Talk:Eric/@comment-35192112-20161009225317

There are multiple inconsistencies in regards to what you can and can't do in New Leaf. The gate being open 24/7 isn't possible, once you leave the game, or go to another town, your gate closes and you have to manually open it again. You also would not be able to freely go to his town without the gate being open, which, again, requires you be in the game.

These errors would make sense if Eric was already dead, and was haunting the game. In fact, that would have made the story more creepy. But instead, it's just a "poor me" sob story about a boy who got so butthurt over a game, that he killed himself.

Should have gone the BEN Drowned route, and said Eric was already dead, and was unwilling to let go of the game. Maybe have him haunt the protag when he refused to play with him. It might seem overdone, but popular creepypastas are popular for a reason.