Talk:The M World/@comment-26480939-20160809015200

Okay, this made me laugh, which is not a good sign.

The protagonist not knowing about the classic games is understandable, given the year of his birth.

When you start talking about the hacks, you didn't even mention any websites. Where did you find these hacks, then? SMWCentral? And why would you go for the 'bad hacks' right away? Normally, one would save those for shits and giggles, not go for them right off the bat.

Those messages from Majin are rather unintentionally hilarious, especially the "M really wants you." one. Make them sound a bit more menacing, not Narmy. Because having Narm like that makes M(ajin) sound like some stalkerish loser, not a menacing demon.

Finally, that title screen. It hits a lot of VG creepypasta clichés. Altered game logo, different sprites, more menacing color schemes, the whole 'year turns to 666'. Also, the edit to make 'Mario' read 'Majin' looks really bad. It's like you didn't even try to match the SMW title screen font at all. And Majin itself looks pretty Narmy too, being that generic 'Big Red Devil'. Now, I know I shouldn't be blasting bad spritework, as I'm not terribly good at scratch spriting myself. But at least try to put some effort into custom sprites.

Rating: 3/10 Needs significant improvements.