Talk:Carol/@comment-6491381-20140302154311

Story: 3/3 Length/Buildup: 2/2 Characters: 1/1 Creepiness: 3/4

The story was well done. It involved some action and explanation. Length and buildup were perfect. It took me 4 or 5 minutes to read, which is nice, and it built up to the ending quite well. The character Alex Fox was developed somewhat, showing his feeling and all. The creepiness also does well. Although I seen stories where children are taken *cough*slendy*cough*, it's still creepy.

9/10. Great work.