Talk:Such Beautiful Sounds/@comment-7706473-20130409031729

Is this based on Star Control..? The elusive Spathi of my heart thanks you if it is so. Regardless, this is more speculative short fiction than straight up creepypasta. While very frightening and even more uncomfortable (I couldn't be sure what was going on in the latter section, and that made me even more nauseated), it is a bit short - though I couldn't see how it would be longer. And the spacing is a bit weird... Though that also adds to the 'alienness' of the writing.

You say this is your first creepypasta, but it isn't your first piece of writing, is it? I feel like you're more used to writing prose and still trying to get into the format and flow of writing pasta. I can relate a lot if that is the case... Anyway, as a creepypasta it will either have little effect or be very disquieting to those who read it. As xenofiction it is very, very good and makes me want to read more. Have a pink mountain flower that symbolizes both a desire to improve, and the works you may create in the future.