User blog comment:Sifenchar/Novel/@comment-6061247-20141013213838

You definitely have quite an idea here, one that slightly reminds me of Halo and Mass Effect, it would be interesting to see something come out of this.

Obviously, the lore and background is important, but before you can transfer over into a book, you'd need a plot, perhaps a specific antagonist or group of antagonists (the bad guy(s)) a protagonist (the hero). The thing about writing, is that, at least for me, the ideas tend to just come to me as a write with little to no prior planning, so to give suggestions to someone without sitting down and writing it myself can be...difficult. But you definitely have something here, and with some little expansion, you could have a good synopsis for a novel or even a series, if you find this universe pleasing enough to go back to it.