Talk:Hanging Gardens/@comment-7706473-20130407134527/@comment-7706473-20130409034417

Thanks for linking the song, by the way. I'm a huge fan already! In return, can I recommend Druzhina?

Back to brass tacks - You really made the length work. If our narrator had stumbled around too much, it might have detracted from the horror, and any less it wouldn't have had time to build. This actually reminds me a little of an old Twilight Zone episode, though the name is kinda evading my memory right now. And that's a very good thing - this is the sort of story that stays with you and intrudes into your memory at one in the morning, and it's all the better for it!