Talk:Deep in Kanto's Waters/@comment-7219215-20150101051533

Hm, I feel like its a bit uneventful. The climax is lackluster, imo. The writing is great and the plot is decent (maybe just have a bit more build up). I think if you really want to make this work well, I think you should really make the MissingNo part really disturbing, creepy, etc, as it was the part of the story that I thought needed work. Add plenty o' details at this part.

7/10