Talk:Look At Me/@comment-7706473-20140718104611

Very short, and very brief.

On the other hand - a lot of the shortpasta problems (bad spelling/grammar) are noticeably gone, so the question is... What can be done to make this scary? At the moment, it's too short. An opening and closing sentence and a paragraph in the middle doesn't really give us enough to understand the narrator, which makes the revelation barely frightening. On the other hand, if this is intended to spur other people with similar situations to post their experience, that might turn into something fairly creepy. I won't really give a full review either way, but one thing that does stand out;

The entirety of the 80's were playing on your radio? Darn, but I want such a radio.