Talk:Perfect Game/@comment-17737991-20130927093241/@comment-23786355-20130927201853

Thanks for the tips!

I mentioned earlier in the pasta that I was talking to my roommate, referring to her as 'roomie', but that was a big jump, I can improve upon that and cut down the section some. And that was very long....it felt odd when I tried to cut it, but I'm sure there are ways to fix that. ^^ Always ways to improve!