Talk:Arethius/@comment-6418997-20131026032536

Omg. I love this story. It's almost perfect. Of course it has flaws but omg this is fantasic.

The character seemed so real it was unbelievable. The main character was really scary by the way he acted and said things. He lied to himself a lot making us question ourselves. It was so well written. The worst part is that you kinda felt for the guy but in the end he was a murderer. Making him the protagoist and antagonist. which is something really special and few stories due, Although you don't really feel for him that much I think that is something you should work to make it even better. I also kinda of want to know if he gets caught, which if he doesn't it will be even more scarier. 9.5/10( hightest score I have ever given) :D