Talk:A Question/@comment-24.13.105.98-20131203010308

hmmmmm very good marcus!

characters- The characters as a whole arent very devloped at all but thats okay I really dont mind to be honest. However this is a major part of the story so it really took away the scare factor for me. However I do like the role the characters play. They have really clever roles and help add to the plot a lot which is something every character needs in every story. However if the characters dont show how much he loves her why should we show love. 7.5/10

story- A great idea that was presented quite well. I do feel it was rushed and I wish you explained certain parts a bit more then others. However this does make me question myself and for that I will give you a high score because I like it when people mess with my reality not exactly sure why. 8/10

overall- very good story that did mess with my mind. 7.9/10 :D