Talk:Warnings/@comment-4332975-20130228041207

That was actually pretty good. It brought a smile to my face. You should use the existing "Mindfuck" category, rather than making your own just for this story, though. Also, one trick experienced writers do is to change up their word choice. You use "computer" about six times. It may seem silly, but calling it something different now and then, especially right after previously using another term, will help to hold a reader's interest. That said, I don't regret reading it.