Talk:Remember Me/@comment-25021327-20150623234941

I thought that this one was all right. Nothing really original happens, and the ending left me a bit confused, not knowing exactly who the phantom was or what he was trying to tell the narrator with his words and actions. I'm not sure if I missed something, or if it was intentionally vague.

The descriptions here were pretty good, Having only played SSB a few times, I felt that I was abe to imagine what was going on at pretty much any time. The pace feels consistent and pretty good for the length here as well. The clarity was okay for the most part, aside from a few of the things I didn't understand there were a few grammar mistakes here, but nothing that detracted too much from the reading for me.

In all, this one feels mostly solid, if a little forgettable. Though I haven;t read a lot of SSB pastas, so that was a nice change of pace :)