Talk:The Key/@comment-6418997-20131105040640

Very interesting topic most creepypastas don't use war as their main topic unless it is call of duty.

Main character- was great I was thinking of how this guy was feeling the whole time. He was questioning himself which something I really like in stories. He almost seemed a little too perfect wouldn't he be worrying if hes ever going to see his family again not if they would be proud? 9/10 good but not realistic.

villian-  The villian is himself or at least thats what I believe hes always holding himself back, this makes the villian harder to find and more interesting. An also uniqe twist. Of course this hard to see though. 9/10

Enviroment- I really like the details at the end it really cept you on your toes. However the rest of the story didn't. 8/10

Ending- fantasic I really liked how I guessing what was going to happen I only wish it was longer. 9.5/10

overall- 9/10 fantastic!!! :D