Talk:Wake up and Smell the Roses/@comment-25021327-20161202020619

I thought this one was pretty enjoyable :) It's got a classic ghost story feel to it. I liked how it downplayed the narrator's interactions with the "spirit." I felt like that gave it a little more of a realistic, conversational tone to the reading, without making the narrator sound gullible or naive. I think I would have liked it a little more without the mentions of there being "light" and "dark" facets of the afterlife, but I understand why it's here.

This one was pretty short, and I think that the pacing of it worked well. I imagine that people will read this one pretty quickly and without much trouble. If anything, I think that although some effort went into explaining the different ways that spiritual contact was made, it still felt like pretty standard haunting stuff. Not that I have any suggestions about that, I mean, the ghost story and theme of hauntings has been around so long that it's tough to tread new ground in that respect.

Anyway, I'm glad I read this one, and glad to see that you're still doing some writing :)