Talk:Doom The Final Secret/@comment-7706473-20140605105013/@comment-25021327-20140920000435

Not to press the issue, but in the future do be sure to check your research before posting a final pasta. Any little flubs can take a reader familiar with the game being written about out of the story. And if there is any kind of mistake someone will notice... they alllllllways do. bleh. :P

That said, This was a pretty enjoyable read. Nothing groundbreakingly original, and it has it's cliche moments, but as far as a Haunted Video Game story, this holds up pretty well. I may be a bit biased as I have a bit of a soft spot for DOOM, even that pixelated mess of an SNES port :)

I also did kind of like that the "Devil" character was not exactly this all powerful Video Game monster demon, in reality he was kind of whiny and bratty. Making this character play almost like a young child would make their friend's play a game a certain way so that they would always win. Just gave a little depth to what could otherwise have been a generic game demon.