Talk:You Are in a Room/@comment-24240632-20130809051327

First let me say that this was interesting and gripping. With that said let's begin.

Description: 9.5/10 - The way everything was detailed felt frantic and odd, but in a good sort of way. I just feel like this could've been fleshed out a little bit more because it feels like you're missing a lot of things you could've described like what the darkness felt like, or what the hands of "the roommate" felt like etc.

Plot: 9.5/10 - Once again it feels like it could've been so much more if it was fleshed out a bit more, but it was original and definetely creepy. I also liked how you made us wonder about this "roommate" at the end.

Entertainment: 8.75/10 - Slow paced for the most part, but when the "roommate" came really close I did become tense and a little creeped out.

Overall: 9.25/10 - Is this creepypasta of the month material? Yes. Does have my vote? No unfortunately.

"Like CT's other stories this is one you have to read alon in the dark."

- Marcus