Talk:World -1/@comment-6830263-20130303170910

The pasta was good, not too many clichés, but I do have some questions. Who is Christopher? Because you mentioned that he looked familar. And what did Kudlak the Ravanger have to do with this. Other than that I loved how you put a screenshot of the error message on the page do give the Creepypasta extra credibility, but the pasta itself didn't scare me that much. If this is your first creepypasta, then you did a pretty good job.

Final verdict: 7/10