Talk:Withered Roses/@comment-25021327-20150112024354/@comment-25998699-20150112032452

Hi there, I'm the OP, just made an account.

Thank you for the review, it was very critical, which is exactly what I'm looking for, this is my first time creating a story in a long time, so I'd like to know what I can improve on.

Your comment on the ending especially intrigued me, you said it was heavy handed. I'm not entirely sure, but I do agree if it means overly dramatic. To be honest I couldn't think of a better ending. I figured the "Eye for an eye" kind of approach worked best, but maybe I'll just say it's a metaphor for the death penalty, ha.

I also figured that the story was predictable, because I noticed halfway through that it was almost the same as Million Dollar Baby.

Again, thank you very much, I would love to be featured on a haunted gaming, so this lets me know I gotta step my game up.