Talk:The End.../@comment-14000207-20140102050805

VERY impressive! I just can't figure out who this character may be, so I just imagine him as Wolverine, and it very well counts as a mindfuck because of the twist at the end. Some spelling issues, and the story was a bit rushed, but that's just being VERY critical towards the story.

Overall, 9/10

Good job! I want to see more like this in the future!