Talk:A Message From Me to You/@comment-25249478-20150120134740

This was good. The whole "I'm you from the future", and "Don't look behind you" thing is a little corny like Urkel mentioned, as is the story concept as a whole, but overall I don't regret reading it. Good grammar, pacing was good, and it was a bit creepy. But the story was also a bit too short for my liking.

6/10. I'm taking a few points off because of how I felt the story concept and ending were a bit cheesy, and how short this is, but it's quite creepy, and good grammar and pacing make this an all around enjoyable read.

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 13:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)