Talk:One/@comment-5757488-20131015162216

I quite like this pasta. It was short and unsettling, with a focussed tone which really helped the short style of the narrative.

I did find the ending to be rather vague, but that's understandable, and it left it open to interpretation.

You mentioned there was a moral to this story? As far as I could tell it was 'curiosity killed the cat'? Either way, having a message behind the plot really builds up the message.

Overall, I think the writing style still needs some work, but this is a short and sharp pasta, that definitely unsettles. Nice job.