Talk:What Made Him This Way (Sonic.EXE Prequel)/@comment-4332975-20140729101838

It's not bad. I'll admit, I did at one time think about doing a prequel to Sonic.exe myself, and tying it in to one of my own stories. The thing is, Sonic.exe is so hammy, that I don't think much of anything can salvage it. While this comes closer than some, the pacing still feels a bit rushed at times, and some of the moments in the story lack dramatic impact. Plus, having the whole thing stem from Sonic breaking up with Amy Rose and not being able to get over it has three big problems.

1. It makes Sonic seem pretty pathetic.

2. It flies in the face of any established canon regarding Sonic and Amy's relationship.

3. It doesn't explain the supernatural powers Sonic has at all.

Still, you made an attempt, and didn't go any more hamfisted in the approach than the original story, so a definite A for effort...um...B- at least.