Talk:It Watches You/@comment-28241499-20130429015810

A very surreal horror. It doesn't rely on HYPER-REALISTIC-BLUUUUUUD like most creepypastas; instead it plays off basic fears, of darkness, of being watched, that kind of stuff...I am not going to sleep tonight.

I know there isn't much buildup, and that's not what you're going for, but it just bugs me how it starts off just right in the middle of the action.

I'd call it less of a creepypasta and more of just a scary campfire story.

It's also a bit short :c

I like the idea, though, and you manage to execute it very well.

Creepiness: 8/10

Originality: 7.5/10

Realisticness: 7/10

BONUS POINTS for having decent grammar. +1

Overall: 7.8/10