Talk:Martin Stack/@comment-7706473-20131013082413

Lovely. I'm looking forward to this with the insane hunger of a person who has been quite delirious with fever, so expect more commentary as this goes! Hrmn, what to say at the moment -

It's hard to convey the early feeling of those text-adventures through things alone. Having to tap enter numerous times for linebreaks, the scent of floppies and the clicking of the computerbox as it 'thinks'... Maybe that's just my experience, but that feeling pervades this story, QUEST by Kefke, and to some extent (I hope) my own story of Generation, though the latter is set a good ten-twenty years later...

There are quite a few disks left. Might I recommend that you instead end this with something like:

Insert Forest II, Henry?

That way, this episode - which is plenty horrific and uncomfortable (in the best way) as it is, will be complete, and give you time to think about what to do next - well, if you haven't already. I don't want to comment too much - as I feel my theories will change depending on what happens next. Ah, wait. One thing.

>score

OR

>examine/x self