Talk:The Way Things Were Supposed to Be/@comment-24239143-20130908192843

Ok, so I am sad for reviewing my own pasta, so here goes!

The plot: It was okay, but needed tension. 4.5/10

The execution: Pretty gruesome, with the devouring part. 5/10

Grammar: I wont review it. It was changed up entirely. 3/10

The story: It was a good story, not creepypasta. 7/10

Overall: 5.5/10

"I must be that sad to review my own work"

-> Morgan.