Talk:The beserker part 2/@comment-24540056-20140929191733/@comment-17737991-20140929194535

1. One does not need to write their own story to recognize another's as shit.

2. Sifen's stories are better than this one anyway.

Anyway... the author could at the very least fix the grammar. Surely he's seen a book before and can comprehend correct capitalization... and the purpose of a period. This story seriously needs a lot more periods. If every sentence is a paragraph long, you're doing it wrong.