Talk:What I've Always Been/@comment-25873297-20151014194718

I love this series, and all the installments thus far, and I like this one.

I like this chapter to AHWFM, and that's it. It doesn't feel as authentic as the previous entries, and is the shortest chapter to date. This isn't a bad thing, and isn't why I only like it.

It was rushed, and I feel it could've used a little more time. The grammar isn't perfect, and many events are restated, or unclear. Many description of events don't exactly work as intended, and there are a couple of subtle cliches hidden in the story.

I love this series, but I don't want to see it fall short in the second half. I understand that Tyrin isn't here to write with you, but you are a capable writer on your own, and I know you can do it.