Talk:Acknowledgement/@comment-7706473-20140901080422

A confession! At first, I was going to... I had to... How can I say this? As a lover of love, and encourager of all things that are good and pure, I originally wanted to respond with something straight fromt the heart - Stormlilly's superior senpai-snaring checklist! But then I read it over, and I realized that might be more frightening then any creepypasta I've ever written, so I crumpled it up and decided not to. But know that I and a thousand others are rooting for you, narrator. True love is a listless torrent that drowns all that stands in it's path! Crush the voices of restraint, and you'll find that it's just as easy to crush the object of your affection into a facsimilie that resembles love! True love!

Okay, so. Seriously. This is fantastic, lovely, and full of that pitch-tar humour that I love so much. As feedback, hrmn... I actually think the length is perfect for it. Too much time spent fleshing out the narrator's obsession might have made the story drag on, and this is just enough to show us that our unfamiliar with love and love-struck narrator is not only way out of depth, but perhaps dangerously so... For whatever parties are involved.

Personally, I choose to believe the narrator is actually recounting this to their objet d'amour, and that they are simply unable to believe they have finally managed to find a captive audiance.