Talk:The Last Piece/@comment-24240632-20130818043436

I HAVE CHANGED MY REVIEWING FORMATT A LITTLE BIT.

The Last Piece never felt like it was recovered.

Plot: 8.0/10 - It was great, but I feel like it wasn't leading up to much and it really didn't reveal anything super surprising or anything at all for that matter. Which is fine, but if there's a sequel or if it's edited and becomes longer it would be much better (And yes I do realize the protaganist dies in the end).

Description: 7.2/10 - It was good, but it does need some polishing in places due to grammatical errors and poor word choice. Also some lines seemed rather cheesy and didn't feel very thought out.

Entertainment: 7.9/10 - It was cool hearing about the different stages of, Ronnie as things became worse and worse, but I was never sucked into the story and it never really felt intense, which includes the ending which didn't work that well.

Overall: 7.6/10 - It was by no means bad, but it's not your best work.

"Don't pass up on this one because it's interesting, but you'll notice it needs a little meat added to it."

- Marcus