Talk:Ed Edd n Eddy Pedophilia Theory/@comment-28140113-20160820220716

An interesting theory; however, as I have little experience with theorypastas, I'm not quite sure of how good or bad it is.

As for how the pasta's written...the grammar could definitely use a bit of work. The little mistakes really do add up. It's not quite as bad as in some other pastas (since you can at least tell what's being said), but it could still use a bit of polish.