Talk:Small Town Terror/@comment-24240632-20130719021259

First let me say that this was a good idea. With that said let's begin.

Description: 7/10 - It was decent, but nothing amazing. You also had a handful of spelling and grammar issues including once again the recurring problem: I... see should be I... See. Understand? I know I'm not the best at giving examples.

Plot: 7.25/10 - Not bad and the twist at the end where the kid may have been the murderer left me to wonder, but the slender mindfuck was basically obvious throughout the whole story.

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - The tension always seemed to be slowly settling in and the short little messages on the computer were a joy to read and rather interesting, but with the grammar issues which didn't bother me to much and the okay description I feel it wasn't as good as it could've been.

Overall: 7.75/10 - Good. Although not as impressive as your other pasta it was still a more enjoyable read then most of my pastas. Just tidy it up a bit and add some more detail.

"Another good pasta that was entertaining, but it has a handful of minor flaws which overall impact the story in a bad way"

- Marcus