Talk:The Game That Never Was/@comment-8198649-20130915024359

Once I saw water Temple, I knew what it was. The Water temple is terribly annoying. I could immediately tell this was fiction because of that, but I'll put that aside.

I like how the disk drive was mentioned, and I really do wonder how Ocarina of Time would of worked out if it was like that.

As for the character coming out of the screen and KILLING the creator, thats kind of cliche, and not in the good way. However, its well written, and I didnt see many grammar errors. Good job.