Talk:Zombreon/@comment-11079349-20131123041655

first of all, jesus christ, can you work any faster? i literally reviewed this today.

second, wow. Even though it was zombies, you kept slight differences that don't usually happen in zombie stories. for one, the professor was able to make a cure that quickly, and he was winning. another was that the trainer still had a mind, despite being a zombie.

first problem, why would you select release all? Even if i didnt know what was going on, i STILL would never touch that button. that was a disaster waiting to happen, and happen it did.

second, still seems just a tad bit rushed ... probably because IT WAS!!! I mean jesus, how can you edit that fast?

third and finally, you lied about fixing the "eon" bit. just saying. now, I can easily let the Zombreon part slide, just dont say you changed it when you didnt.

6.7/10 as it was a pretty good story altogether. It could be improved, but it works for what it needs to and it does keep a good enough atmosphere to keep the reader reading.