Talk:Sonic Endless/@comment-25021327-20150922002955

This one had a few interesting points in it. On the whole, it felt a little familar what with the stragne hacked game and the protagonist being depressed and suicidal. At least in this pasta there was a reason given for it.

Again, there were a lot of things here that tread familiar ground, like the nature of the game having no enemies, and, as I mentioned, the main character being depressed and sending messages of despair to the player. I didn't find this one so much creepy, but it's a subject that has some intrigue. A Sonic fan who had been unhappy with the direction of the series makes a hacked rom in which Sonic is crying for release. And it would indeed be a bizarre occurrance if it happened, but I, personally, would find it more interesting than scary.

There were some issues with typographical errors, but nothing too major or distracting. The descriptions were adequate enough that I could follow along without much trouble. The pacing felt pretty good for the length of this piece. I guess my main complaint would be that it feels a little stale in the way it presents the evens of the game. I think it would have been neat to try to find new ways to get the message of the story across without using old themes like I mentioned above (sad character, empty level etc.) So I don;t think this is bad, it just feels kind of standard.