Talk:Your Fate is in The Cards/@comment-8198649-20130922225253

All right, where do I start? I first would like to mention that you could use a few more categories. it's good to see you followed Kefke's advice, after so many people haven't. even so the two categories you have are not enough, and so you need to add more. second off I would like to mention that although this wasn't the best thing I've ever read, it is still pretty we'll written. it has it's cliches, but all and all it's still better than a lot of the pastas that get posted on the site. Good job.