Talk:Morbid - A Flash Game Creepypasta/@comment-26268104-20150928195548/@comment-26268104-20150928203101

I feel like this is an OK read. It's grammar is easy to read, but is still in rough shape. I recommend fixing it up.

The concept was a very good idea, and the plot was original. As for the exicution, it's moderate.

The 2 problems I had with it was that I think more details would make this scary, and that I am never explained how the character knew the ritual worked or why he heard sounds when he was not playing the game.

Overall, interesting, but not groundbreaking.