Talk:The DARK Nightmare/@comment-7117158-20130313143745

There were a few errors with the spelling, which saddens me.. The soeech at the end of it was cool, but the whole impaded head thig I thing was just.... Eh... the volume of sounds described are just completely impossible, the speakers would break first unless you were dumb enough to plug a Game Boy into a festival/concert speaker and right at the beginning is one part that I also felt was a dit dumb which is that a GameStop would actually check these games and not accept bootlegs or ROM hacks, they'd get into massive trouble doing stuff like that.

Those are the things to me that just made no sense anyway, other than that it just needs a few spell checks brushing through it. I know I'm not really one to greatly dig at someone's work but I feel like this is a 6/10 for me after some of the other works I've seen on here.