Talk:Mother 3, Porky's Revenge/@comment-25021327-20151218220703

18-December-2015- Adding a needs work tag here. This story has some issues including a plot that feels tired and a little hard to follow. It's the standard game-character-comes-back-for-revenge-on-the-player-for-non-descript-reason story, and feels kind of underdeveloped. Things like the narrator not wanting to ever play Mother games again, and the game addressing the player by name feel kind of cliché at this point as well. There are also some issues with spelling and grammar throughout, lots of uncapitalized I pronouns.

As this is a Needs Work page, it will face deletion in about 9 days if it has not been deemed adequately improved pending another review.