Talk:Every Rose Has Its Thorn/@comment-5757488-20131223153656

As always Flaky, you manage to spin out a great story.

The writing, as per usual, is excellent. It's thought provoking, and melancholy, and really helps us delve into the world and the characters.

Speaking of characters, I think they're definately one of the stories best aspects. They never fail to be interesting and relatable, and are well developed enough to be believable in the setting. You really get inside their heads, which helps the story greatly. I especially liked Tyrin's interior monologue.

As someone who has never played Pokemon, this story is still readable, and even enjoyable, compared to a lot of other Pokemon pastas on the sight, purely becuase it's so well executed and the characters are so deeply developed.

I conclusion, this is definately one of your best, which is saying a lot becuase of the outstanding level of quality mantained by your body of work. If I could find one minor problem, it was that the order of words sometimes seemed odd. Not wrong, by any means, just odd. For example "This was my entire fault"