Thread:FlakyPorcupine/@comment-8470110-20131014054946/@comment-5025667-20131016132600

I have gotten complaints that

1. The original was very, very long. (lol have you guys ever read a book?)

2. The original was long, but rushed in places; too quick moving.

There are four major events in the pasta, so dividing it into four "chapters" would make sense a la NES Godzilla, except a lot shorter.

The characters are going to save some changes to them which you'll see very easily almost immediately in, but overall they will definetely have the same personalities and such you have come to know them. It will be a lot darker than the original as opposed to depressing. In other words, it will be more of a creepypasta.