Talk:Theme Hospital/@comment-25021327-20150101144240

1-January-2015- I'm going to tag this with a Needs Work category. Pretty much for reasons of spelling and grammar. The story in iteslf isn't terrible. It's not very original feeling, with some cliché elements (game knows player's name, download link vanishes) but those don't always automatically doom a pasta. I do appreciate that you picked a somewhat obscure game, and attempted to have the autism theme.

However the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization are in rough shape. Every sentence should begin with a capital letter. If English isn't your native language, or if you simply have problems with it, you may want to have a fellow user proofread this.

So if this story isn't deemed sufficiently improved, or if the author makes no attempts at improving it, after abut 9-10 days it will face deletion. But like I said, it isn't awful, it just feels tired, and a little lacking in originality.