Talk:The Cumberlands forest/@comment-6794436-20150224204712/@comment-6794436-20150225012400

Honestly, this really just isn't a creepypasta and it most likely will unless some drastic changes are made. You have two days, so I'd start fixing your grammar, making the story actually creepy, and making the story much longer. If those changes don't occur, then I'm sorry, but this will most likely be deleted. This pasta doesn't meet up with the quality standards of the wiki, but believe me, you still have hope, and you'll have an even better chance if you implement the tips that I linked to you into this piece. Also, honestly, I'm not in control of the deletions, so I can't ever guarantee you that this will or will not be deleted, or at least in the state it is in at the moment. But, it is truly great that you are putting time and effort into this pasta at least, so I'm going to offer you something I normally don't do, I'll fix up this pasta for you and make sure it doesn't get deleted.

However, I want to see you make your changes first, and then I'll add on to that, that is, as long as you want me too. Be sure to contact me as soon as possible once you make your edits, and from there I will see what I can do.

-Incorrect3