Talk:Halo 2:Oracle/@comment-30102911-20161008014000

Grammar problems and inconsistencies with date entries are the first two problems I can list. Unfortunately the story also doesn't have too many "creepy" moments and the whole suicide decision seems to come out of left field. Worst yet it doesn't really use Halo 2's acutal foundation to build much of an interesting story. Could use some major improvements and any of these would be welcome.