Talk:I Won't Leave You/@comment-7706473-20130404023942/@comment-5025667-20130404150023

Yeah, it shouldn't be that hard to tell. Our voices sound quite different from one another, which to me is a good thing because I am bad at dialect. I did notice it wobble around a lot, especially after the third paragraph and Tyrin's eventual possession of sorts, and I do hope that it won't confuse readers too much. As I said, this started and ended in one go until we found a good place to stop. So if it does come off as rushed, I wouldn't be too surprised. So I guess it would not be a creepypasta then, I was iffy about it when I finished writing it, but then where could I file it under?

Abandon Lonliness is more of a straightforward Pokemon pasta in the sense that it is about a haunted game (heh), with much of the attention focused on the eevee of course. It's an interesting read although it is cliched in some areas, but I can't complain too much. There were two instances where I used direct quotes from the story, but I tried to stray from it. I wanted to adopt Lonliness from my own perspective, make him my own so to speak. It came to the point where Tyrin (who actually never read the pasta before we met) asked me if I was the writer of Abandon Lonliness at the end (I'm not).

These were very welcome critques!