Talk:Hair/@comment-26130843-20150503180544

I've read several television creepypastas but one that includes a mindfuck is truly a special treat. This story possesses excellent use of vocabulary of which in my belief is equivalent to college writing. It also provides descriptive details of the mysterious concept of hair and of the main character's obsession about it. The ending was delivered effectively; I had no idea of what I was reading until I saw it. I would never expect anyone to write a Courage the Cowardly Dog pasta but this one hide the topic until the ending- that's what I call a mindfuck. Yet the pasta didn't seem too creepy- the main character's actions of cutting hair was the only scary thing I read. Still it was a good pasta and I expect more collaborations from you guys.

Verdict: 8/10