Talk:The Movies: Hell Pack/@comment-4332975-20130329011312

You have formatting errors, some horrible MS Paint images that aren't even properly displayed, and missing categories. The writing isn't bad, and has some things that I haven't seen, but it's by no means stellar, and there are some areas that are pretty common copouts for adding actual horror, and not done descriptively enough to make them work here.

You have 48 hours to at least get this up to site standards, and preferrably improve the writing a bit.