Talk:Chaos/@comment-26480939-20160826025017

Eeh, that wasn't terribly great. Even the main hook of the best friend being a stalker and threatening to kill you is kinda 'meh'.

Honestly, I wasn't sure what to expect with this. When I saw the mention of the game being "Pokémon Chaos Version", I immediately thought of this bootleg called Pokémon Chaos Black. I thought this might be a creepypasta about that game, and I was very disappointed.

Although, I do believe CB was a ROMhack of FireRed to begin with, so that at least is consistent.

DAE Rating: 7/10 Some improvements needed, average otherwise.

My suggestion for improving this? Give us more 'meat' on the ROM hack itself and build up better to the ending.