Talk:Paint.exe/@comment-26569434-20160726071235

Ok grammer issue aside this seems to be quite a bit... off

Like sure it IS about a game that DOES have blood and gore but I doubt any of the decisions on the protagonist's side were good at one point even though the time he just litteraly pulls a Tom and sleeps despite the spookiness of the game

The Binding of Issac part I don't know why you chose to add it in, it doesn't add any scary effect to the pasta and just adds more annoyance

The game messing with the player has also been done many times before, if it DID keep coming back if you used the recycling bin that just means you doomed your pasta

The labyrinth isn't anything special either and the endings a cliche too, You refund the haunted game and some meaningless text now haunts you forever ohhh noes

3/10: I suggest taking a bit more time to think out the pasta, it may look good in your head but that won't mean much when it comes out looking terrible