Talk:Bound to Follow/@comment-11079349-20131213231622

This is ... wierd, to say the least. It has a mild creepy atmosphere and does exactly as you wanted it to, however, there are some problems. I'm going to make a list of things that cought my attention, not just problems, though those tend to drag the most attention.

1. Alright, the first eye rolling cliche was 666. Sorry to say, but things like that don't just appear for one person, and, for some reason, I was compelled to look up game genie codes for this game. Not a single code has three of the same number in a row, so I, personally, would have stopped and used one of the many other super power codes.

2. on the other side of the argument, you didn't use the number 666 too many times, and the devil didn't eat your game and send you to hell. No, it was just that the code had 666 in it, so i was expecting something worse from this.

3. the debug screen ... well, it was something you used decently, and it doesn't have any particular shape to it. that was a nice touch, despite being a bit cliche. good job with that.

4. The Ness clones were a fairly nice touch, especially since you only used two cliches on them, those being the crying and red eyes, and you made a good screenshot. those two cliches can be passed as you didnt try to play them up too much.

5. so ... were you and your brother twins in this? And you could have done better with the disclosure that you were the sprites. could have read "We put on our favorite orange and purple striped shirts." which might have seemed like a coincidence at first, and then you would have said the whole irritated eye thing, and people would have guessed what was going on, and then you could have made that end happen.

So, my rating of this would actually be something around ... I'll say 6.5/10 because it could easily be better, but it was better than just at the "eh, this is average." point. I would point friends to this, but I wouldn't tell them to expect too awful much, just a good time with a decent creepypasta. So in case you couldn't tell, I liked this.