Talk:I Won't Leave You/@comment-5346853-20130408193137/@comment-5025667-20130409182916

Keep in mind that any action Tyrin does or anything he says was not of my own. I did approach him about the language he used as I did not picture some pink thing with ribbons and bowties to say such absurdities myself, but I decided, with some suggestions from Tyrin, to keep it in. I think that, since after all he went through a lot on an emotional scale and being a firsthand witness of Lonliness' slow torture and eventual death and the fact that if he doesn't continue in completing his friend's destiny that it would be implied that Tyrin himself would die, I probably would break at that point myself.

The original "Abandon Lonliness" used blood, so I felt to use it as well. It's inevitiable as a story such as this would probably be left out with a little violence added in it. I tried to keep it on a minimal scale nonetheless, I focused more on slowly breaking Lonliness step by step by mutilating him painfully while trying to keep it clean as well. Even his decapitation I wanted to not spill out in unrealistic amounts.

The picture was my inspiration for what happened to the eevee and no, I did not draw it myself. The story is written to be more sad rather than scary, as if that wasn't obvious. I can still call it inspired by creepypastas, after all we're dealing with graphic deaths of Pokemon nonetheless. The white things are ghosts, "They possessed anyone who came in contact with me...They are mere shadows of their former selves" as Lonliness explains.

And yeah, I wanted to keep Lavender Town out of this. Although I considered it to be their destination (the early logs still say it is), I changed it to Pallet Town at the last minute. It also makes sense because the original Lonliness was buried at Pallet Town at the end of Abandon Lonliness anyway.

Glad you love it! :)