Talk:Automatonophobia/@comment-9847798-20130721035147

...why does the video start out as a screamer?

Aside from that, this was a pretty creepy pasta, and I hate clowns, so that helped it a lot.

Still I feel that you should just readjust the paragraphs, cut some of the large paragraph into a couple of littler ones...

Overall, I give this an Adequate!, which is a 4 to 4.5 out of 6