Talk:Nintendo Switch Online: SNES Library Beta/@comment-26480939-20200211193029

Wow. This is... interesting, to say the least. However, here's some concrit:

1. A bit more information on this 'Infringio' character would be nice. I had no clue who he was, and the little explanation didn't give me enough to go on. Some people (like me, for instance) don't really know of all the fan-games and stuff that get DMCA struck by Nintendo. Explaining stuff like that would be helpful.

2. That 'custom character' comes out of nowhere. Who is he supposed to be? Your narrachter (narrator/character representative)?

3: Those 'punishments/murders' of Nintendo employees bother me in that some companies who didn't even have a game in the collection were represented. Why would they even be there in the first place if it was just meant to be representing the teams who worked on games in the collection? Unless I'm wrong here, I didn't see any games that IS worked on, or games that GF worked on in the collection of titles. And if you were trying to make a link between APE Inc. and Pokémon, then a better counterpart would be Creatures, Inc. as that was what APE was renamed after the release of EarthBound.

4. Who the f are those other seemingly shoehorned-in folks supposed to even be? The makers of DMCA'd fan games? If that is the case, then a little more explanation about that would be nice. Like, put the name of the maker, the full name of the fan-game they worked on, and then what they looked like in sprite representation. Otherwise, they just come off as Giant Space Fleas Out Of Nowhere.

5. That 'glitchy purple demon woman' at the end also comes out of nowhere. A better build-up to her appearance would be greatly appreciated.

6. There is a major overuse of the ampersand (&) where just putting 'and' would suffice.

I'm in a rather confused state of mind and as such can't really rate this at this time. Perhaps later I'll edit this post with my rating on it.