Talk:The M World/@comment-25021327-20140825225938

Not necessarily a bad pasta, but it seems to use some elements that are already pretty common in other stories. The weird mod, the game calling the user by name, and the tie to a recently seen news event, 666, etc.

It is rather short, which isn't automatically a bad thing. Short pastas can be wuite effective. However, maybe if you took another pass at this after a while, and flesh the story out a little more, you could evolve it into something with a little more substance.

As with everyone, I urge you to keep writing, and keep reading :)