Talk:Halo Beta/@comment-70.82.163.49-20151201022457/@comment-70.82.163.49-20151201023222

If you reeeaaally want to respond to me, since I don't look often comments and answers, here's my e-mail : alicia.ch204@gmail.com

I will reread your story, maybe it will remind me what didn't felt right. Don't worry, no biggies, as an ex wirter I like to help other to improve by saying the little mistake, and it wasn't killing the story since I don't remember it, so you will probably don't have to modifie it, I just think that if I was you, I would have liked to know my error, because I wouldn't want to do it again :P Think about it as a positive critic, since your story was so good, so don't mind me ^^ personally, the end kinda blown me away, if I can say, just imagining it was epic.