode activated*. Another thing I absolutely adored was the proper build-up, you didn't just drop us in with, "horrifying monster" you built it up from "Creepy-as-Crap" Store, to the whole unease about the game in general and finally the smart guy who plays it with a friend. Thats something I have rarely seen in a creepypasta, the intelligent man who goes, "Y'know it might not be a good idea to play it alone" it is good to see some common sense instead of the stupidity of "Even though Satan just talked to me Imma keep playing anyways kthxbai" It was pretty entertaining also to see not only did he refuse to play the Satanic game alone, he also had the sense to break the game when it started to become clearly evil. Although the way that kinda backfired on him explains why people don't generally do that.

All in All It was pretty original and refreshing as far as creepypastas go, as there wasn't a hint of blood, with the exception of the broken disc deciding the main characters mouth might make a better trash can than the outside. 7/10 this is something I would actually like to see Mutahar read.