Talk:The Winter Knight Experiment/@comment-6794436-20150209235630

Sorry, I'm somewhat short for time right now, so this review will be rather short. If you want me to make a more in depth review of the pasta just tell me and I will tomorrow, but anyways, the review.

This was a pretty well done pasta. There were very few cliches or typos, and the grammar in general is great. This is written quite well too, and is a bit creepy also. The pacing is nice, and it is an incredibly interesting premise. The mindfuck at the end is alright, I mean, it didn't really leave my jaw hanging, and it was a bit predictable, but I still think it was executed rather well.

All in all, I would give this an 8.5/10, and sorry for the shorter, less information filled review, but like I said, I'm short on time right now, so I can't really make this too long. Once again, if you want me to make a longer review, than I'll definitely do it either later tonight, or tomorrow.

Sorry- Incorrect3