Talk:Cold Water/@comment-17737991-20150602140840/@comment-26450335-20150602162009

Also, he chosen his fate at the end. The reason why he his back home is that he wanted to stay in purgatory. I know I didn't explain on why he stayed in purgatory but, I felt it would have been too much and would have killed it in the end. Then again, my way didn't seem to work either since other people can't connect on what happened. At this point, I have no idea what to do with the ending.

Now connecting back to the character was a hard part too. I didn't want the reader to read on about how miserable the main protagonist is, I wanted to move on with the story. The man that jumped off the bridge was suppose to be the ending of the main protagonist's misery and help him stay with his loved ones. In the end, he wanted to stay in purgatory.

Also too, I didn't want to do that bullshit ending where the writer dies but, he is somehow writing the story. It's just a slap in the face toward the reader.