Talk:Time Slippage/@comment-26480939-20160826205444

This is something out of the ordinary for a Poképasta, and I like that.

So, this Cyndaquil let its innate evil get out of control and just went all pyromaniac and it needed some kind of sacred medicine to snap out of it? o_O Sheesh, this made me boot up my SoulSilver to check on MY Typhlosion, Arashi, to make sure she was okay.

She is, but that's not my point.

The only real suggestion I have is to clarify what version the narrator is playing in the beginning, instead of making us read through a good number of paragraphs to learn that it's Silver Version.

Also, I bet that KO of the Shiny Gyarados would piss you off like crazy, considering how low the odds of finding a non-guaranteed shiny are at 1/8192. :P I always go berserk whenever I accidentally take out a shiny I wanted to catch. *glares at her Linoone in AS who took out a shiny Tentacool*

You deserve a healthy 9/10 for doing something not normally seen in Poképastas. Good job. ^_^