Talk:A Little Exposed/@comment-6830263-20130607115313

Hmmm... I don't know what to think of this. It's certainly not bad. Well-written, interesting premise, but it failed to scare me. The mother just died and nothing more, most likely because of a regular drive-by. Also the conversation at the end didn't make the ending better at all. If anything, it made the pasta worse. It's also way too short for my liking and suffered from a lack of build-up.

Final verdict: 5/10