Thread:Refreshing Demise/@comment-25021327-20140704031846

Hey there, I've seen that you have reviewed quite a few pastas on the wiki, I was wondering if you might have  any interest in taking a look at one of mine at some point. It's called "Metroid: Mother?" and it's up for CPoTM. I'm just trying to get some more feedback about it. It is a bit lengthy, so if you don't have time, it's cool :) 