Talk:Pikachu's Rage/@comment-87.57.130.140-20130316232725

Pretty damn good. No clichés that was worth notice, and pretty impressive, compared to a lot of the other Creepypastas out there. However, I would like to point out, not to say it is bad, but as a mere thing to improve on, if you decide to create another one, that the ending was... well...

I find it hard to belive that would be the reaction, to what had just happened after such an event. Of course, it adds effect, but it doesn't seem lke something one would do. I would off had just left the game, try to calm my nerves, instead of being sorry for the Pikachu. Though, I haven't made a Creepypasta before, so who am I to judge?