Talk:Blood on the Cornfields/@comment-7706473-20140511101423

Historical pasta is the best pasta, and Cormorant is most definately entwined with your work; it was chilling how well you wove the song into your story, and then expanded the history (and just enough elaboration) to capture the reader and make them realize just how grim a time that was. My only regret is - like ILSS! - that it felt like it could've been longer, though I'll be honest; I don't know how. It's the *perfect* length, but it leaves you wanting more; which I suppose is a little voyeuristic, given the disturbing nature of the content?..

Regardless, powerful and disturbing. Red poppies, for all the obvious reasons and the less.