Talk:Cheaters Never Prosper/@comment-11366536-20150703005759

Positives - This Creepypasta is actually pretty straightfoward for the most part, but at least it's a decent first-creepypasta. The Grammar is perfect, no walls of text, and no formatting errors.

Negatives - There are a lot of holes in the plot. How is it a glitch if you hacked the console in the first place? Why did smoke come out of the cartridge but ended up not being damaged as well? This confuses me greatly, not to mention that the plot isn't anything new. It just uses the same formula as "CHEAT AND PLAY"

Overall, I think it's not too bad, and is pretty good for a first-timer.

Verdict - 6.5/10 (Okay)