Talk:The Man in the Black Suit/@comment-6794436-20150107022036

It isn't the worst story I've ever read...

Good: This story has some pretty good spelling and grammar, as I wasn't able to notice many grammar mistakes. The descriptions in the piece are quite vivid and they are very easy to envision. You used some good vocabulary in this piece and the story flows together quite well.

Bad: The whole premise of a man/creature showing up before/during tragidy is an overdone pasta idea and is close to becoming a cliche. The whole suit getup and face devoid of any emotion is also another element that is close to becoming a cliche. This pasta really does nothing new, and it sounds identical to about 50 other pastas I've read. (Not literally, but you get the point) This pasta is also a bit too short, and it could use some more "meat" so to speak.

Verdict: 5/10- This is just a run of the mill type of pasta that is a clone of many others before it. I would reccomend adding more to the story and fixing up some of the grammar.

-Incorrect3