Thread:Nightsbladeoftruth/@comment-10275696-20130601164854/@comment-4332975-20130601185308

The story didn't do a good deal to set the tone. It was more a list of events that insists, "This is scary! You should care about this!" without ever giving the reader a proper reason to do so. There's not much done with the premise, and while it had a few unique concepts, it was mostly bland, with non-menacing evil-because-evil without any rhyme or reason to it, and occasional mumblings from the moustache-twirling exposition fairy. It probably wasn't the worst thing that's ever been posted here (I think we may have deleted that an hour or so ago), but Sonic and Evil Entity pastas are two things that get done a lot...especially in combination with one-another, so there is a bit of a tendency to judge them more harshly, simply due to lack of originality.