Talk:SIMON/@comment-25021327-20140614125913

I thought this was a well done, enjoyable first creepypast for you :) I unfortunately knew ahead of time that it would end up being SIMS themed, since I checked the categories before reading and they sometimes act as minor spoilers. However, even though I have never played the SIMS, I think I would have figured it out without too much trouble anyway.

I liked the diary format, and the pacing worked for me. I can't speak to the riginality, since I haven't read many SIMS based creepypastas before. I imagine the game lends itself to the mindf*** or bait and switch genres. Nothing I consider groundbreaking, but a very nice little pasta! To you I say keep writing!