Talk:The Sewer's Secrets/@comment-7706473-20140611113031/@comment-25045717-20141127213005

Hey Stormlily, Thanks for the advice. I'm considering making a revised edition of this story maybe a bit more informative so It will help the reader to understand the story more, It would help alot if I could get some tips from you to writing a good story. Well thanks for being honest with me and I'll hope to do better in the future :)