Talk:War Is Never a Game/@comment-7227708-20130317122355/@comment-6470295-20130317151717

"OMG THIS IS TERRIBLE." ;D

In all seriousness, this is kinda just another creepypasta with OMFGBLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUD!, except that this time there's war.

This story moves way too fast, and is describable by:

"TF2 HACKER IS MESSAGING ME."

"OH NO MY TEAM IS DEAD"

"SUDDENLY GUY ISN'T ON STEAM.".

Also, you -NEVER- talk about creepypasta in a creepypasta. That ruins the immersion. Also, NEVER say that something is either fake or real.

Aside from these things, this didn't blow a carrot. 5/10.