User blog comment:Popcorn23644/Pokemon shiny emerald (creepy pasta)/@comment-24540056-20141206183415/@comment-24540056-20141206193635

Ok, then. Let's try this again. Firstoff, I'm not entirely sure why the code text was there in the beginning, if it was a mistake, I suggest that you edit it out and put the pasta into a normal format. For now, let's just forget what I said before and take a more relaxed approach to your story. It's a PokeMon creepypasta, and as such, it can be hard to create one that doesn't have an idea that's already done before. This is no exception. First of all, creepypastas are supposed to be their own seperate pages. You create a new page by clicking the button that says "Contribute" to it. Start up with a blank page, and either write or paste your creepypasta into the box. Blog posts aren't the proper way to post these things, we've had users do it before ;). As for the pasta itself, the grammar can seriously be reworked, and the ripped limbs, blood, and gore kill the mood which wasn't set up too great to begin with. If you want to write a good creepypasta, you have to try your best to immerse your reader into the tale you want to tell.

Stories aren't meant to be done in 5 minutes, it's not how it works. If you have a good idea, it's best to write it in a word processor so that you can edit it out later, or have a spellchecker correct grammar and spelling mistakes. It's also a wise idea to try and make sure that your creepypasta follows the proper format. This means adding the obligatory "Creepypasta" and "Creepypastas" category in the categories box, aswell as other categories that would fit in such as "Video Game", "Video Games", "Real Life", "Pokemon", "Television", Etcetera. I'm hoping that you'll be able to correct these mistakes in any of your future endeavors.