Talk:The Road Not Taken/@comment-24181739-20150312035711

This neds... some work. Seriously. I know this is a first, but... man, this is just... read the problems section.

Problem 1: The Premise.

A basically messed up Mario Kart 7, is it? Well, if it is just that, make it something NOSTALGIC. MARIO KART 7 CAME OUT FOUR YEARS AGO. I would suggest Mario Kart 64 or Super Circuit.

Problem 2: Line Breaks.

It's annoying, it's like me talking l

ike this.

Problem 3: Cliches are everywhere!

FINAL RATING: 1.03 / 3.01, 34.2% or an F.

"Try making the linebreaks nonexistant. Just send this back to the Chef, it's a bit raw."