Talk:The Creature Within My Games/@comment-25021327-20150102024209/@comment-6794436-20150102193027

Wow thanks Urkel for reviewing one of my older pastas! I agree completely with what you said about me having to add more meat. At the time of writing this pasta, I was coming out of my "newbie" writer shell and entering into a more experienced writer.

Sirens always intruiged me, so at the time I decided to use their alluring abilities to drive a character insane, and that transformed into this pasta.

Once again, thanks for going back and reviewing one of my older pastas, I really appreciate it :)