Talk:The Gate Keeper/@comment-25021327-20150104035239

I decided to check this out after you mentioned it in a comment on the other Gate Keeper pasta Rev posted. I'm glad I did.

This was a fun little story, and a nice quick read. I'm not sure how it would be for someone unfamiliar with the material it is based upon, but luckily I don't fall into that cat egory :3

I tend to enjoy the style in which you write. You seem to be able to get things across clearly, and in a consice manner with a fair degree of prose, and  without droning on... something that eludes me in my own writing... And although the subject matter here is silly, I thought it was handled pretty well. I felt this had a nice balance of inconsequential fun, good literary chops, and appreciation for the game in question.

So yeah, I liked this one. I liked some of the lore you created here, and although some of the things the narrator said, and how he said it felt a bit out of place to ma at times, when it comes to a story such as this, I can't really say that anything is necesarrily out of place. Glad I gave this one a look :)