Talk:I'm Alone/@comment-17737991-20130909180315

You need to add a category! Quick, add one before it's too laaaateee! It has to be an existing category, and if you don't add any you'll be temporarily banned :/

Whoa, I love the concept of this. It wasn't executed very well, but the idea of people's emotions written through stories and such, turned into code, and then combined into a virtual entity is awesome. Like, imagine if every creepy pasta here combined and became sentient. How twisted that creature would be!

There's so much potential with this, but the story is very short and doesn't fully explore what such a being could do. It sent toxins out and killed some people, but that's really it. I'd like this virtual entity to do more, and more backstory on how it came into existence would be nice too. The story is too short and I personally think it had way more potential than what you wrote. What you did write though can be a bit confusing at times, perhaps because the grammar isn't very good.

Oh, and where is the character now? In jail, at the police station, home? Apparently the events happened "The other day". I can't imagine finding the time to type that out if the character was being interrogated by police. Some clarification on how all that worked out would help this be more understandable.