Talk:A Spider Web/@comment-24240632-20131105011549

Longing for another good story from, I Love Scary Stories!

Description: 5.0/10 - unfortunately everything was very vague, if it was described at all, but I do realize that this is supposed to just be a simple conversation between a man and, "Death," but it's plagued with spelling and grammatical errors that could be easily fixed.

Plot: 6.9/10 - Although the base idea was very interesting, and I really enjoyed it after reading the authors note, without the authors note it would've been very confusing and you would've left your reader in too much mystery. A good idea, it it was done messy.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - Although it was plagued with grammatical errors, and the execution of the idea was messy, I really enjoyed this one!

Pros and cons: + Good Idea - Messy Execution Of Idea - Spelling And Grammatical Errors - Confusing - Leaves you with too much mystery

Overall: 6.9/10 - Okay.

"Don't get me wrong it's a good idea, but it could've been done better."

- Marcus