Talk:Prototype 10: Would you Kindly?/@comment-5025667-20130715144357

Anyways, I wanted to write a review for this as far back as I could remember, you know, being neck-to-neck with the pasta back in May and such. My pasta and this one ended up tying and having a re-vote, which I ultimately won in the end. The writer of Prototype was a good guy about it too, wishing me good luck and congratulating me when I won. I was glad that he was up in spirits about it.

And I must say, his pasta is amazing.

Those who have never played Bioshock may be a little confused at what the phrase "Would you kindly?" means exactly, and there could have used some small explanation as you got to consider who your audioence is. But besides that, I don't see too much to complain about besides some grammatical issues, most of which has been resolved. This is one of the few gaming pastas I've read where it manages to be creepy without any blood and gore in it. The events were a tad predictible and such, but it was effective all the less. Truthfully, despite my pride over my own pasta, I would have not minded at all if I lost to this one. This is just that fucking amazing, and I can't put it to words in writing this.

Would you kindly give this pasta a 9/10?