Talk:The Parental Regret/@comment-6794436-20150102164903

Holy horrible grammar Batman!

Good: Eh, at least the plot has a bit of potential, but other than that, I got nothin.

Bad: The grammar is atrocious, as this pasta is riddled with run on sentences and other typical grammar errors. The pasta also isn't creepy at all, and is as a whole just a huge mess.

Verdict: 2/10- You should definitely check out these guidelines for new or struggling writers.