Talk:Slideshow/@comment-7706473-20131004014640

On the one hand - I'm not usually a fan of microfiction. Blame my damned decadance. ;)

On the other... Despite the fact the idea of an object/person knowing the future, or where someone is being a little cliche, the pasta does a pretty good job of capturing the sudden hit of fear the narrator must feel. I actually liked this piece; though it might benefit from a bit more length. Still - if you're working on other stories, this isn't a bad way to keep yourself primed while writing. And again - the clincher was (a) rather (lovely) effective (ending).