Talk:Sonic Sound Test Syndrome/@comment-26480939-20171204045427

Uh... what did I just read?

This seems like an attempt to tie in LTS, Unit 731, Sega, and various other things into One Big Conspiracy Theory. And like most conspiracy theories I've seen, it fails pretty badly in plausibility. I highly doubt that LTS and Sega are even connected in the slightest. Try to make this theory a bit more plausible than it is, then it might actually be decent. As it is now, though, I must say this is mediocre.

DAE Rating:

Meat: I'm not too familiar with Sonic aside from what I've read in various sources so I can't really score this. na/10

Story: As I said, this needs some improvement. 5/10

Scare Factor: Mostly reliant on cliché conspiracy theory elements blended with creepypasta. 5/10

Grammar/Spelling: Some unnecessary capitalizations, but otherwise good. 9/10

Final Rating: 6/10 Needs some improvements.

Fix the unnecessary capitalization and make the theory more plausible. That's all I can say for improving this.