Talk:Nevierazimiie Kultie/@comment-25021327-20141008035420

Another one of yours that I much enjoyed! I was honestly thrown for a loop when it was casually revealed exactly what out protagonist was doing at this little social get together. I hadn't considered that the narrator was involved in this party as more than another guest.

It wasn't too long, yet the pace was consistent, and didn't make the narrative feel rushed, or incomplete. Events were described in such a way that helps amphasize just how quickly these happenings transpired from the opening of the tale.

I found the narrator to be relateable, and likable. And The was things turned out in the end was a nice way to wrp things up, and keep the tone light following such unsavory events. I liked this quite  a bit :)