Talk:Majora's Malice/@comment-26904186-20150820142304

Good attempt on your part, sir. But, as some below have said, it has many mistakes; grammar, punctuation and etcetera. Now, the positives to it. The plot was on the milder side of clichés (Like choosing Majora's Mask, and the blood). Blood was on the mild side, which is nice, but it just... Ends. With no closure. Again, I've seen much, much worse Creepypastas, but that doesn't make it that better.