Talk:Belief in Oneself/@comment-24240632-20130718062922

First let me say that the entire concept here was very interesting. With that said let's begin.

Description: 6/10 - It was decent, but I have to give you a lower score because of the fistful of grammar mistakes and the recurring error: "Hi... what" Should be "Hi... What?" In other words use a capital for thoughs thingys.

Plot: 9.75/10 - Very well done my friend. Extremely well executed and very interesting. The problem I have with the plot is the fact that the main protagonist seems to be scared too easily and the very few cliches, but they didn't bother me. Other then that you aced it.

Entertainment: 10/10 - I was always intrigued in what would happen next and always trying to figure out what was going on. Also the creep factor is probably at an 8/10 here.

Overall: 9.25 - Outstanding. Well this was actually really interesting and had a lot of development and thought put into it. At least it seems that way. Be proud!

"A pasta that really did impress me and never felt boring or mainstream and the few issues this story does have won't deminish the overall creepy feeling you get from this."

- Marcus