Talk:Born again/@comment-5675310-20140616234755

World of Warcraft... So boring...

Description: 7.0/10 - So, you go for the old english kind of feel for this one. I mean, it only makes sense given where the story takes place, as well as the *fake* time period. However, you need to make sure that you're using this old english properly, and there were a couple point in which you did not do this. One of these times it when the word 'twas is used. However, you simply put the apostrophe in the wrong place, making it entirely incorrect. Now, considering this is a very short pasta, I don't expect it to have too many grammatical errors, but being that you messed up some of your wording and proper spelling of some of this old english language, I'm going to bump your mark down just a bit. Still, definitely not horrible.

Plot: 5.0/10 - It's World of Warcraft, not really a mindf*ck and often times just feels like a random piece of writing that isn't really special in any way.

Entertainment: 6.5/10 - It's short, and I suppose it's interesting enough to read.

(Pros and Cons disabled for this review, due to the short lenght of the pasta.)

Overall: 6.3/10 - Okay.

"It's short, and honestly not all that bad. Sure, it's practically missing a basic plot and some of the old english used is a little off, but it's interesting none the less."

- Marcus