Talk:Epsilon Missingno/@comment-26480939-20160824004719

Hm, a non-cliché use for MissingNo. in Poképastas. Nice. I like how you got into the scientific aspects of the creation of MissingNo. and actually used some game information to back it up.

There are fan theories that many of the Pokémon mentioned in this are somehow related to MissingNo., like it being the baby version of Kangaskhan that was later scrapped, and Cubone, Marowak, and Kangaskhan being somehow related. Also, I like the whole 'viral transformation of humans into MissingNo. clones' idea you have going here. That alone would be a good kind of thing to make a Poképasta about, and having that idea as a background idea in a larger story is just icing on the cake. :) Also, you did portray MissingNo. as a somewhat mild version of an Eldritch Abomination, which is exactly what it is, being game data meant to be read as one thing (player's name) being read as something that it wasn't intended to be read as to begin with (Pokémon encounter data). (Not making that last part up. Go check Bulbapedia's page on MissingNo. and see for yourself.)

But a word of advice? Ease up on the slang and profanity. Real Pokémon games wouldn't have those in them, so if you want a ROM hack to be somewhat believable, don't use that kind of stuff in them, either. That's just my opinion, though. Also, there's some slight spelling and grammar mistakes that need to be fixed, but not too many.

Overall, I give this a 9.5/10 Very excellent, little to no improvement needed.