Talk:START ME UP/@comment-25021327-20150103151625

3-January-2015- Adding Needs Work category. Judging from Rev's comment, this story seems to be in better shape than it was when it was originally posted.

The main reson I'm tagging this with Needs Work is the capitalization. Every sentence should begin with a capital letter, this is something I've been seeing a lot lately. Lack of capitals, in addition to being grammatically incorrect, makes writings look unprofessional and lazy.

I recommend writing stories in a program offline, then pasting them here. A program like Word, or OpenOffice typically has auto-capitalization options if you really can't be bothered to tap that shift key. Don't fear the [shift] key, I promise it won't bite! XD

As far as the story, it feels familiar and a bit cliché, but I don't think it's awful. Like I said the proofreading is the main issue. Being in Needs Work means that after 9 days, the story faces deletion if it has not been deemed significantly improved. I would hope this case would not come to that, as adding caps is a quick and simple thing to do. I'll keep an eye on this and adjust the categories accordingly as the work is done.