Talk:Pokemon Hex and Die/@comment-25834034-20141211172823

For the most part it definetly needs some more work into it. (Spelling/Grammar/cliches

it is a somewhat likable pasta but on the flipside there are a bunch of pastas just like this one, a poke'pasta as i call them, but yes as KingoftheUnderground669 was saying, its lack of quality and quantity.

I get that this is soposed to be a haunted gaming experience but for me it didnt give me that feel of like "Something not right is going on here" cause it didnt go deep enough in to the story, like i said earlier it needs some work to it to make it a good poke'pasta.

to me it felt as if the author had alot to give but.. the author didnt serve.

Now im not here to be an asshole and judge the pasta im only here to give the author my perspective on this poke'pasta, but out of all i enjoyed this pasta and the rate i would give would be a strong 5 and a half out of 10.

so ya i hope the author see's my comment and changes up some stuff, and i would love once the author changes things up i would be glad to read it again.