Talk:Insane/@comment-24240632-20130822212820

I HAVE CHANGED MY REVIEWING FORMATT A LITTLE BIT.

Is it insanely good or bad?

Description: 6.2/10 -  Once again I feel like this could be much more detailed and could've had a lot added to it, but you did fix up your grammar a bit which does help because I felt a little more immersed.

Plot: 6.0/10 - It was better and worse. You've still got flaws like the way that the mom and dad just throw the kid in a mental institution so quickly just for being a massive brat. On the other hand though I feel like the build up was a little better even with it's short length. One more flaw though is that you missed an oppurtunity to make this pasta so much more when you wrote "I started food fights in school using fruit... Just to please the game" But it feels like you did nothing with that and just suddenly moved on! So for those reasons I have to give this the same rating.

Entertainment: 6.5/10 - Although some parts were almost laughable; it was fun seeing how the story progressed.

Overall: 6.3/10 - Okay.

"Slightly better."

- Marcus