Talk:The Wardrobe In The Woods/@comment-25176506-20130227230809

Pretty obvious Witch & the Wardrove mindfuck you've got going here. And when you're making a mindfuck, that's EXACTLY what you don't want to have. There are a lot of things that did it for me: The name, for one. The carvings on the wardrobe, and the lamppost. I know you wanted to put some little details in there, but only put subtle ones, and not so people can figure out your mindfuck. The mindfuck is the big reveal, the shocker that comes at the end. The subtle details are there so that readers can go back and see how the story could lead up to that. Read Xerox; it's an excellent example. 4/10.