Thread:ZB124/@comment-8470110-20140124011223/@comment-8470110-20140124024243

I can't guarentee your story's safety but I do believe you when you say you aren't a troll. If it gets taken down, it's because of its poor quality rather than it being accused of being a troll-pasta. That being your first pasta is not a good excuse for poor quality; it should've inspired you to make it the best story possible.

I'll tell you what though; as soon as I'm free, I'll give your pasta a full, in-depth review on how to fix your writing style and what to keep in mind when working on your next story. Hopefully I'll get to that in time before it gets deleted.