Thread:DoctorProfessorPatrick/@comment-25645041-20141112191500

Regarding your creepypasta I commented on earlier, if you want some help I could re-write some parts of it for you if you like. Not altering the story line at all or anything, just adding quality to the sentences you have, wording them differently so they flow better.

Could you get back to me about what you think about that? 