Talk:Reunion/@comment-7706473-20140815130537

Hmn, I think we need a Crime category, or something like that. Crime/Criminals..?

First off, I'm going to talk about your style, especially compared to your previous style. I like it! It's very terse, but (in Reunion, at least) that fits the legalistic nature of the main character. Kiyoshi seemed so preoccupied with his night ride and busting crime that I could believe he wouldn't see the conclusion coming - and there's always something creepily paranoid (paranoic?) about being an intelligent individual who misses all the clues until it's just too late.

Story-wise, I felt the story was brief but that effective, and my only complaint would be seperating that one paragraph - about Takashi and Kiyoshi's history - into two somewhere, as the key factor of Takashi just recently coming back into contact with Kiyoshi is submerged in the text. Seperated though - there's just enough to tip the reader off without breaking up the flow of the story.

Also, the moon across water is beautiful. Out of places to die, I can think of worse.