Talk:The Phantom Skype Call/@comment-6794436-20141228163601

Ugh, another bad pasta... well, mediocre pasta...

Good: The pasta isn't atrocious from a grammar standpoint, nor a spelling standpoint. Yeah, that's about it.

Bad: Holy clichés at the end. The pacing and such was okay at the beginning, but you just lost me at "I think he's haunting me, I THINK HE DIED". Caps don't make anything scarier. Another thing, this story is boring to read, and left me disinterested the entire time. One last problem with the story is the format it is in, like, you couldn't have just separated it into paragraphs?

Verdict: 4/10- This is deserving of needs work and is all around a clichéd, boring read.

-Incorrect3