Talk:Glitch City/@comment-26480939-20161004215747

... I'm not terribly impressed by this one. WAY too many clichés in it. Some I noticed:

Character's name changing.

Pokémon with impossible-without-hacking movesets.

Pokémon at insane and impossible levels, like Lv. 9999.

Overly morbid move text.

Impossible move effects.

Weird things happen, and protagonist does nothing.

Creepy messages.

Nonexistent items in the game.

At least you didn't resort to 'HYPERREALISTIC BLOOD' and some other common nonsense in gamepastas. My suggestion is to ease back on Poképasta clichés and possibly rewrite this. As it is, I give it a thoroughly average 5/10 Has almost nothing that hasn't been done before in many other Poképastas.