Talk:Sleep Will Come/@comment-6794436-20141027213927

Ok so this is not a very good pasta, but aren't all are first ones? The plot is incredibly hard to follow and the story isn't very creepy anyways. Also there are a few cliches, not too many to make it distracting, but enough to draw back the pasta a bit. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but once again there aren't enough to make it distracting, but in this case they also aren't bad enough as to create any drawback to the pasta's review.

Rating: 4/10 ~Incorrect3