Talk:Cracking Up/@comment-25021327-20161001170158/@comment-25021327-20161002160830

'' "Right mom!, I responded." ''

'' "Whats up Nathan?," he asked. You looked tired." ''

'' "Relax dude." He responded. I have been staying here, without your mother's knowledge for some time now ever since I ran away. ''

 "Uh...he paused. Internet. Students are not suppose to carry phones at school. 

'' "Tell me." I began. You don't go to school, yet you seem to know everything and your able to correct my mistakes. Whats you secret?" ''

Those were the missing quotation marks, but later in that last sentence there is a misuse of your. Your is used for possessive cases, like "that is your car," while you're is a contraction of "you are." so the above example would be "... you seem to know everything and you're (you are) able to correct my mistakes."

Another one is its/it's. It's, i-t-apostrophe-s is a contraction of it is, while plain old i-t-s implies possession. "It's (it is) a shame that your (belonging to) dog can't find its (belonging to it) bone." Looking back, I only saw one instance of it's where its should have been used.

Also I thought I saw some points where it looked like a word was missing in a sentence, just one example:

''  Another moment passed before looked at me and agreed. ''

I imagine it is meant to say "Before he looked at me and agreed" but there's just a missing "he." I felt like I saw this a few times throughout the piece, but without going through again, I can;t think of any.