Talk:Everyone Talks/@comment-7117158-20130313001217

I was wondering if I could get some opinions on Missingno Murder

Could any comments please be left on the story page?

I'm a little rusty at my writing and used to really have a knack for getting either creepy or just downright nasty stories to really hit home, not tried it for about 7 years or so now. Thought I'd give it another shot. Also this is the "I got tired of writing this story" version of the story as I'd lost it about 3 times before I finally got it on here. I just want some constructive feedback to work from on my next story, the title of which I think is going to be Man-Made Soldiers.