Talk:Belief in Oneself/@comment-5346853-20130408003538

Wow... Yours was the longest I'd read so far... Soon, it'll be FlakyPorcupine's creepypasta! Anyway, this creepypasta... It was GREAT. The originality of it was amazing. Let's start off with cliches, shall we?

First of all, my vision spotted almost no cliches since he got the GCN and its games from his brother, not from some old man across the street or Ebay or Gamestop/EB Games... Seriously, old men in creeypastas creep me out... Also, I liked how only he could see the strange happenings. Now for blood... ''"Tried to use as few cliches as possible (which is why there is no blood anywhere ever)." ''Cliches don't have to mean excessive blood. Also, you can use blood if you want, it's just that you have to use it properly to find the scary "trigger." It was still formidable without the blood and whatnot!

In general, it was really well-done and I love your first creepypasta! It was great! Such talented writing skills!

Overall, I'd give your FIRST creepypasta a 9.5/10! The highest rating I've given so far! So... FEEL PROUD OF YOURSELF! :D Keep up the amazing wark, friend! :3