Talk:Rufio's Neighbor/@comment-25021327-20141021135602

This was pretty well written, and well paced.The descriptions were well one, making it easy for someone like me, who has never played ny Elder Scrolls games, to follow along. The spelling, grammar, style, clarity, and format are all up to par as well, which is always nice.

The story has a real air of believability in it, as nothing really supernatural, nor implausible happens. That being said, for me it felt almost too plausible by the end. The unknown quest appears, weird events happen, and then the story kind of just ends. As much as I liked reading a story which didn't spiral into insanity an clichés, I felt a bit deflated after reading it.

This could be due to my aforementioned unfamiliarity with the Elder Scroll Series. This story, like most gaming related pastas, probably works better for a reader who has experienced actual gameplay. As I said, it was a pretty nice read, and the ending was more of just a personal nitpick.

Also, this is what I thought of when I read the name Rufio ;)

"Hook" reference.