Talk:Backpacker Alex/@comment-4332975-20150713161553

Your writing quality is great. As far as the story goes, though, well...it's "fine", but a bit short, and a bit predictable. By itself, "Character X is actually a serial killer! (Dun dun dun!)" just isn't a compelling stinger for a creepypasta story. Still, I'd love to see this with an extpanded story, and a bit more build-up to really set the mood, and not tipping its hand so early. What's going on is pretty much obvious off the bat right now, and for a story like this, you really want it to come as a surprise, especially if it's the note you plan to end on.