Talk:It's All It Took/@comment-8470110-20130921210237

8/10

A pretty good pasta. While it isn't necessarily creepy, I liked the atmosphere to it. It had very good detail, pacing was well done and the protagonist was relatable. The ending had a little bit of a mindf*ck feel to it, something I rather enjoyed. While there were some grammatical mistakes, it was nothing that took me out of the experience. A job well done.

-Sshakenbakee