Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-25021327-20140726024838

Reworked the ending. After numerous comments, I went back and re-read the story. I was able to see what people meant about the abruptness of the ending. I re-wrote the final paragraphs, and I actually feel pretty good about them.

The new ending actually hits closer to home for me, and I think it may read a bit better, also. Let me know what you think. I was reluctant at first, but at this point, I think I like it a bit more than the previous conclusion :)