Talk:In Love With a Killer/@comment-25911569-20141228000149/@comment-74.192.161.251-20141228005545

Thank you for the feedback. I know this story is heavily flawed, so I suspect there's like no chance of it getting near any sort of award. It's understandable the problems, as like I wrote 99% at 4 in the morning and then added the last 1% at 5 in the afternoon. Still, I appreciate the feedback and hope to use your advice to improve my future works.