Talk:MusicCity.com/@comment-25021327-20150708025856

This one felt a little rushed to me, I think that the concept has some potential, but there are some things in here that didn;t really work for me. I think it was mostlt that there wasn't much detail here, and I felt like there were some plot-holes, and some stretching of  my suspension of disbelief.

It seems odd that the narrator would listen to the awful music long that her ears would literally bleed before she just did the logical thing and took off the headphones. I also couldn't quite figure out how the person at the end figured out how to find the narrator. The only detail she gave was "I'm in a van" and this person was able to magically find the Narrator and rescue them without getting caught.

Also, there are some issues with spelling and grammar that could stand to be proofred. They were to the point that they were a bit distracting from the pasta.

Anyway, like I said, it might have some potential, the whole mysterious music site with strange music that has sinister implications is cool. But the execution here felt pretty lacking to me.