Talk:Excromation/@comment-8470110-20150103182005

Like the others have said, this is a well done pasta. The detail given was great and helped stage the whole story. The future sight also gave it a unique edge as well as an eerie layer. There isn't much I can say to improve it, as in my opinion, you did the best you could given the plot and concept as a whole. Great work, my friend!

Rating: 8.5/10

-Sshakenbakee