Thread:AkivaDaphydd/@comment-5736374-20140528042659

Just to make something clear, I LOVED your newest creepypasta hunted in the dark. But if one thing had to be changed I would say it's somewhat lack of explaining as much. But the ending still shocked and disturbed me as all good creepypastas do. So this pasta recieves in my book a 8.7/10! Great job for only your third one ever! 