Talk:New World/@comment-6794436-20150125195019

Is this a creepypasta?

Good: Well, for one thing, you certainly have improved since your last pasta, as this pasta isn't very choppy or horribly written. It is a bit longer and there is some effort put into this I guess.

Bad: This pasta really isn't a pasta. It isn't creepy at all and it broke the number one rule of gaming pastas, don't just relay what the game is about. This is literally just a description of what Minecraft is, and it isn't really creepy in the slightest. Also, although the pasta is longer than your last, it is still too small. On a final note, I can't tell if you're trying to make it a twist that this is about minecraft. It is written as such, but it really isn't surprising at all.

Verdict: 4/10- This is a large improvement upon your last pasta, but it still isn't very good or creepy.

-Incorrect3