Talk:Automatonophobia/@comment-24240632-20130718054632

First let me say that you need to add categories and that this was fairly good. With that said let's begin.

Description: 7.5/10 - This part of the pasta was fairly good and the point of view was executed almost flawlessly, but with quite a few pastas it feels vague and dry at times. Luckily the video with the picture of the statue made up a little bit for that.

Plot: 8.75/10 - It's been used before, but the way you executed it was great and the part at the end about the prison was a nice touch.

Entertainment: 9/10 - I was really creeped out by this and it gave me the sense that someone or something was watching me. The problem is that it felt vagueley described at times. I wanted to know more facts about this prisoner and what he looked like.

Overall: 8.5/10 - Great. I think this pasta was an enjoyable read, but like most pastas it still has a handful of flaws.

"Something that'll creep the bejeebers out of you, but not really anything else outstanding here."

- Marcus