Talk:The Fine Line/@comment-24139390-20141024000719

For me, it really takes a lot to get me with the ending. I've seen so many pasta's good and bad that really fail with the last sentence, but you did really well with this, although it was more interesting than creepy. However, I enjoyed reading, and in my opinion, it's not too long or too short.

I'd give it a 7/10.