Talk:Life's Confection/@comment-29502200-20160930050701/@comment-30096393-20160930055145

Thank you for the critique! I say your critique on another story and even thought about asking you to have a go at mine! I made the story nearly on the spot, so 5/10 is better than i had anticipated.

The ending was a cryptic way of saying that consuming both at once will erase one's existence. If you try to both learn about something and change it at the same time, the idea was that it would create a paradox, forcing that thing to go out of existence.

Apologies for the slow beginning to the story. I figured it'd be best if i made it descriptive, as to prevent loopholes, but some of it was rather long winded and dry.