Talk:The Robot Saint/@comment-25021327-20150308042049

7-March-2015 Adding Needs Work tag. Well, I see that you added a little bit to the story, which is appreciated. However, this still feels sparse, and unfinished to me. It's so short that we don't really get to know or care about the characters. We're given a setup, and an ending, but there is really no story between the two.

There are also some questions that are left unanswered. I really have no idea who the man in the second part was, the one who Robert attacked and killed. I'm not sure what has been happening during Robert's imprisonment, we are led to believe that he has been a prisoner for quite some time. However we are also told that Robert has had experiences in school (classes, and bullying). It seems strange that in all his life, Robert never told anyone what was happening, or tried to run away or anything.

In any case, I feel that the story could use some more meat to it, and it feels rushed and kind of unfinished now. I'm going to mark it as "Needs Work"

As this page is now tagged "Needs Work," it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review.