Talk:The Key/@comment-24240632-20131113031936

The key lies beneath the very soul itself.

Description: 9.0/10 - Things seemed to be rather well described here, and you also got rid of the problem I had with, Hanging Graden which this ties into; The problem in which you seemed to use the same words too many times to describe one thing. There were a few grammatical errors, especially with using past tenses.

Plot: 8.5/10 - As, Forza said, the plot jumps around a little and feels like it's so rushed. Other than that, this is a great background to one of your stories!

Entertainment: 8.5/10 - This was an enjoyable read, however the sort of, "rush," feeling pacing held it down a little.

Overall: 8.6/10 - Great.

"The Key is something many people can learn from, like how to make a good backstory!"