Talk:Customer/@comment-25021327-20150326230406

This is kind of a neat little piece, focussing more on style than content. I found the fact that this didn't evolve into a more traditional narrative work somewhat refreshing :) I thought the descriptions here were pretty well done. Sometimes I felt like the wording and details that were accentuated were bordering on self parody, but the pacing was quick enough that they seemed to rein themselves in before things got to that point.

I felt engaged reading this, even though I didn't know where it was going (in honesty, I wasn't too concerned with that, as I was enjoying the ride) and I hope that folks read this ne and pick up on some of the techniques you used to describe the setting. Nice job, I'm glad I read this

(I hope someone closes that cooler door!)