Talk:Flout/@comment-29588684-20160422021922

Wow, Linden just Wow. That is a nice laid out story, no cliche's here, and floating. Then you turn to mutation like some werid radition effect. There was a small nitpick, there is weird paragraph's on here. I dunno, it is just hard to read for me.

Nice Story, Linden. 9/10.