Talk:Evil Gods/@comment-25186198-20140721092007/@comment-5245439-20140721141307

So I did do a good job at the metaphor between God and parents. That's what I was going for, the twist ending was an afterthought, though it may not seem like one haha.

Thanks for your read, I'd be interested to know if you have any other feelings about the pasta, as I'm always looking to improve :)