Talk:ATV Offroad Fury 4 Creepypasta: Dead Rider/@comment-11366536-20141216174243

Eh. Let me separate my criticism into 2 parts.

Good : Good Introduction to the story, grammar isn't bad, and neither is spelling or pacing.

Bad : There's a moderate amount of cliche's in this story. Also, the story is particularly bland, not really being that scary in plainsight. It's also fairly straightfoward.

In my opinion, this is an okay story, but not anything that really gets a gold metal.

Final Verdict : 6.7/10