Talk:ACNL:Ww/@comment-25021327-20161101233750

Okay, first off, this is a work-in-progress. We try not to have such pages on the wiki. As such, this page will face deletion in 48 hours if the story remains unfinished.

As for the story so far, there isn't much to comment on. However it seems like a fairly basic setup, and I fear that this one is going to take a pretty standard route as far as having spooky things happen in the game with some blood and guts thrown in. As I said, there really isn't enough here to do much of a review on. I don't yet feel drawn in by the setup, and some of the writing could use some polish.