Talk:Nightmares in Dreamworld/@comment-24527356-20140615024445

This is pretty good. One thing I really enjoyed was how the buildup was done RIGHT. It added on to the creepiness, and it made me love this Pasta. The ending is just a tad odd, though. I mean, I know Fennel, like, hypnotizes or brainwashes Hilbert into being her boyfriend/husband or something, and now Nate's gonna get tricked into doin' something bad by her or whatever, but whatever. It's still an overall enjoyable Pasta.

9/10

Mmm...this Pasta is pretty good!

~FM the Psycho.