Talk:BIONICLE the Game/@comment-205.236.31.230-20150309154327

No. Please no. This story seemed to be half decent up until the end. The build up is sqaundered on what has to be one of the WORST ENDINGS TO A STORY I HAVE EVER READ. Ending is generic, cliched, and makes the whole story unbearable. Pointless Gore, pointless Red eyes, events that make no sense and don't really add up or build up to anything, stuff that is only understandable if you played or know about Bionicle...

Please, before releasing your first creepypasta(im hoping this is a first), read the new writer's guide lines so you get an idea of what NOT to do. Plus, you forgot to even sign your name, so I don't even know who im talking to. Maybe some rouge Ai who spends his whole time doing nothing but writting bad creepypastas.

Only bright side is there is no Hyper-realistic blood.

rating: 2/10(Please actually put effort next time)

-Haxtozous