Talk:Adventures of a Single Parent/@comment-24582398-20140306113141

It was interesting, but there were points that seemed weird to me. The time between getting off the plane and getting to the house needs to be expanded a tad. The father leaping to "destroy the DS" seemed silly, especially since he did it in such an overdramatic way. Mind control doesn't turn you into a superhuman, and there's only so much a small child's mucsles can do. She's still a human. Finally, was describing the small child's panties, and her constant getting naked, really necessary?