Talk:A Question/@comment-11079349-20131206010400

Gotta say, knew that ending was coming, but wow, you played it really well. I guess if i were to list cliches, then it would be that this was, once again, written from the first person view in the past tense, meaning that this was a ghost telling the tale. I wonder only one thing about this, who was the man dressed in black. I half expected him to be the devil or something, but that was never answered ... And I guess I'm kinda glad about that too. good job. so ... should i go into my usual list? maybe I'll stop doing that for a while. I also expected the man to be in a state of psuedo-death, where he contemplates what he had done ... new inspiration. I'm going to make a new story. whether or not it'll be a good creepypasta, i have no clue.

oh yeah, one more thing, i like the length. just a couple minutes of reading and it it paces to keep up with itself. good job again. I personally think 8.7/10 is good for this story.

oh yes, and reading Stal's comment reminded me, great atmosphere. despite the lack of detail, i actually felt as if i could connect with the main character. maybe it's because all of his actions were driven by his own feelings (in theory), thus making him seem more ... human, rather than a chess piece fated to die by the will of the writer. great pasta and I'll stick with my rating of it. You, sir, are a good writer. I would reccomend this to friends, though not specifically for the creepy part, which was the man in black, but for the story in general.