Talk:I Was Gone Too Long/@comment-24239143-20130909195618

Ok lets get to this:

The plot: It was a good plot, definately. 7/10

The execution: It wasn't a creepypasta... 0/10

Grammar: At it's decency. 9/10

The story: Basically you describing a game... 5/10.

Overall: 6/10, okay.

"This should have been a creepypasta, but it was okay."

-> Morgan.