Talk:Fire Emblem: Demonic Stones/@comment-30102911-20161027001906

Well this was.... weird. From the way this story goes it sounds like this story is saying that the Demon King somehow managed to break out of the DS and wreak havoc on the world and at the same time the characters from the game managed to get out as well? After that there's apparently some kind of way the other characters manage to do the same and go with the main character on some merry adventure to stop him from creating mass destruction on the world? Even worse than this, when the Demon King is defeated it takes the form of a 3DS and somehow got to be transferred into a Gamestop? This whole thing sounds more like a wishful thinking fanfiction than a creepypasta, I suppose that's the primary complaint I can give about this story.

There is easily a more effective way to create an actual creepypasta around Sacred Stones. Most of the Fire Emblem games have some amount of lore that on close observation could easily be used for such material. Unfortunately this sort of story just has a feel that it's trying to be one of those weak Pokémon stories that cover similar areas which is the real disappointment. Just a side note, the grammar in this story really needs some work.