Talk:Invader Zim - Lost Episode/@comment-4332975-20130228064520

Mixed feelings on this one. Some elements of it were certainly fresh, like the ending, and the episode being stored in an executable...though honestly anyone who would run that is begging for a virus, and it really didn't seem to have any bearing on the story other than to be different for the sake of difference. The actual description of the episode, though, was very cliché.

You even went for the, "When I looked up the site, it was gone." aspect. These really bring the whole thing down. There's potential with some of the ideas here, but it needs to get out of the setting of "Captain Dumbass in Tropeland!" first.
 * Disturbing title? Check.
 * Character sobbing uncontrollably? Check.
 * Red, bloody eyes? Check.
 * Ultraviolence? Check.
 * "Hyper-realistic" gore? Check, even though that term has lost all meaning.
 * Disturbing photographs slipped in? Super check!