Talk:Pay-per Mario/@comment-4332975-20130710112541

I don't think I really "get" this pasta. Most of it is pretty sparse on detail, so even though it's easy to follow, the flow of the story doesn't make much sense. Without the use of any kind of framing device, nothing really felt to me like it had any impact. It's less creepy than it is just...well, weird. Honestly, this would have made sense if it were describing someone's odd dream, but as a narrative about a series of events, I can't find any point of entry to really get into the story and enjoy it. The whole thing just feels to vague and detached from reality to feel threatening.