Talk:A Game That Controls, A Game That Hates/@comment-13205380-20130821044513

I recommend not including an email address just for personal safety, because even though most people are nice here (in their own ways) you don't want to be cyber stalked.

Anyway the format is unusual for here but not harsh on the eyes. I don't have much to say on this as I felt it was well written for a 9th grader but didn't carry an impact on me like other pastas do. It isn't bad by any means, but needs refinement. Keep at it kid and you'll do fine