Talk:The Diary of Max Netherban/@comment-17737991-20150802180424

Well, I actually didn't find this story too bad. It's not from Freeman's point of view, it's from Netherban's, so we get to see the event from someone else's eyes. Yes it's basically a summary of Half Life, but we get to see how someone who isn't Freeman reacts to it all. The grammar though... yea, that was bad. I fixed it for you though.

I am confused by the ending though, I don't know much about Half Life, but didn't Gordon Freeman fight the aliens on their planet by himself? I can't find anything online about Max Netherban. If he's an OC, why does he appear with Freeman at a point where, in the game, he was never there? How does this work? If this is cleared up, I might remove this from pending review and say it's okay for the story to stay here.