Talk:The Intruder 4/@comment-32414376-20190326160606

...was this supposed to be scary? First of all, poor capitalization already tells the reader that this story already deserves to be sent to hell. Also, is this about an already existing creepypasta? Man, next time look at this first and take time by typing your story out on something like Google Docs, or even Notepad. If this were your first creepypasta than okay. But you gotta understand, people will go haywire for seeing something like this. Also, two more things, READ YOUR STORY ONCE YOUR DONE. Or, get a friend to read the story, this is so you don't have spelling errors. Other than that, good day.