Thread:Urkelbot666/@comment-26268104-20150826235822/@comment-26268104-20150920233348

Urkelbot666 wrote: Seems to be coming along pretty well so far. The only thing I really noticed what that you state that this started when you were 12 years old, and then... *re-reads story* Oh, it looks ike you took care of that :D so yeah, this seems like a nice start :) Can you tell me what was good about what I have so far so I can keep those good qualities for the rest of the story?