Talk:Revolution/@comment-5757488-20130922190330

Imppressive, very imppressive. This pasta was a really great mindfuck; I truly didn't see it coming until the very last line. It really keeps you guessing.

Overall, it's nicely written. The execution and it's effect on the character could have done with a bit more description, at least in my opinion, but the rest was competent enough to keep you enthralled for the duration of the pasta.

Yes, I really liked this, especially the bleak setting and the great twist at the end. Easily one of the best mindfucks I've read in a while.