Talk:The Ruins of Wind/@comment-7706473-20140605101233/@comment-24888408-20140605173808

No, English isn't my second language, its my first, but I try regardless. If you could remove the first pasta bit for me I would hugely appreciate it, since I'm on my phone right now. Also thank you for the feedback, my goal wasn't really a scary story in the first place, I've never tried scary before. The concept of Wind himself just sort of hit me at school. I'll review the story and change the errors I see when I can. Thank you again for the review.