Talk:The Wonderful Death/@comment-1196539-20141110160409

This is actually quite a strong piece of work. Really, the only ill thing I can say about it is of the handful of punctuation goofs, but even so, it's certainly better even in that regard than the majority of creepypastas. Excellent build up and a strong twist at the end.

I'm actually going to nominate this for Pasta of the Month, since there are so rarely any new articles being introduced there.