Talk:The pasta maker/@comment-6794436-20141230010515

Well, this is pretty interesting, and I honestly didn't expect the ending. The story is so short that I won't do my usual review format in all actuality. Okay, well, there are a lot of grammar issues in this, including the non title capitalization. Also, the story could have been expanded upon a bit more and you could have gone into more detail and gave a bit more hints about what the plot was truly about.

Verdict: 5/10- Great idea, just not executed properly.

-Incorrect3