Talk:Spongebob Credits/@comment-28916908-20160917152542

A realy god start but a kinda not-likeable ending.

Dont get me wrong, i like the story and was exited there was a spongebob pasta, But i wanna spot some things you could fix.

Intro: Good.

beginning: Awesome!

Middle: Pretty dang good.

End: I think its kinda dull.

Aftermath: Im not trying to be mean but i think its kind of clitch'e.

9/10 Almost got a 8/10 rating but it only had a few mistakes, and is pretty good. Nice job!