Talk:Bell Luna/@comment-30102911-20161120034115

Pretty decent overall. Sort of like what the previous comment said, this actually does sound like the setup for an episode of Supernatural even down to the sort of conversation Sam and Dean would have after arriving on the scene of the crime at the end. For the story itself it's nice to see that it does subvert the concerns about the Bell Luna character (I assume that's what this monster is caled) actually is a monster and not some overly violent anti-hero. I think there might be some room for development on this type of story if it were handled right.