Talk:010194/@comment-25021327-20170128051253

This one felt a little lacking to me. Not a whole lot happens in this, and it feels like it treads a lot of familiar ground. A werid copy of DOOM shows gory imagery that is more detailed than is ought to be, and that's more or less it. I'm not sure someone who liked DOOM would be quite so shocked by the imagery that was displayed in this version of the game, even though it is rather abnormal. Just speaking personally I would probably want to show the level to some friends and see what they made of it.

Another thing, and this is probably just a personal nitpick, was that the nostalgia references seemed a little forced to me. Getting the newest MS-DOS, SoundBlaster, 3.5 Floppy, Andy Griffith on VHS, these details in such a short story feel sort of unnecessary to me. Again just a personal thing.

In any case, I hope I didn;t come across too harsh in this critique, that wasn;t my intention. Maybe there is something here to be explored, but this piece felt a tad flat to me.