Talk:The Shadow Saga Part 3: The Girl/@comment-6830263-20130324104100

Pretty good, I'm eager to see what the girl, Ashley, has to do with all of this. It's pretty well written, but the creepyness kind of wears off. I know this is probably some kind of build up, and i can't wait for the next part (so good job), but keep your main focus on the shadow.

Final verdict: 7.5/10