Talk:MoSoOgOo/@comment-30102911-20161201121351

Very short, doesn't take advantage of any source materail mentioned, man in black coat sounds like a very generic creation, and worst of all the grammar needs some serious work. Not sure if there is much to improve on considering how this feels very cookie-cutter, other than maybe define the signifigance behind this "MoSoOgOo" word or at least try and impliment some kind of buildup.