Talk:The Home Run Killer/@comment-25249478-20150223020510

SO. I've heard quite some talk about this Pasta. So much hype, and how it's really good. After taking a look at it...

...It's one of the best stories I've ever read.

Good grammar, not too many flaws. And the only cliche I noticed here was the sort of persona that the HRK had. Cheesy name and cheesy one-liners. BUT YOU FUCKING NAILED IT. Normally, that kind of thing would hurt this Pasta's overall quality, but you did it so perfectly! I applaud you, good sir!

Overall, as I mentioned, this is one of the BEST stories I've read. No regrets in reading it.

10/10.

Oddest of them all! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 02:05, February 23, 2015 (UTC)