Talk:Welcome/@comment-6794436-20141216195326

Wow, this was pretty good.

This was a short read, but even still it was creepy. I love the way you portray hell in this story, as sort of a neverending torturous boredom of sorts. I love the way this story is written too, as it leaves the reader wondering what is going on throughout.

Verdict: 7.5/10- This was just an all around great pasta. The only things wrong are that you could add in more detail and lengthen the pasta a little bit.