Talk:It Watches You/@comment-9697749-20130519171859

It's kinda generic, really. I mean, it's creepy, definitely, but it's a description of every big bad out there. As a campfire story, I could see it working.

As a story to read on the internet, though? I dunno. It kind of doesn't say anything. I mean, there's something outside my window. I don't know what it is, and you won't tell me, but it's a thing. It's a scary thing. It has a creepy smile. Is it a person? I dunno. A monster? No clue. It could be ANYTHING. Which in some respects is, in itself, pretty scary. It leaves itself open to the imagination, but without any details I can't picture what's going on, or what I'm supposed to be afraid of. All it does is tell you what you're already thinking after reading a bunch of creepypastas.

But it's not bad. 6.5/10.  If I were to make one suggestion, I'd say fix your spacing. It looks like a bit of a wall of text, so a few paragraph breaks would make it look more readable.