Talk:Sleepwalkers/@comment-7706473-20140819053855

Though the story is very short, it's not every day that I see a story examining what happens to people who sleepwalk. If you've ever met someone who does, it's pretty weird - especially if you know them. The stiltedness in that motion is captured pretty well here, as well as the narrators exasperation. I feel the end is a bit rushed - though the grandmother's advice is suitably creepy and forewarned, the last paragraph comes quickly and joltingly. On the other hand - that's kind of effective, and I especially like that we don't learn what happens to the narrator. It's left to us to imagine, which is an especially good fate for a pasta about the mysteries of sleep.

Overall, very enjoyable - concise, but sweet like a dream, all the same!