Talk:A Day in the Life/@comment-25021327-20160730222653

Althought the subject matter here didn;t appeal to me all that much, I still enjoyed reading this and I think it is well written. The second person narrative is well done, and feels natural to me, it's a nice change up to the typical first and third persons.

As I mentioned the content here didn;t really hook me. Though the subjects of consciousness and existence are relateable, I feel like has become difficult to make them carry much weight anymore, especially in a short piece like this. I like that the pasta here doesn;t drag on at all, and keeps its pace steady.

In all I am glad I read this one. I felt the writing was pretty good, and it kept me interested enough to keep reading through to the end.