Talk:Don't Get Lost/@comment-8198649-20131117023946

Lets see.... First off I'd like to mention at the beginning it seemed like you had a lot of extra commas. It cut me away for a while, but it didnt take long to leap back into this story of yours. Now for the actual review. Mind you, I don't usually split things up into sections, but I feel this one needs it if I plan to cover everything.

Plot: A very interesting plot with a few well placed twists. What I could only assume was a child suffering from parental abuse turned into so much more, something that really took me on an emotional roller coaster.

Characters: Jackson and Hazel a very well portrayed. They both show very natural and interesting personalities, and were obviously the driving force of the story. That mindfuck did get me, and even still I'm amazed by how the characters reconnect to the other characters.

Detail: Very well detailed and interesting. I dont know how else to rate detail.

Setting: I felt like I really was there. I could smell the wheat and see the decaying barn in a very realistic sense. It has a dreamlike quiality to it, but what more can I expect?

Score: 10/10

''"I don't know how you'll find a way to improve your writing after this, but you've already accomplished that from last time." ''

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