Talk:What a Waste/@comment-5245439-20130729090215/@comment-71.140.91.44-20130729214714

This Pasta is a retelling, that why there is so much profanity.

Living in such a small town, word gets around quickly. With people witnessing two children getting kidnapped, they were able to give plates and the like and contact the police, who then after locating the car near an isolated area, were able to figure out that they had fleed or stayed in the general location. Finding footprints and the like, they were able to track down to the cave. They worried for hostage safety, not knowing if the men were armed, and so they waited for the right time to act.

I fixed the text.

Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad to hear what I got right and what I could improve for future creppypastas.