Talk:Portal 2: "True Ending"/@comment-11366536-20150820182837

This is... Pretty bland to say the least.

Pros - The Creepypasta has good grammar, it's not a wall of text, and it has categories. The story feels pretty good-paced, and it seems to be written pretty neatly.

Cons - The biggest thing I had a problem with in this story is the severe lack of explanation. Why would Valve upload the "True Ending" to Steam in the first place? It makes 0 Sense, and I'd actually prefer the story to kick off with the Author downloading a torrent of the game instead.

The other big issue I had was the large number of cliche's in the plot. "My YouTube Activity was littered with Creepypasta and Game Theory activity." That's just absurdly cliche'd and done a lot.

The last issue I have is that while this may be a story, it's not scary in any way or form, effectively making it very, very dull. I couldn't find anything scary about the story anywhere, even in the "Scary-Ending".

Overall, I think this story has potential, but right now it's largely flawed.

Verdict - 4/10 (Flawed)