Talk:The Zoo Tycoon 2 Disc/@comment-11366536-20150520202349

Wow, back on the Wiki already and there's more creepypastas to review.

Anyways, this creepypasta definetly needs some work. It reminds me very much of my first creepypasta 'Goodbye Cuddles', if my creepypasta was more cliche'd than it currently was. Despite this, I'm not going to subject my review based on another creepypasta I made.

The first problem I noticed was the weird spacing with the paragraphs, having them neatly spaced one moment, then the next having my eyes assaulted with gigantic walls of text.

Now lets get more in-depth into the Story itself. The Cliche's (As I previously mentioned) are EVERYWHERE after the first half of the Story ends. Why so much blood?

This also brings up the issue of the ending, which is abominable to say the least. It was not scary, and felt like something from 'Jeff The Killer'.

The only good qualities I spotted about this Creepypasta were the fact that it's pretty lengthy, and that it has... Acceptable Grammar.

Verdict : 3/10 (Bad)