Talk:Family Passing/@comment-24540056-20140428220903/@comment-24540056-20140428221744

It's not a very believable story, nor does it scare me. Remember what I said about writing creepypasts. Make them a real threat. Something that could happen. Refrain from supernatural things. And if your going to do something crazy, do it in a gaming creepypasta. Real Life anomolypastas end up being horrible unless executed correctly.