Talk:Summer Nights/@comment-Refreshing Demise-20131220050515

Summer Nights, reading pastas that are too short.

Description: 6.7/10 - There were sentences that were too short and could've been expanded upon, along with some other grammatical errors, but nothing that turned me away from the story itself. Things were described and detailed alright and you did a good job writing in second person.

Plot: 6.0/10 - Although it had some good build up, the ending didn't feel like the huge climax that the story deserved. You left the readers with too much mystery to the point that they couldn't even tell what the pasta was about. Although it's a good starting point, this story feels far from finished.

Entertainment: 6.0/10 - It's an easy read, but there's not enough here to make the story truly interesting.

Pros and Cons:

+ Good start

+ Good build up

- Climax sucked

- Feels unfinished

Overall: 6.2/10 - Okay.

"A good start with some build up that could make for a great story. Unfortunately it feels completely undinished."

- Marcus