Talk:Sombrero Wearing Dinosaur/@comment-8198649-20131117020159

Alright, where do I start?

First of all, the paragraphs areeach a sentence. I'd fix that for the bigger ones.

Second, the dinosaur wearing a sombrero is quite far fetched, but original. I'm surprised how well it worked in the story. Props to that.

Finally, I like how the story goes and how the child's name kept changing. It really felt confusing in a good way, to the point it was interesting enough to get me curious what was going on. The rewinds were good as well, and I even made sure to reread them to spot the differences.

Over all, despite the odd name, I'd say this definitely isn't a trollpasta, but a bizarre, original story that really makes question reality. Bravo.