Talk:~New Friend, A/@comment-25021327-20140613223434

I mostly enjoyed this pasta, although I feel it was a bit confused and awkward at points. The pacing kept me reading, once I realized feel, and level of suspension of disbelief required. I'm all for ambiguity in story details, leaving things up to the reader, however, I would have liked to know a bit more of the game's motivation for being so fanatical about getting this character to keep playing, and why it had such a paralyzing fear of loneliness.

I also believe the main character would have worked better if they were younger, I was imagining maybe a 11 or 12 year old until I read the actual age. But these are mostly just personal gripes, and all in all, I want to say nice job :D