Talk:Reny/@comment-6830263-20130521192906/@comment-6830263-20130521195321

It's certainly not terrible. There are much, much worse creepypastas out there (if that makes you feel any better :/ ) and you can't really expect your first try to be amazing. Next time you should use a grammar checker or something and focus more on the details. The reason I didn't understand was because there just wasn't enough to be understood. There were major things missing. Maybe you can try fixing it up a bit.

P.s.: Have you added your pasta to the listing already?