Talk:The Game You Fall In Love With (Amo Te)/@comment-7706473-20130903142750/@comment-7151765-20130903154259

I wouldn't normally respond, but this comment was so well thought out that I thought you deserve a response!

I'm honestly surprised that someone has looked so much into a creation I dreamt up! It makes writing this kind of stuff very worthwhile!

The beauty of the man...yeah that was a tricky subject. I honestly didn't want to describe my vision of him, since I wanted the reader to draw their own interpretation. So..it's kind of vague :p.

As for the collegiate experience, I don't think anyone does. To be honest, the college thing didn't really need to be in, I only included it because: A) I was inspired to write this story at University and B) the character, Rachel, is based off a real life Rachel I knew.

As for the similies and metaphors, yeah, I agree there are too many and they are slightly overblown. I had been reading poetry and was really inspired by it, so I kind of wrote this randomly. I thought it would be interesting though, seeing as very few creepypasta have poetic thought.

Thanks for the comment!