Talk:Yu-gi-oh! Shadow Game/@comment-25526583-20141123183559

Some of the wording was kind of silly because it KIND OF made your character sound like a sore loser, which can somewhat take the horror away from the story, but at the same time it is kind of fitting in a way due to how succesecful he is, but the part where you mention how creepypastas aren't real and then question it may seem like it's scary but it kinda feels like it's unesacary fourth wall breaking. I know this review may seem kinda knit-picky but I give this about an 8/10 you might wanna have a bit more build up since not a whole lot happened, but still very good.