Talk:Metroid: Mother?/@comment-5784644-20191124023740

The concept behind this story is really good, and there's a lot of unsettling ambiguity behind it, with the last few screens in particular being effectively unsettling, but this story is hampered by a general cheesiness in the writing and some of the images, like the other Mother Brain crying, or the main character feeling bad for killing video game enemies. I understand why she felt that way, but it just felt a bit... Melodromatic in that sense. Ultimately, though, this story is a cut above the rest when it comes to gaming creepypastas, and I'd give it a strong 7/10.