Talk:Secret of The Aether Foundation/@comment-26480939-20170530194021

I'd say this is about a 7/10, not because I don't like it (I do like it, being one of the few Gen VII Poképastas I've seen), but mostly because one paragraph gets repeated, and another paragraph is just slightly edited from the first. Also, the character you're talking about is named Wicke with a c, not Wikke. And Moon should be capitalized in the last paragraph, as it is a proper noun, and one that is in a title to boot. And the final paragraph just kind of... ends with no resolution. Fix those little mistakes, and it would be a lot better. Because there's a good root of a story here due to mysterious the Aether Foundation is overall. What else did they do there that we're not told about by the game?