Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-24540056-20140212203329

I've recently published a creepypasta called trapped in the Rift. It's the first part to a three part series, and I want to make sure it meets a good standard. I need some advice on how to make the original pasta better, and make the sequel be as good as you would hope to be. If you haven't already, read the pasta, and then tell me what I'm doing right, what I'm screwing up, and what you'd like to see in the sequel.

-Sifenchar 