Talk:Sonic's Depression/@comment-29650516-20160830034448

I fixed a few grammar issues with your story. There was a few clichés though. Clichés: 5/10 Handled them pretty good.

Story: 7/10 The story itself is AWESOME! A few fixes there and there and a sequel would be nice.

Grammar: 3.5/10 I am rating the original grammar BTW. You need to write with better grammar next time, Grammar overall, Bad.

Overall: 6/10 Good.