Talk:A Man's Best Friend?/@comment-32602006-20131222133737/@comment-32602006-20131223044547

Anyway I guess my main problem with this pasta is the tone is just a little too matter-of-fact. There isn't really any buil-up and we are not really given any reasons to care about the boy, so when he dies I was jsut like "well, that would be a little freaky" but it didn't really make an impact on me and wasn't chilling in any way.