Talk:The Watchers/@comment-5675310-20131203004541

The Watchers have come with a good mindf*ck!

Description: 6.0/10 - Although plagued with grammatical and spelling errors, I can still understand what you're trying to say. Once I translate all these grammatical errors to make sense, I can see that your word choice is actually quite good, and that you were trying really hard to describe evrything that happened. If it weren't for the grammatical and spelling errors, I have a feeling that this aspect of the story would get a rather high score.

Plot: 7.5/10 - Scattered, random, and rushed, but also interesting, and a great mindf*ck that I never saw coming. Oh, and of course it's Christmas themed, which was a great idea my friend.

Entertainment: 7.0/10 - There were many points where the story felt rushed and the obvious grammatical errors turned me off a bit, but the awesome mindf*ck at the end made this quite enjoyable!

Pros and Cons:

+ Extremely surprising ending

+ Good word choice

- Plot felt scattered, rushed, and random

- Ovious grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story

Overall: 7.0/10 - Good.

"A mindf*ck with an ending you won't see coming, but feels like every other aspect of the story was rushed."

- Marcus