Talk:The Key/@comment-24239143-20131105152650

Okay, here I go!

The plot: This was about a soldier who had his life turned around by getting to the front, and as he did, he got a sensation of death, and as he neared it, the plot was built up well! 8.5/10

The execution: Oh lord Jesus, it's an ambush! This had it quite unexpecting for me, becuase it was saying he is in a bloody state, then, in reality, in an ambush! This was quite a good twist as well as the end, where he saw a man hanging from a tree. :( 9/10

The story: This was quite a story. A man getting ready for war, and he steps on to the battlefield, he catches a huge pain, but, he hadn't hit the front! Then, shit gets to him fast, making him see things, which impressed me. 8/10

The entertainment: I have to question something: I know it was a good story, but can I ask: How come the story jumped around a little? First, he is bleeding, but then he is in an ambush? Then, he travells high and low, so how come he saw a dead man hanging from a tree...? I know he had bad dreams, but the end is almost hard to tell if it is a dream or reality. 7.5/10.

Overall: 8/10: Great!

"It has potential, twist, reality, dreams, and keys. A very good background to a story!"

-> Morgan.