Talk:Re-Tooning/@comment-25021327-20150612004248/@comment-26359518-20150612012845

Keep forgetting to sign in to respond lol. Thanks for the feedback. The only problem I had with this story would have been the ending. While yes, it wasn't as traumatizing as many endings with most of the gore and such, it was the only "clean" way I was able to set the ending up without blood. Also, the ending upon my reading of the story after my writing of it felt like the best way to end it... It was tough to figure out exactly how to leave an ending that will stick in the reader's (and listener's) mind. Also, it felt the right idea, given you wouldn't expect to see such an out of place happening in a game generally geared towards children. Anyway, thank ya. Try to spread the word and get more readers =3