Talk:Little Red Riding Hood/@comment-25400723-20150113202700

Err.. I hope you realize "Riding" is spelled wrong in the title.

Now that that's out of the way, let's take a look at this pasta.

So, this is actually pretty good. I usually never read poems on here, but I decided I'd give it a try and read one. It was exceptionally written and your grammar and spelling were great (except for that one mistake in the title, which bugs me for some reason XD).

But, as Incorrect mentioned below, this gets a little confusing and hard to follow. Like when it switches from Red Riding Hood and goes to the part about the tree.

But besides that, this was a pretty good poem!

7/10

~King