Talk:The Eye of the Beholder/@comment-25021327-20141026005754

The concept of perception is always interesting to me. To think that we all understand, or interpret things in a similar way, but we'll never know if we actually see things exactly as others. We may both call a strawberry red, but who is to say that our eyes are displaying the same hue?

As for the story, it's okay. Nothing too spectacular, and I feel it might be more effective if the story was drawn out and expanded upon. If it were paced more slowly, and built up a plot device a little less abrupt and silly than the witch grandmother's spellbook. But the spelling, grammar, format, and clarity are all fine.