Talk:Revolution/@comment-5025667-20130916215525

Holy shit...

What the fuck did I just read?

Anyways I must say that you did a FANTASTIC job for a mindfuck and I loved every bit of it. The story was very engaging and well written as well. But the mindfuck... holy shit that mindfuck at the end was fucking sexy I must say. You had managed to give me a good laugh out of that. There are of course some complaints of course. The dialog is not in rhymes! XD A well deserved 9/10.