Talk:If Only/@comment-50.179.22.81-20140107232147

Hmm I liked how you tried to make it personal but I would have liked more emotion with that I would also like to see how the ghosts connect more to his problems maybe have the ghosts be all in his head. I think I would have liked that better instead of having random ghosts. For your first pasta its not bad its just kinda clichéd which I know you hate. ~ scary