Talk:Past the Gatekeepers/@comment-26395089-20150518013843

1st, I have to say that this is a really great creepypasta. I'm glad I didn't have to read about putting a circle of salt and having to use a weapon for protection. This actually requires the internet to do the process, which is something new. The whole concept is amazing and it makes sense on how to do the process too. This ritual doesn't require an obscured amount of things to do and it really feels believable! The fact that there's a link there gives me the creeps and how it flows all together. There aren't too many ritualpastas and when there is, it's good. and this one stands as one of my favorable ones. :)

As for grammar itself, you will need to work on that. I have to give it a 8.5/10. I'm not the type to read much and when I do, I give up at the 4th sentence, not because it's bad or anything, I just tend to lose interest, but I do eventually go back to it and finish it. This one got me reading throughout the entire story in one go! That's saying something.