Talk:Back in the Womb/@comment-24540056-20141030165408

Well. That was a bit of a mindfuck. It's definately an interesting and new concept, but the story is a bit... confusing. I could barely keep up, and when I tried re-reading it to see if everything would tie in, having knew what would happen next... It didn't. Although I did get the general idea of it, I thought that there wasn't really enough explanation behind the events.

I give this pasta a 7/10