Talk:Nintendo Terror/@comment-26773463-20160402125602

This. Is. Not......

okay well, I just skipped through some of the story to see what was in for me and.

you got that bloody mary sh15 goin on

you killed everyone in "the room"

apparently 5 people in here were instantly revealed as demons

fix the grammar with "you did this" a lil' bittle and thats k

how can a scream come from a closet demanding you to open it if there is nobody in there

and saying "look behind you" after you take out the "goodies"

is it a timed radio in there

well i just... I have a feeling that if I read the rest of the story it'd be a 3/10