Talk:I Am.../@comment-4501030-20130728225640

Pretty good, but there's a line that seems awkward to me. " Those great spheres house power, power which we can make ourselves greater than we ever imagined." It'd make more sense as " Those great spheres house power, power with which we can make ourselves greater than we ever imagined." or " Those great spheres house power, power that can make us greater than we ever imagined."