Talk:Pokemon Yellow Creepypasta/@comment-4332975-20130903155331

First of all, not adding categories to your page is against the rules, and means an automatic temp ban on your account.

That aside though, this story is...nothing special. I don't regret reading it or anything, but there's not really anything about it that stands out. For the most part, it just embraces a lot of box-standard Pokémon creepypasta clichés wholeheartedly, and tells the same story that's been told a million times before. That's it...there's nothing I can really point to and go, "This is what you need to improve to make this story better." because, technically, there's nothing actually wrong with the story at all. It's competently written, decently paced, even reasonably descriptive. It just isn't very original. It takes no risks, does nothing different, and stays safely in the mould. This would probably be a good introduction to Pokémon creepypasta for someone, but for veterans of the genre, it won't hold much lasting appeal.