Talk:Path of bricks/@comment-25021327-20140828235200

I like the fact that parts of this story do seem plausible. Nothing too crazy happens, just some bizarre glitches that hint at the supernatural. Very unlikely, but doesn't require nearly the level of suspension of disbelief needed for something like SONIC.EXE

That said, I do feel like the narrator's reaction to the game's strangeness may have been a bit excessive. He or she is introduced as a big fan of the game, then after one unsettling experience decides not to play the game anymore. Sure, the brick path leading to the mysterious book is freaky, the screamer is even worse. But to never even attempt the game again, not try to reinstall it, or anything, coupled with the fact that the narrator didn't seem to mind too much when all of their worlds were deleted doesn't make it feel like a hardcore fan.

But I suppose I'm rambling, and nitpicking. It's not a bad story, it's competantly written (Maybe take one more pass proofreading it) has an interesting premise, and I liked mysterious brick path. It's nothing groundbreaking, but it's not bad either. I hope you continue to write and enjoy the Wiki :)

(one more little thing, I giggled a bit that buying a hat, a scarf, and 2 cardboard toys cost the narrator Most of their savings. It's reads kind of oddly, but mostly I'm just teasing)