Talk:Sweet May/@comment-24582398-20150210182443

Personally, I didn't take it as anything supernatural happening, but the protaganist losing his grip on sanity more and more throughout the story. Thus, the illogical conclusion of her disappearing from reality makes far more sense. The entire world would be freaked out if something like that happened. Thus, it makes far more sense to assume he went mad. The fact that there's something wrong with his eyes backs that up, being the head and all. He could have some sort of disease, or a brain tumor. All I can suggest for improvement is the family trying to institutionalize him (and him lying his ass off to get out, with the psychologists not thinking to check for biological causes, which admittedly happens because our field isn't perfect), and more DC/May interactions.