Talk:Eric/@comment-104.128.200.157-20150709180954

This was pretty good. I wouldn't call it a creepypasta, but more like an "eeriepasta." [I wouldn't call it a "sadpasta" either, contrary to popular opinion (down below), being it wasn't that sad to me (but the ending was kind of sweet).] I like how it's not too piecey like most creepypastas (gets annoying to me. I like to read/write in a novel-like format). Also, very original. No hacks, no haunted game (other than Eric's spirit sending a letter, which I won't count against you, even though spirits will normally act passively rather than directly contacting you), not too many stretches in the gameplay, and no overused pasta phrases/ideas. Well done. A few things, though: It was a bit too long in the beginning with the unnecessary explanation of the gameplay details, there were a few repetitions, and you had quite a few spelling and grammar errors (not including Eric's dialogue). Other than that, nicee stry, frind.