Talk:Castlevania Rondo of Bloodlust/@comment-6794436-20141226201049

Another day another bad pasta. This pasta is just another boring gaming pasta that really doesn't bring anything new to the table. There are many problems with this pasta that I will get to, but first, as always, I'll start with the good.

There's nothing this story really exceeds in, but a lot of it isn't deplorable. The grammar is okay, and the plot isn't horrible, just not really interesting. The plot is... eh, not bad, but certainly not good.

Okay, now for the bad, and boy is there a lot of it. The pasta is really quite short, and a lot of the details could have been expanded upon further and you could have added a lot more 'creepy' gameplay elements to make the story a bit longer. Even though I say that, I must somewhat contradict myself to bring up my next point.

There are a lot of parts that you could have left out, such as in the intro where you mention how your friend had to do sexual favors just to get a game. One, that is pointless, you could have just said that getting the game was quite arduous. Two, that sort of ruins the plausibility because I have never met one woman with low enough dignity to have intercourse with someone over one video game!

The plot is somewhat clichéd and overdone, and as said before, adds nothing to the table. It isn't very creepy at all, and is just really a quick, boring read.

Verdict: 4/10- The spelling and grammar are okay, and it is far from being a shittypasta, but it isn't very good or intriguing. The story is also quite flawed and is very boring.

-Incorrect3