Talk:Metal Gear Solid: Once Again/@comment-32602006-20131225094328/@comment-24337034-20131225095522

Yeah I knew there were a lot of similarities to other ones i just wanted to have a basic kickstarter and see how it goes. I'm most likely going to refrain from making gaming creepypastas because there's so many at this point for so many games that whatever I write will end up sounding cliche without me even knowing. Thanks for the criticism, I'll need it if I want to get better at this.

Could you maybe give a bit more detail why the ending is really terrible? I'm not saying it's anywhere near good by any means. Just want to know more so I don't end up making the same mistakes.

Thanks :)