Talk:Forbidden Readings/@comment-24747574-20140819081742/@comment-25292278-20140819155531

Yeah I understand what you're trying to say, it makes sense... It wasn't very good considering this is also my first creepypasta so I didn't really knew how to go with it. I guess I tried a little to hard to make it believable by nothing happening afterwards. My bad...

And don't worry it's not harsh, improvement is good and you helped me on this, thanks. Maybe next time I will do better.