Thread:Caramelll the Dream Catcher/@comment-29588684-20160622025706/@comment-27896984-20160622114911

Thanks, I would really like it if you could review my first pasta, I posted a few days ago. The link is in my profile.

I have a lot more ideas but I cannot proceed with them without knowing if I am going in the right direction. After all, how an author sees his own story is a lot different from a reader viewpoint.