Talk:The Amazing Mega Man/@comment-25021327-20150302044708

This piece read like a standard gaming pasta, that's not always a bad thing. A lot of the elements here have been done before in other stories, The gory imagery in the game,  and the main game character giving ominous messages to the player are just two. The Spelling, grammar, and format are in pretty good shape, and I didn't feel distracted while reading. The descriptions were okay too.

'''Nitpicking! '''- I'll just point out a few things that I found strange or unrealistic here. Firstly, MegaMan 2 came out way before 1995. In facat I think it was already out by the end of the 80's. So that kind of stuck out like a sore thumb to me. Another little nitpick was the cost of the game. At the time, Nintendo games were usually closer to 40 bucks (sometimes more) when they first came out. My last nitpick is a very minor one. "Load Screen" is a newer term. Usually on cartridge games, there were just title, and menu screens. Nitpicking over!

So, in all, this pasta is pretty average. That's not saying it's bad, and I don't see a whole lot of Megaman Pastas, so that's good. It's paced fairly well for its length, and it's a wuick read. So, Not bad, but could prob be better, :)