Talk:Maria's Revenge/@comment-96.232.163.224-20130530205534/@comment-5358960-20130531043912

I appreciate it. I'll definitely take your thoughts into account. I'm actually starting College this fall and I will be taking an expository writing class. Hopefully this will help me, lol. Anyway thanks for critiquing my Pasta, and yeah I was really was lost when I said I cropped it "just because".