Talk:Needs Work/@comment-4003580-20150729045052

I'm decently sure this is the first thing I've reviewed this year, so let's begin.

I really enjoyed this story. In all, I found a single mistake (I think it was a mistake, it was "student of adult"), and the grammar was really well done.

The atmosphere of the story is great as well, being dark, yet humorous when you least expect it, like Breaking Bad was. It foreshadows itself quite nicely, and is overall, very well writen.

Honestly at this point, I'm trying to find something I don't like about your story, but for the life of me, I can't.

Overall, this story gets a 10/10. Fan-fucking-tastic.