Talk:The Wrath of the Titan/@comment-8198649-20130915021134

Well, ok, lets see.

For once, it isn't "my cartrige is haunted" ! In fact, the only cliches I saw were the move they cant learn (I know that can be changed with hacking, I own all the regis knowing fly) and Killing a character. I have seen the transfer between cartriges before, but not to the point it has come to being cliche. Since there weren't an unforgivable amount, I'd say its doing pretty good so far!

Now for the writing. I didn't notice any grammar errors, and it didn't go crazy bonkers to the point I didn't understand what was happening.

Over all its well written, and the pictures are nice additions. Good Job.