Talk:The Tragedy of my Son/@comment-25021327-20150825125554/@comment-6919025-20150825171232

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I appreciate that you enjoyed the creepypasta, and even if you hadn't I still am always looking for ways to improve my writing and make my content more enjoyable.

I find it funny that you should mention the sillyness of the villains explaining their plot like a James Bond villain by the way. That's actually exactly what I was going for in that bit. A mildly comedic change of pace

As for him escaping using his feet. It was late and I got lazy. I just chalked it up to him being a war vet, so he's used to being in situations like that.

As for the names, I just made them foreign because I figured it would be a breath of fresh air as compared to all the standard Bob and Joe names, you know?

In any case, thank you again for reading and enjoying the creepypasta to some extent, and also giving your critisism. It means a lot. Have a great day. =)