Talk:The Video Game Suit/@comment-25021327-20141003222158

This felt fairly predictable. From the outset, it's pretty obvious where the story is going, and it's a pretty well established plot; The program that mimics your in-game injuries in real life.

That said, I liked the concept of some cheapo, fake console with a weird flimsy motion capture suit. I also liked the detail about how long it took to find anyone else on the game's network to play against. Just adding to how much of a strange, underground product this it.

I would have liked to see the story go a little farther than the obvious game-kills-boy-newspaper-report, as I feel that there ay be more potential here. As it is, it isn't really bad. A little cliché, but readable, and maybe with some potential for expansion.