Talk:Mario's Secret/@comment-25021327-20141231002558/@comment-25021327-20141231021944

Well, it is in better shape than it was initially. The format is more standardized, and some of the grammar issues were fixed. I still feel like this one could use some work. There are still some grammar and punctuation issues, lack of quotation marks around dialogue being one.

The story still has a bunch of clichés that have appeared in other haunted gaming stories numerous times. I'm going to keep the Needs work category here so the story may get some editting from other users, as well as the author. This will help the pasta's chances.

It still faces deletion after a period of time (based upon a future review) so it will still be checked out again within a week or so, but I'll take into consideration the effort you put in since initially posting this (as well as any additional fixing up before it's reviewed as well) when I go back to read this after some time.