Talk:Left for Suffering/@comment-25021327-20150516175511/@comment-217.55.151.45-20150516211509

Thanks a lot for your review! And I am very sorry about the grammar mistakes and the Time mistake, I was pretty sleepy when I wrote this so some grammatical errors are expected. I will work on the grammar now.

PS: It's my first ever creepypasta and Yes I think it's kinda cliche, Especially the ending.

The problem here that I don't feel like changing the story. Yes Grammar mistakes and all but This is my creepypasta, I choose what happens, I wrote the story. Limits to the imagination on writing the story make the creepypasta even worse and worse. I feel like it is done and that's what I want. I wrote this story and I choose how it ends, How it starts and how it goes. You can delete it if you want, That's just breaking the idea of making a creepypasta anyways, To put limits on what to do or what to not do. I do not need a Random wikia on the internet to tell me if it is done or not. I just wrote it here to have fun and get opinions from people not to get it deleted and hated.