Talk:I'll Never Be The Same (Version 2.0.1)/@comment-25021327-20150205140806

I never read the original version of this story, so I can't really make any comparative notes, But I did like this one. The spelling and grammar are in good shape (I think I only saw one typo) the pacing works well, fairly slow and steady. Also, I want to mention that the use of present tense is done well here, it rarely slips from present into past like I tend to see in other stories.

The story is pretty interesting too. Not being a huge Pokémon fan, I don't know if everything here akes sense in that regard, but I felt it worked. We've seen the setup before, a Pokémon's POV regarding the seemingly happy, saccharine things that happen in the games, or shows, but this still felt like it worked to me.

The descriptions were pretty well done, and some of the vocabulary in interesting. The ending lays the sorrow on a bit thick for my personal taste, but it's mostly effective. In all, this is a quick read that I found mostly enjoyable.