Thread:Moria Fox/@comment-24242945-20130517190053/@comment-9613396-20130522061451

H. Phone wrote: YM, you're right, the ending of Her Obsession was good. Very well-written and I actually though the main characters were humans watching MLP. Really nice twist.

MF, you should definetely upload it to this wiki. Very good job.

Final verdict: 9/10

We Are Victims was also good, but a little less. I didn't like the fact that the killing was al about drowning. I thought the premise was good, but I also expected the killing to be a bit more creative. No notable grammar and spelling mistakes.

Final verdict: 7.5/10 'Scuse me? Only two of the victims drowned, one was already dead, the fourth was saved from drowning only to be fed alive to seagulls, and the child was skinned alive.