Talk:Family Dinner/@comment-25021327-20150513175636

I liked this a lot. It had the feel of a fever dream one might have in the middle of an afternoon nap. Whether or not there is a specific deeper meaning here, doesn;t make much difference in how I feel about it now, I like the vague tone of this, and how the little bits of information are revealed through the narrative.

This is a short, and quick read, but didn;t feel lacking in detail to me. Nothing really unnecessary was added, and nothing important omitted in my opinion. There were only one or two very minor typos that I noticed here, and they were not distracting. The descriptions were pretty nice, and I liked the implications of the dialogue when I read through it a second time.

I'm glad I read this one. It may be a bit too weird or vague for some, but I quite enjoyed it.