Talk:Barry's Funeral/@comment-6471011-20130310210623

great story, until the very last line. I see no reason why you wouldn't play pokemon again. nothing to tramatizing happened. and you knew it was a hack, so it shouldn't be too scray.

other than that, I loved this story. I like how the characters acted like normal sprites, and events happened like they would in the game. the knife was a bit of a stretch, but i can overlook that. good job. 8/10