Talk:7.exe/@comment-25021327-20160108233445

8-January-2016- I'm adding a Need Work tag here. This story has bad gramar and spelling, the formatting is weird and makes it unpleasant to read, and the plot feels kind of tired and arbitrary at times. Why would the narrator download and play a game at the end, when the game was obviously connected to the death of his brother?

Unless this is fixed up significantly, it will face deletion in about 9 days.