Talk:The Truth About Dentists/@comment-24685180-20150215205740

I accualy really liked this, I love the vibe of it, one of the things that help your teeth is really killing you and your teeth, the grammar was good and I didn't find any other problems except it was pretty short, maybe make a sequel where someone unknowingingly gets so messed up parasites in their teethand don't know about it, I know the way I worded it sounded lame but you know what I mean. Great job, it was nothing special and definitely not bad 7/10

-Rev