Talk:Отважный Конан/@comment-5757488-20130825182216

I really enjoyed this pasta. It was great to read, it flowed really nicely, and drew you in. The writing style was nice enough, but the description sometimes felt dry, although this definitely didn't detract from the experience at any point.

The characters were simple, but endearing, especially the protagonist. I can easily connect with the feeling of time going past like a blur when playing a video game, so taking that further into entire days and even weeks was a great idea!

The end was abrupt, but it lets us draw our own conclusions about why this was happening which was brilliant. It makes you wonder if Uncle Mike was telling the truth in his letter, or something else is going on?

In conclusion, the story was unsettling, and definitely an interesting read. Good job!