Talk:A Very Eccentric Nightmare/@comment-11366536-20160515211905

This is honestly one of the best reads I've had in a very long while, honestly.

The story's a very unique spin on a mindfuck pasta, mainly because of the detailed descriptions of the nightmare with seemingly random and almost hallucination-like twists throughout the depiction of events. Ordinarily, this would be a problem in most creepypastas, but here it works mainly because of the bizarre events and insanity of the story.

The cliche's in the story were present of course, but they were easily dissmissed by the fact that the story is taking place in the author's own nightmares which makes them pretty plausible. The only small issue I had was the odd spacing between the paragraphs, but the quality of the story was enough to make up for it.

Final Verdict - 9/10 (Excellent)

Keep up the good writing!