Talk:The DARK Nightmare/@comment-7027372-20130323221254/@comment-5936189-20130324003848

I read over the story and wanted to make it more interesting.I changed the title because of the fucked up pokemon version shit.I felt It was a bit short so I added new parts into It and make parts like the ear bleeding scream more reallistic but without any Hyper reallistic blood or other stuff like it.I wanted to make it creepyer by making the intro a bit different from before.I apologize for changing the story but It needed to be more creepy and interesting.As for the commas and periods I'll fix it up.