Talk:Undertale: The human never fell/@comment-11366536-20160615184619

Oh jeez, I saw a creepypasta of this quality coming a mile away when it comes to undertale.

Summary - The plot is extremely rushed with very little-no developments, which results in a forced ending that doesn't work. Amateur cliche's are everywhere in this thing, and there is barely any explanation of the events being presented in the pasta. Not to mention there's a lot of details in the story's introduction that are unneccessary and therefore shouldn't exist.

The only thing I can say that's remotely good about this story is that the Grammar is at least up to par, and that you added catagories. Other than that, the rest is in dire need of improvement.

Verdict - 2/10 (Awful)