Talk:The Strange House In The Middle of Nowhere/@comment-6794436-20141204023501

Ok, not going to lie, this is pretty bad. Although for a first pasta, compared to a lot of the ones we've been getting as of late, this is pretty good. The story and set up is a bit cliche and the ending falls flat. The story itself has a simple enough premise, but it isn't really executed well. Also the intro to the pasta is terrible, same with the ending, so I would reccomend fixing those.

Verdict: 3/10- For a first pasta this is okay, but as a standalone pasta this is trash. You show promise and effort as a writer on this wiki, and one day could get better as you improve along the way. (Also word of advice, get a picture for your avatar so you don't look like a noob of sorts. lol)