Talk:Just a "Nightmare"/@comment-24240632-20130715204632

First let me say that I am happy to finally read a good pasta today. With that said let's begin.

Description: 10/10 - Although some people may disagree I find that the word choice and sometimes simple, but effective words add to the eerieness slowly seaping into the soon to be frightening story. I usually get perks for description in my story, but you my friend have passed all my expectations.

Plot: 8.75/10 - Although feeling sort of simple and the recurring dream part at the end was easily seen coming I found this plot quite enjoyable and I was quite happy with the end result.

Entertainment: 7.75/10 - Slow paced and boring when it begins, but you can feel the creepyness just starting to make it's way into the story which was enjoyable.

Overall: 9.25/10 - Outstanding. This pasta has very few flaws that can easily be fixed, but don't need to be so please don't fix them. Great job!

"Easily one of the best pastas I have read in a long time. Porcupine never ceases to impress."

- Marcus