Talk:The Mario Sports Mix Drowning Incident/@comment-11366536-20160702012143

Yet another creepypasta that reminds me of my days on the Creepypasta Wiki back in 2013. Oh goodness...

Summary - Cliche's are almost everywhere, I don't even think I should have to go over what they even are, because they're extremely obvious. The writing (mainly the exposition to and from certain events) was just really poor, often skimming across details that should be present, or adding them in completely out of nowhere (MARIO SPORTS MIX, NINTENDO SUED!) in a poor effort to evoke scares. The ending was really unsurprising and pretty bad, to say the least, mainly due to the aforementioned cliche's.

Final Verdict - 2/10 (Awful)

As usual, I'd severely recommend reading this article so as you understand what is wrong about the story and you make sure not to repeat your mistakes in any future writing attempts.