Talk:Another/@comment-6418997-20131209051523

I thought you were crazy before but know you have completely lost it. I knew we shouldnt have gave him cpotm. The power has gotten to his brain. Oh flaky hi um im gonna go hide in the corner. * scary flys to the moon*. jokes aside.

this was a really great read. it had a creepy athomsphere and setting. Of course i liked when well you went insane it was both funny and creepy at the same time. I did feel the story kinda of fell short. The way he killed her was a little over the top though. It sounded more like an old horror movie. Also a golf club really? i would have preferred it being a bat or knife it feels more realistic to me. honestly if a robber came to your house which weapon would you choose, golf club, or butcher knife. It was a creative choice but it was done a little dramatic and over the top. I did like this story but from a critic stand point these are the flaws I found. 8.4/10 good :D