Talk:Birthday at Freddy's/@comment-25249478-20150103204306


 * Sigh...*

So many problems with this story. Grammar issues scattered all over this Pasta. It doesn't explain why Foxy bit the kid. Was it a malfunction? Was the kid some evil mastermind and Foxy detected him as a criminal, only to bite him and stop some crazy stuff from goind down? Was Foxy just hungry?

1/10. I'm only giving one because of not using over-the-top amounts of blood, as Foxy bit the kid. Sorry the rating is so low, but I'm sure you can improve!

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 20:43, January 3, 2015 (UTC)