Talk:Inside the Ram/@comment-25400723-20141003053511

I added this to needs work for a couple reasons. Number one would have to be the damn formatting. What is up with it? You should have your story seperated into paragraphs with about 6-7 sentences, not a continuous wall of single sentences.

There is a magnificent amount of spelling/grammar issues, but they are easy to fix.

Also, you have to add your pasta to the listibg if you have'nt already. I'd give this a 5/10. It's not really that bad, it just has a lot of mistakes.