Talk:The Path: A Serious Problem/@comment-25836078-20150101025211

The pasta in itself - alright. Ther were some cliches here in there, but overall not terrible. One thing I didn't get though was the random smiley faces. It kinda ruined the experience. But your grammar was pretty good, aside from a couple of spelling mistakes, and overall it was alright. Not very scary, but alright still. 6/10

P.S: The monster reminds me of Lisa from P.T. aka Silent Hills