Talk:Farwell/@comment-29502200-20161011053728

Review time

The story started out slow, short, and hardly interesting. It felt rushed in my opinion. THAT CLIMAX THOUGH. That ordeal is fantastic. The way it all plays out was amazing. I ask that you remove the final paragraph though. The whole "ten years later' epilouge doesn't add a whole lot to the story.

7/10 - Starts slow, ends great