Talk:Fallout 3: Hunted/@comment-8470110-20131215201504

This was a pretty good Creepypasta. The only complaint I have is the empty placeholders; remove those as soon as possible. There isn't much I can say about this pasta other than I'd try to fix the way it's written so it doesn't sound like it's someone talking; make the language more formal, really.

Rating: 8/10 (Very good)

-Sshakenbakee (Cameron S.)