Talk:Elevator Malfunctions/@comment-24685180-20150313033621

This was really good, it was a little boring at the beginning of each section but I get you got to get the boring stuff out of the way first, and that is all I found wrong with this, now it wasn't too scary I'm not going to count that as a bad thing as this story really intrigued me. No grammar problems (kudos) and the pacing again was a little slow but I understand why. I wouldn't change anything about this, just an all around great Creepypasta dudem great work=)

-Rev