Talk:HATRED/@comment-24747574-20140903095850

Alright, pokepasta. First off - "Pokemon Black is a game I refuse to forget" - well, you seem not havent forgot any of the other games, even those "crappy" spinoffs. Secondly - its never smart to insult any other game in your story. Some people like them and might feel aggrovated. Im not one of them though, so dont think im writing this review out of...HATRED^^

Its an interesting idea to combine the real life event of breaking the game with the creatures inside suffering the same damage. I dont think many pastas did this, if any at all.

The dialogue part is good, but the build-up should be tighter, while the experience ingame should be a little more fleshed out. Maybe crumbled buildings and newpapers telling about a sudden magnitude 12 earthquake or something.

Summa Summarum - interesting idea, the execution could use polishing.