Talk:Welcome/@comment-25021327-20141216025509

I actually found this pretty interesting. It's short and to the point, and doesn't try to be anything more or less than it is.

Although maybe not the most original concept, I felt it was executed fairly well. I kind of had an idea where things were going from early on, but I didn't necesarrily expect that the reveal would pretty much explicitly identify the setting as hell.

It's interesting, to me anyway, to imagine an unpleasant afterlife not in terms of demons and flames, but in more mundane perspectives. I'm honestly not sure if it would be worse to burn eternally surrounded by demons, and sinners, or to simply be alone in a sterile, static environment. Left only with my thoughts, and no way to act upon any of them. Hopefully that is a question none of us have the pleasure of learning the answer to.

As in many of your stories, the spelling and grammar were in pretty rough shape. I realize you are relegated to using a tablet to write and post stories here (I probably would have smashed the thing by now!) but maybe take a few extra minutes to make sure all your words, tenses, and punctuation are in good order.

I'm glad that I took a minute to read this one. It was a nice quick read, and i'm glad to see you writing and getting creative :)