Talk:Somniare Mors/@comment-25021327-20150831134057/@comment-24082398-20150901022055

Hey Urkel, thanks for the review! A lot of the issues you said were blaringly evident to me, too, even as the writer. This was a foray into alien territory because I don't usually do these sorts of stories, but I'm glad you still enjoyed what little you could make sense of. I hope to rewrite it and address the issues present so it can be a bit better next I publish it. Thanks again for reading!