Talk:Mega Man: A Good Friend/@comment-17737991-20140927012416

I've added this to needs work, and you have two weeks left to improve this before it will receive heavier deletion categories. First creepypasta is no excuse, that does not in anyway disable you from using proper grammar. Grammar aside, the story is a text wall, makes no sense, and isn't scary. It could be going for a sad pasta, but having no time to get to know the characters, no one would care enough about their deaths or reactions to feel sad.