Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog: Fun for all the Family/@comment-26480939-20171204213717

This is a pretty interesting in-universe examination of someone playing this game and really makes you think about what you do whenever you play. The 'evil entity' is the actual player of the game, and makes you think of how Humans Are The Real Monsters at times. Is putting fictional characters through all this misery truly 'entertainment' or would it be considered in-universe torture for eternity? This kind of reminds me of the Poképasta "Glitchy Red", what with the self-aware characters and whatnot. This is a theme I don't see used often in video game creepypastas very much. I'd like to see this kind of approach used for other series.

DAE Rating:

Meat: I'm not too familiar with Sonic to rate this with any authority here. NA/10

Story: As I mentioned in the comment, this is very good food for thought on humanity's true nature when it comes to playing video games. 9/10

Scare Factor: Not too much in this, moreso making you think about things. 5/10

Grammar/Spelling: Not too bad here. Only one real spelling mistake (torturous in place of tortourous) and one minor punctuation error (the sentence "Why am I damned to this enslavement like cattle" being ended with a period instead of a question mark, as it is a question being asked, indicated by the "Why") need fixing, otherwise understandable all-around. 9.75/10

Overall score: 9.5/10 Some minor fixes needed, otherwise excellent.