Talk:The Gatekeeper/@comment-25021327-20141230013707

This felt like a fairly standard gaming pasta. It had some of the usual tropes; the strange download, the odd occurrances of different games referencing the haunted game, game fries the computer.

With that said, I don't think this story really does anything too bad, it just doesn't feel like it stands out too much among other haunted game pastas. The pacing is a little jumpy at times, but pretty consistent for the most part. As I said, I think the main thing about this story is that it doesn't really stand out. And personally, I like DOOM related stories.

I think that you're writing is getting stronger, and I'm glad to see that you continue to write regularly :) The pacing and build up here feel a little better here, and I appreciate that you tried your hand at the relatiely narrow genre of gaming pastas.