Talk:Doom The Final Secret/@comment-30102911-20161010005430

On one hand you do deserve some credit for writing this story as well as you did and for steering clear of a few cliches that could have sunk this story. On the other this story doesn't really seem to convey much of a knowledge of the game or take advantage of what the story could reach into. Also I'd like to point out how this story doesn't really live up to its promise of having no demonic activity which really sets itself up for false advertising. Certainly not in the same league as Alex Melee but needs quite a bit of polishing for it to really be a better tier piece.