Talk:Everyone Talks/@comment-76.16.164.16-20170104040256/@comment-26569434-20170114193156

I had to highlight it all just to read the bloody thing.

Congrats on making one of those edgy bland "I want attention!" comme- oh wait what're you... oh god! kid are you serious! oh god no you have so much to live for, ignore what they're saying don't put that heated knife to your arm-... oh he made it out alright! it's a good thing high degree burns and infections don't exist in this little fantasy world!

this is kinda poor in writing and plot. what sort of sadistic person would want to watch a person livestreaming themselves slitting their wrists? exclude the trolls from this question. How is the main character not suffering from burns and/or infections, or maybe he is but you're leaving so little detail that I can't tell if this is a pasta or a kid's story project, and most importantly... who actually makes those empty comments only to go through with them and fucking cut their arm with a 1'000 fucking degree knife just to fucking appeal to a bunch of fucking online strangers?

2/10: You have potential though not alot, I suggest you go look up some creepypasta and practise more