Talk:Don't Starve: The Hidden Character/@comment-7117158-20130312134110

My main gripes with this were the heavy overused cliches of sentient game that talks to the player about their personal life and the unnecessary "instant corruption"

Other than that..to me the grammar just hurt, FAR too many use of "their" where a "there" belonged, some "its" that should be "it's" and at the beginning the "though" used twice just needs fixing with another t at the end, you want "thought"

Also, the very last line meant absolutely nothing to me.. the "and soon...I will know" it feels like that shouldn't have even been put there.

Don't take this as flaming, this is constructive criticism I hope you'll take on later.