Talk:Gaming.EXE/@comment-25021327-20160831220046

Well... This one is not poorly written, I actually thought the writing was fine. The spelling and grammar were in pretty good shape, the pacing was about average, could probably have been a little slower, but it wasn't bad. The descriptions were relatively well done also.

Here's the thing, though...

This one takes everything from Sonic.EXE, and adds virtually nothing to it. We get to see two more levels with Mario and Luigi, who have somehow found their way into the game this time, and things continue as expected.

It's hard for me to give a proper critique, because this is just more Sonic.EXE. All the cliché elements were there, but I guess they fit because this is a sequel to a cliché story. The plot holes are still evident, like Why do these people keep sending each other haunted discs that are going to kill people? Who knows? It's Sonic.EXE. This is just what happens in that world.

So, I could go on about stuff that I didn;t like here, but it would be a moot point. Everything that I didn't like here was already in Sonic.EXE. If people want more of the exact same thing they got there, then they'll love this one. If they want some more originality, they may be disappointed. I think this one does what it intends to do, and I can't really fault it for that.