Talk:I Am Real/@comment-25021327-20140627033531

I enjoyed this pasta very much! I felt it had a very realistic quality to it, in the storytelling, and the narrator's descriptions of her emotions. It's nice to not see the protagonist overreacting to things, and genuinely looking for help.

I like that this deals with the subject of dreams about which so little is really known. It's quite interesting to address the frank confusion one feels about his or her dreams, while others are so quick to write things off. I think we've all had dreams that involved siuations that we would not consider desirable, and have been unable to decipher them, in addition to having confusion, embarassment, or even shame over them. I know I have.

The story leaves a lot of unanswered questions (unless I'm just ot picking up on cues that were written in, which is entirely possible), which I liked. I think it helps give it a more haunting, unsettling quality. Good pacing, spelling/grammar, and formatting in my opinion. Good Job :)