Talk:It Has a Rather Lovely Ending/@comment-4332975-20130301024500/@comment-6761334-20130301085503

I had considered that as an ending. The reason I didn't go with it was because I was trying to make the narrator a bit more savvy. It's a pet peeve of mine how things will be going relatively well for protagonists in a horror movie adn tehn someone does something worthy of a darwin award and all hell breaks loose.

Though I doo see what you mean about the narrator not being proactive. It does not get very close to the mysetry. I could see adding a section when the narrator is browsing the web where they go to developer's website. if they were browsing the site and it kept prompting them to play then facebook started spamming the narrator after closing the window it might 1. make the narrator more proactive and 2. explain the sudden interest in the actions of the narrator.

At the very least I should at that part and see how it flows. I'll get to that next week.