Talk:Power Outage/@comment-5025667-20130524041658

A lot to tell in TWO FUCKING PARAGRAPHS! but this time around the short length actually helps rather than hinder it. It ends rather appropriately and not sudden this time. Not saying that it shouldn't be longer and that I can't wait for the day where one of your pastas will have three paragraphs, I liked this. I really did. The build-up was nice and the pay-off was worth the long length. Very descriptive, your best yet! 9/10