Talk:Another/@comment-8470110-20131211041715

Better board up my house, otherwise Flaky will come and kill me this Christmas. In all seriousness, this is a very well written story. Detail was great, pacing was good and the concept was awesome. There isn't anything that I would change so I'll have to give this pasta a 9/10. Great job, Flaky!

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)