Talk:Remember/@comment-25400723-20160308231001

Facebook is not a valid category. Now I'm not a mod (yet) so I can't change categories, but next time consider therse category options and use them if they are appropriate to your story. And just as a reminder, not adding categories will first result in a warning, but multiple offences results in a short ban.

Here are commonly used categories:

Creepypasta and Creepypastas (Which you have)- These are required for every story, unless it is a poem

Poem- Use this if you are posting a poem

Videogames and Videogame- Usually both are required when posting a story about a Videogame(s)

Real Life- Use this category if your story happens in real life or outside of a computer or console

Original Story- Usually used if the story  being posted is an original piece of work from the author (person posting).

Now as for the story at hand.. ehh.

I don't know. Everything seemed very diorganized and the storys' pace was just way too fast to play out normal. There are a lot of things that need work in this story, and I'm sure you can you figure out what those things are.

~King