Talk:Pokemon Tarnished Leaf/@comment-25685806-20150111214549

This story was, in my opinion, sorta lacking and things just happened without any real reason making me feel like i just wasted my time. From what i gathered, the author has some weird attachment to the pokemon characters, more specifically Leaf. Then the author goes on about how under rated she is, like how most pokemon protagonists who arent Red are. Author/main character then forgets that he can choose his character thinking leaf green only lets you be female and fire red only lets you be male, (either that or hes rly stubborn) and goes to his moms house where his friend apparently lives??? Then gets his old game from his friend, who just carries the game around EVERYWHERE he goes... wut. He plays the game then orgasms (pardon my language) when leaf is in the game and she talks. Then he beats the game and she fights him, loses, then rage quits life and now the author/main character is spooked over the death of his favorite pixels. Then wonders if that was why his friend was freaked out when he gave the game to him, except he never mentioned his friend being scared when he got the game. (lol thats never happened in creepypasta) but this is just my opinion and if you read all this then kudos, ur awesome