Talk:The Meat/@comment-24082398-20160810175312

I thought this story was pretty decent all around! Nothing terribly groundbreaking happened, but that's alright; this story still left a bit of an impression on me. It was well-written, which is an oddity these days, and stuck to its point fairly well. This story was also somewhat believable, but I think that the point--we're eating humans!!--comes across as a little hamfisted. Maybe if it was only alluded to and not outright stated, it would be a little creepier.

All in all, I'd give this story a 6.5. Fairly decent story with an interesting concept, and nothing wrong with it to boot! Nice Work!

On a sidenote, I would like to tell you about categories. Most pastas here are given the two tags "Creepypasta" and "Creepypastas," and if it's a story that was published here first it's also given the "Original Story" tag. If it was brought over from another site, it earns the "Migrated" tag. Stories focusing on real life events, with no video games, merit the "Real life" tag. If it concerns video games, you add the "Video Games" tag, and, if it exists, a relevant video game tag. For instance, if I write a Mario pasta, I also add a "Mario" tag to it.