Talk:Do You Remember Me?/@comment-26044134-20150130214656

This is pretty good. I'm a little confused on what an Ombra is (the closest I can get is "shadow" from Wiktionary xD), and about its motives, why it's stalking this kid. Although I guess things are more scary when they're left to the unknown. Anyway, it was interesting, but I do wish it was a bit longer.

...Okay now having read the story that came before this, I think it'd be cool to see more stories about the Ombra, but at the length of Bedtime Stalker rather than this one. I liked them both though. xD