Talk:The Hospital I'm Afraid Of/@comment-17737991-20140415195046

The protagonist, in my opinion had very strange and unrealistic reactions :\ "Oh, my friend was obviously just snatched up. I'm sure it's fine." "Okay, it's not fine, how about I go into the building of the kidnappers. I could instead get to safety and find a pay phone to call the cops and/or asking a local for help, but nah, I'll go in a creepy building with back-alley kidnappers." "Well, that was a stupid idea. How about I go home, lie, and then a week later tell the truth when I should have called the cops as soon as it had happened." Just… why would anyone do that? .-. And the protagonist seems to think he/she has an obligation to protect the friends, and admitting they got hurt makes him/her a failure. Okay, that's odd to feel as if you're responsible for the safety of your peers and it's even more odd to feel that way and then just abandon them for a week before bothering to take steps to get them help.

Also, why were they acting so wierd in the alley staring at a truck before anyone got kidnapped? :\ And why did the police ignore the protagonist mentioning the dead body of an old man? And what were those sharp objects on the receptionist desk? Also, unless I missed something, a flashlight literally comes out of nowhere. "Shaking in my body, holding a half-broken flashlight that barely gave out any lighting" What? When did they get a flashlight? Why did they have a flashlight anyway on a trip to London? Unless they found it in the hospital? Also, why was Kyle in pain? What happened to him? And why did Jacob turn himself into the police? What did Jacob do that was illegal? Participate with the kidnappers in… kidnapping or?... So much of this just didn't make much sense to me, and a lot was unexplained v.v

Contrary to the above writings, I did like some of this though. Certain parts were genuinely creepy… especially when he/she felt breathing on his/her hand in the dark e_o And I like the idea of some crazy cult or whatever murdering and stuff in an abandoned hospital.