Talk:Mega Man: A Good Friend/@comment-25468687-20140927023101/@comment-17737991-20140927031625

Characterization is deinitely better, but not by much. And... why in the world is he accusing the protagonist of killing his mother? .-. Aside from that, the grammar is still... very much in need of improvement. And your story isn't split into paragraphs, it's just a wall of text. Keep up the effort though ^^