Talk:A "Personality Test"/@comment-6794436-20141119025808

Wow, this was actually very good, but I have a few critiques. But first I'll start with the positives. For one thing, this story was quite thought provoking and left me questioning how I would do on a quiz like this one. Another thing I liked was the fact that the character in the story is hateable because of how terrible a person he is, but all of us have to like him as he is who we most likely are on the inside, whether we'd like to admit it or not.

I also like the way the ending was put together, and it was a little bit predictable that the interview would become much more important as the story went on after the first question. Although the ending was predictable in that sense, but I was still surprised at the conclusion.

The only real problem I had with the story was the length. This story had so much potential to be amazing, but it feels kind of rushed and leaves me wanting more out of the story. Perhaps maybe writing about the whole test would help, and maybe lengthening out the ending could help too.

All in all, this was a great story, but just maybe needs to be a bit longer.

I'd rate it an 8/10 -Incorrect3