Talk:Blood: The Nightmare/@comment-8407667-20130419132549/@comment-24.214.143.164-20140701231644

Firstly, KARKAT! *Swoons*

Secondly, something huge that I noticed later in the story is that your grammar gets worse and worse, and the paragraphs all seem to be incomplete and disjointed. Also, Blood did have it's source code released to the public, making mods possible. All-in-all, this a great first attempt for a Creepypasta, but heavily flawed in some ways.