Talk:Power Corrupts/@comment-11366536-20141211194351

I like the idea of this creepypasta.

Good Things in the Story : Good Story in general, Excellent Tone and Pacing, and and eerie feel to the story makes this story great. The Concept is original and well-imputed into the story as well.

Problems in the Story : The Paragraphs should be spaced a bit more so people reading this will have an easier time doing so. Some phrases, as Ukelbot said, are kind of hard to understand, and the story feels a tiny bit rushed.

Overall, this creepypasta is exceptionally better than most creepypastas on this Wiki, and for that, I congratulate you.

Final Verdict : 8/10