Talk:Shotgun.exe/@comment-25021327-20140925012509

The fact that this is a .EXE pasta almost makes it harder to review. They have such a stigma about them as just being... bad. But I can read this in an unbiased fashion.

This one feels a little rushed to me. There's not much to it, and I'm not sure that does it any favors. The setup has a kind of Lost episode feel to it, it makes it harder for the rest of the story to stand out for me.

There are a few unanswered questions also. The game was "Completely Destroyed," then the Boss played it. Then he killed himself(?) Then there's another boss who somehow gets it, and plays it, then tells the employees not to let the next boss play it. He could have just deleted it, or further destroyed it. But that's a leap of faith that one might expect in a creepy pasta.

The part I thought could really have been interesting was the description of the gameplay. It seems like it could be a neat concept, sort of like Hexen. But the game just loads with some dead bodies, and there is no real gameplay.

It feels like it almost just builds up, then ends. There might be something ere if it were expanded upon, nd maybe given more backstory. Maybe even some characterization. As it stands, like I said, It seems kind of sparse. Spelling, grammar, and format are all okay, and the descriptons that are included show some promise. Sorry if that was harsh or unhelpful.