Talk:The Museum of Abstract Arts/@comment-7706473-20131008232706

I really liked the concept here - a location that drains away the life of it's victims, aging them until they die (stealing their souls) but I feel the execution was a bit peculiar. There was something about it that felt fast-paced and hurried, a little too eager to reach it's destination. That being said - with a relatively short story, you still did a good job of capturing the kids and how they felt about each other, and that made the horror stick all the more.

I think this one is largely a personal taste - the ending felt a bit abrupt to me, and though I usually like abrupt endings, it didn't click. I think with other people, it really would; and this is quite a solid little piece!