Talk:The Angel of Vengeance/@comment-4544106-20150527135335/@comment-8470110-20150527143211

The formatting of the story is good, so you got that down. However, the main thing to keep in mind is adding categories. Either as you're editing or moments after you publish, make sure to add relevant and appropriate categories such "Creepypastas", "Creepypasta", "Ritual", etc.

As for your story, it was pretty good. I enjoyed it but it felt a bit slow until the end. The end really tied everything together nicely and it was a pretty solid story all the way through. Perhaps a few extra details during the ceremony could help this pasta, I'm not sure. Regardless, it was a solid story and a good idea. Nicely done, my friend.

Rating: 7/10

-Sshakenbakee